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	However, Listy lost too many things that day. Both her parents and relatives, the castle she grew up in, and the country she must defend were lost. And the hope of the country Leon died. It was all too much. The despair pushed Listy to the edge of a complete collapse, but at that moment one thought emerged from the bottom of her heart.		However, Listy lost too many things that day. Both her parents and relatives, the castle she grew up in, and the country she must defend were lost. And the hope of the country Leon died. It was all too much. The despair pushed Listy to the edge of a complete collapse, but at that moment one thought emerged from the bottom of her heart.

	-- I will do anything not lose Akatsuki.		-- I will do anything to not lose Akatsuki.

	It was her biggest fear.		It was her biggest fear.

	She can withstand the loneliness of Akatsuki not being by her side, but not the pain of parting forever ~~(Dieing)~~. So she rejected Akatsuki.		She can withstand the loneliness of Akatsuki not being by her side, but not the pain of parting forever. So she rejected Akatsuki.

	All for the sake of pushing him to return to his own world faraway from Alayzard.		All for the sake of pushing him to return to his own world faraway from Alayzard.
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	-- However Akatsuki never returned to his own world.		-- However Akatsuki never returned to his own world.

	He went to <The boundary of the Gods> alone. Putting his life on the line to obtain enough power to protect ~~all~~. Therefore, when Listy was fighting to free the Royal capital, and had found herself backed into a wall. She unconsciously prepared for certain death.		He went to <The boundary of the Gods> alone. Putting his life on the line to obtain enough power to protect everything. Therefore, when Listy was fighting to free the Royal capital, and had found herself backed into a wall. She unconsciously prepared for certain death.

	At that moment a familiar back suddenly appeared in front of her. Even now she remembers it clearly.		At that moment a familiar back suddenly appeared in front of her. Even now she remembers it clearly.
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	For the first time she knew what it was like to have a feeling beyond description, even with all the words in the world.		For the first time she knew what it was like to have a feeling beyond description, even with all the words in the world.

	After that of course she apologized to Akatsuki for the terrible words she had said to him. He just smiled and said he didn't take it to heart. Nevertheless for rejecting him in the worst way possible Listy felt she lost the right to express her true feelings to him. So until the end -- even after Akatsuki defeated Galious and was n his way to return to his original world. She kept her feelings buried, and never expressed them.		After that of course she apologized to Akatsuki for the terrible words she had said to him. He just smiled and said he didn't take it to heart. Nevertheless for rejecting him in the worst way possible Listy felt she lost the right to express her true feelings to him. So until the end -- even after Akatsuki defeated Galious and was on his way to return to his original world. She kept her feelings buried, and never expressed them.

	...... However......		...... However......

	Listy wasn't willing to betray her feelings any longer, and was unable to keep calm. Because was it not? Akatsuki the one, who she wanted to protect at all ~~cost. And~~ on that day five years ago he protected her and safeguarded her country all alone.		Listy wasn't willing to betray her feelings any longer, and was unable to keep calm. Because was it not? Akatsuki the one, who she wanted to protect at all costs, and on that day five years ago he protected her and safeguarded her country all alone.

	If not for Akatsuki neither herself nor Sherfied would still exist now.		If not for Akatsuki neither herself nor Sherfied would still exist now.
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	The stillness of the forest after nightfall made it feel like time was a stand still.		The stillness of the forest after nightfall made it feel like time was a stand still.

	Currently they were waiting in Forestnium for Akatsuki recover.		Currently they were waiting in Forestnium for Akatsuki to recover.

	Disdiya right now was probably basking in their defeating Akatsuki, Ousawa Miu thought. They were probably convinced of their victory, and were probably letting down their guard. However, even if they seized the opportunity and launch a surprise attack she was afraid that it wouldn't turn around the situation.		Disdiya right now was probably basking in their defeating Akatsuki, Ousawa Miu thought. They were probably convinced of their victory, and were probably letting down their guard. However, even if they seized the opportunity and launch a surprise attack she was afraid that it wouldn't turn around the situation.
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	...... I will never let them do such a thing......		...... I will never let them do such a thing......

