Hidan no Aria:Volume10 Chapter3 - Revision history

Rxls at 04:22, 28 June 2018

2018-06-28T04:22:48Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 04:22, 28 June 2018
Line 1:		Line 1:
	== 3rd Ammo - Secret of the Deep Blue -Deep Blue- ==		== 3rd Ammo: Secret of the Deep Blue -Deep Blue- ==

	After I brought my self-proclaimed and publicly recognised sister, Tohyama Kaname back to my dorm –		After I brought my self-proclaimed and publicly recognised sister, Tohyama Kaname back to my dorm –
Line 1,211:		Line 1,211:
	There was now completely no noise other than the sounds of insects.		There was now completely no noise other than the sounds of insects.


			<noinclude>
	<references />		<references />
	~~<noinclude>~~
	{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume10_Chapter2\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume10_Chapter4}}		{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume10_Chapter2\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume10_Chapter4}}
	</noinclude>		</noinclude>

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences, if any are not satisfied with it, please inform me in my talk

2013-07-23T15:34:21Z

Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences, if any are not satisfied with it, please inform me in my talk

← Older revision		Revision as of 15:34, 23 July 2013
Line 23:		Line 23:
	Then, she rinsed her mouth noisily.		Then, she rinsed her mouth noisily.

	Looking closely, the toothbrush cup that Kaname was holding matched my toothbrush cup. Where did she get that? This way, it already looked like we were siblings with a good relationship.”		Looking closely, the toothbrush cup that Kaname was holding matched my toothbrush cup. Where did she get that? This way, it already looked like we were siblings with a good relationship.

	“Why do I feel like there are many things that have disappeared…”		“Why do I feel like there are many things that have disappeared…”
Line 31:		Line 31:
	“You did this kind of thing again…”		“You did this kind of thing again…”

	“The pillow with Aria’s smell, I sent it out after tearing it. Also, I either cut or creased ~~the~~ Shirayuki’s black lingerie and Riko’s games before sending them out. It was really tedious.”		“The pillow with Aria’s smell, I sent it out after tearing it. Also, I either cut or creased Shirayuki’s black lingerie and Riko’s games before sending them out. It was really tedious.”

	“…”		“…”
Line 72:		Line 72:
	What do you mean by “keep”? Are you treating them like pets? At least they are humans, right?		What do you mean by “keep”? Are you treating them like pets? At least they are humans, right?

	sigh Given those four derogatory remarks, I could already see who she was ~~pointing~~ to, so I’m not one to talk.		<nowiki>sigh</nowiki> Given those four derogatory remarks, I could already see who she was refering to, so I’m not one to talk.

	“Listen. Onii-chan is the best male in the world, but in this regard, Onii-chan is not conscious enough. You need to change your attitude of “As long it’s a girl, there’s no difference”. Those women are to~tally not worth Onii-chan’s love. That’s. Too. Un. Reason. Able!” Said Kaname, entering her preaching mode as she pointed at me with her index finger. Looks like she is angry at the fact that Aria was residing in my dorm.		“Listen. Onii-chan is the best male in the world, but in this regard, Onii-chan is not conscious enough. You need to change your attitude of “As long it’s a girl, there’s no difference”. Those women are to~tally not worth Onii-chan’s love. That’s. Too. Un. Reason. Able!” Said Kaname, entering her preaching mode as she pointed at me with her index finger. Looks like she is angry at the fact that Aria was residing in my dorm.
Line 187:		Line 187:

	“Yeah, yeah, there are lots of them – For examples, your looks…"		“Yeah, yeah, there are lots of them – For examples, your looks…"

	“My looks? I think you better visit the optometrist. In the eyes of most girls, my looks are that of a gloomy person, you know?”		“My looks? I think you better visit the optometrist. In the eyes of most girls, my looks are that of a gloomy person, you know?”

Line 255:		Line 256:
	It felt like if I went to look at her, I would have lost some kind of battle, hence I decided to continue watching TV.		It felt like if I went to look at her, I would have lost some kind of battle, hence I decided to continue watching TV.

