Hidan no Aria:Volume8 Chapter3 - Revision history

Acolyte at 01:21, 8 December 2012

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	Renjou had bought us time, but there's no way we would make it in time for the Supreme High Court.		Renjou had bought us time, but there's no way we would make it in time for the Supreme High Court.

	The delay of s trial in Japan was improved through the enforcement of frequent new laws. No matter how hard we worked, within maybe three years...no, within two years, the supreme high court would judge, and Kanae-san's life sentence will be definite.		The delay of a trial in Japan was improved through the enforcement of frequent new laws. No matter how hard we worked, within maybe three years...no, within two years, the supreme high court would judge, and Kanae-san's life sentence will be definite.

	...While worrying about that, I looked at Riko, who was sitting next to me.		...While worrying about that, I looked at Riko, who was sitting next to me.
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	"Y-You're well informed...I didn't know about that thing with Watson and Aria."		"Y-You're well informed...I didn't know about that thing with Watson and Aria."

	"Aya isn't popular, because she's so tiny. So one Aya's interests is listening to the love stories of the popular people, so Aya feels like she's taking part of them."		"Aya isn't popular, because she's so tiny. So one of Aya's interests is listening to the love stories of the popular people, so Aya feels like she's taking part of them."

	W-What a dark hobby. I, who's nicknamed the Introvert, can't really say anything though.		W-What a dark hobby. I, who's nicknamed the Introvert, can't really say anything though.
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	No. Nonono. Kinji. That's not it. That's not what I should be berating her about!		No. Nonono. Kinji. That's not it. That's not what I should be berating her about!

	"Ah, you're right.		"Ah, you're right."

Royaloyalz: Correcting minor errors

2012-10-13T03:59:03Z

Correcting minor errors

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	He pinpointed my weakness, targeting my lack of sociability and isolating me.		He pinpointed my weakness, targeting my lack of sociability and isolating me.

	Simultaneously, he used ~~the~~ the attribute of Butei High students' mercantilism, their willingness only to work with money involved, depriving me of Hiraga-san and Mutou's help. However, I'm unable to save money and reclaim their aid.		Simultaneously, he used the attribute of Butei High students' mercantilism, their willingness only to work with money involved, depriving me of Hiraga-san and Mutou's help. However, I'm unable to save money and reclaim their aid.

	I was unable to resist his actions.		I was unable to resist his actions.

Zero2001: Optimizing

2012-10-05T00:06:43Z

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YoakeNoHikari at 05:51, 2 October 2012

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	Watson's manner gave off the feeling that he was thinking.		Watson's manner gave off the feeling that he was thinking.

	"Deception is part of strategy...If you don't want to be suspected...you should in turn, show your cards eagerly and willingly."		"Deception is a part of strategy...If you don't want to be suspected...you should in turn, show your cards eagerly and willingly."

	He said something like a proverb in English.		He said something like a proverb in English.

58.107.65.137 at 08:07, 7 September 2012

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	"You're talking about HSS? Ki-kun calls it Hysteria Mode, right?"		"You're talking about HSS? Ki-kun calls it Hysteria Mode, right?"

	"That's ~~righy~~. Different from Kana, once I go into it, I can't control myself. Originally, it's something that we possess in order to protect women, to act cool, and -- I'm only saying this considering the circumstances -- to leave children behind."		"That's right. Different from Kana, once I go into it, I can't control myself. Originally, it's something that we possess in order to protect women, to act cool, and -- I'm only saying this considering the circumstances -- to leave children behind."

	"''I know''."		"''I know''."

Daime17: rika to riko

2012-09-07T03:37:09Z

rika to riko

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	As if the emotions that she had been holding back up till that point had broken through...		As if the emotions that she had been holding back up till that point had broken through...

	~~Rika~~ cried, her voice muffled by my chest.		Riko cried, her voice muffled by my chest.

	Normally, Riko is...lighthearted, and she puts on a strong front, but...from way before, she's had an emotionally unstable part of her.		Normally, Riko is...lighthearted, and she puts on a strong front, but...from way before, she's had an emotionally unstable part of her.

Stardust Fall: Fixing another typo I found. Last edit consisted of fixing typos and making sense of sentences (Forgot to summarize the changes..)

2012-09-06T00:20:12Z

Fixing another typo I found. Last edit consisted of fixing typos and making sense of sentences (Forgot to summarize the changes..)

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	But I can't spend it frivolously.		But I can't spend it frivolously.

	Even if I get a request from any ~~civilians~~, I'll only be compensated next month.		Even if I get a request from any civilian, I'll only be compensated next month.

	I'll have to make do with the cheapest thing, this bread roll.		I'll have to make do with the cheapest thing, this bread roll.

Stardust Fall at 00:13, 6 September 2012

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YoakeNoHikari at 09:05, 4 September 2012

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	"...I've lost. It looks like I've been too on edge lately."		"...I've lost. It looks like I've been too on edge lately."

