Hidan no Aria:Volume10 Chapter5 - Revision history

Rxls at 04:23, 28 June 2018

2018-06-28T04:23:23Z

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	== 5th Ammo - Surprise Rose ==		== 5th Ammo: Surprise Rose ==

Royaloyalz: Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences, if any are not satisfied with it, please inform me in my talk

2013-07-24T03:49:20Z

Some edits to help improve the flow of sentences, if any are not satisfied with it, please inform me in my talk

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	"I was trying to figure out Onii-chan's preferences. I can't find a common theme among the girls I've seen so far."		"I was trying to figure out Onii-chan's preferences. I can't find a common theme among the girls I've seen so far."

	"That would because I don't have any. Why would I have preferences for something I can't stand to begin with?"		"That would be because I don't have any. Why would I have preferences for something I can't stand to begin with?"

	"But, but~"		"But, but~"
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	Because I'm the only one in this world who can help her obtain the strength she seeks, the partner who can help her enter Hysteria Mode.		Because I'm the only one in this world who can help her obtain the strength she seeks, the partner who can help her enter Hysteria Mode.

	Furthermore, it looks like she plans on forming a team with me, becoming a pair who ~~stand~~ above all.		Furthermore, it looks like she plans on forming a team with me, becoming a pair who stands above all.

	This, putting aside whether or not it's true for a moment, poses a danger in more ways than one.		This, putting aside whether or not it's true for a moment, poses a danger in more ways than one.
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	I rubbed my eyes and double-checked that it had just been my imagination before beginning my explanation.		I rubbed my eyes and double-checked that it had just been my imagination before beginning my explanation.

	"So anyway, recently my continued wellbeing has been threatened by Kaname...GIV. Even though she pretends to be a docile, obedient child at school, but the second the two of us are alone, it becomes obvious her mind turns a little, you know. I mean, just from the way she calls herself my little sister you can tell ~~what~~ how far gone she is."		"So anyway, recently my continued wellbeing has been threatened by Kaname...GIV. Even though she pretends to be a docile, obedient child at school, but the second the two of us are alone, it becomes obvious her mind turns a little, you know. I mean, just from the way she calls herself my little sister you can tell how far gone she is."

	"Holiday~"		"Holiday~"
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	The way things look, it seems you've failed.		The way things look, it seems you've failed.

	It doesn't like a male-female HSS pair produces two superhumans...just one.		It doesn't look like a male-female HSS pair produces two superhumans...just one.

	The so-called "Arcanum Duo" you described to me earlier seems to be purely hypothetical.		The so-called "Arcanum Duo" you described to me earlier seems to be purely hypothetical.

Winlex at 07:38, 20 July 2013

2013-07-20T07:38:36Z

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	That time I spent with Nii-san...it was curry too.		That time I spent with Nii-san...it was curry too.

			<noinclude>

			==Translator's Notes and References==
	<references />		<references />
	~~<noinclude>~~
	{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume10_Chapter4\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume10_Epilogue}}		{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume10_Chapter4\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume10_Epilogue}}
	</noinclude>		</noinclude>

Monsterbandage: /* 5th Ammo - Surprise Rose */

2013-07-14T00:33:22Z

5th Ammo - Surprise Rose

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	"Please don't ignore me, and especially not to say something that weird."		"Please don't ignore me, and especially not to say something that weird."

	"About that...Onii-chan doesn't have any naughty books? I couldn't find a one."		"About that...Onii-chan doesn't have any naughty books? I couldn't find even one."

	What...what the hell?		What...what the hell?
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	It doesn't look like the name "man-made genius" is just for show. She was undeniably brilliant.		It doesn't look like the name "man-made genius" is just for show. She was undeniably brilliant.

	-This is bad. People like her are dangerous, because they know how to hide their intelligence. They understand well how to use words to lay siege to their opponent, and thus engaging in conversation with them is can be dangerous...or so we'd been taught in Inquesta classes.		-This is bad. People like her are dangerous, because they know how to hide their intelligence. They understand well how to use words to lay siege to their opponent, and thus engaging in conversation with them can be dangerous...or so we'd been taught in Inquesta classes.

