Hidan no Aria:Volume7 Chapter1 - Revision history

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	Outside the porch of the medical station, the rain had improved and the sunrays were returning. In the nadeshiko~~[http://translate.google.co.uk/translate?js=n&prev=_t&hl=en&ie=UTF-8&layout=2&eotf=1&sl=ja&tl=en&u=http%3A%2F%2Fja.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2F%25E6%2592%25AB%25E5%25AD%2590&act=url]~~[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dianthus_superbus] covered courtyard, Hotogi swallowtail butterflies that had sought shelter from the rain under the leaves now fluttered around. There was a hint of calm under the noisy atmosphere. I took a metal brush and tools from a lone megumi miko and sat on the porch......maintaining the sniper rifle of the sleeping Reki in the room behind me. Removing the magazine, I placed a Butei bullet; equal to six shots of a normal one, in the pocket of Reki's uniform. This round was left over from that long battle. After all that, we ran out of ammo not while using handguns but as snipers.		Outside the porch of the medical station, the rain had improved and the sunrays were returning. In the nadeshiko[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dianthus_superbus] covered courtyard, Hotogi swallowtail butterflies that had sought shelter from the rain under the leaves now fluttered around. There was a hint of calm under the noisy atmosphere. I took a metal brush and tools from a lone megumi miko and sat on the porch......maintaining the sniper rifle of the sleeping Reki in the room behind me. Removing the magazine, I placed a Butei bullet; equal to six shots of a normal one, in the pocket of Reki's uniform. This round was left over from that long battle. After all that, we ran out of ammo not while using handguns but as snipers.

	Like the top of an enormous piece of brown seaweed, Reki diligently scoured her room, singling out a bullet and copying it CG-like in uniformity, each one glittering in flawlessness, just like gemstones.		Like the top of an enormous piece of brown seaweed, Reki diligently scoured her room, singling out a bullet and copying it CG-like in uniformity, each one glittering in flawlessness, just like gemstones.

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	"Japanese blood....?"		"Japanese blood....?"

	"Chingiz Khan was in fact [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Minamoto_no_Yoshitsune Minamoto no Yoshitsune], a rank 9 general (Kurou Hougan) who crossed over into the continent from Japan roughly a thousand years ago. In the Mongol Empire at that time, his name was read as [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Genghis_Khan Genghis Khan]. It later became Chingiz Khan."		"Chingiz Khan was in fact [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Minamoto_no_Yoshitsune Minamoto no Yoshitsune], a rank 9 general (Kurou Hougan<ref>I'm leaving the original Kurou Hougan in as it's Yoshitsune's proper title despite it meaning 9th rank general. More details see [http://www.asios.org/yoshitsune_en.html here]~CE</ref>) who crossed over into the continent from Japan roughly a thousand years ago. In the Mongol Empire at that time, his name was read as [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Genghis_Khan Genghis Khan]. It later became Chingiz Khan."

	....Oi, oi.....		....Oi, oi.....
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	Shirayuki absentmindedly fiddled with her left and right index fingers, keeping them in front of her chest while pointing them towards each other, fingertips touching. As she did so, her eyes were turned upwards. A major event in history occurs and she's acting like a child whose prank has been exposed. Well, such disjointedness is only typical of Shirayuki....		Shirayuki absentmindedly fiddled with her left and right index fingers, keeping them in front of her chest while pointing them towards each other, fingertips touching. As she did so, her eyes were turned upwards. A major event in history occurs and she's acting like a child whose prank has been exposed. Well, such disjointedness is only typical of Shirayuki....

	"The Hotogi shrine of that era was embroiled in complicated politics. Ever since the Yoshitsune formally established a state in the continent, there has been a flurry of back and forth intelligence on the Irokane. The name '''Reki''' is one of the names they traditionally use for pure blooded princesses there."		"The Hotogi shrine of that era was embroiled in complicated politics. Ever since the Yoshitsune formally established a state in the continent, there has been a flurry of back and forth intelligence on the Irokane. The name '''Reki'''<ref>Reki here carries the Chinese charactes for lei ji, meaning Petal Princess</ref> is one of the names they traditionally use for pure blooded princesses there."

