Hagure Yuusha no Aesthetica:Volume 5 Prologue - Revision history

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Part 4

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	While hanging his head Leon muttered, his easy-going face was covered with a layer of haze.		While hanging his head Leon muttered, his easy-going face was covered with a layer of haze.

	"My father and sister died at the hands of Demons ... ... You might of known that, right?"		"My father and sister died at the hands of Demons ... ... You might have known that, right?"

	"Umm, that was also the reason that you, a commoner, aspired to become a knight."		"Umm, that was also the reason that you, a commoner, aspired to become a knight."

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	==Prologue - Everyone's ~~goal~~ we ~~hope~~==		==Prologue - Everyone's Goal we Hope==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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	Compared to the very impassioned Alphonse, Baram's response was very cold.		Compared to the very impassioned Alphonse, Baram's response was very cold.

	"..... The world's condemnation.		"..... The world's condemnation."

	Until now, Baram looked straight ahead, but now he took a look at Alphonse.		Until now, Baram looked straight ahead, but now he took a look at Alphonse.
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	"Where are you going?"		"Where are you going?"

	"Sherfied. I can order ~~the Disdiya's~~ military to cease fire, but this may not be enough to ~~stop~~ Galevain and Akatsuki-dono. Queen Listy can stop Akatsuki-dono because of their personal friendship. There is no other person who can avert this war."		"Sherfied. I can order our military to cease their fire, but this may not be enough to appease Galevain and Akatsuki-dono. Queen Listy can stop Akatsuki-dono because of their personal friendship. There is no other person who can avert this war."

	"So ...... seems there is no other choice."		"So ...... seems there is no other choice."
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	Seeing this, the members of long bow squadron immediately lifted their bows. While the swordsman squadron predicted the trajectory of Akatsuki's descent, and readied their attack the moment he landed.		Seeing this, the members of long bow squadron immediately lifted their bows. While the swordsman squadron predicted the trajectory of Akatsuki's descent, and readied their attack the moment he landed.

	However, Akatsuki was unperturbed. He stretched out his left hand and aimed at the feet of soldiers. Then suddenly a huge ball of light came out from Akatsuki's left hand -- he utilized "Renkan Keikikou" to refined the "Ki" within his body with the surrounding atmosphere to create an "energy bomb". BANG! It was aimed well below Akatsuki's position, and the power ~~directly~~ hit dozens of soldiers within Disdiya army, suddenly sending them flying.		However, Akatsuki was unperturbed. He stretched out his left hand and aimed at the feet of soldiers. Then suddenly a huge ball of light came out from Akatsuki's left hand -- he utilized "Renkan Keikikou" to refined the "Ki" within his body with the surrounding atmosphere to create an "energy bomb". BANG! It was aimed well below Akatsuki's position, and the power indirectly hit dozens of soldiers within Disdiya army, suddenly sending them flying.

	Allowing Akatsuki to cleanly descend to the now unoccupied ground.		Allowing Akatsuki to cleanly descend to the now unoccupied ground.
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	Surrounded by an innumerable amount of soldiers, the commander was panicking and struggling to keep it together.		Surrounded by an innumerable amount of soldiers, the commander was panicking and struggling to keep it together.

	Ousawa Akatsuki couldn't help but recall of a time when he was trying to attain a higher level of strength, and when he ~~had been~~ asked the same question about power before to someone.		Ousawa Akatsuki couldn't help but recall of a time when he was trying to attain a higher level of strength, and when he asked the same question about power before to someone.

	It was about five years ago, around the time when he was first summoned to Alayzard.		It was about five years ago, around the time when he was first summoned to Alayzard.
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	He was being protect by Sherfied, and living in Erdia castle as a guest.		He was being protect by Sherfied, and living in Erdia castle as a guest.

	After receiving swordsmanship training in the palace courtyard. Akatsuki asked a similar question to Sherfied's -- No, Alayzard's proud "Hero".		After receiving swordsmanship training in the palace courtyard. Akatsuki asked a similar question to Sherfied's -- No, Alayzard's proud "Hero."

	Leon · Esuperio.		Leon · Esuperio.
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	Akatsuki's expression was serious, Leon suddenly somewhat understood.		Akatsuki's expression was serious, Leon suddenly somewhat understood.

	"Maybe it is .... anger and despair....~~right~~?"		"Maybe it is..... anger and despair.....?"

