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	==Prologue - You ~~have early morning company~~==		==Prologue - You Have Early Morning Company==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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	Love is a war, resorting to force is necessary.		Love is a war, resorting to force is necessary.

	Thus Miu formulated a battle plan. ~~The~~ plan was to infiltrate Akatsuki's bed. This battle plan required considerable courage. Past experience told Miu that when Akatsuki is half asleep he was like a dangerous beast, and if by chance history repeats itself again, heaven knows what would happen in the end. As a result, Miu embraced extreme determination to infiltrate Akatsuki's bed, and her heart would also have to be ready to face the worst situation that may occur.		Thus Miu formulated a battle plan. Precisely, the plan was to infiltrate Akatsuki's bed. This battle plan required considerable courage. Past experience told Miu that when Akatsuki is half asleep he was like a dangerous beast, and if by chance history repeats itself again, heaven knows what would happen in the end. As a result, Miu embraced extreme determination to infiltrate Akatsuki's bed, and her heart would also have to be ready to face the worst situation that may occur.

	Thankfully Akatsuki was sleeping soundly and was not aware of Miu's infiltration. It can be said that Miu's battle plan was perfectly executed. Unraveling the first few buttons on her pajamas for Akatsuki to see, without a doubt that was just one part of the battle plan.		Thankfully Akatsuki was sleeping soundly and was not aware of Miu's infiltration. It can be said that Miu's battle plan was perfectly executed. Unraveling the first few buttons on her pajamas for Akatsuki to see, without a doubt that was just one part of the battle plan.

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	"Ah ......"		"Ah ......"

	Listy ‧ El ‧ Da ‧ Sherfied's ~~mental state~~ is still hazy.		Listy ‧ El ‧ Da ‧ Sherfied's awareness is still hazy.

	Half asleep and half awake, she feels calm and relaxed.		Half asleep and half awake, she feels calm and relaxed.
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	The first time, he became the "rogue hero" after overthrowing the Demon King Garius.		The first time, he became the "rogue hero" after overthrowing the Demon King Garius.

	The second time, he became the new Demon King ~~after he~~ resolved the extinction crisis of the Demons ~~and~~ helped shape a post-war peace.		The second time, he became the new Demon King and resolved the extinction crisis the Demons faced, then helped shape a post-war peace.

	Listy is well aware of Akatsuki's accomplishments throughout Alayzard and how much of an undertaking it was.		Listy is well aware of Akatsuki's accomplishments throughout Alayzard and how much of an undertaking it was.
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	Today Akatsuki's day must start with the sound of Listy's voice.		Today Akatsuki's day must start with the sound of Listy's voice.



	After making it to the hallway, Listy headed towards Akatsuki's room.		After making it to the hallway, Listy headed towards Akatsuki's room.
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	The sheets covering his body suddenly fell off Akatsuki's body as he sat up.		The sheets covering his body suddenly fell off Akatsuki's body as he sat up.

	~~Seeing~~ Akatsuki's bare upper body, Listy cheeks became bright red and she quickly turned her head ~~away~~.		As soon as Akatsuki's bare upper body was revealed, Listy's cheeks became bright red and she quickly turned her head to the side.

	"It's umm, I'm thankful ...... Huh?"		"It's umm, I'm thankful ...... Huh?"
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	Listy is involuntarily stunned as to what popped up from under the sheets.		Listy is involuntarily stunned as to what popped up from under the sheets.

	"Um ......? What's wrong?"		"Er ......? What's wrong?"

	Akatsuki had a puzzled look——		Akatsuki had a puzzled look——

	The ~~calmly~~ sleeping Miu was clinging to Akatsuki's body.		The peacefully sleeping Miu was clinging to Akatsuki's body.

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	Listy immediately ~~changed her complexion~~.		Listy's complexion changed immediately.

	After all, what's going on? Akatsuki scratched the back of his head.		After all, what's going on? Akatsuki scratched the back of his head.
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	Akatsuki looked down at his lower body.		Akatsuki looked down at his lower body.

	Right on cue, ~~this morning resembles~~ a ~~mans~~ indomitable spirit, that is always ready to go to war.		Right on cue, his soldier displayed a man's indomitable spirit, that is always ready to go to war.