	That said, it was still possible that it was all purely a threat. The burning of the forest would be an effective means to compel Galevian to surrender. However, in the war so far Disdiya ~~hasn~~'t taken such measures.		That said, it was still possible that it was all purely a threat. The burning of the forest would be an effective means to compel Galevian to surrender. However, in the war so far Disdiya hadn't taken such measures.

	That means either the time for that hadn't arrived yet, or more likely they don't want to so.		That means either the time for that hadn't arrived yet, or more likely they don't want to so.
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	The emergency convening of the Council of Ministers of the Sherfied Kingdom was well underway.		The emergency convening of the Council of Ministers of the Sherfied Kingdom was well underway.

	Since Listy ~~acceded~~ to the throne this was the most chaotic, and urgent meeting.		Since Listy ascended to the throne this was the most chaotic, and urgent meeting.

	Almost all of the Ministers strongly opposed Listy's proposal.		Almost all of the Ministers strongly opposed Listy's proposal.
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	"Was Zechs not informed......?"		"Was Zechs not informed......?"

	"Yes. In accordance with Listy-sama's wishes he is waiting elsewhere. Zechs-sama ~~had~~ no knowledge of the Council of Ministers."		"Yes. In accordance with Listy-sama's wishes he is waiting elsewhere. Zechs-sama has no knowledge of the Council of Ministers."

	Valkyria spoke of it indifferently, Listy said "Then, it is good." with a smile. Although it was difficult, she cannot afford to enlighten Zechs as to her plan. He was someone indispensable for this country.		Valkyria spoke of it indifferently, Listy said "Then, it is good." with a smile. Although it was difficult, she cannot afford to enlighten Zechs as to her plan. He was someone indispensable for this country.
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	No matter who it was or how many, no one was able to break through that barrier produced from concept magic.		No matter who it was or how many, no one was able to break through that barrier produced from concept magic.

	"According to the spy in Disdiya's ranks, Myuu-sama was apparently tricked......it seems they ~~deiced~~ her by using Listy-sama's name as a decoy to lure her outside of the barrier in hopes to negotiate with you."		"According to the spy in Disdiya's ranks, Myuu-sama was apparently tricked......it seems they deceived her by using Listy-sama's name as a decoy to lure her outside of the barrier in hopes to negotiate with you."

	"Who ever heard of such a thing!?"		"Who ever heard of such a thing!?"
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	...... This can't be because I got caught......?		...... This can't be because I got caught......?

	Just thinking that sent chills down her spine. Akatsuki had sustained serious injuries, and she was taken hostage trying to buy some more time ~~fro~~ him. In Aleclasta eyes the situation looked like it has shifted in Disdiya's favor, so they had no other option but to renounce their neutrality and join Disdiya's side. If that was the case, then Miu's action set in motion the downfall of Galivain. However -- it was at that time,		Just thinking that sent chills down her spine. Akatsuki had sustained serious injuries, and she was taken hostage trying to buy some more time for him. In Aleclasta eyes the situation looked like it has shifted in Disdiya's favor, so they had no other option but to renounce their neutrality and join Disdiya's side. If that was the case, then Miu's action set in motion the downfall of Galivain. However -- it was at that time,

	"Miranda-dono this should of been satisfactory to confirm the authenticity of the hostages, I presume."		"Miranda-dono this should of been satisfactory to confirm the authenticity of the hostages, I presume."

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	Which meant -- she had to depart from the capital of Aleclasta, Aslanda the floating city in the sky.		Which meant -- she had to depart from the capital of Aleclasta, Aslanda the floating city in the sky.