	While hanging his head Leon muttered, his easy-going face was covered with a layer of haze.		While hanging his head Leon muttered, his easy-going face was covered with a layer of haze.
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	Enough desperation that made it hard to breathe and could overwhelm a person's heart -- Akatsuki had similar experiences.		Enough desperation that made it hard to breathe and could overwhelm a person's heart -- Akatsuki had similar experiences.

	~~However, his~~ beloved wife was a demon who died by human hands, which in turn angered him enough to abandon the human race and become a Demon King. Perhaps his heart was the same, also dominated by despair and sadness.		And their was another. His beloved wife was a demon who died by human hands, which in turn angered him enough to abandon the human race and become a Demon King. Perhaps his heart was the same, also dominated by despair and sadness.

	"I say ...... Leon, Eh!"		"I say ...... Leon, Eh!"

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	However this wasn't the answer Alphonse wanted. Baram's eyes were still staring at the void, trying his best to avoid making eye contact with Alphonse. Such a perfunctory reply didn't satisfy Alphonse, instead made him doubt Baram in his heart.		However this wasn't the answer Alphonse wanted. Baram's eyes were still staring at the void, trying his best to avoid making eye contact with Alphonse. Such a perfunctory reply didn't satisfy Alphonse, instead made him doubt Baram in his heart.

	"Why ~~would~~ we invade the Wandering forest!? Sherfied and Aleclasta and our country have a military alliance, so long as our country sends a request both countries will not sit by and do nothing. However, if this aggressive action was initiated by our country alone, our country would shoulder the responsibility of the war alone. Not to mention the agreement was made by the four countries, Galevain along with the human world -- In other words, Alayzard's peace agreement will be torn up with any military action, and will force our country to face condemnation from around the world. Your Father should understand that!"		"Why must we invade the Wandering forest!? Sherfied and Aleclasta and our country have a military alliance, so long as our country sends a request both countries will not sit by and do nothing. However, if this aggressive action was initiated by our country alone, our country would shoulder the responsibility of the war alone. Not to mention the agreement was made by the four countries, Galevain along with the human world -- In other words, Alayzard's peace agreement will be torn up with any military action, and will force our country to face condemnation from around the world. Your Father should understand that!"

	Compared to the very impassioned Alphonse, Baram's response was very cold.		Compared to the very impassioned Alphonse, Baram's response was very cold.
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	"This is just child's play against me!"		"This is just child's play against me!"

	Facing the ~~High~~-speed artillery shells, Akatsuki screamed.		Facing the high-speed artillery shells, Akatsuki screamed.

	Akatsuki could have sidestepped or used his demon sword to cut the shells in half, that much wasn't a problem for him.		Akatsuki could have sidestepped or used his demon sword to cut the shells in half, that much wasn't a problem for him.
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	Although he escape from any physical injury, mentally he suffered a heavy blow. He commanded more than 10,000 soldiers and all were defeated as if a mountain collapsed on them. Even the bombardment of the Tank Squadron was unable to defeat Akatsuki. It was certainly understandable for him to be terrified to his core.		Although he escape from any physical injury, mentally he suffered a heavy blow. He commanded more than 10,000 soldiers and all were defeated as if a mountain collapsed on them. Even the bombardment of the Tank Squadron was unable to defeat Akatsuki. It was certainly understandable for him to be terrified to his core.

	"Why...... How can one man have ~~so strong~~. This is......"		"Why...... How can one man have this much power. This is......"

	"-- Why you say?"		"-- Why you say?"
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	Akatsuki stared directly at the Hero, as he slowly started to talk,		Akatsuki stared directly at the Hero, as he slowly started to talk,

	"..... ~~Peace between humans and demons,~~ is it really that far fetched of a dream?"		"Peace between humans and demons..... is it really that far fetched of a dream?"

	In order to stop an unreasonable opponent by force your power must be greater than theirs to compel them.		In order to stop an unreasonable opponent by force your power must be greater than theirs to compel them.
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	Akatsuki muttered.		Akatsuki muttered.

	~~In the past~~, he ~~don't know~~ how many people attempted to bring true peace to Alayzard, fought blood-soaked battles, but no one had succeeded in achieving that dream. Those people also included the Hero Leon and the Demon King Galious.		Before now, he had no idea how many people attempted to bring true peace to Alayzard, fought blood-soaked battles, but no one had succeeded in achieving that dream. Those people also included the Hero Leon and the Demon King Galious.

