Hagure Yuusha no Aesthetica:Volume 5 Chapter 1 - Revision history

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	==Chapter 1 – Within the Unavoidable Fate==		==Chapter 1 - Within the Unavoidable Fate==

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	……You do not know how much courage I mustered in order to overcome my inner shame to come here……!		……You do not know how much courage I mustered in order to overcome my inner shame to come here……!

	Miu, who was completely red, bit tightly on her lower ~~lips~~, Akatsuki could not help but reveal a wry smile.		Miu, who was completely red, bit tightly on her lower lip, Akatsuki could not help but reveal a wry smile.

	“I won’t eat people, why did you hide so far away? Even though you knew I was in the bath, but you still came in, you must have been looking for me, right?”		“I won’t eat people, why did you hide so far away? Even though you knew I was in the bath, but you still came in, you must have been looking for me, right?”
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	But the current priority was to cover her boobs that were swaying from the ripples. Thus, Miu could not say it out.		But the current priority was to cover her boobs that were swaying from the ripples. Thus, Miu could not say it out.

	“I……I came to help you ~~wish~~ your back.”		“I……I came to help you wash your back.”

	Miu blurted the excuse that flashed through her and Akatsuki immediately revealed an comfortable smile.		Miu blurted the excuse that flashed through her and Akatsuki immediately revealed an comfortable smile.

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	Akatsuki revealed an arrogant expression.		Akatsuki revealed an arrogant expression.

	“Winning and signing a peace treaty after the battle, all of it are goals that I want to achieve. ~~Ifwe~~ declare that we are going to lose in the very beginning, then nothing really happens.”		“Winning and signing a peace treaty after the battle, all of it are goals that I want to achieve. If we declare that we are going to lose in the very beginning, then nothing really happens.”

	Akatsuki did not want it to be restored to original state, but rather wants to have peace as well.		Akatsuki did not want it to be restored to original state, but rather wants to have peace as well.

All Nighter94: /* Chapter 1 – Within the Unavoidable Fate */ Grammar, a bit of tensing, sentence structure.

2014-11-21T21:59:12Z

Chapter 1 – Within the Unavoidable Fate: Grammar, a bit of tensing, sentence structure.

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Joegargery at 17:30, 20 November 2014

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	Hearing far off commotion Akatsuki promptly returned to Forestnium.		Hearing far off commotion Akatsuki promptly returned to Forestnium.

	~~Upon entry~~ Akatsuki was ~~met with~~ an eerie silence, ~~one that~~ was ~~all too great a contrast to~~ the ~~loud sounds of the battle waged against the Disdian army just earlier in the day. Yet due to that same battle~~ a ~~sense of tension filled the very air he breathed. In the small village of Galevain he could tell the villagers felt the tension as well~~, ~~in fact he could see it. Huddled together in their~~ tiny village ~~he could see in their eyes a stern and unwavering will that showed their will to fight in order to protect that which they held dear~~.		What received Akatsuki was an eerie silence, as if Disdia’s attack had never happened. Then within the demon race, it was not calm, the air was filled with a tight atmosphere, representing that this tiny village had already become prepared for war.

	"......."		"......."

			Just as he passed the entrance into the village Akatsuki was stopped suddenly by two familiar faces.

	Just as he passed the entrance into the village Akatsuki was stopped suddenly by two familiar faces. They were those of people he had traveled back from his own world with to the world of Alayzard. The two beautiful females before him were Izumi Chikage~~, best friend to his sister Miu,~~ and Nanase Haruka~~, the VP of JPN Babel.~~ They ~~had been left behind to help secure the safety of the villagers as well as to keep~~ their ~~strength in numbers in the case of an attack. A move that Akatsuki was pleasantly shocked to find was a good one~~.		Izumi Chikage and Nanase Haruka -- They were responsible for protecting their companions.

			“——Akatsuki, you’ve returned.”