	Chk – Chk –…		<nowiki>Chk</nowiki> – Chk –…

	(…?)		(…?)
Line 261:		Line 262:
	There seemed to be a weird noise coming from the kitchen.		There seemed to be a weird noise coming from the kitchen.

	Chk – Chk – Chk –…		<nowiki>Chk</nowiki> – Chk – Chk –…

	After thirty seconds, I finally admitted defeat and turned to look,		After thirty seconds, I finally admitted defeat and turned to look,
Line 327:		Line 328:
	“It isn’t for sale. Because it is still in testing, so it should be expensive. One of this would probably take about twenty to thirty million U.S. dollars. Only the Pentagon and Los Alamos uses it. To me, it is my cell phone.”		“It isn’t for sale. Because it is still in testing, so it should be expensive. One of this would probably take about twenty to thirty million U.S. dollars. Only the Pentagon and Los Alamos uses it. To me, it is my cell phone.”

	Twenty to thirty U.S. dollars…?		Twenty to thirty million U.S. dollars…?

	One U.S. dollar is about eighty Japanese yen. So that is – a cell phone that costs about 2.2 billion yen!		One U.S. dollar is about eighty Japanese yen. So that is – a cell phone that costs about 2.2 billion yen!

	Just as my eyes were open in amazement, Kaname opened a PC Game box that was on the table		Just as my eyes were open wide in amazement, Kaname opened a PC Game box that was on the table

	…That box, it seems familiar.		…That box, it seems familiar.
Line 376:		Line 377:
	“Are you an idiot, the only option I will choose is “Ignore”.”		“Are you an idiot, the only option I will choose is “Ignore”.”

	Kaname muttered, “Onii-chan is so unreasonable~”, before opening the refrigerator and ~~looked~~ at the stuff inside –		Kaname muttered, “Onii-chan is so unreasonable~”, before opening the refrigerator and looking at the stuff inside –

	[[Image:Aria10 131.jpg\|thumb]]		[[Image:Aria10 131.jpg\|thumb]]
Line 394:		Line 395:
	She… actually made curry.		She… actually made curry.

	Although it smells supposedly nice, I still didn’t lower my guard. Only after I swapped our plates did I take my seat.”		Although it smells supposedly nice, I still didn’t lower my guard. Only after I swapped our plates did I take my seat.

	“How hateful, I obviously won’t poison it.”		“How hateful, I obviously won’t poison it.”
Line 537:		Line 538:
	Her smiling face proved my theory – she only needed to make sure that people know I have a little sister. That was probably done, I’m sure?		Her smiling face proved my theory – she only needed to make sure that people know I have a little sister. That was probably done, I’m sure?

	“But… it feels really exciting to meet in the school. Originally, I could have Onii-chan exclusively to me, but now, it seems that I have to be more secretive in school. This feels terrific. I’m sure many girls who have a crush on Onii-chan now feel unwilling, right? Hehe. There’s a ~~feel~~ of superiority.”		“But… it feels really exciting to meet in the school. Originally, I could have Onii-chan exclusively to me, but now, it seems that I have to be more secretive in school. This feels terrific. I’m sure many girls who have a crush on Onii-chan now feel unwilling, right? Hehe. There’s a feeling of superiority.”

	Looking at Kaname talking shyly, with her hands holding her cheeks –		Looking at Kaname talking shyly, with her hands holding her cheeks –
Line 637:		Line 638:
	To be safe, I made sure that the door was locked and nobody was around, then –		To be safe, I made sure that the door was locked and nobody was around, then –

	hug		<nowiki>hug</nowiki>

	I hugged Kaname, in a style for comforting little children.		I hugged Kaname, in a style for comforting little children.
Line 741:		Line 742:
	“Also, don’t tell anyone else, ok?”		“Also, don’t tell anyone else, ok?”

	nod		<nowiki>nod</nowiki>

	She nodded thrice.		She nodded thrice.
Line 1,012:		Line 1,013:
	Ka…sha…ka…sha…		Ka…sha…ka…sha…

	Fuuma, with her back facing me, came out from the plastic ~~bad~~ like a butterfly after metamorphosis; jumping out of the bag… – Bam!		Fuuma, with her back facing me, came out from the plastic bag like a butterfly after metamorphosis; jumping out of the bag… – Bam!

