Hagure Yuusha no Aesthetica:Volume 9 Chapter 1 - Revision history

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	"-- Akatsuki!"		"-- Akatsuki!"

	Listy Sherfied called out in voice that was like scream.		Listy Sherfied called out in a voice that was like a scream.

	She did so was because she saw with her own eyes Akatsuki being been taken by surprise. It happened so fast, there was no time for her to warn him.		She did so was because she saw with her own eyes Akatsuki being been taken by surprise. It happened so fast, there was no time for her to warn him.

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	-- However, Haruka face shrank as her magic never reached her opponents.		-- However, Haruka face shrank as her magic never reached her opponents.

	More precisely, the moment before they should of hit a protective barrier suddenly raised from the floor blocking her magic.		More precisely, the moment before they should have hit a protective barrier suddenly raised from the floor blocking her magic.

	And after completing its role, the protective wall quietly crumbled.		And after completing its role, the protective wall quietly crumbled.
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	The edge of the blade cut into the top of the dragon's head, and split open its enormous body without a sound.		The edge of the blade cut into the top of the dragon's head, and split open its enormous body without a sound.

	-- That should of been the end.		-- That should have been the end.

	But, during the time when he was tearing through the chest area of the dragon.		But, during the time when he was tearing through the chest area of the dragon.
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	It to came towards her with its mouth wide open and sharp fangs exposed.		It to came towards her with its mouth wide open and sharp fangs exposed.

	Listy should of been on guard against a surprise attack from the dragon, and that gave that serious consideration.		Listy should have been on guard against a surprise attack from the dragon, and that gave that serious consideration.

	But towards the sudden situation, Listy's only thought was on seeing if Akatsuki was alright.		But towards the sudden situation, Listy's only thought was on seeing if Akatsuki was alright.

Hp2: Verify with source; this is a guess.

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Verify with source; this is a guess.

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	He gently put power into his arms, stopping her from resisting and,		He gently put power into his arms, stopping her from resisting and,

	"I'm fine, you don't ~~do not~~ worry about me."		"I'm fine, you don't need to worry about me."

	Although the tone was light, there was conviction in his words.		Although the tone was light, there was conviction in his words.

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	Akatsuki's strength might be at its limits.		Akatsuki's strength might be at its limits.

	-- Listy didn't know too much about Hikami Kyouya. However, she knew that he was a member of COCOON, who were known as the administrators of this world, ~~and~~ and that there was some unknown grudge.		-- Listy didn't know too much about Hikami Kyouya. However, she knew that he was a member of COCOON, who were known as the administrators of this world, and that there was some unknown grudge.

	But according to Haruka, each one of their abilities including Kyouya's were definitely greater than Akatsuki's.		But according to Haruka, each one of their abilities including Kyouya's were definitely greater than Akatsuki's.

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	Because Miu had to be rescued as soon as possible.		Because Miu had to be rescued as soon as possible.

	The tower of Babel was vast, and had many corners. However, every step Akatsuki took ~~their~~ wasn't the slightest hint of him getting lost.		The tower of Babel was vast, and had many corners. However, every step Akatsuki took there wasn't the slightest hint of him getting lost.

	Akatsuki was familiar with Miu's energy, and could feel where to go.		Akatsuki was familiar with Miu's energy, and could feel where to go.

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	And Kaidou laughed,		And Kaidou laughed,

	"What will you do vice-president?... ... Before you seemed to be somewhat ~~hesitate~~, and now how is it?"		"What will you do vice-president?... ... Before you seemed to be somewhat hesitant, and now how is it?"

	"...... Such a thing goes without saying."		"...... Such a thing goes without saying."
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	Listy's strikes did indeed seem effective.		Listy's strikes did indeed seem effective.

	...... With this, somehow we might ~~mange~~......!		...... With this, somehow we might manage......!

