Hidan no Aria:Volume8 Chapter4 - Revision history

99.19.93.10: /* 4th Ammo: 350m Altitude Tornado */

2013-07-12T12:06:55Z

4th Ammo: 350m Altitude Tornado

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	Nakasorachi's wearing headphones and is concentrating on eavesdropping. Seeing as she won't come here even if she looks around at what's happening for a few seconds...it would seem that if we keep our voices to this level, she won't notice.		Nakasorachi's wearing headphones and is concentrating on eavesdropping. Seeing as she won't come here even if she looks around at what's happening for a few seconds...it would seem that if we keep our voices to this level, she won't notice.

	Jeanne, reflected in the mirror, tried to move again, but I pulled her hips into mine with my ~~right~~ hand.		Jeanne, reflected in the mirror, tried to move again, but I pulled her hips into mine with my left hand.

	"...!"		"...!"

Hiyono: Somewhat liberal edits (though cross-checked against the Chinese text). Feel free to revert any changes desired.

2013-01-06T05:06:53Z

Somewhat liberal edits (though cross-checked against the Chinese text). Feel free to revert any changes desired.

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Zakashi at 13:33, 4 January 2013

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	Watson closed the distance with a flip.		Watson closed the distance with a flip.

	--clankclank--		--<nowiki></nowiki>clankclank--

	1.5 seconds before standing in front of me, metallic sounds came from different parts of his body.		1.5 seconds before standing in front of me, metallic sounds came from different parts of his body.
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	With only half an eye.		With only half an eye.

	smack!		<nowiki></nowiki>smack!

	smacksmack!		<nowiki></nowiki>smacksmack!

	Watson's gun and mine are like blades dancing closely.		Watson's gun and mine are like blades dancing closely.
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	With my berserker's reflex arc, I prepared to tackle it--		With my berserker's reflex arc, I prepared to tackle it--

	bang!clank!		<nowiki></nowiki>bang!clank!

	Watson hit the magazine with his P226R, out of the tower.		Watson hit the magazine with his P226R, out of the tower.
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	Then, DE--!		Then, DE--!

	ding!		<nowiki></nowiki>ding!

	Aiming that bastard's chest, the DE that created a loud noise--missed him.		Aiming that bastard's chest, the DE that created a loud noise--missed him.
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	--Is this the drawback of my Hysteria Berserk?		--Is this the drawback of my Hysteria Berserk?

	bang! The flashing bullet of P226R hit under the leg of the weaponless me.		<nowiki></nowiki>bang! The flashing bullet of P226R hit under the leg of the weaponless me.

	"…...Hmm!"		"…...Hmm!"
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	At the same time--		At the same time--

	--boom!		--<nowiki></nowiki>boom!

	Watson's shoes are on my left hand, and it let go swiftly.		Watson's shoes are on my left hand, and it let go swiftly.
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	I who just climbed up wrestled with Watson--		I who just climbed up wrestled with Watson--

	rumblerumble…...The observatory has turned into a wrestling ring for kids.		<nowiki></nowiki>rumblerumble…...The observatory has turned into a wrestling ring for kids.

	While rolling, while hitting each other in our faces and abdomens.		While rolling, while hitting each other in our faces and abdomens.
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	The “Single Hand Edge Catching” that I’ve used against Jeanne D’arc in the underground warehouse, with its horizontal sweep—		The “Single Hand Edge Catching” that I’ve used against Jeanne D’arc in the underground warehouse, with its horizontal sweep—

	snap!		<nowiki></nowiki>snap!

	With my forefinger and middle finger equipped with “Python”, it’s possible for me to catch the bullet in 0.1 second.		With my forefinger and middle finger equipped with “Python”, it’s possible for me to catch the bullet in 0.1 second.
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	“--!”		“--!”

	bang!		<nowiki></nowiki>bang!

	A spark exploded on the column behind me.		A spark exploded on the column behind me.