	“Uh, ah!”		“Uh, ah!”

Winlex: nav bar on bottom of page

2013-07-20T05:12:47Z

nav bar on bottom of page

← Older revision		Revision as of 05:12, 20 July 2013
Line 1,209:		Line 1,209:

	There was now completely no noise other than the sounds of insects.		There was now completely no noise other than the sounds of insects.

			<references />
			<noinclude>
			{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume10_Chapter2\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume10_Chapter4}}
			</noinclude>

Winlex at 01:47, 20 July 2013

2013-07-20T01:47:08Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 01:47, 20 July 2013
Line 329:		Line 329:
	Twenty to thirty U.S. dollars…?		Twenty to thirty U.S. dollars…?

	One U.S. dollar is about eighty Japanese yen. So that is – a cell phone that costs about ~~two-two~~ billion yen!		One U.S. dollar is about eighty Japanese yen. So that is – a cell phone that costs about 2.2 billion yen!

	Just as my eyes were open in amazement, Kaname opened a PC Game box that was on the table		Just as my eyes were open in amazement, Kaname opened a PC Game box that was on the table

Monsterbandage: /* 3rd Ammo - Secret of the Deep Blue -Deep Blue- */

2013-07-11T06:40:31Z

3rd Ammo - Secret of the Deep Blue -Deep Blue-

← Older revision		Revision as of 06:40, 11 July 2013
Line 325:		Line 325:
	“I have never even heard of such thing. Which company came up with it?”		“I have never even heard of such thing. Which company came up with it?”

	“It isn’t for sale. Because it is still testing, so it should be expensive. One of this would probably take about twenty to thirty million U.S. dollars. Only the Pentagon and Los Alamos uses it. To me, it is my cell phone.”		“It isn’t for sale. Because it is still in testing, so it should be expensive. One of this would probably take about twenty to thirty million U.S. dollars. Only the Pentagon and Los Alamos uses it. To me, it is my cell phone.”

	Twenty to thirty U.S. dollars…?		Twenty to thirty U.S. dollars…?
Line 453:		Line 453:
	Looking closer, it seemed that Kaname had woken up really early to finish the housework. The house had become extremely clean, while our clothes were being hung out on the balcony. Her diligence seemed to match that of Shirayuki’s.		Looking closer, it seemed that Kaname had woken up really early to finish the housework. The house had become extremely clean, while our clothes were being hung out on the balcony. Her diligence seemed to match that of Shirayuki’s.

	Then, two of us took the bus. I was shot curious looks by the Butei High students.		Then, the two of us took the bus. I was shot curious looks by the Butei High students.

	Soon, Kaname alighted at Masters.		Soon, Kaname alighted at Masters.
Line 547:		Line 547:
	“What…?”		“What…?”

	“Many people said, Onii-chan used to powerful Assault Butei. Many Assault Butei have good impressions of Onii-chan. Indeed, Onii-chan is really strong. Although your cold personality hasn’t really changed.”		“Many people said, Onii-chan used to be a powerful Assault Butei. Many Assault Butei have good impressions of Onii-chan. Indeed, Onii-chan is really strong. Although your cold personality hasn’t really changed.”

	She actually… went to investigate about such unnecessary matters.		She actually… went to investigate about such unnecessary matters.
Line 569:		Line 569:
	“…”		“…”

	Because it was a topic I wasn’t good in, I was silent. Seeing this, Kaname took out an envelope from her skirt pocket.		Because it was a topic I wasn’t good at, I was silent. Seeing this, Kaname took out an envelope from her skirt pocket.

	“Um, what should I do? Can I treat him as a boyfriend for practice?”		“Um, what should I do? Can I treat him as a boyfriend for practice?”

Monsterbandage at 04:23, 10 July 2013

2013-07-10T04:23:25Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 04:23, 10 July 2013
Line 233:		Line 233:
	I once heard from Shiranui that a “Romeo” task is different from “Honey Trap” in the way that “Romeo” doesn’t start with using the body to lure the other party. Instead, it was to let the other party have a good impression of you.		I once heard from Shiranui that a “Romeo” task is different from “Honey Trap” in the way that “Romeo” doesn’t start with using the body to lure the other party. Instead, it was to let the other party have a good impression of you.