	-I needed to end this conversation ASAP, even if it meant drastic measures. I can't allow her to keep leading me by the nose.		-I needed to end this conversation ASAP, even if it meant drastic measures. I can't allow her to keep leading me by the nose.

99.19.93.10: /* 5th Ammo - Surprise Rose */

2013-07-11T23:56:25Z

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	"But before you say anything, remember this. Far from coming to me easily, I agonized over this, but my answer is still the same- You're it. If you turn me down, there's no one else. If it's not you, then it's no one."		"But before you say anything, remember this. Far from coming to me easily, I agonized over this, but my answer is still the same- You're it. If you turn me down, there's no one else. If it's not you, then it's no one."

	My knee throbbed once more. I'd better wrap this up as soon as possible, and head over to ~~Ambulance~~ for a rest.		My knee throbbed once more. I'd better wrap this up as soon as possible, and head over to Ambulace for a rest.

	That does it for the prologue, let's leave the details for another time.		That does it for the prologue, let's leave the details for another time.
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	...For some reason, that only made her all the more seductive.		...For some reason, that only made her all the more seductive.

	THE HELL IS THIS! How on earth is it that putting on more clothes made things more provocative than wearing just about nothing at all!?		THE HELL IS THIS!? How on earth is it that putting on more clothes made things more provocative than wearing just about nothing at all!?

	Kaname drew one step closer.		Kaname drew one step closer.

99.19.93.10: /* 5th Ammo - Surprise Rose */

2013-07-11T23:03:13Z

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	But because I only had the vaguest memory of Assault's lessons on how to wrap a joint injury, it still rather hurt.		But because I only had the vaguest memory of Assault's lessons on how to wrap a joint injury, it still rather hurt.

	(Might as well just get rid of this makeshift brace. This probably isn't the time to be stingy, I really should go ~~give Ambulance~~ a visit.)		(Might as well just get rid of this makeshift brace. This probably isn't the time to be stingy, I really should go pay Ambulace a visit.)

	Having run a little low on patience, I rolled up my pant leg, and ripped the dressing off.		Having run a little low on patience, I rolled up my pant leg, and ripped the dressing off.

Zuruumi: Title

2013-07-11T08:39:52Z

Title

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	As we made our way back to my dorm in Watson's Porsche, an awkward silence filled the car.		As we made our way back to my dorm in Watson's Porsche, an awkward silence filled the car.

Kemm: Same reason as last chapter

2013-07-01T13:42:33Z

Same reason as last chapter

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	I lifelessly crawled across the floor, making my way to the sofa, where I fiddled with my Beretta and brooded dangerously to myself, "With this, I could end things whenever I wanted..."		I lifelessly crawled across the floor, making my way to the sofa, where I fiddled with my Beretta and brooded dangerously to myself, "With this, I could end things whenever I wanted..."

	My heart heavy, my mind seemed to want to escape reality, instead seeking solace in sleep. Perhaps what I was experiencing were the aftereffects of ~~Meza~~ Hysteria? Lethargy, after all, was quite common once the effects of Hysteria Mode had passed.		My heart heavy, my mind seemed to want to escape reality, instead seeking solace in sleep. Perhaps what I was experiencing were the aftereffects of Mezza Hysteria? Lethargy, after all, was quite common once the effects of Hysteria Mode had passed.

	-Well, even though it's only 6 PM, let's rest for a bit. Just keeping my eyes open is an effort...		-Well, even though it's only 6 PM, let's rest for a bit. Just keeping my eyes open is an effort...

Hiyono: Fixed the name of Kaname's eroge.

2013-03-14T22:16:16Z

Fixed the name of Kaname's eroge.

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	"...?...?"		"...?...?"