	~~“——Akatsuki~~, ~~you’ve returned~~.”		Chikage, who took the lead to speak, had a very calm tone. Akatsuki nodded in response and said,

	~~Chikage, who took~~ the ~~lead~~ to ~~speak, had a very calm tone~~.		“I forced the incoming soldiers to retreat. There should be no immediate threats..... How are things on your side?”

	~~Nodding in response Akatsuki added,“ I forced the incoming soldiers to retreat~~. ~~There should be no immediate threats……How are things~~ on ~~your side?”~~		"We haven't even spotted so much as an enemy shadow. But we're still on high alert."

	~~"We haven't even spotted so much as an enemy shadow. But we're still~~ on ~~high alert~~,~~" Chikage shrugged. Beside her~~ Haruka ~~had found great interest in her own feet suddenly, turning~~ her head to look ~~down~~.		Chikage casually shrugged, on the other hand, Haruka lowered her head to look at her feet.

	“The Concept Magic Barrier has been thoroughly reinforced, the enemy should not be able to easily enter.”		“The Concept Magic Barrier has been thoroughly reinforced, the enemy should not be able to easily enter.”

	~~Tension quickly reasserted it's presence and the~~ three suddenly became ~~very silent~~. ~~Even mention~~ of the ~~tragic events that transpired caused a great sense distress~~ and ~~a feeling of failure on~~ the ~~side~~ of Akatsuki ~~and his companions~~, ~~for unlike~~ the villagers, ~~they had power~~.		The three of them suddenly became speechless.

			The reason why Akatsuki declared war on Disdia was because he suspected the movement of the armor knights, because he suspected they were dispatched by Disdia to attack Forestnium.

			With the presence of Kaidou and the other members of Akatsuki's group from the other world, they were able to keep the damage done substantially lower than if the villagers had been without their presence. Which was an accomplishment in of it's own. But in their eyes it had not been enough. They had not done enough. And that was why so many lay injured while only seeking shelter from the battle, just like young Riruru.



	~~For Akatsuki the reasoning behind declaring war on a powerful nation like Disdia~~ was ~~because he suspected they woud attack Forestnium, home of~~ the ~~remaining members~~ of the ~~demon clan. Yet while he was away such a tragic event~~ had ~~transpired~~. ~~With~~ the ~~presence~~ of ~~Kaidou~~ and the ~~other members~~ of ~~Akatsuki's group from the other world, they were able to keep the damage done substantially lower than if~~ the ~~villagers had been without their presence. Which was an accomplishment in of it's own. But in their eyes it had not been enough. They had not done enough. And that was why~~ so ~~many lay injured while only seeking shelter from the battle, just like young Riruru~~.		Urumu was the leader of the village, who had unfortunately lost his life in the enemy’s attack. He died at the hands of the golden knight, who was by far and wide the most powerful of all the 20 or so invaders.

	Urumu, as the leader of the village, had even lost his life unfortunately in the enemy’s attack. He had died at the hands of the golden knight, who was by far and wide the most powerful of all the 20 or so invaders. As the village leader Urumu was the one to maintain the barrier ~~shrouding Galevain from those who would harm it's people. A knowledge uncommon to foreign and invading bodies. Yet From the actions~~ of ~~the invaders it was easy to infer that the target from the very beginning was none other than Urumu~~. ~~It was unknown as to~~ how the enemy ~~had come to find~~ out ~~about~~ this information, but ~~yet the reality of the situation still stood. The barrier of Forestnium~~ was ~~was no more, leaving it's people vulnerable to attacks from~~ the ~~outside world~~.		As the village leader Urumu was the one to maintain the barrier of Forestnium. Who knows how the enemy found out this information, but it was apparent that the golden knight came charging for Urumu.

	Although meeting a strong enemy, but due to Urumu’s sacrifice, among this attack, he was the only one that died. Urumu had set a magic within his body, the magic’s activation condition was his own death.		Although meeting a strong enemy, but due to Urumu’s sacrifice, among this attack, he was the only one that died. Urumu had set a magic within his body, the magic’s activation condition was his own death.