	Kazayuki pointed out the kanji for '''Reki''' on the scroll she took out just now.		Kazayuki pointed out the kanji for '''Reki''' on the scroll she took out just now.

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	"Reki, as Reki...as a human being, become even happier. You should find happiness. Right now, the happiness as a human that has been forbidden to you; you must take it back. You must live your own life."		"Reki, as Reki...as a human being, become even happier. You should find happiness. Right now, the happiness as a human that has been forbidden to you; you must take it back. You must live your own life."

	Speaking about those two happy days you spent with me it was, to me, more enjoyable than I imagined. That ramen speed eating battle in the fort, feeding Haimaki fish sausage ~~feed~~, and what about at Chaton Call? Besides participating in the cat herding competition in Osaka, there were many other things. Perhaps only all those things that the "wind" didn't order you to do......weren't they giving you the happiness of being human? I don't know for sure, but for some reason, I have the feeling of that being true.		Speaking about those two happy days you spent with me it was, to me, more enjoyable than I imagined. That ramen speed eating battle in the fort, feeding Haimaki fish sausage, and what about at Chaton Call? Besides participating in the cat herding competition in Osaka, there were many other things. Perhaps only all those things that the "wind" didn't order you to do......weren't they giving you the happiness of being human? I don't know for sure, but for some reason, I have the feeling of that being true.

	"That is why, if you wish it so, those things...no matter how small, I will always accompany you from beginning to end."		"That is why, if you wish it so, those things...no matter how small, I will always accompany you from beginning to end."

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Cosmic Eagle: /* 1st Ammo: Case E8 */

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1st Ammo: Case E8

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	"No it isn't!"		"No it isn't!"

	.....~~Damn~~ you, Jeanne...		.....Fuck you, Jeanne...

	Jeanne, as might be expected from an Informa student, had last night sought out information from the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ryokan_%28Japanese_inn%29 ryokan] that was attacked by calling the proprietress. Damn it, she really got hold of that extraneous information all too quickly. I mean, she got part of the story wrong.		Jeanne, as might be expected from an Informa student, had last night sought out information from the [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ryokan_%28Japanese_inn%29 ryokan] that was attacked by calling the proprietress. Damn it, she really got hold of that extraneous information all too quickly. I mean, she got part of the story wrong.

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	I stated this obvious fact through gritted teeth to the sleeping Reki.		I stated this obvious fact through gritted teeth to the sleeping Reki.

	At this moment, you, who are clearly without ego, are truly a girl who is like a child.		At this moment, you, who are clearly without an ego, are truly a girl who is like a child.

	Reki. Somewhere, you were brainwashed by the "wind", made to exist solely for your goal, prevented from thinking for yourself and frozen in the time when you were a child. And so, you lived your life like an unfeeling bullet; like a robot.		Reki. Somewhere, you were brainwashed by the "wind", made to exist solely for your goal, prevented from thinking for yourself and frozen in the time when you were a child. And so, you lived your life like an unfeeling bullet; like a robot.
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	"Reki, as Reki...as a human being, become even happier. You should find happiness. Right now, the happiness as a human that has been forbidden to you; you must take it back. You must live your own life."		"Reki, as Reki...as a human being, become even happier. You should find happiness. Right now, the happiness as a human that has been forbidden to you; you must take it back. You must live your own life."

	Speaking about those two happy days you spent with me it was, to me, more ~~fun that~~ I imagined. That ramen speed eating battle in the fort, feeding Haimaki fish sausage feed, and what about at Chaton Call? Besides participating in the cat herding competition in Osaka, there were many other things. Perhaps only all those things that the "wind" didn't order you to do......weren't they giving you the happiness of being human? I don't know for sure, but for some reason, I have the feeling of that being so.		Speaking about those two happy days you spent with me it was, to me, more enjoyable than I imagined. That ramen speed eating battle in the fort, feeding Haimaki fish sausage feed, and what about at Chaton Call? Besides participating in the cat herding competition in Osaka, there were many other things. Perhaps only all those things that the "wind" didn't order you to do......weren't they giving you the happiness of being human? I don't know for sure, but for some reason, I have the feeling of that being true.

