Hagure Yuusha no Aesthetica:Volume 7 Chapter 2 - Revision history

67.80.235.61 at 19:02, 6 January 2015

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	"In the spirit of saving some time why don't you assist me a little -- Ousawa Akatsuki."		"In the spirit of saving some time why don't you assist me a little -- Ousawa Akatsuki."


	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

Joegargery at 17:57, 1 November 2014

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	"Me ......?"		"Me ......?"

	"Yes. You were the first person in Babel's history during the ~~Nolan~~ screening to be screened as the "true hero", and you are able to stand toe to toe with the student council, and then during the ranking tournament you defeated the gigantic Dragon. A portion of the schoolgirls sees you as romantic interest, and some people acknowledge your strength and wish to emulate you."		"Yes. You were the first person in Babel's history during the Norn screening to be screened as the "true hero", and you are able to stand toe to toe with the student council, and then during the ranking tournament you defeated the gigantic Dragon. A portion of the schoolgirls sees you as romantic interest, and some people acknowledge your strength and wish to emulate you."

	After finishing setting up the control panel, Kubota look at Akatsuki.		After finishing setting up the control panel, Kubota look at Akatsuki.

Talmain: /* Part 1 */ grammar and wording fixes.

2014-04-20T01:08:17Z

Part 1: grammar and wording fixes.

Joegargery at 16:33, 6 April 2014

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	But ......		But ......

	"With this perfunctory tone, how are you going to heal my broken heart?"		"With this perfunctory tone, how are you going to heal my broken heart?" [[File:HYnA vol 07 010.jpg\|thumbnail]]

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	"......Then what do you want me to do?"		"......Then what do you want me to do?"
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	Kyoya also denied what Haruka was thinking.		Kyoya also denied what Haruka was thinking.

	"I would like you to do another job ... ... Today is good if you have the time, please?"		"I would like you to do another job ... ... Today is good if you have the time, please?" [[File:HYnA vol 07 011.jpg\|thumbnail]]

	"Eh? Currently I have no other prior arrangements. If it is within my abilities, then please tell me what the president wants me to do."		"Eh? Currently I have no other prior arrangements. If it is within my abilities, then please tell me what the president wants me to do."
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	Haruka slowly ask what her last "work" was.		Haruka slowly ask what her last "work" was.

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	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

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	Deep within the campus resides the engineering sector that studies the knowledge and technology of alternate worlds.		Deep within the campus resides the engineering sector that studies the knowledge and technology of alternate worlds.

	This place researches by combining ~~technology~~ from different worlds ~~with the technology of this world~~ to develop new technologies that ~~cannot be achieved by~~ current science.		This place researches by combining technologies from this and different worlds to develop new technologies that current science cannot achieve alone.

	The next day after the slumber party at the Ousawa home.		The next day after the slumber party at the Ousawa home.
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	Akatsuki was causally driving down the road into the sector.		Akatsuki was causally driving down the road into the sector.

	He was heading towards Kubota Kaito's workshop, that he once ~~visited~~.		He was heading towards Kubota Kaito's workshop that visited once before.

	The other day in the middle of the night -- Akatsuki was driving Sleipnir into town.		The other day in the middle of the night -- Akatsuki was driving Sleipnir into town.

	It just so happened that the convenience store he stopped at was robbed~~, furthermore~~ the criminals abducted a woman.		It just so happened that the convenience store he stopped at was robbed. Furthermore the criminals abducted a woman.

	~~Akatsuki upon~~ arriving at the scene pursued the getaway car. He eventually caught up with the kidnappers and saved the female hostage. In the process he destroyed their car and tossed several of the kidnappers into the ocean.		Upon arriving at the scene, Akatsuki pursued the getaway car. He eventually caught up with the kidnappers and saved the female hostage. In the process he destroyed their car and tossed several of the kidnappers into the ocean.

	However, while pursuing them Akatsuki did the unthinkable. He drove it on top of the water, not just the shoal of a beach but over several hundred feet of water.		However, while pursuing them Akatsuki did the unthinkable. He drove Sleipnir on top of the water, not just the shoal of a beach but over several hundred feet of water.