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	Chikage, who took the lead to speak, had a very calm tone.		Chikage, who took the lead to speak, had a very calm tone.

	Nodding in response Akatsuki added,“ I forced the incoming soldiers to retreat. There should be no immediate ~~threats……What about~~ your side?”		Nodding in response Akatsuki added,“ I forced the incoming soldiers to retreat. There should be no immediate threats……How are things on your side?”

	"We haven't even spotted an enemy shadow. But we're still on high alert," Chikage shrugged. Beside her Haruka had found great interest in her own feet suddenly, turning her head to look down.		"We haven't even spotted so much as an enemy shadow. But we're still on high alert," Chikage shrugged. Beside her Haruka had found great interest in her own feet suddenly, turning her head to look down.

	“The Concept Magic Barrier has been thoroughly reinforced, the enemy should not be able to easily enter.”		“The Concept Magic Barrier has been thoroughly reinforced, the enemy should not be able to easily enter.”

	~~The~~ three ~~of them~~ suddenly became ~~speechless~~.		Tension quickly reasserted it's presence and the three suddenly became very silent. Even mention of the tragic events that transpired caused a great sense distress and a feeling of failure on the side of Akatsuki and his companions, for unlike the villagers, they had power.

	~~The reason why~~ Akatsuki ~~declared~~ war to Disdia, was because he suspected the ~~movement~~ of the ~~armor knights~~, that ~~were dispatched by Disdia~~, ~~attacking Forestnium~~.		For Akatsuki the reasoning behind declaring war on a powerful nation like Disdia was because he suspected they woud attack Forestnium, home of the remaining members of the demon clan. Yet while he was away such a tragic event had transpired. With the presence of Kaidou and the other members of Akatsuki's group from the other world, they were able to keep the damage done substantially lower than if the villagers had been without their presence. Which was an accomplishment in of it's own. But in their eyes it had not been enough. They had not done enough. And that was why so many lay injured while only seeking shelter from the battle, just like young Riruru.

	~~While Kaidou and the others were fighting, the attack movement caused limited casualities, but it did not represent that every resident was able to escape safely.~~		Urumu, as the leader of the village, had even lost his life unfortunately in the enemy’s attack. He had died at the hands of the golden knight, who was by far and wide the most powerful of all the 20 or so invaders. As the village leader Urumu was the one to maintain the barrier shrouding Galevain from those who would harm it's people. A knowledge uncommon to foreign and invading bodies. Yet From the actions of the invaders it was easy to infer that the target from the very beginning was none other than Urumu. It was unknown as to how the enemy had come to find out about this information, but yet the reality of the situation still stood. The barrier of Forestnium was was no more, leaving it's people vulnerable to attacks from the outside world.

	~~Some residents were injured when they were trying to take refuge, and among them, the residents that were swept up by the fights like Riruru, was injured the most.~~



	Urumu, as the leader of the village, had even lost his life unfortunately in the enemy’s attack~~, he~~ died to the hands of the golden knight, who was ~~extremely strong in strong skills among~~ the 20 or so ~~intruders~~.

	~~The~~ barrier of ~~Forestnium~~ was ~~maintained by~~ the ~~village leader,~~ Urumu. ~~Who knows~~ how the enemy ~~found~~ out this information, but it ~~was apparent that~~ the ~~golden knight came charging for Urumu~~.

	Although meeting a strong enemy, but due to Urumu’s sacrifice, among this attack, he was the only one that died. Urumu had set a magic within his body, the magic’s activation condition was his own death.		Although meeting a strong enemy, but due to Urumu’s sacrifice, among this attack, he was the only one that died. Urumu had set a magic within his body, the magic’s activation condition was his own death.

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Chapter 1 – Within the Unavoidable Fate

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	Hearing far off commotion Akatsuki promptly returned to Forestnium.		Hearing far off commotion Akatsuki promptly returned to Forestnium.