	"That is why, if you wish it so, those things...no matter how small, I will always accompany you ~~throughout~~."		"That is why, if you wish it so, those things...no matter how small, I will always accompany you from beginning to end."

	Girls are troublesome. If I can help it, I would be with them for as little as possible.		Girls are troublesome. If I can help it, I would be with them for as little as possible.
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	Please, stop being like that.		Please, stop being like that.

	I don't know how great your "wind" lord is, but true greatness is a person who can live, choosing his own paths. You who gave everything up to the "wind" may find living and thinking for yourself difficult.		I don't know how great your "wind" lord is, but true greatness is a person who can live, choosing his own paths. You, who gave everything up to the "wind" may find living and thinking for yourself difficult.

	......it just simply flies towards its target....		......it just simply flies towards its target....

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	Just who is she?		Just who is she?

	A superhuman capable of combining hand to hand combat skills rivaling mine in Hysteria Mode, handgun skills that can evenly match Aria's and sniper skills equal to that of Reki......The face of E.U? I wouldn't happen to know.		A superhuman capable of combining hand to hand combat skills rivaling mine in Hysteria Mode, handgun skills that can evenly match Aria's and sniper skills equal to that of Reki......The face of I-U? I wouldn't happen to know.

	With that being the case, I called Jeanne who, just like Riko, had her roots in I.U. It took six calls to get a response from Jeanne, who was sleeping in the middle of the night.		With that being the case, I called Jeanne who, just like Riko, had her roots in I-U. It took six calls to get a response from Jeanne, who was sleeping in the middle of the night.

	"Hotogi? What's the matter?"		"Hotogi? What's the matter?"
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	Ignoring the suspicion in her voice, I urgently explained the situation.		Ignoring the suspicion in her voice, I urgently explained the situation.

	"Jeanne, is there a sniper of Reki's skill within E.U? A monster with hand to hand combat and handgun skills. Her name is Koko," I asked.		"Jeanne, is there a sniper of Reki's skill within I-U? A monster with hand to hand combat and handgun skills. Her name is Koko," I asked.

	"Sniper.....Koko? None. Except for Sherlock, a sniper with the skill to exchange shots evenly with Reki does not exist in I.U. There are people like Patra who use sniper rifles but they are of modest skill."		"Sniper.....Koko? None. Except for Sherlock, a sniper with the skill to exchange shots evenly with Reki does not exist in I-U. There are people like Patra who use sniper rifles but they are of modest skill."

	Then Koko....is not a remnant of I.U.		Then Koko....is not a remnant of I-U.

	With my face sheer white, I recounted the words Reki had spoken.		With my face sheer white, I recounted the words Reki had spoken.
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	The subject of Sherlock Holmes's long years of research. It's usage could turn a normal human being into a powerful ability user. A fragment of the supernatural metal had been fired into Aria's body as a result.		The subject of Sherlock Holmes's long years of research. It's usage could turn a normal human being into a powerful ability user. A fragment of the supernatural metal had been fired into Aria's body as a result.

	"Last month, when Kin-chan was hospitalized, I heard from Aria what happened with I.U. That's why....Kin-chan also knows......The existence of Irokane."		"Last month, when Kin-chan was hospitalized, I heard from Aria what happened with I-U. That's why....Kin-chan also knows......The existence of Irokane."

	Shirayuki looked up at me with a serious face.		Shirayuki looked up at me with a serious face.
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	That I know.		That I know.

	Sherlock had mentioned it aboard the I.U.		Sherlock had mentioned it aboard the I-U.

	I.U are not the only ones to hold possession of Irokane.		I-U are not the only ones to hold possession of Irokane.

	Among that list of organizations and groups, was the Hotogi. Yet for all that, what was Reki's connection with Irokane?		Among that list of organizations and groups, was the Hotogi. Yet for all that, what was Reki's connection with Irokane?
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	Shirayuki's habitually downcast eyes were slightly lifted, gazing at Jeanne.		Shirayuki's habitually downcast eyes were slightly lifted, gazing at Jeanne.