	The "Rogue Hero" Akatsuki and Listy fought bravely, but in the end it was still a failure.		The "Rogue Hero" Akatsuki and Listy fought bravely, but in the end it was still a failure.

67.80.235.61 at 04:20, 29 October 2014

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69.115.6.239 at 19:25, 5 May 2014

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	However, Ousawa Akatsuki didn't land, but rose slightly.		However, Ousawa Akatsuki didn't land, but rose slightly.

	"~~Woo oh oh oh oh~~!"		"Urrrrroooooooooohhhhhhh!"

	Using the momentum from ~~falling out of~~ the ~~sky,~~ the <Demon sword> ~~was stabbed~~ into the ~~earth~~.		Using the momentum from the fall he stabbed the black <Demon sword> into the ground.

	The ~~black~~ <Demon sword> blade was already filled with Akatsuki's "ki".		The <Demon sword>'s blade was already filled with Akatsuki's "ki".

	The sword ~~thrust~~ into earth, ~~immediately triggered an astonishing~~ explosion.		The moment the sword stuck into earth a shock wave engulfed the whole area, as if the a large explosion occurred.

	~~Waiting for~~ the ~~impact to fade away~~, the ~~smoke~~ gradually ~~dispersed revealing–~~		After a short while the impulsion is calm down, and the sand cloud gradually cleared up revealing --

			Only a single person standing in the heart of the explosion, unfazed by the impact.

			It was just him alone Ousawa Akatsuki.
	~~Inside the blast radius, located in the heart of the explosion was only a single figure.~~

	~~Rest assured, that~~ was Ousawa Akatsuki.

	"H...how is this possible ......?"		"H...how is this possible ......?"
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	After witnessing Akatsuki's astonishing power, the dazed young commander almost cannot believe his own eyes.		After witnessing Akatsuki's astonishing power, the dazed young commander almost cannot believe his own eyes.

	When the explosion occurred, he immediately created an earth magic ~~shield~~, barely escaping.		When the explosion occurred, he immediately created a wall with earth magic, barely escaping.

	Although escaping physical injury, mentally he still suffered a heavy blow. He commanded more than 10,000 soldiers and all were defeated as if a mountain collapsed on them. Even ~~Lien Chan's~~ Tank Squadron was unable to defeat Akatsuki. It was certainly understandable for him to be terrified to his core.		Although escaping physical injury, mentally he still suffered a heavy blow. He commanded more than 10,000 soldiers and all were defeated as if a mountain collapsed on them. Even the bombardment of the Tank Squadron was unable to defeat Akatsuki. It was certainly understandable for him to be terrified to his core.

	"~~How~~...... How can ~~it to possible for~~ one ~~human being to~~ have this much ~~devastating~~ power......"		"Why...... How can one man have this much power is......"

	"- Why?"		"-- Why you say?"

	The commander muttered to himself. Akatsuki~~, disdainfully looking~~ out of the corner of his eye, clenched his teeth and shouted loudly:		The commander muttered to himself. Akatsuki glared at him out of the corner of his eye, and clenched his teeth and shouted loudly:

	"~~You - don~~'t even realize at this point!"		"Don't you even realize at this point -- It's over for you!"

	Akatsuki dashes.		Akatsuki dashes.

	Surrounded by an innumerable number of soldiers ~~Lien Chan~~ was panicking and struggling to ~~fight back~~.		Surrounded by an innumerable number of soldiers, the commander was panicking and struggling to keep it together.

	Ousawa Akatsuki couldn't help but recall when he was in pursuit of attaining a higher level of power, and when he had been asked the same question about strength before.		Ousawa Akatsuki couldn't help but recall when he was in pursuit of attaining a higher level of power, and when he had been asked the same question about strength before.

	It was about five years ago, when he was first summoned to Alayzard.		It was about five years ago, around the time when he was first summoned to Alayzard.

	~~While under~~ Sherfied~~'s protection~~, and living in Erdia castle as a guest.		He was being protect by Sherfied, and living in Erdia castle as a guest.

	After receiving swordsmanship training in the palace courtyard, Akatsuki was asked a similar question by Sherfied's -- No, Alayzard's proud "hero".		After receiving swordsmanship training in the palace courtyard. Akatsuki was asked a similar question by Sherfied's -- No, Alayzard's proud "hero".

