Hagure Yuusha no Aesthetica:Volume 5 Chapter 2 - Revision history

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	She believed Akatsuki was already aware of the situation and how detrimental it was to Galevain.		She believed Akatsuki was already aware of the situation and how detrimental it was to Galevain.

	However, since the ~~start~~ he remained motionless.		However, since the beginning he remained motionless.

	Perhaps this was all part of his plan and then when the time comes -- Listy thought so when.		Perhaps this was all part of his plan and then when the time comes -- Listy thought so when.
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	...... At least the number of soldiers were substantially reduced.		...... At least the number of soldiers were substantially reduced.

	However Disdiya was capable sending the soldiers on the front lines to back in order to rest. Then replaced them with fresh soldiers who could still fight. If it continues like this they will breakthrough Haruka's defensive perimeter when she exhaust's her stamina.		However, Disdiya was capable sending the soldiers on the front lines to back in order to rest. Then replaced them with fresh soldiers who could still fight. If it continues like this they will breakthrough Haruka's defensive perimeter when she exhaust's her stamina.

	But -- Nanase Haruka was undaunted. She turned her head and glanced up at Akatsuki standing on the cliff.		But -- Nanase Haruka was undaunted. She turned her head and glanced up at Akatsuki standing on the cliff.
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	"Hey -- Do we start looking?"		"Hey -- Do we start looking?"

	When the sand cloud settled Disidiy's soldiers on the back line begun to search the scene.		When the sand cloud settled Disidiy\'s soldiers on the back line begun to search the scene.

	Their priority certainly wasn't searching for their own survivors, but to confirm the death of the enemy. They used their earth magic to rapidly clear away the rubble. And after a little while they found her.		Their priority certainly wasn't searching for their own survivors, but to confirm the death of the enemy. They used their earth magic to rapidly clear away the rubble. And after a little while they found her.
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	Akatsuki had made a move.		Akatsuki had made a move.

	Without damaging Loutier a light chop deprived her of consciousness. He took the unconsciousness high elf lightly into his arms, and then ~~look~~ to Kuzuha.		Without damaging Loutier a light chop deprived her of consciousness. He took the unconsciousness high elf lightly into his arms, and then looked to Kuzuha.

	"Well then Class Rep...... just as planned, take Lulu back with you to Forestnium as quickly as possible."		"Well then Class Rep...... just as planned, take Lulu back with you to Forestnium as quickly as possible."
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	"----"		"----"

	Her face lightened momentarily as she returned a nod. She altered her active magic in place in the central route. She lowered the protective wind cushion on the rock walls before casting it anew. Haruka then left her post at the central route, and flew to the ~~northerm~~ route ready to support Chikage in her battle. So far, it was all going accordingly to their original plan.		Her face lightened momentarily as she returned a nod. She altered her active magic in place in the central route. She lowered the protective wind cushion on the rock walls before casting it anew. Haruka then left her post at the central route, and flew to the northern route ready to support Chikage in her battle. So far, it was all going accordingly to their original plan.

	However, there were still soldiers remaining in a central route. But who was going to deal with residual enemies? That answer was obvious. Therefore, Akatsuki Ousawa jumped down from the top of the cliff.		However, there were still soldiers remaining in a central route. But who was going to deal with residual enemies? That answer was obvious. Therefore, Akatsuki Ousawa jumped down from the top of the cliff.
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	"Ah...... Tch!"		"Ah...... Tch!"

	Kaidou was ~~dogging~~ left and right, barely escaping the continuous slashes.		Kaidou was dodging left and right, barely escaping the continuous slashes.

	Zechs's assault was rather sharp, forcing him to use his AD summon knuckles to ~~resist~~. He was able to stop the first attack on Akatsuki because it was an attack at his back so Zechs wasn't giving it his all. He was also reminded that Zechs announced his presence aloud to Akatsuki was all the more proof.		Zechs's assault was rather sharp, forcing him to use his AD summon knuckles to defend. He was able to stop the first attack on Akatsuki because it was an attack at his back so Zechs wasn't giving it his all. He was also reminded that Zechs announced his presence aloud to Akatsuki was all the more proof.