	"~~It looks like~~ your maintenance~~'s finished~~, so play some games with Riko while ~~eating~~! Um, you know, I bought an autumn-limited set of chestnut rice. There was this special offer for couples where I could get a scratch card, so I bought two. ~~I'll give one to~~ Ki-kun, my boyfriend~."		"You seem to have finished with your maintenance, so play some games with Riko while we eat! Um, you know, Riko bought an autumn-limited set of chestnut rice. There was this special offer for couples where Riko could get a scratch card, so Riko bought two. Ki-kun, my boyfriend, can have one~."

	Saying this, Riko walked to the microwave, the big ribbon attached to her back of her modified uniform fluttering...Muttering 'owowowow', she took two convenience store lunchboxes from the microwave.		Saying this, Riko walked to the microwave, the big ribbon attached to her back of her modified uniform fluttering...Muttering 'owowowow', she took two convenience store lunchboxes from the microwave.
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	"Take this! And that! Crash!"		"Take this! And that! Crash!"

	Riko was just innocently playing the game, so it wasn't really erotic at all. Because of that, I seemed to be alright when it came to Hysteria, but I couldn't fly like I wanted to. I ~~can~~'t shake off Riko's plane's pursuit.		Riko was just innocently playing the game, so it wasn't really erotic at all. Because of that, I seemed to be alright when it came to Hysteria, but I couldn't fly like I wanted to. I couldn't shake off Riko's plane's pursuit.

	Aah...I'm out of respawns...I lost again.		Aah...I'm out of respawns...I lost again.

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	The next step is to attack the heart of the citadel.		The next step is to attack the heart of the citadel.

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	"That's right. Are you planning on napping on the roof together with Kinji?"		"That's right. Are you planning on napping on the roof together with Kinji?"

	Hey, swimming club people. I'm planning to eventually transfer out, so it's true that I'm not joining any club activities, but...don't mention my name. Or rather, were you ~~looking at~~ me ~~nap~~? Well, when Aria or Shirayuki~~'re~~ in a bad mood, I don't want to head back to my room, so I just sleep away the time.		Hey, swimming club people. I'm planning to eventually transfer out, so it's true that I'm not joining any club activities, but...don't mention my name. Or rather, were you watching me napping? Well, when Aria or Shirayuki are in a bad mood, I don't want to head back to my room, so I just sleep away the time.

	"But, if Watson-kun hangs around with Tohyama-kun...he'd get tainted...ah, won't I have a chance if that happens...?"		"But, if Watson-kun hangs around with Tohyama-kun...he'd get tainted...ah, won't I have a chance if that happens...?"
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	I sighed softly.		I sighed softly.

	Just as I ~~had~~, a black vehicle pulled up in front of the bus stop.		Just as I sighed, a black vehicle pulled up in front of the bus stop.

	It wasn't a bus. Its hazard lights were flashing, and...Wait, isn't this a Porsche 911 Carrera Cabriolet? It's a super high-class car; it can't be worth less than 1,000,000,000 yen.		It wasn't a bus. Its hazard lights were flashing, and...Wait, isn't this a Porsche 911 Carrera Cabriolet? It's a super high-class car; it can't be worth less than 1,000,000,000 yen.
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	The boy who took off his sunglasses was...Watson.		The boy who took off his sunglasses was...Watson.

	"The bus isn't coming. At the last intersection, the Assault students started brawling inside the bus. Ranbyou ~~ran~~ sprinted there and flew into a rage. She flipped the bus with her bare hands, so traffic's stopped for a while."		"The bus isn't coming. At the last intersection, the Assault students started brawling inside the bus. Ranbyou sprinted there and flew into a rage. She flipped the bus with her bare hands, so traffic's stopped for a while."

	...Those bastards from the Die-Die Squad...		...Those bastards from the Die-Die Squad...
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	Just the type of person I'm bad with.		Just the type of person I'm bad with.

	"So I told Aria to stop living at your room."		"So I told Aria to stop living in your room."

	"Thank God for that. It was causing a lot of trouble."		"Thank God for that. It was causing a lot of trouble."
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	Afterward, as he stopped in front of Inquesta, Watson had an angry look on his face.		Afterward, as he stopped in front of Inquesta, Watson had an angry look on his face.

	"It's planned for Aria and I to formally marry when we both reach ~~majority~~, but...before that, I'm distancing Aria from you. It seems that she holds you with unusual regard."		"It's planned for Aria and I to formally marry when we both reach maturity, but...before that, I'm distancing Aria from you. It seems that she holds you with unusual regard."

	"Do whatever you want...Thanks for sending me here."		"Do whatever you want...Thanks for sending me here."
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	Weren't you looking at me, aiming for my face...?		Weren't you looking at me, aiming for my face...?

	For a while afterward, we continued to score points and they continued to take points from us...after enough ~~time~~ to make people think it was an accident, it finally happened again.		For a while afterward, we continued to score points and they continued to take points from us...after enough times to make people think it was an accident, it finally happened again.

	Watson's attack scored a hit right on the side of my head.		Watson's attack scored a hit right on the side of my head.
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	I was shockingly devoid of money.		I was shockingly devoid of money.