	Listy felt some feedback from the hit, and tightly grasped her magic staff.		Listy felt some feedback from the hit, and tightly grasped her magic staff.

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	Faced with Haruka's question, Kaidou wryly smiled as if troubled,		Faced with Haruka's question, Kaidou wryly smiled as if troubled,

	"Its hard to explain, but I...... just happened to close by. In truth, I wanted to ~~ride~~ myself of this troublesome place immediately, however I still had some minor business. Normally I wouldn't poke my nose into others personal matters, but if Ackee learns ~~latter~~ that I let you die without doing anything, he might become terrifying."		"Its hard to explain, but I...... just happened to be close by. In truth, I wanted to rid myself of this troublesome place immediately, however I still had some minor business. Normally I wouldn't poke my nose into others' personal matters, but if Ackee learns later that I let you die without doing anything, he might become terrifying."

	Then......		Then......

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	Ryohei paused,		Ryohei paused,

	"But also -- just before you claimed that we are making a mistake, however haven't you yourself decided to join in with Ousawa's camp? You'll been speaking disagreeably about Kyouya actions, but hasn't that guy also been trying to ~~appose~~ COCOON and Crimson Twilight. Moreover, his way of handling things seem to be more arrogant, perhaps more unreasonable than Kyouya. Like that, deciding to follow Ousawa, what right do you have to criticize us for being wrong?"		"But also -- just before you claimed that we are making a mistake, however haven't you yourself decided to join in with Ousawa's camp? You'll been speaking disagreeably about Kyouya actions, but hasn't that guy also been trying to oppose COCOON and Crimson Twilight. Moreover, his way of handling things seem to be more arrogant, perhaps more unreasonable than Kyouya. Like that, deciding to follow Ousawa, what right do you have to criticize us for being wrong?"

	"That......"		"That......"

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	And sticking out her right hand horizontally, Tiana Randohauzen had materialized her weapon. It was a giant crushing battle axe that was taller than herself. But,		And sticking out her right hand horizontally, Tiana Randohauzen had materialized her weapon. It was a giant crushing battle axe that was taller than herself. But,

	"Are you sure? You couldn't ~~touch~~ touch me with your fists, and now you want to rely on this hulking weapon?"		"Are you sure? You couldn't touch me with your fists, and now you want to rely on this hulking weapon?"

	Kyouya could not help laughing. Therefore,		Kyouya could not help laughing. Therefore,

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	Kyouya's intention wasn't too difficult to understand.		Kyouya's intention wasn't too difficult to understand.

	If he used a direct attack attack it would of been negated by the absolute barrier. But, if the magic was transformed into some sort of natural phenomenon it would become an indirect attack, and not fall under the influence of an absolute barrier. So, Kyouya's magic must had took advantage of this loophole.		If he used a direct attack attack it would have been negated by the absolute barrier. But, if the magic was transformed into some sort of natural phenomenon it would become an indirect attack, and not fall under the influence of an absolute barrier. So, Kyouya's magic must had took advantage of this loophole.

	If Tiana was even a little slow with her defense, the flash from the explosion would have baked her eyes, and ultra-high temperature of hot air would of caused significant injury to her head.		If Tiana was even a little slow with her defense, the flash from the explosion would have baked her eyes, and ultra-high temperature of hot air would have caused significant injury to her head.

	Thus, Kyouya's surprise attack would have definitely been effective.		Thus, Kyouya's surprise attack would have definitely been effective.
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	-- The moment they walked into the elevator she naturally assumed it could be used as a ambush spot. Therefore she thought if the moment arrives they could break up elevator's roof, floor, and directly escape into the elevator shaft, or even break open the doors or wall and escape into the interior of the building.		-- The moment they walked into the elevator she naturally assumed it could be used as a ambush spot. Therefore she thought if the moment arrives they could break up elevator's roof, floor, and directly escape into the elevator shaft, or even break open the doors or wall and escape into the interior of the building.