	But that wasn't the case now, every sword strike had in it his best effort. And this was far from a favorable situation, since they were only separated by no more than an arms length.		But that wasn't the case now, every sword strike had in it his best effort. And this was far from a favorable situation, since they were only separated by no more than an arms length.
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	Kaidou couldn't help but fell admiration. Even if his slash were to hit, it probably wouldn't draw blood. At best he would suffer a fracture or lose consciousness.		Kaidou couldn't help but fell admiration. Even if his slash were to hit, it probably wouldn't draw blood. At best he would suffer a fracture or lose consciousness.

	Western-style swords have an edge on both sides, so there was no so-called back of the knife. Making it impossible not to cut the enemy, but Zechs had the skill of ~~the~~ master -- thus avoiding a killing blow. If Kaidou stopped dodging, Zechs was sure to sever only his consciousness with a blow. Under these circumstances, it might be more dangerous if he were to avoided the attack unskillfully.		Western-style swords have an edge on both sides, so there was no so-called back of the knife. Making it impossible not to cut the enemy, but Zechs had the skill of a master -- thus avoiding a killing blow. If Kaidou stopped dodging, Zechs was sure to sever only his consciousness with a blow. Under these circumstances, it might be more dangerous if he were to avoided the attack unskillfully.

	Naturally with his knuckle armor he should attack with his fists, and avoid kicking as much as possible.		Naturally with his knuckle armor he should attack with his fists, and avoid kicking as much as possible.
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	"Don't worry too much. When you figure it out, you would've already been defeated by me."		"Don't worry too much. When you figure it out, you would've already been defeated by me."

	Just as he finished speaking, Kaidou ~~carry~~ out a long range attack.		Just as he finished speaking, Kaidou carried out a long range attack.

	A series of invisible attacks came upper and lower, front and back, and left and right, in all directions. However,		A series of invisible attacks came upper and lower, front and back, and left and right, in all directions. However,
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	Zechs was left speechless, because nobody knew of his plan. He never said one word of it to anyone.		Zechs was left speechless, because nobody knew of his plan. He never said one word of it to anyone.

	As a General of Sherfied, he has always been a spiritual pillar for the soldiers. If he were defeated, the soldiers would have definitely lost their confidence. Then his defeat could have been used as an excuse for Sherfied's retreat. At the same time would also prove Akatsuki's power. Akatsuki ~~planed~~ to show off his overwhelming power to Disdiya forcing them to agree to a cease-fire, and sending them back to the peace treaty negotiations table. Zechs's plan was undeniably secretly helping Akatsuki.		As a General of Sherfied, he has always been a spiritual pillar for the soldiers. If he were defeated, the soldiers would have definitely lost their confidence. Then his defeat could have been used as an excuse for Sherfied's retreat. At the same time would also prove Akatsuki's power. Akatsuki planned to show off his overwhelming power to Disdiya forcing them to agree to a cease-fire, and sending them back to the peace treaty negotiations table. Zechs's plan was undeniably secretly helping Akatsuki.

	It was the reason he persisted on a showdown with Akatsuki.		It was the reason he persisted on a showdown with Akatsuki.
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	"-- I see, so you have come here."		"-- I see, so you have come here."

	Just as he finished speaking, the youth ~~jump~~ back several steps at once.		Just as he finished speaking, the youth jumped back several steps at once.

	Then, innumerable wind blades pierced the place where the youth previously stood.		Then, innumerable wind blades pierced the place where the youth previously stood.
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	Akatsuki had his <Demon sword> over his shoulders, as he thought to himself.		Akatsuki had his <Demon sword> over his shoulders, as he thought to himself.

	The remainder of the Disdiya's forces were in the north route and back with the main unit. Should he go straight to the north support Chikage, or directly rush into the their main force to end this war as soon as possible?		The remainder of the Disdiya's forces were in the north route and back with the main unit. Should he go straight to the north to support Chikage, or directly rush into the their main force to end this war as soon as possible?

	...... As a precaution I had better take a look at the situation in the north.		...... As a precaution I had better take a look at the situation in the north.
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	"Bakii" along with the sound of hitting metal the armor Knight staggered to his left. The shock wave caused by the kick should of penetrated the armor, and surly rocked his brain. Akatsuki was confident it was a solid hit.		"Bakii" along with the sound of hitting metal the armor Knight staggered to his left. The shock wave caused by the kick should of penetrated the armor, and surly rocked his brain. Akatsuki was confident it was a solid hit.