	However, Ousawa Akatsuki unexpectedly doesn't want her to misunderstand, furthermore doesn't think there's anything wrong with it. It's actually more of a natural physiological phenomenon, proof that he is a healthy man and not a taboo. So there is no need to feel ashamed.		However, Ousawa Akatsuki unexpectedly doesn't want her to misunderstand, furthermore doesn't think there's anything wrong with it. It's actually more of a natural physiological phenomenon, proof that he is a healthy man and not a taboo. So there is no need to feel ashamed.

	Pulling back the bed sheets allowed her to have a good look. After making up his mind, Akatsuki ~~raise~~ his head to look at Listy.		Pulling back the bed sheets allowed her to have a good look. After making up his mind, Akatsuki raised his head to look at Listy.

	However Listy eyes didn't drop down to Akatsuki's waist.		However Listy's eyes didn't drop down to Akatsuki's waist.

	Judging from Listy's stiff expression, apparently seems to have another reason.		Judging from Listy's stiff expression, she apparently seems to have another reason.

	Consequently, Akatsuki re-examined ~~the~~ the present situation. It wasn't Listy's first time being acquainted with Akatsuki~~, she~~ knew that Akatsuki doesn't like ~~when wearing~~ clothes when sleeping, so there is nothing to make a fuss about.		Consequently, Akatsuki re-examined the present situation. It wasn't Listy's first time being acquainted with Akatsuki. She knew that Akatsuki doesn't like to wear clothes when sleeping, so there is nothing to make a fuss about.



	Miu next to him is clearly wearing pajamas, ~~also~~ her waist is covered with her panties. Although the first few buttons on her pajamas have become untied, it shouldn't surprise Listy to such an extent.		Miu next to him is clearly wearing pajamas, and her waist is covered with her panties. Although the first few buttons on her pajamas have become untied, it shouldn't surprise Listy to such an extent.

	Everything is normal, where is the problem?		Everything is normal, where is the problem?

	Suddenly, A thought crossed through Akatsuki's mind, his lips immediately revealed a confident smile.		Suddenly, A thought crossed through Akatsuki's mind, and his lips immediately revealed a confident smile.

	"Haha, I got it! Must be my hair is out of control like a Super Saiyan, right?"		"Haha, I got it! Must be my hair is out of control like a Super Saiyan, right?"
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	After rubbing her eyes, Miu sat up on the bed.		After rubbing her eyes, Miu sat up on the bed.

	Miu appeared to have an innocent expression and simply kneeled on top the bed. She stretch out both of her hands and slightly bent her back. This posture emphasized her massive boobs even more and caused them to slightly shake. ~~Together with some of~~ her ~~pajamas buttons open completed~~ her astonishing destructive power.		Miu appeared to have an innocent expression and simply kneeled on top the bed. She stretch out both of her hands and slightly bent her back. This posture emphasized her massive boobs even more and caused them to slightly shake. The open pajama buttons further accentuated her figure, giving her astonishing destructive power.

	......First thing in the morning to witness such a nosebleed scene......		......First thing in the morning to witness such a nosebleed scene......
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	From the beginning Miu stayed in the room that Akatsuki's little sister used.		From the beginning Miu stayed in the room that Akatsuki's little sister used.

	However yesterday after returning from Alayzard, Listy ~~has~~ temporarily moved into that room. With regards to space, two people living in the room is absolutely not a problem. The real ~~problems~~ is the bed. While in Alayzard Miu and Listy could of both slept on the bed, unfortunately this bed is a lot smaller ~~forcing~~ someone to sleep on the floor. It seems that Miu gave the bed to Listy, forcing her to sleep of the floor. However that kind of thing can't continue~~, replacing~~ the single bed with a bunk bed ~~seems~~ to be top priority.		However yesterday after returning from Alayzard, Listy had temporarily moved into that room. With regards to space, two people living in the room is absolutely not a problem. The real problem is the bed. While in Alayzard Miu and Listy could have both slept on the bed, but unfortunately this bed is a lot smaller, so someone would be forced to sleep on the floor. It seems that Miu gave the bed to Listy, forcing her to sleep of the floor. However that kind of thing can't continue. Replacing the single bed with a bunk bed seemed to be top priority.

	- Why didn't she suggest that I do buy a bunk bed for her earlier?		- Why didn't she suggest that I buy a bunk bed for her earlier?

	.....Well, isn't this fine.		.....Well, isn't this fine.