	However, when I look at it, the first step probably has been ~~complete~~, I’m sure? After all, since the start, Kaname had already had a good impression of me.		However, when I look at it, the first step probably has been completed, I’m sure? After all, since the start, Kaname had already had a good impression of me.

	But what do I do next… I don’t know, neither did I want to know.		But what do I do next… I don’t know, neither did I want to know.

99.19.93.10: /* 3rd Ammo - Secret of the Deep Blue -Deep Blue- */

2013-07-08T18:20:23Z

3rd Ammo - Secret of the Deep Blue -Deep Blue-

← Older revision		Revision as of 18:20, 8 July 2013
Line 174:		Line 174:
	Just when I had nothing to say after her rebuttal –		Just when I had nothing to say after her rebuttal –

	“Onii-chan! Like, ~~likelike~~, I really like! Like, like…”		“Onii-chan! Like, like, like, I really like! Like, like…”

	Taking hold of the opportunity, Kaname leaned on my body while acting like a spoilt kitten.		Taking hold of the opportunity, Kaname leaned on my body while acting like a spoilt kitten.

99.19.93.10: /* 3rd Ammo - Secret of the Deep Blue -Deep Blue- */

2013-07-08T18:13:31Z

3rd Ammo - Secret of the Deep Blue -Deep Blue-

← Older revision		Revision as of 18:13, 8 July 2013
Line 70:		Line 70:
	Looking at her furious expression, I felt like recoiling.		Looking at her furious expression, I felt like recoiling.

	What do you mean by “keep”? Are you treating them like pets? At least they are humans, ~~am I~~ right?		What do you mean by “keep”? Are you treating them like pets? At least they are humans, right?

	sigh Given those four derogatory remarks, I could already see who she was pointing to, so I’m not one to talk.		sigh Given those four derogatory remarks, I could already see who she was pointing to, so I’m not one to talk.

Drinkingwater at 14:53, 2 July 2013

2013-07-02T14:53:20Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 14:53, 2 July 2013
Line 5:		Line 5:
	“…?”		“…?”

	Because Shirayuki has been busy with the Cultural Festival, my room should be ~~very messy…~~ But now, it seemed to be organized and clean.		Because Shirayuki has been busy with the Cultural Festival, my room should be in a deep mess… But right now, it seemed to be quite organized and clean.

	No, it’s overly clean.		No, it’s overly clean.
Line 17:		Line 17:
	It feels like I’ve gone back to the time before Aria moved into my dorm.		It feels like I’ve gone back to the time before Aria moved into my dorm.

	“Hey, erm… Kaname, didn’t you say just now, something about trespassing in my room…” I asked. While the suspect who was in the washroom ~~said…~~		“Hey, erm… Kaname, didn’t you say just now, something about trespassing in my room…” I asked. While the suspect who was in the washroom replied…

	“This place is a Tohyama home, so Tohyama Kaname coming into this place should be no problem. After all, family members can go into family residences anytime they like.”		“This place is a Tohyama home, so Tohyama Kaname coming into this place should be no problem. After all, family members can go into family residences anytime they like.”
Line 50:		Line 50:
	“…Eh, why are you angry?”		“…Eh, why are you angry?”

	“Although there was no other choice, but since you self-proclaim to be one of the Tohyamas, you must not do such despicable things from now on. Got it?” ~~After I used~~ a tone that ~~made~~ people stop retorting…		“Although there was no other choice, but since you self-proclaim to be one of the Tohyamas, you must not do such despicable things from now on. Got it?” Using a tone that could make people stop retorting…

	Kaname looked up at me with an aghast expression, then nodded her head.		Kaname looked up at me with an aghast expression, then nodded her head.

	Hm…? How come she nodded at me that easily?”		'Hm…? How come she nodded at me that easily?'