	Sleipnir is able to travel beyond the speed of sound with no obstructions at sea level -- because of those two factors, he can achieve the unimaginable.		Sleipnir is able to travel beyond the speed of sound with no obstructions at sea level -- because of those two factors, he can achieve the unimaginable.
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	After returning home Akatsuki immediately thoroughly washed Sleipnir to avoid seawater corrosion.		After returning home Akatsuki immediately thoroughly washed Sleipnir to avoid seawater corrosion.

	However, there is a limit to the maintenance that can be done by ~~the~~ amateur.		However, there is a limit to the maintenance that can be done by an amateur.

	If you really want what's best for your vehicle it's best to have a professional look at it on a regular basis.		If you really want what's best for your vehicle, it's best to have a professional look at it on a regular basis.

	"Won't find a gas station mechanic able to inspect it."		"Won't find a gas station mechanic able to inspect it."

	The motorcycle's body is made of orichalcum, and was powered by spirits rather than gasoline.		The motorcycle's body was made of orichalcum, and was powered by spirits rather than gasoline.

	Sleipnir's maintenance must be carried out by an expert with extraordinary knowledge.		Sleipnir's maintenance must be carried out by an expert with extraordinary knowledge.
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	"No way...there is no one here."		"No way...there is no one here."

	Since it's spring break for JPN Babel almost no one is on campus. At the entrance he asked the security guards about the circumstances. Apparently there is large-scale system update tonight, and he also said that only a handful of staff members are still on campus.		Since it's spring break for JPN Babel almost no one is on campus. At the entrance he asked the security guards about the circumstances. Apparently there is a large-scale system update tonight, and he also said that only a handful of staff members are still on campus.

	In order for Akatsuki to avoid wasting a trip, he asked a guard to check the online database to confirm whether Kubota was on campus, and for the time being he was in his workshop.		In order for Akatsuki to avoid wasting a trip, he asked a guard to check the online database to confirm whether Kubota was on campus, and for the time being he was in his workshop.
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	"Eh..... Where are you old man?"		"Eh..... Where are you old man?"

	Although he usually is in his small workshop working on his hobbies, professor Kubota is also in charge of Babel's special systems ~~that~~ he ~~developed~~. It is extremely likely that the professor is in a conference or conducting some research somewhere else.		Although he is usually in his small workshop working on his hobbies, professor Kubota is also in charge of Babel's special systems, which he designed. It wa extremely likely that the professor was in a conference or conducting some research somewhere else.

	Therefore Akatsuki cleared his mind, and searched the surrounding area for signs of life using Renkan Keikikou.		Therefore Akatsuki cleared his mind, and searched the surrounding area for signs of life using Renkan Keikikou.
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	Without waiting for a reply, Akatsuki went into the workshop.		Without waiting for a reply, Akatsuki went into the workshop.

	He saw a person he met before~~, then the~~ young man wearing overalls also noticed Akatsuki's presence.		He saw a person he met before. The young man wearing overalls also noticed Akatsuki's presence.

	"Oh, Ousawa-san long time no see."		"Oh, Ousawa-san long time no see."

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	Akatsuki was causally driving down the road into the sector.		Akatsuki was causally driving down the road into the sector.

	He was heading towards Kubota Kaito's workshop ~~where~~ he visited ~~once before~~.		He was heading towards Kubota Kaito's workshop, that he once visited.

	The other day in the middle of the night -- Akatsuki was driving Sleipnir into town.		The other day in the middle of the night -- Akatsuki was driving Sleipnir into town.

	~~The~~ convenience store he stopped by was ~~attacked~~, ~~and~~ criminals abducted a woman.		It just so happened that the convenience store he stopped at was robbed, furthermore the criminals abducted a woman.

	Akatsuki ~~happened to be~~ at the scene ~~and~~ pursued the getaway car. He eventually caught up with the kidnappers and destroyed their car~~, rescued the female hostage,~~ and tossed several of the kidnappers into the ocean.		Akatsuki upon arriving at the scene pursued the getaway car. He eventually caught up with the kidnappers and saved the female hostage. In the process he destroyed their car and tossed several of the kidnappers into the ocean.