	No matter what the reason is, it wouldn't change ~~that~~ fact that Miu wanted to sleep in the same bed as Akatsuki.		No matter what the reason is, it wouldn't change the fact that Miu wanted to sleep in the same bed as Akatsuki.

	In that case, Akatsuki naturally doesn't have a reason to refuse.		In that case, Akatsuki naturally doesn't have a reason to refuse.
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	.....Besides last night nothing should of happened.		.....Besides last night nothing should have happened.

	If Akatsuki ~~while sleeping~~ lost his head, and If he did whatever he wanted... ...		If Akatsuki had lost his head while sleeping, and if he did whatever he wanted... ...

	For next three days, I'm afraid Miu ~~would~~ be in a state of heaven the entire time, and not even able to stand up.		For the next three days, I'm afraid Miu will be in a state of heaven the entire time, and not even able to stand up.

	Thus Ousawa Akatsuki is now certain about the current situation, that ~~their isn~~'t any problems.		Thus Ousawa Akatsuki is now certain about the current situation, that there aren't any problems.

	"Akatsuki, take a minute.”		"Akatsuki, take a minute.”
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	Listy's shoulders trembled.		Listy's shoulders trembled.

	"Why, ~~How~~ do you want me to dress?”		"Why, how do you want me to dress?”

	"I want you to come over here!”		"I want you to come over here!”

	In her rage Listy ~~pinches~~ Akatsuki's ear and ~~drags~~ him out of the room.		In her rage Listy pinched Akatsuki's ear and dragged him out of the room.

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	It's ~~refreshingly warm~~.		It's a refreshing warmth.

	The bed sheets are absorbing the heat from the sun, undoubtedly this is the closest thing to human paradise these days.		The bed sheets are absorbing the heat from the sun, undoubtedly this is the closest thing to human paradise these days.

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	--In Ousawa Miu's heart –- lies a little-known secret -- strictly speaking, it should be her secret to happiness, and that is her admiration for Ousawa Akatsuki. No matter what happens she is unable to shake this kind of feeling.		--In Ousawa Miu's heart –- lies a little-known secret -- strictly speaking, it should be her secret to happiness, and that is her admiration for Ousawa Akatsuki. No matter what happens she is unable to shake this kind of feeling.



	However, the relationship between Miu and Akatsuki is extremely complex.		However, the relationship between Miu and Akatsuki is extremely complex.
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	However, After living together for some time Miu gradually loosened the knots in her heart.		However, After living together for some time Miu gradually loosened the knots in her heart.

	The main reason was Akatsuki's never give up attitude. He is brave enough to own the fact he killed Garius, and accepted the hatred in Miu's heart. Not only does he genuinely accept Miu, furthermore he repeatedly saved Miu from crises, even confronted Alayzard ~~assassins~~, he won't give up on her.		The main reason was Akatsuki's never give up attitude. He is brave enough to own the fact he killed Garius, and accepted the hatred in Miu's heart. Not only does he genuinely accept Miu, furthermore he repeatedly saved Miu from crises, even confronted the assassin from Alayzard, he won't give up on her.

	What is most important, Akatsuki claiming that "Miu belongs here".		What is most important, Akatsuki claiming that "Miu belongs here".
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	That is also a given. Thinking back on Listy's former position and how see dealt with her bad situation, and how Akatsuki was always at her side, there aren't any reasons for her not to like Akatsuki. Learning this fact a few days ago, surely must of deepened her feelings for Akatsuki. Snuggled against Akatsuki and letting out her tears, she was just like Miu, just like a girl incapable of not liking Akatsuki.		That is also a given. Thinking back on Listy's former position and how see dealt with her bad situation, and how Akatsuki was always at her side, there aren't any reasons for her not to like Akatsuki. Learning this fact a few days ago, surely must of deepened her feelings for Akatsuki. Snuggled against Akatsuki and letting out her tears, she was just like Miu, just like a girl incapable of not liking Akatsuki.



	Deciding to bring Listy to this world, was none other than Akatsuki.		Deciding to bring Listy to this world, was none other than Akatsuki.
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	In the magazines that Chikage often reads also writes about how important the above-mentioned is, this outstanding talent can tantalize the highest state of a man.		In the magazines that Chikage often reads also writes about how important the above-mentioned is, this outstanding talent can tantalize the highest state of a man.