	"Tohyama requested that I investigate Reki. From the start, I knew some things about her even if I had no positive proof. As a holder of Irokane, the Ulus had ties to I.U...." Jeanne said, blinking her blue eyes below her silver hair.		"Tohyama requested that I investigate Reki. From the start, I knew some things about her even if I had no positive proof. As a holder of Irokane, the Ulus had ties to I-U...." Jeanne said, blinking her blue eyes below her silver hair.

	"The acoustics analysis done by Nakasorachi of Connect had narrowed down Reki's birthplace to several places. One of those areas was that occupied by the Ulus clan."		"The acoustics analysis done by Nakasorachi of Connect had narrowed down Reki's birthplace to several places. One of those areas was that occupied by the Ulus clan."
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	....Trial.		....Trial.

	Aria's mother, Kanzaki Kanae, who was burdened by the false accusations laid on her by I.U is soon to be retried in court. Now is the period for preparing the legal documents. Kanae-san's lawyer is scheduled to interview Vlad, who's currently under custody at a Level 5 detention facility in [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nagano Nagano], after which she's scheduled to meet with Jeanne who would be a witness in court.		Aria's mother, Kanzaki Kanae, who was burdened by the false accusations laid on her by I-U is soon to be retried in court. Now is the period for preparing the legal documents. Kanae-san's lawyer is scheduled to interview Vlad, who's currently under custody at a Level 5 detention facility in [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nagano Nagano], after which she's scheduled to meet with Jeanne who would be a witness in court.

	"Tohyama, there is a word that all of you used during your conversations just now that I don't understand. Genji. What is that?"		"Tohyama, there is a word that all of you used during your conversations just now that I don't understand. Genji. What is that?"

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	"Like a single bullet that has been fired, those girls lived solely for their aims. And so, this is carried over into battle. The last bullet....would be use to close the chapter of their lives. Sacrificing themselves by their blades, the samurai of old were the same. Tohyama, this is the girl that Reki is. Be careful of that."		"Like a single bullet that has been fired, those girls lived solely for their aims. And so, this is carried over into battle. The last bullet....would be use to close the chapter of their lives. Sacrificing themselves by their blades, the samurai of old were the same. Tohyama, this is the girl that Reki is. Be careful of that."

	Leaving me with those words, Jeanne left the porch and headed down the corridor to await the ~~Hotogi’s~~ chauffer. Left alone at the porch, I cradled the ~~Dragunov…~~..Reki at my back.		Leaving me with those words, Jeanne left the porch and headed down the corridor to await the Hotogi's chauffer. Left alone at the porch, I cradled the Dragunov.....Reki at my back.

	(~~Reki…~~)		(Reki...)

	I am a descendent of the Tohyama bloodline. After a fashion, I am still a samurai. Yet the last bullet? Never.		I am a descendent of the Tohyama bloodline. After a fashion, I am still a samurai. Yet the last bullet? Never.

	~~“Reki…~~.”		"Reki...."

	I held one of the bullets from the sniper rifle and spoke to the sleeping Reki behind me.		I held one of the bullets from the sniper rifle and spoke to the sleeping Reki behind me.

	…..I am a single ~~bullet……~~		.....I am a single bullet......

	Always, Reki said these words.		Always, Reki said these words.

	~~“You~~ are not a bullet.”		"You are not a bullet."

	As a single bullet, she would have lived purely for her ~~goal…~~.by a bullet, she would have died.		As a single bullet, she would have lived purely for her goal....by a bullet, she would have died.

	~~That’s~~ just too much.		That's just too much.

	~~“You~~ are human.”		"You are human."

	I stated this obvious fact through gritted teeth to the sleeping Reki.		I stated this obvious fact through gritted teeth to the sleeping Reki.
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	At this moment, you, who are clearly without ego, are truly a girl who is like a child.		At this moment, you, who are clearly without ego, are truly a girl who is like a child.