	However, while pursuing them Akatsuki did the unthinkable. He drove it on top of the water, not just the shoal of a beach but over several hundred feet of water.		However, while pursuing them Akatsuki did the unthinkable. He drove it on top of the water, not just the shoal of a beach but over several hundred feet of water.

	Sleipnir is able to travel beyond the speed of sound with no obstructions at sea level--because of those two factors, he can achieve the ~~unthinkable~~.		Sleipnir is able to travel beyond the speed of sound with no obstructions at sea level -- because of those two factors, he can achieve the unimaginable.

	~~It didn~~'~~t disappoint Akatsuki~~. It ran across the ocean as ~~stably~~ as a Mercedes-Benz driving on an asphalt road, and finally even climbed over the cliff of a ~~precipice~~.		Sleipnir lived up to Akatsuki's expectations. The motorcycle ran across the ocean as stable as a Mercedes-Benz driving on an asphalt road, and finally even climbed over the precipice of a cliff.<ref>In other words -- Drove up a wall.</ref>

	Akatsuki marveled at the spectacular performance of Sleipnir, deepening his attachment towards it.		Akatsuki marveled at the spectacular performance of Sleipnir, deepening his attachment towards it.
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	"Eh..... Where are you old man?"		"Eh..... Where are you old man?"

	Although he usually is in his small workshop working on his hobbies, professor Kubota is also in charge of Babel's special systems~~, which~~ he developed. It is extremely ~~possible~~ that the professor is in a conference or conducting some research.		Although he usually is in his small workshop working on his hobbies, professor Kubota is also in charge of Babel's special systems that he developed. It is extremely likely that the professor is in a conference or conducting some research somewhere else.

	Therefore Akatsuki cleared his mind and searched the surrounding area for signs of life using Renkan Keikikou.		Therefore Akatsuki cleared his mind, and searched the surrounding area for signs of life using Renkan Keikikou.

	As long as Akatsuki meets someone once, he will basically never forget their Kei.		As long as Akatsuki meets someone once, he will basically never forget their Kei.

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	Deep within the campus resides the engineering sector that studies the knowledge and technology of alternate worlds.		Deep within the campus resides the engineering sector that studies the knowledge and technology of alternate worlds.

	This place researches different ~~world technology coupled~~ with the technology of this world to develop new technologies that ~~are unable to achieve with~~ current science.		This place researches by combining technology from different worlds with the technology of this world to develop new technologies that cannot be achieved by current science.

	The next day after the slumber party at the Ousawa home.		The next day after the slumber party at the Ousawa home.

	Akatsuki left the house and came to the engineering sector early ~~this~~ morning.		Akatsuki left the house and came to the engineering sector early in the morning.

	The purpose of coming here was the regular maintenance of Sleipnir.		The purpose of coming here was the regular maintenance of Sleipnir.
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	Akatsuki was causally driving down the road into the sector.		Akatsuki was causally driving down the road into the sector.

	He was heading ~~for~~ Kubota Kaito's workshop he once ~~visited~~.		He was heading towards Kubota Kaito's workshop where he visited once before.

	The other day in the middle of the night -- Akatsuki was driving Sleipnir into town.		The other day in the middle of the night -- Akatsuki was driving Sleipnir into town.

	The convenience store he stopped by was ~~attack~~, and ~~the~~ criminals abducted a woman.		The convenience store he stopped by was attacked, and criminals abducted a woman.

	Akatsuki happened to be at the scene and pursued the getaway car. He eventually caught up with the kidnappers and ~~destroy~~ their car ~~rescuing~~ the female hostage, and tossed several of the kidnappers into the ocean.		Akatsuki happened to be at the scene and pursued the getaway car. He eventually caught up with the kidnappers and destroyed their car, rescued the female hostage, and tossed several of the kidnappers into the ocean.

	However, while pursuing them Akatsuki did the unthinkable. He drove it on top of the water, not just the shoal of a beach but several ~~hundreds~~ feet of water.		However, while pursuing them Akatsuki did the unthinkable. He drove it on top of the water, not just the shoal of a beach but over several hundred feet of water.