	Miu was satisfied that the battle plan was successful, Listy nagging lecture is the best proof. After listening carefully, it seems that Listy required Akatsuki to sit seiza on the floor behind the door.		Miu was satisfied that the battle plan was successful, Listy nagging lecture is the best proof. After listening carefully, it seems that Listy required Akatsuki to sit seiza on the floor behind the door.

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	It's a refreshing warmth.		It's a refreshing warmth.

	The bed sheets are absorbing the heat from the sun~~, undoubtedly~~ this is the closest thing to human paradise these days.		The bed sheets are absorbing the heat from the sun. Undoubtedly this is the closest thing to human paradise these days.

	Wrapped in the warming heat, anyone would wish to indulge themselves in it.		Wrapped in the warming heat, anyone would wish to indulge themselves in it.
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	"Ah ......"		"Ah ......"

	Listy ‧ El ‧ Da ‧ Sherfied ~~awareness~~ is still hazy.		Listy ‧ El ‧ Da ‧ Sherfied's mental state is still hazy.

	Half asleep and half awake, she feels calm and relaxed.		Half asleep and half awake, she feels calm and relaxed.
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	Listy simply grabbed the blanket to cover her head.		Listy simply grabbed the blanket to cover her head.

	Then she ~~shrunk~~ her body inside the blanket, thus completing preparations to resist foreign enemies.		Then she shrank her body inside the blanket, thus completing preparations to resist foreign enemies.

	Hmmm, see? It is impossible to break through this kind of impenetrable defensive formation.		Hmmm, see? It is impossible to break through this kind of impenetrable defensive formation.
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	Listy maintained the same posture for several minutes.		Listy maintained the same posture for several minutes.

	After waiting ~~for~~ while for Valkyria's attack, Listy is slightly surprised and pokes her head out from the bedding.		After waiting a while for Valkyria's attack, Listy is slightly surprised and pokes her head out from the bedding.

	Suddenly a strange room appears before her.		Suddenly a strange room appears before her.
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	Listy's world is the alternate world - Alayzard~~, looking~~ around this home there is no doubt that she is in a "different world".		Listy's world is the alternate world - Alayzard. Looking around this home there is no doubt that she is in a "different world".

	Not long ago, Listy was Alayzard's young Queen from the magical kingdom of Sherfied.		Not long ago, Listy was Alayzard's young Queen from the magical kingdom of Sherfied.
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	Listy met Akatsuki five years ago, when she was still the Princess of Sherfied.		Listy met Akatsuki five years ago, when she was still the Princess of Sherfied.

	Akatsuki was summoned from this world to the one called Alayzard~~, on~~ both occasions he saved Alayzard.		Akatsuki was summoned from this world to the one called Alayzard. On both occasions he saved Alayzard.

	The first time, he became the "rogue hero" after overthrowing the Demon King Garius.		The first time, he became the "rogue hero" after overthrowing the Demon King Garius.

	The second time, he became the new Demon King after ~~resolving~~ the extinction crisis of the Demons, and helped shape a post-war peace.		The second time, he became the new Demon King after he resolved the extinction crisis of the Demons and helped shape a post-war peace.

	Listy is well aware of Akatsuki's accomplishments throughout Alayzard and how much of an undertaking it was.		Listy is well aware of Akatsuki's accomplishments throughout Alayzard and how much of an undertaking it was.
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	She is no longer Sherfied's Queen. Starting today, Listy no longer has to worry about their positions, and can pursue her feelings for Akatsuki. However, this kind of feeling is all new to her, and Listy can't forget her beloved country.		She is no longer Sherfied's Queen. Starting today, Listy no longer has to worry about their positions, and can pursue her feelings for Akatsuki. However, this kind of feeling is all new to her, and Listy can't forget her beloved country.

	Her new name is Listy • Sherfied. Born in magical Kingdom of Sherfied, who after coming to this world became just an ordinary girl.		Her new name is Listy • Sherfied. Born in the magical Kingdom of Sherfied, who after coming to this world became just an ordinary girl.

	"You say Akatsuki, huh ... ...? ”		"You say Akatsuki, huh ... ...? ”
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	Today - starting from today Listy is going to follow her feelings for Akatsuki.		Today - starting from today Listy is going to follow her feelings for Akatsuki.

	Today Akatsuki day must start with the sound of Listy's voice.		Today Akatsuki's day must start with the sound of Listy's voice.


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	..... I seem to be more and more open-minded.		..... I seem to be more and more open-minded.