	“I-I know. Then, I will try my best to learn what is “despicable things”, and I will not do these things from this day onwards.”		“I-I know. Then, I will try my best to learn what are “despicable things”, and I will not do these things from this day onwards.”

	For some reason, it feels like she is afraid of being hated by me. Even her body was trembling slightly.		For some reason, it feels like she is afraid of being hated by me. Even her body was trembling slightly.
Line 92:		Line 92:
	“If I see any woman trying to stick with my Onii-chan, I will assassinate her!”		“If I see any woman trying to stick with my Onii-chan, I will assassinate her!”

	“Hey, hey! To start, don’t keep talking about killing people. If you want to be by my side, then no matter what happens, don’t do anything violent, ok?” I ~~said with emphasis~~.		“Hey, hey! To start, don’t keep talking about killing people. If you want to be by my side, then no matter what happens, don’t do anything violent, ok?” I emphasized.

	Kaname stared at me…		Kaname stared at me…
Line 102:		Line 102:
	“…”		“…”

	Just when I was suspecting whether she really understood and glaring hard at her –		Just when I was suspecting whether she really understood that and started glaring hard at her –

	“…Ah…”		“…Ah…”
Line 110:		Line 110:
	…Uwa…		…Uwa…

	~~And blushed~~ inexplicably.		Blushed inexplicably.

	“Onii, Onii-chan…”		“Onii, Onii-chan…”
Line 134:		Line 134:
	“Hey, hey…”		“Hey, hey…”

	“Like. Like. I like a lot. What do I do?”		“Like. Like. I like you a lot. What do I do?”

	Kaname looked downwards. Her face, the back of her neck, and even her head was redder than a beetroot.		Kaname looked downwards. Her face, the back of her neck, and even her head was redder than a beetroot.
Line 160:		Line 160:
	Because it seemed that Kaname didn’t understand what I was saying, thus…		Because it seemed that Kaname didn’t understand what I was saying, thus…

	“I mean, there is a problem with blood-related people saying that.”		“I mean, there would be a problem with blood-related people saying that.”

	I had to resort to carefully explaining to her about this general common sense that even made me feel ashamed by just talking about it.		I had to resort to carefully explaining to her about this general common sense that even made me feel ashamed by just talking about it.

	“Blood relations is only a small problem.”		“Blood relations are only a small problem.”

	“You ~~meant~~ a huge problem! Go and study about the laws in Japan!”		“You mean a huge problem! Go and study about the laws in Japan!”

	“That’s my line. Although marriage is forbidden, love is still legitimate!”		“That’s my line. Although marriage is forbidden, love is still legitimate!”
Line 180:		Line 180:
	It feels as if she is in a trance. Am I a silver vine?		It feels as if she is in a trance. Am I a silver vine?

	“No, don’t cling onto me! Also, importantly, what is good about me that is worthy of being liked?”		“No, don’t cling onto me! Also, more importantly, what is good about me that is worthy of being liked?”

	I used a puzzled expression to look at this beautiful yet strange girl.		I used a puzzled expression to look at this beautiful yet strange girl.
Line 186:		Line 186:
	And all she did was to maintain her terrifying state…		And all she did was to maintain her terrifying state…

	“Yeah, yeah, there are lots of them – For examples, your looks…		“Yeah, yeah, there are lots of them – For examples, your looks…"
	“My looks? I think you better visit the optometrist. In the eyes of most girls, my looks are that of a gloomy person, you know?”		“My looks? I think you better visit the optometrist. In the eyes of most girls, my looks are that of a gloomy person, you know?”

Line 237:		Line 237:
	But what do I do next… I don’t know, neither did I want to know.		But what do I do next… I don’t know, neither did I want to know.

	Thus, I escaped reality by reading books and watched DVDs. Unconsciously, time ~~flied~~ by and it was already nighttime.		Thus, I escaped reality by reading books and watched DVDs. Unconsciously, time flew by and it was already nighttime.

	By the way, throughout this period of time, Kaname was like a small duck ~~which~~ recognized a wrong mother duck. She kept on following me, even to the extent that she followed me to the washroom.		By the way, throughout this whole period of time, Kaname was like a small duck who recognized a wrong mother duck. She kept on following me, even to the extent that she followed me to the washroom.