	Upon entry Akatsuki was met with an eerie silence, one that was all too great a contrast to the loud sounds of the battle waged against the Disdian army just earlier in the day. Yet due to ~~those~~ same battle a sense of tension filled the very air he breathed. In the small village of Galevain he could tell the villagers felt the tension as well, in fact he could see it~~. That same tension he felt was also to be found within those of the Demon Clan, the inhabitants of Forestnium, as well~~. Huddled together in their tiny village he could see in their eyes a stern and unwavering will that showed their will to fight ~~once again~~ to protect that which they held dear.		Upon entry Akatsuki was met with an eerie silence, one that was all too great a contrast to the loud sounds of the battle waged against the Disdian army just earlier in the day. Yet due to that same battle a sense of tension filled the very air he breathed. In the small village of Galevain he could tell the villagers felt the tension as well, in fact he could see it. Huddled together in their tiny village he could see in their eyes a stern and unwavering will that showed their will to fight in order to protect that which they held dear.

	"......."		"......."

	Just as he passed the entrance into the village Akatsuki was stopped suddenly by two familiar faces. They were those he had traveled back from his own world with to the world of Alayzard. The two beautiful females before him were Izumi Chikage, best friend to his sister Miu, and Nanase Haruka, the VP of JPN Babel. They had been left behind to help secure the safety of the villagers as well as to keep their strength in numbers in the case of an attack. A move that Akatsuki was pleasantly shocked to find was a good one.
			Just as he passed the entrance into the village Akatsuki was stopped suddenly by two familiar faces. They were those of people he had traveled back from his own world with to the world of Alayzard. The two beautiful females before him were Izumi Chikage, best friend to his sister Miu, and Nanase Haruka, the VP of JPN Babel. They had been left behind to help secure the safety of the villagers as well as to keep their strength in numbers in the case of an attack. A move that Akatsuki was pleasantly shocked to find was a good one.


	“——Akatsuki, you’ve returned.”		“——Akatsuki, you’ve returned.”

	Chikage, who took the lead to speak, had a very calm tone. ~~Akatsuki nodded in response and said,“ I forced the incoming soldiers to retreat, there should be no problems for the time being……What about your side?”~~		Chikage, who took the lead to speak, had a very calm tone.

	~~“Not even a speck of a shadow~~, ~~but we still continued~~ to ~~remain vigilance~~.”		Nodding in response Akatsuki added,“ I forced the incoming soldiers to retreat. There should be no immediate threats……What about your side?”

	Chikage ~~casually~~ shrugged, ~~on the other hand, Haruka lowered~~ her head to look ~~at her feet~~.		"We haven't even spotted an enemy shadow. But we're still on high alert," Chikage shrugged. Beside her Haruka had found great interest in her own feet suddenly, turning her head to look down.

	“The Concept Magic Barrier ~~had~~ been thoroughly reinforced, the enemy should not be able to easily enter.”		“The Concept Magic Barrier has been thoroughly reinforced, the enemy should not be able to easily enter.”

	The three of them suddenly became speechless.		The three of them suddenly became speechless.

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	Upon entry Akatsuki was met with an eerie silence, one that was all too great a contrast to the loud sounds of the battle waged against the Disdian army just earlier in the day. Yet due to those same battle a sense of tension filled the very air he breathed. In the small village of Galevain he could tell the villagers felt the tension as well, in fact he could see it. That same tension he felt was also to be found within those of the Demon Clan, the inhabitants of Forestnium, as well. Huddled together in their tiny village he could see in their eyes a stern and unwavering will that showed their will to fight once again to protect that which they held dear.		Upon entry Akatsuki was met with an eerie silence, one that was all too great a contrast to the loud sounds of the battle waged against the Disdian army just earlier in the day. Yet due to those same battle a sense of tension filled the very air he breathed. In the small village of Galevain he could tell the villagers felt the tension as well, in fact he could see it. That same tension he felt was also to be found within those of the Demon Clan, the inhabitants of Forestnium, as well. Huddled together in their tiny village he could see in their eyes a stern and unwavering will that showed their will to fight once again to protect that which they held dear.