	Leon · Aceperio.		Leon · Aceperio.
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	I ~~absolutely must not~~ give up ~~easily~~.		I cannot give up here.

	I still ~~have~~ many ~~unfulfilled wishes~~.		Because for me -- there are still many things left to do.

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>
	{{SimpleNav}}		{{SimpleNav}}
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Joegargery: /* Part 4 */

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Part 4

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	"... Peace between human and demons, is it really that far fetched of a dream?"		"... Peace between human and demons, is it really that far fetched of a dream?"

	In order to stop unreasonable opponents by force, your power must greater to compel them.		In order to stop unreasonable opponents by force, your power must be greater to compel them.

	Thus the present Akatsuki is unable to stop his father and brother.		Thus the present Akatsuki is unable to stop his father and brother.
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	"I've already been to both of their graves, as well as in front of mother, and pledged that I must overthrow the Demons."		"I've already been to both of their graves, as well as in front of mother, and pledged that I must overthrow the Demons."

	"But they are also desperate and just trying to survive. If as you say desire gives birth to strength, then this battle, does it not become two sides of a desperate race? Really is there no other solution?"		"But they are also desperate and just trying to survive. If as you say desire gives birth to strength, then this battle does it not become two sides of a desperate race? Really is there no other solution?"

	Leon shows a faint smile, his expression is very calm.		Leon shows a faint smile, his expression is very calm.

Joegargery: /* Part 4 */

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Part 4

Joegargery: /* Part 5 */

2014-04-19T20:52:31Z

Part 5

24.131.16.99: /* Part 5 */ minor grammar and wording fixes. It still isn't perfect but it should be much easier to read and understand now.

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Part 5: minor grammar and wording fixes. It still isn't perfect but it should be much easier to read and understand now.

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	Akatsuki alone repelled Disidiya's tens of thousands of troops.		Akatsuki alone repelled Disidiya's tens of thousands of troops.

	~~As long~~ he ~~chases~~ after them immediately he ~~can~~ completely destroy the enemy, however Akatsuki doesn't intended to do so.		If he chased after them immediately he could completely destroy the enemy, however Akatsuki doesn't intended to do so.

	He decided to let the surviving soldiers take their wounded comrades, so that no one remains.		He decided to let the surviving soldiers take their wounded comrades, so that no one remains.

	"Well... ... ~~Its~~ about time to return."		"Well... ... It's about time to return."

	Akatsuki put <demon sword> on his shoulder, Miu and the others in Forestnium ~~are~~ waiting for Akatsuki to return. Although they ~~come to trust~~ Akatsuki strength, ~~however with Akatsuki's delay~~ they inevitably ~~can~~ get a little worried.		Akatsuki put the <demon sword> on his shoulder. Miu and the others in Forestnium were waiting for Akatsuki to return. Although they trusted Akatsuki's strength, they inevitably could still get a little worried if Akatsuki delayed.

	Thus Ousawa Akatsuki turned back, to take measure of battlefield and the path he is taking.		Thus Ousawa Akatsuki turned back, to take measure of the battlefield and the path he was taking.

	"......"		"......"

	The impact of battle turned the wilderness into mess~~, debris~~ littered the ground with broken swords, ~~armors~~, big iron tanks, and blood smeared on Disidiya's flag.		The impact of the battle turned the wilderness into a mess. Debris littered the ground with broken swords, armor, big iron tanks, and blood smeared on Disidiya's flag.

	The present scene ~~is a relating of~~ what ~~previously~~ occurred here, an earthshaking war.		The present scene evinces what occurred here, an earthshaking war.

	This war was provoked by none other ~~then~~ himself, however Ousawa Akatsuki ~~has~~ no regrets. The moment the four-party talks ended, and everyone returned to Forestnium, no other options existed. No matter what Miu, Chikage, Kuzuha even Haruka and Kaidou supported Akatsuki's decision. Therefore Akatsuki became the newly-appointed Demon King, and officially declared war against Disidiya.		This war was provoked by none other than himself, however Ousawa Akatsuki had no regrets. The moment the four-party talks ended, and everyone returned to Forestnium, no other options existed. No matter what Miu, Chikage, Kuzuha even Haruka and Kaidou supported Akatsuki's decision. Therefore Akatsuki became the newly-appointed Demon King, and officially declared war against Disidiya.