	Sleipnir is able to travel beyond the speed of sound with no obstructions at sea level--because of those two factors, he can achieve the unthinkable.		Sleipnir is able to travel beyond the speed of sound with no obstructions at sea level--because of those two factors, he can achieve the unthinkable.

	It didn't disappoint Akatsuki. it ran across the ocean as ~~stable~~ as Mercedes-Benz driving on an asphalt road, and finally even ~~climb~~ over a precipice ~~cliff~~.		It didn't disappoint Akatsuki. It ran across the ocean as stably as a Mercedes-Benz driving on an asphalt road, and finally even climbed over the cliff of a precipice.

	Akatsuki marveled at spectacular performance of Sleipnir, deepening his attachment towards it.		Akatsuki marveled at the spectacular performance of Sleipnir, deepening his attachment towards it.

	After returning home Akatsuki immediately thoroughly washed Sleipnir to avoid seawater corrosion.		After returning home Akatsuki immediately thoroughly washed Sleipnir to avoid seawater corrosion.
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	However, there is a limit to the maintenance that can be done by the amateur.		However, there is a limit to the maintenance that can be done by the amateur.

	If you really want ~~whats~~ best for your vehicle ~~its~~ best to have a professional look at it on a regular basis.		If you really want what's best for your vehicle it's best to have a professional look at it on a regular basis.

	"Won't find a gas station mechanic able to inspect it."		"Won't find a gas station mechanic able to inspect it."

	The motorcycle's body is made of orichalcum, and powered by spirits ~~not requiring~~ gasoline ~~to move it~~.		The motorcycle's body is made of orichalcum, and was powered by spirits rather than gasoline.

	Sleipnir maintenance must be carried out by an expert with extraordinary knowledge.		Sleipnir's maintenance must be carried out by an expert with extraordinary knowledge.

	There is only one person in the special autonomous region that Akatsuki can leave it with.		There is only one person in the special autonomous region that Akatsuki can leave it with.
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	"No way...there is no one here."		"No way...there is no one here."

	Since it's spring break for JPN Babel almost no one is on campus. At the entrance he asked to the security guards about the circumstances~~, apparently~~ there is large-scale system update tonight, and he also said that only a handful of staff members are still on campus.		Since it's spring break for JPN Babel almost no one is on campus. At the entrance he asked the security guards about the circumstances. Apparently there is large-scale system update tonight, and he also said that only a handful of staff members are still on campus.

	In order for Akatsuki to avoid wasting a trip, he asked a guard to check the online database to confirm whether Kubota was on campus, and for the time being he was in his workshop.		In order for Akatsuki to avoid wasting a trip, he asked a guard to check the online database to confirm whether Kubota was on campus, and for the time being he was in his workshop.
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	"Eh..... Where are you old man?"		"Eh..... Where are you old man?"

	Although he usually is in his small workshop ~~among~~ his hobbies, ~~however~~ professor Kubota is in charge of Babel's special systems he developed. It is extremely possible that the professor is in a conference or conducting some research.		Although he usually is in his small workshop working on his hobbies, professor Kubota is also in charge of Babel's special systems, which he developed. It is extremely possible that the professor is in a conference or conducting some research.

	Therefore Akatsuki cleared his mind~~, he~~ searched ~~for a~~ surrounding area for signs of life using Renkan Keikikou.		Therefore Akatsuki cleared his mind and searched the surrounding area for signs of life using Renkan Keikikou.

	As long as Akatsuki meets someone once, he will basically never forget their Kei.		As long as Akatsuki meets someone once, he will basically never forget their Kei.
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	"I think he is working in the back now, what do you want?"		"I think he is working in the back now, what do you want?"

	"Oh, I want to have the ~~Old~~ man do some maintenance on Sleipnir."		"Oh, I want to have the old man do some maintenance on Sleipnir."

	Akatsuki raised his thumb over his shoulder pointing -- outside the workshop.		Akatsuki raised his thumb over his shoulder pointing -- outside the workshop.

	"He is working on something right now, but I can ask the old man, okay?"		"He is working on something right now, but I can ask the old man, okay?"

	===Part 2===		===Part 2===