	"......."		"......."

	\1.) What received Akatsuki was a strange silence, as if Disdia’s attack had never happened. Then within the demon race, it was not calm, the air was filled with a tight atmosphere, representing that this tiny village had already become prepared for war.		Just as he passed the entrance into the village Akatsuki was stopped suddenly by two familiar faces. They were those he had traveled back from his own world with to the world of Alayzard. The two beautiful females before him were Izumi Chikage, best friend to his sister Miu, and Nanase Haruka, the VP of JPN Babel. They had been left behind to help secure the safety of the villagers as well as to keep their strength in numbers in the case of an attack. A move that Akatsuki was pleasantly shocked to find was a good one.

	~~“……”~~
	Just as he passed the entrance into the village Akatsuki was stopped suddenly by two familiar faces. They were those he had traveled back from his own world with to the world of Alayzard. The two beautiful females were Izumi Chikage, best friend to his sister Miu, and Nanase Haruka, the VP of JPN Babel. ~~Akatsuki~~ had left ~~the two~~ behind to help secure the safety of the villagers as well as to keep their strength in numbers.

	~~\2.)~~Akatsuki ~~stopped at the entrance, and immediately two people met with him~~.

	~~Izumi Chikage and Nanase Haruka—— They were responsible for protecting their companions.~~

	“——Akatsuki, you’ve returned.”		“——Akatsuki, you’ve returned.”

	Chikage, who took the lead to speak, had a very calm tone. Akatsuki nodded in response and said:		Chikage, who took the lead to speak, had a very calm tone. Akatsuki nodded in response and said,“ I forced the incoming soldiers to retreat, there should be no problems for the time being……What about your side?”

	“I forced the ~~outside forces~~ to retreat, there should be no problems ~~temporarily……What~~ about your side?”

	“Not even a speck of a shadow, but we still continued to remain vigilance.”		“Not even a speck of a shadow, but we still continued to remain vigilance.”

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	The forest ~~seems~~ to be crying.		The forest seemed to be crying.

	There was no wind, but yet the leaves still ~~sway~~ as if ~~it was~~ in sorrow.		There was no wind, but yet the leaves still swayed as if in sorrow.

	Akatsuki ~~heard the commotion and~~ returned to Forestnium.		Hearing far off commotion Akatsuki promptly returned to Forestnium.

	What received Akatsuki was a strange silence, as if Disdia’s attack had never happened. Then within the demon race, it was not calm, the air was filled with a tight atmosphere, representing that this tiny village had already become prepared for war.		Upon entry Akatsuki was met with an eerie silence, one that was all too great a contrast to the loud sounds of the battle waged against the Disdian army just earlier in the day. Yet due to those same battle a sense of tension filled the very air he breathed. In the small village of Galevain he could tell the villagers felt the tension as well, in fact he could see it. That same tension he felt was also to be found within those of the Demon Clan, the inhabitants of Forestnium, as well. Huddled together in their tiny village he could see in their eyes a stern and unwavering will that showed their will to fight once again to protect that which they held dear.
			"......."

			\1.) What received Akatsuki was a strange silence, as if Disdia’s attack had never happened. Then within the demon race, it was not calm, the air was filled with a tight atmosphere, representing that this tiny village had already become prepared for war.

	“……”		“……”
			Just as he passed the entrance into the village Akatsuki was stopped suddenly by two familiar faces. They were those he had traveled back from his own world with to the world of Alayzard. The two beautiful females were Izumi Chikage, best friend to his sister Miu, and Nanase Haruka, the VP of JPN Babel. Akatsuki had left the two behind to help secure the safety of the villagers as well as to keep their strength in numbers.

	Akatsuki stopped at the entrance, and immediately two people met with him.		\2.)Akatsuki stopped at the entrance, and immediately two people met with him.

	Izumi Chikage and Nanase Haruka—— They were responsible for protecting their companions.		Izumi Chikage and Nanase Haruka—— They were responsible for protecting their companions.