	"True peace ......"		"True peace ......"
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	Akatsuki muttered.		Akatsuki muttered.

	In the past, I don't know how many people attempted to bring true peace for Alayzard, fought blood-soaked battles for this land, but no one has succeeded in achieving their dreams. ~~Among these~~ people, also ~~includes~~ the hero Leon and the Demon King Garius.		In the past, I don't know how many people attempted to bring true peace for Alayzard, fought blood-soaked battles for this land, but no one has succeeded in achieving their dreams. These people also included the hero Leon and the Demon King Garius.

	"Rogue Hero" Akatsuki and Listy fought bravely, but in the end, it ended in failure.		"Rogue Hero" Akatsuki and Listy fought bravely, but in the end, it ended in failure.

	However Ousawa Akatsuki decided he will never abandon his oath, and ~~pledges~~ to overcome this cruel fate.		However Ousawa Akatsuki decided he will never abandon his oath, and pledged to overcome this cruel fate.

	Therefore, I cannot be defeated at any cost, because if history has proven anything.		Therefore, I cannot be defeated at any cost, because if history has proven anything.
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	- Even if the Demon King is overthrown afterwards is still the same, peace may not arrive in this world.		- Even if the Demon King is overthrown afterwards is still the same, peace may not arrive in this world.

	Since ancient times stories have been ~~hand~~ down, foretelling of the Demon King's death ~~being~~ the symbol that marks the end of suffering and the arrival happiness.		Since ancient times stories have been handed down, foretelling of the Demon King's death as the symbol that marks the end of suffering and the arrival of happiness.

	People around the world ~~rejoice~~ at the coming peace~~, everyone's face~~ is ~~a smile~~.		People around the world rejoiced at the coming peace. Everyone is smiling.

	However the big happy ending is actually ~~camera selectivity~~, actuality is built on the premise above.		However the big happy ending is actually an optical illusion, actuality is built on the premise above.

	With the ending of the Marquee rotation, the leading male and female are smiling and holding up their hands together, gazing at the sky -		With the ending of the Marquee rotation, the leading male and female are smiling and holding up their hands together, gazing at the sky -

	~~However~~ the leading actor and actress ~~at present~~, ~~that~~ fact is when the flames of war cease, afterwards a thousands things are left to be done in this extremely broken world.		Despite the jubilant mood of the leading actor and actress, the fact is that when the flames of war cease, afterwards a thousands things are left to be done in this extremely broken world.

	The satire is everyone deliberately ignored the facts before their eyes, and became intoxicated with overthrowing the Demon King ~~meaning~~ victory.		The satire is that everyone deliberately ignored the facts before their eyes, and became intoxicated with the idea that overthrowing the Demon King meant victory.

	The joyful tears blurred the field of vision, brushing aside this frame from the movie to never be seen.		The joyful tears blurred the field of vision, brushing aside this frame from the movie to never be seen.

	Consequently Akatsuki ~~gaze~~ at the scene before him.		Consequently Akatsuki gazed at the scene before him.

	~~Staring at~~ video games ~~are~~ not able to do justice to the real ~~scene~~.		Scenes from video games were not able to do justice to the real situation.

	Ousawa Akatsuki present picture will be firmly engraved in his heart.		Ousawa Akatsuki's present picture will be firmly engraved in his heart.


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	~~Absolutely~~ must not give up easily.		I absolutely must not give up easily.

	I still have many unfulfilled wishes.		I still have many unfulfilled wishes.

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	"My father and sister died at the hands of Demons ... ... You might of known that, right?"		"My father and sister died at the hands of Demons ... ... You might of known that, right?"

			"Umm, this also is the reason that you, a commoner, aspired to become a knight."

	"Um, this also is the reason that you, a commoner, aspired to become a knight."

	Leon performed very well on the battlefield and acquired countless achievements, thus obtaining the title of a "knight". Leon's strength is unquestionable, in Sherfied and throughout Alayzard he is accepted by all the people as a hero. Everybody thinks that he is the only candidate to overthrow the Demon King Garius.		Leon performed very well on the battlefield and acquired countless achievements, thus obtaining the title of a "knight". Leon's strength is unquestionable, in Sherfied and throughout Alayzard he is accepted by all the people as a hero. Everybody thinks that he is the only candidate to overthrow the Demon King Garius.
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	Akatsuki stared directly at the hero, who slowly started to talk.		Akatsuki stared directly at the hero, who slowly started to talk.