	Reki. Somewhere, you were brainwashed by the ~~“wind”~~, made to exist solely for your goal, prevented from thinking for yourself and frozen in the time when you were a child. And so, you lived your life like an unfeeling bullet; like a robot.		Reki. Somewhere, you were brainwashed by the "wind", made to exist solely for your goal, prevented from thinking for yourself and frozen in the time when you were a child. And so, you lived your life like an unfeeling bullet; like a robot.

	And ~~yet…~~..Reki.		And yet.....Reki.

	At your very core, some hint of humanity still exists. That night when you were beaten in that sniper battle; that final smile you gave ~~me…~~.you looked just like a human girl. It was a lovely, honest smile.		At your very core, some hint of humanity still exists. That night when you were beaten in that sniper battle; that final smile you gave me....you looked just like a human girl. It was a lovely, honest smile.

	~~“You are…~~.not very good in understanding this ~~that’s~~ why I will not say that you would immediately become a person filled with normal feelings. ~~But…~~..please, ~~don’t~~ ever call yourself a bullet again.”		"You are....not very good in understanding this that's why I will not say that you would immediately become a person filled with normal feelings. But.....please, don't ever call yourself a bullet again."

	At any rate, she could not possibly hear it; Reki was comatose. However, I continued to speak over my back. That was an irrepressible thing that I had to say.		At any rate, she could not possibly hear it; Reki was comatose. However, I continued to speak over my back. That was an irrepressible thing that I had to say.

	~~“Reki~~, as Reki...as a human being, become even happier. You should find happiness. Right now, the happiness as a human that has been forbidden to you; you must take it back. You must live your own life.”		"Reki, as Reki...as a human being, become even happier. You should find happiness. Right now, the happiness as a human that has been forbidden to you; you must take it back. You must live your own life."

	Speaking about those two happy days you spent with me it was, to me, more fun that I imagined. That ramen speed eating battle in the fort, feeding Haimaki fish sausage feed, and what about at Chaton Call? Besides participating in the cat herding competition in Osaka, there were many other things. Perhaps only all those things that the ~~“wind” didn’t~~ order you to ~~do……weren’t~~ they giving you the happiness of being human? I ~~don’t~~ know for sure, but for some reason, I have the feeling of that being so.		Speaking about those two happy days you spent with me it was, to me, more fun that I imagined. That ramen speed eating battle in the fort, feeding Haimaki fish sausage feed, and what about at Chaton Call? Besides participating in the cat herding competition in Osaka, there were many other things. Perhaps only all those things that the "wind" didn't order you to do......weren't they giving you the happiness of being human? I don't know for sure, but for some reason, I have the feeling of that being so.

	~~“That~~ is why, if you wish it so, those things...no matter how small, I will always accompany you throughout.”		"That is why, if you wish it so, those things...no matter how small, I will always accompany you throughout."

	Girls are troublesome. If I can help it, I would be with them for as little as possible.		Girls are troublesome. If I can help it, I would be with them for as little as possible.

	But ~~Reki…you…~~.		But Reki...you....

	~~You…~~.appreciate me. Even without that damnable Hysteria Mode.		You....appreciate me. Even without that damnable Hysteria Mode.

	~~Well…~~..you overvalue me I think. To me, that is quite significant.		Well.....you overvalue me I think. To me, that is quite significant.

	…….I am a single ~~bullet…~~..		.......I am a single bullet.....

	Reki.		Reki.

	….A bullet has no heart. Therefore, it does not ~~think…~~..		....A bullet has no heart. Therefore, it does not think.....

	Please, stop being like that.		Please, stop being like that.

	I ~~don’t~~ know how great your ~~“wind”~~ lord is, but true greatness is a person who can live, choosing his own paths. You who gave everything up to the ~~“wind”~~ may find living and thinking for yourself difficult.		I don't know how great your "wind" lord is, but true greatness is a person who can live, choosing his own paths. You who gave everything up to the "wind" may find living and thinking for yourself difficult.

	~~……it~~ just simply flies towards its ~~target…~~.		......it just simply flies towards its target....

	But please, stop being like that. Because,		But please, stop being like that. Because,

	~~“You~~ are not a bullet.”		"You are not a bullet."

	-you are human.		-you are human.