	"A situation like this, what is it if not a rare delicacy? In «Goth ~~Sister~~», that's how it's always been regarded. That's why 'helping yourself' is only appropriate-"		"A situation like this, what is it if not a rare delicacy? In «{{Furigana\|Sister\|My}} Goth», that's how it's always been regarded. That's why 'helping yourself' is only appropriate-"

	"-That! Though I'm still not quite clear on things, but that kind of thing only happens in those games Riko plays or manga! Something like that could only happen in a world gone mad."		"-That! Though I'm still not quite clear on things, but that kind of thing only happens in those games Riko plays or manga! Something like that could only happen in a world gone mad."
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	"Only if Onii-chan continues to be with me can you truly experience love. Even though you've said over and over that this is something wrong, something strange, but in truth, isn't it just the opposite? I am the only person who can truly have a normal relationship with Onii-chan, the only one who could ever be Onii-chan's true love."		"Only if Onii-chan continues to be with me can you truly experience love. Even though you've said over and over that this is something wrong, something strange, but in truth, isn't it just the opposite? I am the only person who can truly have a normal relationship with Onii-chan, the only one who could ever be Onii-chan's true love."

	Having thus spoken, Kaname pulled something out: a «Goth ~~Sister~~» box.		Having thus spoken, Kaname pulled something out: a «{{Furigana\|Sister\|My}} Goth» box.

	"Even though Onii-chan loves me, it seems you're still not ready to talk about it yet. That's why you're resisting this, but it's okay, we can talk later. Right now, I can't wait any longer. For the moment, you just need to do this one thing with me...yeah, just this...is enough."		"Even though Onii-chan loves me, it seems you're still not ready to talk about it yet. That's why you're resisting this, but it's okay, we can talk later. Right now, I can't wait any longer. For the moment, you just need to do this one thing with me...yeah, just this...is enough."

	She flipped over the Goth ~~Sister~~ package.		She flipped over the «{{Furigana\|Sister\|My}} Goth» package.

	(...!)		(...!)
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	That girl loses all semblance of reason once she loses it, and the resulting lack of precision might just be enough.		That girl loses all semblance of reason once she loses it, and the resulting lack of precision might just be enough.

	Incidentally, after we'd finished dinner, Kaname had suddenly declared "I need to review something really quick", before grabbing «Goth ~~Sister~~» and disappearing into her room.		Incidentally, after we'd finished dinner, Kaname had suddenly declared "I need to review something really quick", before grabbing «{{Furigana\|Sister\|My}} Goth» and disappearing into her room.

	I spent the night in trepidation, but she never reappeared.		I spent the night in trepidation, but she never reappeared.

	Before heading off to bed, I figured it best if I tried to figure out what exactly the deal was with this Goth ~~Sister~~ game. A quick Internet search revealed images of a younger sister binding her older brother with chains, whipping him and the like, which I dared not investigate further. The hell ''is'' this game?		Before heading off to bed, I figured it best if I tried to figure out what exactly the deal was with this «{{Furigana\|Sister\|My}} Goth» game. A quick Internet search revealed images of a younger sister binding her older brother with chains, whipping him and the like, which I dared not investigate further. The hell ''is'' this game?

	If Kaname had been using this game as reference, then it looks like until now, I'd been making all the wrong choices.		If Kaname had been using this game as reference, then it looks like until now, I'd been making all the wrong choices.

Hiyono: Missed the location of the park :(

2013-03-06T02:30:05Z

Missed the location of the park :(

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	In this manner, the day passed.		In this manner, the day passed.

	As Saturday morning dawned, I seized upon Kaname's carelessness to make my escape, making my way to ~~the park by the seaside~~.		As Saturday morning dawned, I seized upon Kaname's carelessness to make my escape, making my way to Odaiba Seaside Park.

	Before me lay the ocean, behind me a vast lawn. Amidst the scenic landscape, I found a bench upon which to wait for a certain someone.		Before me lay the ocean, behind me a vast lawn. Amidst the scenic landscape, I found a bench upon which to wait for a certain someone.