Hagure Yuusha no Aesthetica:Volume 7 Prologue - Revision history

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	==Prologue - The ~~future~~ cannot be ~~avoided~~==		==Prologue - The Future cannot be Avoided==

	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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	A square liquid crystal display fills the room with superfluous light.		A square liquid crystal display fills the room with superfluous light.

	It is JPN Babel's student council president also Japan's COCOON representative -- Hikami Kyoya personal computer. Real-time updates are constantly appearing on the screen.		It is JPN Babel's student council president's, also Japan's COCOON representative's -- Hikami Kyoya's personal computer. Real-time updates are constantly appearing on the screen.

	It is the ~~current~~ status of the special autonomous region established in Japan for the people who have returned from the alternate worlds.		It is current displaying the status of the special autonomous region established in Japan for the people who have returned from the alternate worlds.

	At the top of JPN Babel is Kyoya, who is responsible for coordinating all matters in special autonomous region. Therefore Kyoya must compile the various information related to the special autonomous region.		At the top of JPN Babel is Kyoya, who is responsible for coordinating all matters in the special autonomous region. Therefore Kyoya must compile the various information related to the special autonomous region.

	Kyoya ~~while~~ looking at the monitor quietly deepens ~~his smile~~.		While Kyoya is looking at the monitor, his smile quietly deepens.

	Then mutters:		Then he mutters:

	"Movement, and I believe he......"		"Movement, and I believe he......"

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	Kyoya discovered a major "secret" concerning Miu.		Kyoya discovered a major "secret" concerning Miu.

	The ~~Nolen~~ screening named her as the "True Hero" Ousawa Akatsuki's little sister.		The Norn screening named her as the "True Hero" Ousawa Akatsuki's little sister.

	However that fabricated identity was merely for her to exist in this world.		However that fabricated identity was merely for her to exist in this world.

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	It also appears that Kyoya didn't look anxious or complacent, he remained as cold as ice giving the sense of normalcy.		It also appears that Kyoya didn't look anxious or complacent, he remained as cold as ice giving the sense of normalcy.

	Even if he is about to realize his ambitions that he had for many years now. There is still no change to his calm demeanor.		Even if he is about to realize his ambitions that he had for many years now. There is still no change to his normal calm demeanor.

	Then Ryohei suddenly remembered something.		Then Ryohei suddenly remembered something.

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	"Well......"		"Well......"

	Kyoya ~~muttering~~ to himself while turning off the computer.		Kyoya muttered to himself while turning off the computer.

	When the monitor of his personal computer ~~shuts~~ down, the room became wrapped ~~with~~ complete darkness.		When the monitor on his personal computer shut down, the room became wrapped in complete darkness.

	The next moment, the sound of the student council room door opening could be heard.		The next moment, the sound of the student council room door opening could be heard.
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	At the same time, the ceiling lights turn on lighting up the room.		At the same time, the ceiling lights turn on lighting up the room.

	~~One~~ of the student council ~~members~~ walked into the room.		Another member of the student council walked into the room.

	It is Uesaki Ryohei the secretary of the student council.		It is Uesaki Ryohei the secretary of the student council.
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	"I'm was just thinking about a few things."		"I'm was just thinking about a few things."

	Kyoya replied with usual smile ~~on his face.~~		Kyoya replied with the usual smile.

	~~It is like the previously intoxicated with power expression was a lie judging from his ability to immediately look clam~~.


			It was like his previous intoxicated with power expression was a lie judging from his ability to immediately look clam.

	Therefore......		Therefore......
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	"Hmm I see. The student council president indeed really works hard. There's always a lot of things to worry about."		"Hmm I see. The student council president indeed really works hard. There's always a lot of things to worry about."

	Ryohei shrugged and walked towards his seat, seeming ~~accepting~~ what Kyoya said.		Ryohei shrugged and walked towards his seat, he seeming accepted what Kyoya said.