	But, even if they fled up or down the dragon would of just changed it angle to ~~matched~~ their height. And even if they fled to an interior floor of the building, because of the dragon's mass and speed that too wouldn't of had any meaning.		But, even if they fled up or down the dragon would have just changed its angle to match their height. And even if they fled to an interior floor of the building, because of the dragon's mass and speed that too wouldn't have had any meaning.

	Therefore, Listy instead decided to launch a protective barrier.		Therefore, Listy instead decided to launch a protective barrier.
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	To start there were the doors to the elevator, beyond that there were the thick walls used for the facilities on the floor one after another. Not only that, in those rooms there were also various large-scale equipment.		To start there were the doors to the elevator, beyond that there were the thick walls used for the facilities on the floor one after another. Not only that, in those rooms there were also various large-scale equipment.

	Even though they were protected with her barrier from the front of the dragon's attack, when they were thrust inside they would of received heavy damage from behind from those obstacles -- might even have been crushed to death.		Even though they were protected with her barrier from the front of the dragon's attack, when they were thrust inside they would have received heavy damage from behind from those obstacles -- might even have been crushed to death.

	Also the dragon struck the elevator at an acute angle, causing it to go downward.		Also the dragon struck the elevator at an acute angle, causing it to go downward.
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	Of course - there was also the option of attacking the oncoming Dragon itself.		Of course - there was also the option of attacking the oncoming Dragon itself.

	However, if he was unable to completely stop the dragon, herself and Akatsuki would of been flattened into patties. Still though, with Akatsuki's personality it was almost a certainty he would choose to take the enemy head-on, however dared not to do so.		However, if he was unable to completely stop the dragon, herself and Akatsuki would have been flattened into patties. Still though, with Akatsuki's personality it was almost a certainty he would choose to take the enemy head-on, however dared not to do so.

	....... Don't tell me it was because I decided to go with him......?		....... Don't tell me it was because I decided to go with him......?
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	"-- Whoever the enemy is, they will be crushed."		"-- Whoever the enemy is, they will be crushed."

	Akatsuki materialized Lævateinn, and disdainfully stared at the dragon in front his eyes. It was a about 10 meters in height, about half of its original size. Perhaps, they specially made it smaller so it to move easier indoors. Moreover, Listy's protective barrier wasn't destroyed before when it smashed into it, it seems they weren't able reproduce the absolute barrier of a higher-order life from. Otherwise, as soon as it touched her barrier, the barrier would of vanished like thin air. The reason Akatsuki decided to open a hole instead of attacking was in consideration of that possibility.		Akatsuki materialized Lævateinn, and disdainfully stared at the dragon in front his eyes. It was a about 10 meters in height, about half of its original size. Perhaps, they specially made it smaller so it to move easier indoors. Moreover, Listy's protective barrier wasn't destroyed before when it smashed into it, it seems they weren't able reproduce the absolute barrier of a higher-order life from. Otherwise, as soon as it touched her barrier, the barrier would have vanished like thin air. The reason Akatsuki decided to open a hole instead of attacking was in consideration of that possibility.

	So far, everything was going well.		So far, everything was going well.
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	That just now was probably an attack aimed at Akatsuki. Although they only saw it for an instant, the color was different, but somehow its figure resembled Zahhak they fought in the recent ranking tournament.		That just now was probably an attack aimed at Akatsuki. Although they only saw it for an instant, the color was different, but somehow its figure resembled Zahhak they fought in the recent ranking tournament.

	They normally would of thought that it was Hikami Kyouya's doing, but after finding out about Kaidou there was also a possibility that it was Crimson Twilight.		They normally would have thought that it was Hikami Kyouya's doing, but after finding out about Kaidou there was also a possibility that it was Crimson Twilight.

	Akatsuki's strength goes without saying, and Listy wasn't weak herself.		Akatsuki's strength goes without saying, and Listy wasn't weak herself.