	The female bishop understood the meaning of the words and lowered ~~the~~ head respectfully, then opened the door to the Gate. Miranda slowly made her way into the room. The heavy sound of door closing behind her echoed. She kept strolling ahead -- and stopped in the depths of the hall.		The female bishop understood the meaning of the words and lowered her head respectfully, then opened the door to the Gate. Miranda slowly made her way into the room. The heavy sound of door closing behind her echoed. She kept strolling ahead -- and stopped in the depths of the hall.

	She looked up at the huge circle-formed object before her. Countless sacred colored glass stones encircled an inner like mirror surface, that clearly projected any images before it. Miranda looked at herself reflected in the <Shift Gate> with a delighted expression.		She looked up at the huge circle-formed object before her. Countless sacred colored glass stones encircled an inner like mirror surface, that clearly projected any images before it. Miranda looked at herself reflected in the <Shift Gate> with a delighted expression.
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	"......!"		"......!"

	Listy felt her face turning red, in a panic she closed her hands and placed them on top of her thighs. Akatsuki kissed her -- it was different from the surprise kiss he gave her when he ~~return~~ to his own world. It was a real kiss. Akatsuki almost demanded it, and deprived her of the lips aggressively, but still she accepted the kiss from him. Tens of thousands of spectators were witnesses.		Listy felt her face turning red, in a panic she closed her hands and placed them on top of her thighs. Akatsuki kissed her -- it was different from the surprise kiss he gave her when he returned to his own world. It was a real kiss. Akatsuki almost demanded it, and deprived her of the lips aggressively, but still she accepted the kiss from him. Tens of thousands of spectators were witnesses.

	The cheers and applause from the audience as they gave their blessing to Akatsuki and herself still reverberated in her ears.		The cheers and applause from the audience as they gave their blessing to Akatsuki and herself still reverberated in her ears.
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	"W-Wait a moment...... a place like this, what if you were seen by someone --"		"W-Wait a moment...... a place like this, what if you were seen by someone --"

	Akatsuki and Listy were on friendly terms despite fighting each other in the duel. She acted as a representative of the Tripartite alliance, while Akatsuki was the representative on behalf of Galevain. Although the outcome of duel was ~~decide~~, it just meant the peace negotiations ~~can~~ shift into the next phase. However, at this sensitive time period it was just the two of them alone, it will be hard to stop any gossip from spreading.		Akatsuki and Listy were on friendly terms despite fighting each other in the duel. She acted as a representative of the Tripartite alliance, while Akatsuki was the representative on behalf of Galevain. Although the outcome of duel was decided, it just meant the peace negotiations could shift into the next phase. However, at this sensitive time period it was just the two of them alone, it will be hard to stop any gossip from spreading.

	To begin with all the entrances in the arena were heavily guarded, including this one. However, Akatsuki nonchalantly,		To begin with all the entrances in the arena were heavily guarded, including this one. However, Akatsuki nonchalantly,
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	It was Alphonse stratagem that forced him to take part in the duel against the trio from Sherfied. She only thought that her winning would lead to them falling into his trap.		It was Alphonse stratagem that forced him to take part in the duel against the trio from Sherfied. She only thought that her winning would lead to them falling into his trap.

	However, Akatsuki turned his overwhelming disadvantage on its head, and ultimately won final victory.		However, Akatsuki turned his overwhelming disadvantage on its head, and ultimately won the final victory.

	To Listy's sulky voice, Akatsuki only smiled,		To Listy's sulky voice, Akatsuki only smiled,
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	Listy hanged her completely red face down and,		Listy hanged her completely red face down and,

	"If you came all ~~his~~ way to tease me, you should be satisfied now, right? Please leave the room at once. The peace negotiations just reached a consensus if someone bumps into you and I sharing a room...... that type of misunderstanding wouldn't be funny."		"If you came all this way to tease me, you should be satisfied now, right? Please leave the room at once. The peace negotiations just reached a consensus if someone bumps into you and I sharing a room...... that type of misunderstanding wouldn't be funny."