	Even if Akatsuki saw her appearance now, Listy wouldn't of minded.		Even if Akatsuki saw her appearance now, Listy wouldn't have minded.

	This represents the degree of which the distance between Listy and Akatsuki has shortened.		This represents the degree of which the distance between Listy and Akatsuki has shortened.
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	Quietly reaching Akatsuki's room, Listy took a deep breath and leans her hand on door.		Quietly reaching Akatsuki's room, Listy took a deep breath and leans her hand on door.

	Listy doesn't knock on the door, in order to prevent Akatsuki from being awakened by noise of a knock.		Listy doesn't knock on the door, in order to prevent Akatsuki from being awakened by the noise of a knock.

	Akatsuki must be awakened by her voice, and not the sound of knocking on the door.		Akatsuki must be awakened by her voice, and not the sound of knocking on the door.

	Therefore Listy softly opens the door and enters ~~into~~ the room, trying as much as possible to not make a sound.		Therefore Listy softly opens the door and enters the room, trying as much as possible to not make a sound.

	Inside the room stood a bed. Positive that Akatsuki was lying on the bed, Listy ~~tiptoes~~ to the bed, and carefully took measure of Akatsuki's appearance.		Inside the room stood a bed. Positive that Akatsuki was lying on the bed, Listy tiptoed to the bed, and carefully took measure of Akatsuki's appearance.

	Akatsuki's body is covered by a thin sheet, his robust muscles ~~were~~ clearly visible, Akatsuki's chest is faintly moving up and down according to his breathing. It looks to Listy ~~that~~ Akatsuki is sound asleep.		Akatsuki's body is covered by a thin sheet, his robust muscles clearly visible. Akatsuki's chest is faintly moving up and down according to his breathing. It looks to Listy like Akatsuki is sound asleep.

	"......"		"......"

	Akatsuki's serene sleeping posture came into view, Listy's heart became overwhelmed with happiness, and she couldn't help but softly say:		As Akatsuki's serene sleeping posture came into view, Listy's heart became overwhelmed with happiness, and she couldn't help but softly say:

	"Akatsuki...... Thank you for bringing me to this world ......"		"Akatsuki...... Thank you for bringing me to this world ......"
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	- After a period of time ......		- After a period of time ......

	Akatsuki was just staring at Listy, and then suddenly she moved closer to him. Her golden hair around her shoulders suddenly ~~pour~~ down onto Akatsuki, almost covering his face. Listy gently pushes aside her long hair with her hand, and slowly moves her lips closer. The goal isn't Akatsuki's lips, but his ear.		Akatsuki was just staring at Listy, and then suddenly she moved closer to him. Her golden hair around her shoulders suddenly poured down onto Akatsuki, almost covering his face. Listy gently pushes aside her long hair with her hand, and slowly moves her lips closer. The goal isn't Akatsuki's lips, but his ear.

	As of now Listy doesn't have the courage to kiss Akatsuki.... But –		As of now Listy doesn't have the courage to kiss Akatsuki.... But –
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	...... Someday, I will ......		...... Someday, I will ......

	Secretly making up her mind, Listy ~~approached~~ Akatsuki's ear and whispers.		Secretly making up her mind, Listy approaches Akatsuki's ear and whispers.

	After all, Akatsuki's day should begin ~~from~~ the sound of her voice.		After all, Akatsuki's day should begin with the sound of her voice.

	"Morning Akatsuki. Time to get out of bed."		"Morning Akatsuki. Time to get out of bed."

	Responding to Listy's wake up ~~called~~, Akatsuki slowly opens his eyes.		Responding to Listy's wake up call, Akatsuki slowly opens his eyes.

	After finding Listy standing beside the bed... ...		After finding Listy standing beside the bed... ...
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	"Oh ...... you specifically came to wake me up?"		"Oh ...... you specifically came to wake me up?"

	Akatsuki ~~smiles~~ and at the same time sat up straight.		Akatsuki smiled and at the same time sat up straight.

	The sheets covering his body, suddenly fell off Akatsuki's body as he sat up.		The sheets covering his body suddenly fell off Akatsuki's body as he sat up.

	~~Revealing~~ Akatsuki's bare upper body, Listy cheeks became bright red and she quickly turned her head away.		Seeing Akatsuki's bare upper body, Listy cheeks became bright red and she quickly turned her head away.

	"It's umm, I'm thankful ...... Huh?"		"It's umm, I'm thankful ...... Huh?"