	This was due to the fact that recently, all I had been doing was work that I wasn't compensated for...and because despite that, I had been involved ~~with~~ a lot of battles, so I had been buying a lot of equipment.		This was due to the fact that recently, all I had been doing was work that I wasn't compensated for...and because despite that, I had been involved in a lot of battles, so I had been buying a lot of equipment.

	If all I'm doing is spending and I'm not getting any income, I'll run out of money.		If all I'm doing is spending and I'm not getting any income, I'll run out of money.

	Borrowing that motorboat from Mutou's sister the night of ~~Bandered~~ was a serious hit to my wallet. When I asked her to put it on my tab...she flew into a rage, screamed "I'll run you over!" and came to collect my debt on her motorbike.		Borrowing that motorboat from Mutou's sister the night of Bandere was a serious hit to my wallet. When I asked her to put it on my tab...she flew into a rage, screamed "I'll run you over!" and came to collect my debt on her motorbike.

	(Once again, Shirayuki's taking part of her shrine's rituals, so she isn't here.)		(Once again, Shirayuki's taking part in her shrine's rituals, so she isn't here.)

	Guess I can't help it. I'll get my hands on a portion of the payment I gave to Hiraga-san when I ordered 'Orochi'. The portion that paid for the left hand glove.		Guess I can't help it. I'll get my hands on a portion of the payment I gave to Hiraga-san when I ordered 'Orochi'. The portion that paid for the left hand glove.
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	"I-I'm going back! I can't take any more!"		"I-I'm going back! I can't take any more!"

	Saying that with a voice so high-pitched that it seemed like it had changed, Watson ran in a strange zig-zag pattern (maybe because he was panicking?), getting out of the pool.		Saying that with a voice so high-pitched that it seemed like it had changed, Watson ran in a strange zig-zag pattern (maybe because he was panicking?), getting out of the pool area.

	Like always...there's something strange in all of his movements.		Like always...there's something strange in all of his movements.
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	"If I put those two pieces of information together...Tohyama-kun had Aria-san taken from him by Watson-kun and is jealous. Wahaa, it's like something from a manga!"		"If I put those two pieces of information together...Tohyama-kun had Aria-san taken from him by Watson-kun and is jealous. Wahaa, it's like something from a manga!"

	"N-No. I'm just...~~Waton~~'s just strange, so..."		"N-No. I'm just...Watson's just strange, so..."

	"Watson is a good person. He gave me a big piece of candy. Tohyama-kun, jealousy between men is disgraceful!"		"Watson is a good person. He gave me a big piece of candy. Tohyama-kun, jealousy between men is disgraceful!"
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	It seems that at some point, Hiraga-san was won over to Watson's side.		It seems that at some point, Hiraga-san was won over to Watson's side.

	I've started to somewhat understand, but...it seems that Watson's ~~doing the~~ laying the foundations necessary to seal my movements in places that I can't see.		I've started to somewhat understand, but...it seems that Watson's laying the foundations necessary to seal my movements in places that I can't see.

	What's his aim?		What's his aim?
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	Riko took a cute pose and said what I imagined she would've.		Riko took a cute pose and said what I imagined she would've.

	I flicked the grain of rice of her cheek with my finger.		I flicked the grain of rice off her cheek with my finger.

	"Myaah!"		"Myaah!"
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	I just barely managed to roll over and turn my back to Riko.		I just barely managed to roll over and turn my back to Riko.

	What I been able to see for just an instant was Riko's bare boobs--about the bottom fourth of them.		What I had been able to see for just an instant was Riko's bare boobs--about the bottom fourth of them.

	(D-Do girls...not wear underwear when they sleep!?)		(D-Do girls...not wear underwear when they sleep!?)
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	"Then--go back to your own bed."		"Then--go back to your own bed."

	Really...in a situation like this, when I'm trying desperately to control my transformation in Hysteria, I can't even soften my tone.		Really...in a situation like this, when I'm trying desperately to control my transformation into Hysteria, I can't even soften my tone.

	However, Riko didn't draw back.		However, Riko didn't draw back.
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	This is...a sign that she's angry.		This is...a sign that she's angry.

	If I tell her that I was with Riko, I'~~ll　probably~~ be subjected to hole dancing.		If I tell her that I was with Riko, I'll probably be subjected to hole dancing.

	"That's not it. I was alone..."		"That's not it. I was alone..."
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	I'm completely at a loss here.		I'm completely at a loss here.

	"T-That's because you were asking with a face like a demon. Rather than that, is it fine for ''you'' to be here? You were told by Watson not to go to ~~Kinji's~~ room, right?"		"T-That's because you were asking with a face like a demon. Rather than that, is it fine for ''you'' to be here? You were told by Watson not to go to my room, right?"

	For the first time in a long while, I activated the super secret technique handed down through the Tohyama family: 'Reverse Blame'.		For the first time in a long while, I activated the super secret technique handed down through the Tohyama family: 'Reverse Blame'.