	"Your thinking too much. Its not like you did something to feel ashamed over."		"Your thinking too much. Its not like you did something to feel ashamed over."
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	On that fact, Listy got the feeling she was trembling to the core of her body. So much she thought it was shameless. However, before she knew it even such thoughts disappeared from her mind. She was pushed down on the bench and subconsciously wrapped her arms around Akatsuki's neck blindly kissing him, already forgetting about a woman's modesty. She was now engrossed to the point she almost couldn't breathe.		On that fact, Listy got the feeling she was trembling to the core of her body. So much she thought it was shameless. However, before she knew it even such thoughts disappeared from her mind. She was pushed down on the bench and subconsciously wrapped her arms around Akatsuki's neck blindly kissing him, already forgetting about a woman's modesty. She was now engrossed to the point she almost couldn't breathe.

	Before long -- the lack of oxygen in her lungs caused her to wane ~~consciousness~~. Akatsuki quietly parted from her lips. Listy slowly opened her eyes, staring into Akatsuki's gentle face.		Before long -- the lack of oxygen in her lungs caused her consciousness to wane. Akatsuki quietly parted from her lips. Listy slowly opened her eyes, staring into Akatsuki's gentle face.

	"...... Is this fine?"		"...... Is this fine?"
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	"...... Ah."		"...... Ah."

	Her fervent skin was exposed to the outside air, and in full view of Akatsuki's eyes an indescribable tingling ran throughout her body. When Akatsuki ~~seen~~ such a Listy he quietly said,		Her fervent skin was exposed to the outside air, and in full view of Akatsuki's eyes an indescribable tingling ran throughout her body. When Akatsuki saw such a Listy he quietly said,

	"For a long time...... I've always wanted you."		"For a long time...... I've always wanted you."
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	...... But that embarrassing dream......		...... But that embarrassing dream......

	Listy was blushing. A dream was said to be a way to realize a hidden desire. Could it be that her wish was for Akatsuki do that kind of thing to her? Though she was embarrassed, at the same time she felt a little relieved that it stopped at a kiss. It would of gotten awkward if things went further then just kissing. Anyway......		Listy was blushing. A dream was said to be a way to realize a hidden desire. Could it be that her wish was for Akatsuki to do that kind of thing to her? Though she was embarrassed, at the same time she felt a little relieved that it stopped at a kiss. It would of gotten awkward if things went further then just kissing. Anyway......

	"No matter how tired I am...... there is no room to doze off at a time like this!"		"No matter how tired I am...... there is no room to doze off at a time like this!"

	Listy couldn't help but ~~shaking~~ her head and ~~sighing. But~~ it wasn't a mystery. Since Akatsuki became the new Demon King, and formerly declared war on Disdiya she had almost lived a life of sleepless nights.		Listy couldn't help, but shake her head and sigh, but it wasn't a mystery. Since Akatsuki became the new Demon King, and formerly declared war on Disdiya she had almost lived a life of sleepless nights.

	She had already found no signs of Zechs in the room, and then Listy suddenly remembered. After hearing the whole story she asked Zechs to leave, because she wanted to be alone for a little bit. As she was thinking of what to do from now on the cumulative fatigue of the past several days finally caught up to her, and she fell asleep.		She had already found no signs of Zechs in the room, and then Listy suddenly remembered. After hearing the whole story she asked Zechs to leave, because she wanted to be alone for a little bit. As she was thinking of what to do from now on the cumulative fatigue of the past several days finally caught up to her, and she fell asleep.
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	...... I'm sorry Leon.		...... I'm sorry Leon.

	Listy had learned the sad truth about her former fiance -- yet she was still able to ~~kept~~ calm.		Listy had learned the sad truth about her former fiance -- yet she was still able to keep calm.

	-- Why? Listy was fully aware of the reason.		-- Why? Listy was fully aware of the reason.