	How...... he started to say, but Akatsuki swallowed his words. The armor Knight not only ~~didn't~~ fall, but instead ~~reach~~ out and grabbed Akatsuki's right foot slamming him into the ground.		How...... he started to say, but Akatsuki swallowed his words. The armor Knight not only did not fall, but instead reached out and grabbed Akatsuki's right foot slamming him into the ground.

	"Gaaaaah"		"Gaaaaah"

	The strong impact felt on his back ~~cause~~ him to momentary stop breathing, followed by an intense pain. However, there was no time to rest, because the armor Knight swung his sword straight down at his lower body.		The strong impact felt on his back caused him to momentary stop breathing, followed by an intense pain. However, there was no time to rest, because the armor Knight swung his sword straight down at his lower body.

	"--Damn!"		"--Damn!"
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	Leon looked down at Akatsuki's face lying on the ground behind Listy.		Leon looked down at Akatsuki's face lying on the ground behind Listy.

	"What ~~happen~~ Akatsuki -- that wasn't like you."		"What happened Akatsuki -- that wasn't like you."

	He said while laughing, and exposed a mocking grin.		He said while laughing, and exposed a mocking grin.
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	The decisive battle at Gorudono Grand Canyon came to a close.		The decisive battle at Gorudono Grand Canyon came to a close.

	Akatsuki was critically injured -- From Disdiya's standpoint they believed their original goal was accomplished. Without a means break through the strengthen barrier around Forestnium ~~continueing~~ to stay here would be useless. So Emperor Baram immediately issued the orders to withdraw.		Akatsuki was critically injured -- From Disdiya's standpoint they believed their original goal was accomplished. Without a means to break through the strengthen barrier around Forestnium continuing to stay here would be useless. So Emperor Baram immediately issued the orders to withdraw.

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Incomplete. I'll be back in a moment to finish.

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	"Arrgghhhh, are you kidding me? Your the one who complained about my sneak attack when you where talking. Ahhh, why am I'm talking so carefree --"		"Arrgghhhh, are you kidding me? Your the one who complained about my sneak attack when you where talking. Ahhh, why am I'm talking so carefree --"

	Kaidou laughed.		Kaidou laughed.[[File:HYnA vol 05 004.jpg\|thumbnail]]

	"--Oh, you didn't take me seriously, did you?"		"--Oh, you didn't take me seriously, did you?"
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	-- He just casually raised his sword with one hand, and swung it horizontally.		-- He just casually raised his sword with one hand, and swung it horizontally.

	"Gakiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin!"		"Gakiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin!"[[File:HYnA vol 05 003.jpg\|thumbnail]]

	After the deafening noise of the impact the earth was depressed around the armor Knight. The destructive power in Akatsuki's slash was obviousness, based on the aftermath it gave birth to.		After the deafening noise of the impact the earth was depressed around the armor Knight. The destructive power in Akatsuki's slash was obviousness, based on the aftermath it gave birth to.

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	In contrast, if Akatsuki and his companions gained the upper hand, Aleclasta was prepared to step in at the appropriate time to support Disdiya, and even go as far as to play the role of the peacemaker. Once the mediation was successful, the world's perception would have dramatically changed in their favor.		In contrast, if Akatsuki and his companions gained the upper hand, Aleclasta was prepared to step in at the appropriate time to support Disdiya, and even go as far as to play the role of the peacemaker. Once the mediation was successful, the world's perception would have dramatically changed in their favor.

	True peace won't be brought about to all the people of Alayzard by the former Hero. It won't be by the militaristic nation that was trying to strike down the demonic race, and neither will it be the ~~noncommittal~~ magical country.		True peace won't be brought about to all the people of Alayzard by the former Hero. It won't be by the militaristic nation that was trying to strike down the demonic race, and neither will it be the non-committal magical country.

	Rather it will be through the implementation of an anti-war doctrine that Aleclasta held from start to finish.		Rather it will be through the implementation of an anti-war doctrine that Aleclasta held from start to finish.
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	"Yeah...... I also think that this level of attack is weak."		"Yeah...... I also think that this level of attack is weak."

	The girl coldly stated. In fact, the sandstorm was just a front, the soldiers soon understood what the girl meant. Disdiya's soldiers invariably stopped as painful cries ~~disseminate~~ all around.		The girl coldly stated. In fact, the sandstorm was just a front, the soldiers soon understood what the girl meant. Disdiya's soldiers invariably stopped as painful cries disseminated all around.