	"... Peace between human and demons, is it really that far fetched of a dream?"		"... Peace between human and demons, is it really that far fetched of a dream?"

	In order to stop unreasonable opponents by force, ~~you~~ must ~~have sufficient strength~~ to compel them.		In order to stop unreasonable opponents by force, your power must greater to compel them.

	Thus the present Akatsuki is unable to stop his father and brother.		Thus the present Akatsuki is unable to stop his father and brother.
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	But Leon is different, his strength is not less than the Demon King's.		But Leon is different, his strength is not less than the Demon King's.

	The war between human and Demon was virtually the same, except for minor racial ~~differences~~.		The war between human and Demon was virtually the same, except for minor racial difference.

	Leon is the hope of mankind, Garius is the King of the Demons, these two are the same in that they each lost a loved one. If these leaders are able to compromise, perhaps they can succeed in stopping this senseless war.		Leon is the hope of mankind, Garius is the King of the Demons, these two are the same in that they each lost a loved one. If these leaders are able to compromise, perhaps they can succeed in stopping this senseless war.
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	However, Leon slowly shook his head.		However, Leon slowly shook his head.

	"Unlikely, after all the two sides have shed too much blood. And if ...... I let off the murderer who killed my father and sister, I certainly ~~will~~ not forgive myself."		"Unlikely, after all the two sides have shed too much blood. And if ...... I let off the murderer who killed my father and sister, I certainly can not forgive myself."

	The reason is very simple.		The reason is very simple.
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	Akatsuki looked helplessly.		Akatsuki looked helplessly.



	"I obviously apologized for that so many times."		"I obviously apologized for that so many times."
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	"One second I was just about to lie down on the bed, the next second I suddenly appeared in a different world in a huge luxurious bathroom with my whole body pressing down on top of the Princess's body ... ... You absolutely are incapable of understanding how I was feeling."		"One second I was just about to lie down on the bed, the next second I suddenly appeared in a different world in a huge luxurious bathroom with my whole body pressing down on top of the Princess's body ... ... You absolutely are incapable of understanding how I was feeling."

	The biggest problem was that both of us were without a stitch of clothing, which further increased our embarrassment. Akatsuki completely didn't know how to explain the awkward situation. As a result he was considered a suspicious person, so Listy loudly screamed and cast several magic attacks in ~~her~~ panic ~~to escape~~. ~~Then~~ the maids ~~hearing~~ the commotion came running and Valkyria abruptly hit him on the head, knocking him out on the spot. Once again he opened his eyes and was surprised to find himself actually imprisoned in a dark Dungeon for not just one day but two days. Finally, it was found out that this was a big misunderstanding, clearing Akatsuki of any wrongdoing.		The biggest problem was that both of us were without a stitch of clothing, which further increased our embarrassment. Akatsuki completely didn't know how to explain the awkward situation. As a result he was considered a suspicious person, so Listy loudly screamed and cast several magic attacks at him as he tried to escape in a panic. However when the maids heard the commotion they came running and Valkyria abruptly hit him on the head, knocking him out cold on the spot. Once again he opened his eyes and was surprised to find himself actually imprisoned in a dark Dungeon for not just one day but two days. Finally, it was found out that this was a big misunderstanding, clearing Akatsuki of any wrongdoing.

	"Listy by nature is conservative and usually changes clothes alone with no maids present in order to not show off her bare body... ... Her fright at that time, of course, is predictable."		"Listy by nature is conservative and usually changes clothes alone with no maids present in order to not show off her bare body... ... Her fright at that time, of course, is predictable."
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	"Therefore I apologized to her."		"Therefore I apologized to her."

	"Actually I don't blame you~~, after~~ all the summoning of a person from a different world isn't something that can be controlled."		"Actually I don't blame you. After all the summoning of a person from a different world is the desire of the world, and isn't something that can be controlled."

	Just as Leon finished, the clock tower bells rang out.		Just as Leon finished, the clock tower bells rang out.
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	"Can't do anything about it, because it's only me...and mom left."		"Can't do anything about it, because it's only me...and mom left."