	Ryohei's response as well as his reaction ~~itself~~ gave Kyoya a sense of satisfaction.		Ryohei's response as well as his reaction gave Kyoya a sense of satisfaction.

	It also appears that Kyoya didn't look anxious or complacent, ~~remaining~~ as cold as ice giving the sense of normalcy.		It also appears that Kyoya didn't look anxious or complacent, he remained as cold as ice giving the sense of normalcy.

	Even if he is about to realize his ambitions that he had for many years now. There is still no change to ~~normal calmness~~.		Even if he is about to realize his ambitions that he had for many years now. There is still no change to his calm demeanor.

	Then Ryohei suddenly remembered something.		Then Ryohei suddenly remembered something.
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	"Naturally it will be conducted as planned."		"Naturally it will be conducted as planned."

	Kyoya seemingly answered matter of factly-		Kyoya seemingly answered matter of factly--



	"- It will officially launch tomorrow ~~evening~~."		"-- It will officially launch tomorrow night."

	===Part 4===		===Part 4===

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	Her true identity is that she grew up in a alternate world of Alayzard as the Demon King's daughter -· Myuu.		Her true identity is that she grew up in a alternate world of Alayzard as the Demon King's daughter -· Myuu.

	Many teenagers have been ~~sent~~ to alternate worlds for more than 30 years now. However, the case of inhabitants from alternate worlds coming to this world has never been official documented.		Many teenagers have been summoned to alternate worlds for more than 30 years now. However, the case of inhabitants from alternate worlds coming to this world has never been official documented.

	A very rare cases of tenancy.		A very rare cases of tenancy.

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	The next moment, the sound of the student council room door opening could be heard.		The next moment, the sound of the student council room door opening could be heard.

	At the same time, the ceiling lights ~~turn~~ on lighting up the room.		At the same time, the ceiling lights turned on, lighting up the room.

	Another member of the student council walked into the room.		Another member of the student council walked into the room.

	It is Uesaki Ryohei the secretary of the student council.		It is Uesaki Ryohei, the secretary of the student council.

	"Oh, Kyoya ~~your~~ still here?"		"Oh, Kyoya you're still here?"

	Ryohei noticed Kyoya's presence.		Ryohei noticed Kyoya's presence.

	"~~Its~~ already so late. What are you doing here? At least turn on a light."		"It's already so late. What are you doing here? At least turn on a light."

	"I'm was just thinking about a few things."		"I was just thinking about a few things."

	Kyoya replied with the usual smile.		Kyoya replied with the usual smile.

	It was like his ~~previous~~ intoxicated with power expression was a lie judging from his ability to immediately ~~look~~ clam.		It was like his previously intoxicated with power expression was a lie judging from his ability to immediately appear clam.

	Therefore......		Therefore......

	"Hmm I see. The student council president indeed really ~~works~~ hard. There's always a lot of things to worry about."		"Hmm I see. The student council president indeed works really hard. There are always a lot of things to worry about."

	Ryohei shrugged and walked towards his seat~~, he seeming~~ accepted what Kyoya said.		Ryohei shrugged and walked towards his seat. He seemingly accepted what Kyoya said.

	Ryohei's response as well as his reaction gave Kyoya a sense of satisfaction.		Ryohei's response as well as his reaction gave Kyoya a sense of satisfaction.

	It also appears that Kyoya didn't look anxious or complacent~~, he~~ remained as cold as ice ~~giving the~~ sense of normalcy.		It also appears that Kyoya didn't look anxious or complacent. He remained as cold as ice, exuding a sense of normalcy.

	Even if he is about to realize ~~his~~ ambitions that he had for many years ~~now. There~~ is still no change to his normal calm demeanor.		Even though he is about to realize the ambitions that he had aspired to for many years, there is still no change to his normal calm demeanor.

	Then Ryohei suddenly remembered something.		Then Ryohei suddenly remembered something.