	This also remained the same when I was watching TV on the sofa. As I watched the TV programmes, she sat beside me, grinning.		This also remained the same when I was watching TV on the sofa. As I watched the TV programmes, she sat beside me, grinning.

	A normal man would probably be happy if there was such a beauty beside him, right? But now the situation was happening to me. Because she really made me ~~unhappy~~, when it was evening, I warned her sternly to move away.		A normal man would probably be happy if there was such a beauty beside him, right? But now the situation was happening to me. Because she really made me feel uneasy, when it was evening, I warned her sternly to move away.

	In the end, she stood behind the kitchen curtain, revealing only half of her body and face. Then, she looked at me for a full two hours.		In the end, she stood behind the kitchen curtain, revealing only half of her body and face. Then, she looked at me for a full two hours.
Line 323:		Line 323:
	“You can’t see it from the front as this monitor is made of an optical multilayer screen. Above, there is a layer of translucent liquid crystal film. Necessary information will be continuously displayed at the top. It feels like the thoughts of the brain are directly connected with the network.”		“You can’t see it from the front as this monitor is made of an optical multilayer screen. Above, there is a layer of translucent liquid crystal film. Necessary information will be continuously displayed at the top. It feels like the thoughts of the brain are directly connected with the network.”

	“I have never even heard of ~~this kind of~~ thing. Which company came ~~out~~ with it?”		“I have never even heard of such thing. Which company came up with it?”

	“It isn’t for sale. Because it is still testing, so it should be expensive. One of this would probably take about twenty to thirty million U.S. dollars. Only the Pentagon and Los Alamos uses it. To me, it is my cell phone.”		“It isn’t for sale. Because it is still testing, so it should be expensive. One of this would probably take about twenty to thirty million U.S. dollars. Only the Pentagon and Los Alamos uses it. To me, it is my cell phone.”
Line 351:		Line 351:
	“Especially this one, because it’s based on the theme of a younger sister’s love story. In order to let Onii-chan like me, I will try hard.”		“Especially this one, because it’s based on the theme of a younger sister’s love story. In order to let Onii-chan like me, I will try hard.”

	“Don’t learn that kind of stuff! Moreover, that thing is R-rated – In short, you ~~shouldn’t~~ access those stuff at your age.”		“Don’t learn that kind of stuff! Moreover, that thing is R-rated – In short, you shouldn't access those stuff at your age.”

	“Hm, looks like it’s better to make simple food.”		“Hm, looks like it’s better to make simple food.”

Bakapervert: /* 3rd Ammo - Secret of the Deep Blue -Deep Blue- */

2013-07-01T13:56:23Z

3rd Ammo - Secret of the Deep Blue -Deep Blue-

← Older revision		Revision as of 13:56, 1 July 2013
Line 1,180:		Line 1,180:
	Just like this, after five minutes – “Very good! Like that, your concentration and muscular endurance have improved. Practice stops here, you can go back now.” I said irresponsibly, sending Fuuma off. Before leaving, she said, “I sincerely thank Master for this practice”, making me feel guilty of what I did just now…		Just like this, after five minutes – “Very good! Like that, your concentration and muscular endurance have improved. Practice stops here, you can go back now.” I said irresponsibly, sending Fuuma off. Before leaving, she said, “I sincerely thank Master for this practice”, making me feel guilty of what I did just now…

	(F-finally, I survived this ~~ordeal…”~~		(F-finally, I survived this ordeal…)

	When I sighed,		When I sighed,
Line 1,192:		Line 1,192:
	Does that mean… we had been seen…? But, looking from here, the direction of the forest was unclear due to the darkness. So to say, my current location should be unclear as well, right? Don’t tell me there are other couples here?		Does that mean… we had been seen…? But, looking from here, the direction of the forest was unclear due to the darkness. So to say, my current location should be unclear as well, right? Don’t tell me there are other couples here?

	Just to be me, I readied my gun and crept towards the direction of the noise…		Just to be safe, I readied my gun and crept towards the direction of the noise…

	… Nobody.		… Nobody.