	"Wah... ... My eyes... ...!"		"Wah... ... My eyes... ...!"
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	"Magicians move to the front! Create a barrier to stop the sandstorm!"		"Magicians move to the front! Create a barrier to stop the sandstorm!"

	The solder's analysis of the situation was quite accurate, he also made a proper judgment. He saw that the sand filling the sky was entering their guns jamming the bolts making them useless. Additionally he took into account that the arrows would easily be affected by the wind, making it impossible hit what they were aiming at. Rather he had them indiscriminately fire a volley to threaten and restrict their target. At the same time he had the idea to use the attack to call forth the magicians, but not to attack. With such poor visibility using magic was quite dangerous. One mistake could have sent the rock walls falling down on them causing massive casualties.		The solder's analysis of the situation was quite accurate, he also made proper judgment. He saw that the sand filling the sky was entering their guns jamming the bolts making them useless. Additionally he took into account that the arrows would easily be affected by the wind, making it impossible hit what they were aiming at. Rather he had them indiscriminately fire a volley to threaten and restrict their target. At the same time he had the idea to use the attack to call forth the magicians, but not to attack. With such poor visibility using magic was quite dangerous. One mistake could have sent the rock walls falling down on them causing massive casualties.

	However, the situation did not improve. Although the barrier blocked the sandstorm from reaching them. Sand was already in their eyes making it hard to see. Yet Disdiya's vanguards weren't discouraged. Even if the speed was greatly reduced, they were still able to resume their march.		However, the situation did not improve. Although the barrier blocked the sandstorm from reaching them. Sand was already in their eyes making it hard to see. Yet Disdiya's vanguards weren't discouraged. Even if the speed was greatly reduced, they were still able to resume their march.
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	Chikage Izumi was in charge of guarding the north path. When she saw how the battle was progressing in central path she couldn't help but leak a voice of admiration for her.		Chikage Izumi was in charge of guarding the north path. When she saw how the battle was progressing in central path she couldn't help but leak a voice of admiration for her.

	Launching a long range at the magicians hiding in the back normally would be very troublesome. However, Haruka took advantage of the soil with the sandstorm to lure the magicians to front completely exposing them to the threat of fire. Then she used a powerful storm to blow them away from behind. Still before the attack even started she made air cushion along the rocky wall. This way the enemy that was flung aside at most would just be knocked out and in now way endangering their lives.		Launching a long range spell at the magicians hiding in the back normally would be very troublesome. However, Haruka took advantage of the soil with the sandstorm to lure the magicians to front completely exposing them to the threat of fire. Then she used a powerful storm to blow them away from behind. Still before the attack even started she made air cushion along the rocky wall. This way the enemy that was flung aside at most would just be knocked out and in now way endangering their lives.

	"...... However this is no time to praise her."		"...... However this is no time to praise her."
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	Back in JPN Babel, when the cockatrice training program went berserk or when Phil Barnett I would not have ended up blindly thrashed. Also when I was first summoned to the alternate world Banrakua, I could have been able to do more. Even if it wasn't something outrageous like defeating a Demon King and redeeming the entire world like Akatsuki.		Back in JPN Babel, when the cockatrice training program went berserk or when Phil Barnett I would not have ended up blindly thrashed. Also when I was first summoned to the alternate world Banrakua, I could have been able to do more. Even if it wasn't something outrageous like defeating a Demon King and redeeming the entire world like Akatsuki.

	However Izumi Chikage doesn't care how she ~~has~~ gained her new power.		However Izumi Chikage doesn't care how she had gained her new power.

	Since she met Akatsuki and Miu she wanted to get stronger.		Since she met Akatsuki and Miu she wanted to get stronger.
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	If you inhale concentrated oxygen it will cause severe dizziness, headache, or vomiting. Not only will you be unable to walk, it will also be difficult to concentrate in order to use magic.		If you inhale concentrated oxygen it will cause severe dizziness, headache, or vomiting. Not only will you be unable to walk, it will also be difficult to concentrate in order to use magic.

	-- In the fight against Zahhaku, she removed the hydrogen ~~out of~~ the water causing the density of the oxygen in the area to ~~be raised~~ allowing it to immediately detonate.		-- In the fight against Zahhaku, she removed the hydrogen from the water causing the density of the oxygen in the area to raise allowing it to immediately detonate.

	This attack used the same principle.		This attack used the same principle.