	Everyone in the city knows Leon values his time with his mother Selina above all else. Therefore no one ~~minds~~ Leon ~~enjoying~~ his mother and son time.		Everyone in the city knows Leon values his time with his mother Selina above all else. Therefore no one bothers Leon while he enjoys his mother and son time.



	Naturally Akatsuki is the same, he quietly watched Leon leave.		Naturally Akatsuki is the same, he quietly watched Leon leave.

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	Akatsuki alone repelled Disidiya's tens of thousands of troops.		Akatsuki alone repelled Disidiya's tens of thousands of troops.

	If he ~~chased~~ after them ~~immediately~~ he could completely ~~destroy~~ the enemy, however Akatsuki doesn't intended to do so.		If he immediately chases after them he could completely wipe out the enemy, however Akatsuki doesn't intended to do so.

	He decided to let the surviving soldiers take their wounded comrades, so that no one remains.		He decided to let the surviving soldiers take their wounded comrades, so that no one remains.
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	"Well... ... It's about time to return."		"Well... ... It's about time to return."

	Akatsuki put the <demon sword> on his shoulder. Miu and the others in Forestnium were waiting for Akatsuki to return. Although they ~~trusted~~ Akatsuki's strength, they inevitably ~~could still get~~ a little worried ~~if Akatsuki delayed~~.		Akatsuki put the <demon sword> on his shoulder. Miu and the others in Forestnium were waiting for Akatsuki to return. Although they come to trust in Akatsuki's strength, however because of Akatsuki's delay they will inevitably be a little worried.

	Thus Ousawa Akatsuki turned ~~back,~~ to take measure of the battlefield and the path ~~he was taking~~.		Thus Ousawa Akatsuki turned around to take measure of the battlefield and the path that lay before him.

	"......"		"............"

	The impact of the battle turned the wilderness into a mess. Debris littered the ground with broken swords, armor, big iron tanks, and blood smeared on Disidiya's flag.		The impact of the battle turned the wilderness into a mess. Debris littered the ground with broken swords, armor, big iron tanks, and blood smeared on Disidiya's flag.

	The present scene ~~evinces~~ what occurred here, an earthshaking war.		The present scene is a relating of what previously occurred here, an earthshaking war.

	This war was provoked by none other than himself, however Ousawa Akatsuki had no regrets. The moment the four-party talks ended, and everyone returned to Forestnium, no other options existed. No matter what Miu, Chikage, Kuzuha even Haruka and Kaidou supported Akatsuki's decision. Therefore Akatsuki became the newly-appointed Demon King, and officially declared war against Disidiya.		This war was provoked by none other than himself, however Ousawa Akatsuki had no regrets. The moment the four-party talks ended, and everyone returned to Forestnium, no other options existed. No matter what Miu, Chikage, Kuzuha even Haruka and Kaidou supported Akatsuki's decision. Therefore Akatsuki became the newly-appointed Demon King, and officially declared war against Disidiya.
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	Since ancient times stories have been handed down, foretelling of the Demon King's death as the symbol that marks the end of suffering and the arrival of happiness.		Since ancient times stories have been handed down, foretelling of the Demon King's death as the symbol that marks the end of suffering and the arrival of happiness.

	People around the world rejoiced at the ~~coming~~ peace~~. Everyone is smiling~~.		People around the world would rejoiced at the upcoming peace with smiles on their faces.

	However the big happy ending is actually ~~an optical illusion~~, actuality is built on the premise above.		However the big happy ending is actually camera selectivity, actuality is built on the premise above.

	~~With~~ the ending of the ~~Marquee rotation~~, the leading male and female are smiling and holding up their hands together, gazing at the sky -		While the ending credits of that movie rolls of the screen, the leading male and female are smiling and holding up their hands together, gazing at the sky -

	~~Despite the jubilant mood of the~~ leading actor and actress, the fact is that when the flames of war cease~~, afterwards~~ a thousands things are left to be done in this extremely broken world.		However for leading actor and actress in the real world, the fact is that when the flames of war cease a thousands things are left to be done in this extremely broken world.

	The satire is that everyone deliberately ignored the facts before their eyes, and became intoxicated with the idea that overthrowing the Demon King meant victory.		The satire is that everyone deliberately ignored the facts before their eyes, and became intoxicated with the idea that overthrowing the Demon King meant victory.