180.191.182.112 at 07:58, 4 January 2013

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	"But, your performance is rather outstanding. I'm left with my last bullet because of you. What I did with your magazine just now, I suppose it's a pity that the 9mm bullets are hit out of the tower."		"But, your performance is rather outstanding. I'm left with my last bullet because of you. What I did with your magazine just now, I suppose it's a pity that the 9mm bullets are hit out of the tower."

	The force on my left hand is getting stronger.		The force on my left hand is getting stronger.
			[[File:Aria08 271.jpg\|thumbnail\|right]]

	Getting stepped on by steel boots, the fingers on my left hand feels like they are going to break.		Getting stepped on by steel boots, the fingers on my left hand feels like they are going to break.

Krytyk: What's dat doing there~

2013-01-04T00:44:42Z

What's dat doing there~

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	Getting stepped on by steel boots, the fingers on my left hand feels like they are going to break.		Getting stepped on by steel boots, the fingers on my left hand feels like they are going to break.

	"~~[[User:NiMx1233\|Newb Chinese-English translator, currently helping with Baka Test ^_^]] ([[User talk:NiMx1233\|talk]])…~~...Hmm!"		"...Hmm!"

	The pain went up to my whole left arm. My right arm drooped, I can't reach the edge anymore with right hand.		The pain went up to my whole left arm. My right arm drooped, I can't reach the edge anymore with right hand.

Monsterbandage at 00:13, 4 January 2013

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	To a certain extent one may say that I raised Watson up, it’s to let him on the edge of the observatory at first……to turn his body around, now it looks like I’m hugging him from behind……		To a certain extent one may say that I raised Watson up, it’s to let him on the edge of the observatory at first……to turn his body around, now it looks like I’m hugging him from behind……

	I completely grabbed his chest without ~~knowing about~~ it……both of my hands felt that gradually spreading……this……this feel is……		I completely grabbed his chest without realizing it……both of my hands felt that gradually spreading……this……this feel is……

	“……!”		“……!”

Keisanichi: Watson spoiler aside... I couldn't help thinking how gay are you! man up! who cares about your face before marriage!... you know spoiler aside

2013-01-03T21:20:37Z

Watson spoiler aside... I couldn't help thinking how gay are you! man up! who cares about your face before marriage!... you know spoiler aside

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	"T-Three kilometers...that's amazing. You can hear people talking inside a shop three kilometers away?"		"T-Three kilometers...that's amazing. You can hear people talking inside a shop three kilometers away?"

	"—It is possible. The microphone amplifies ~~the~~ the vibrations of the voices that reach the glass of the window...the conversation inside the room is audible. Redirecting."		"—It is possible. The microphone amplifies the vibrations of the voices that reach the glass of the window...the conversation inside the room is audible. Redirecting."

	The power of science is amazing.		The power of science is amazing.
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	"Jeanne."		"Jeanne."

	With the fingers of my left hand, I searched out a white ear from between the strands of hair the ~~colour~~ of ice.		With the fingers of my left hand, I searched out a white ear from between the strands of hair the color of ice.

	I touched Jeanne's ear and she trembled at the contact...		I touched Jeanne's ear and she trembled at the contact...
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	Her cheeks and ears were gradually tinged with pink.		Her cheeks and ears were gradually tinged with pink.

	So that she could continue to breathe, I moved my hand from her mouth—but even then, I placed my index finger over her rose-~~coloured~~ lips, continuing to gesture 'to her to 'keep quiet'...		So that she could continue to breathe, I moved my hand from her mouth—but even then, I placed my index finger over her rose-colored lips, continuing to gesture 'to her to 'keep quiet'...

	"—T-Tohyama...!"		"—T-Tohyama...!"
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	So I thought, but...		So I thought, but...

	"—Voice has been recaptured through ~~echos~~ off buildings. Watson and Aria are in a car. The car is a Porsche 911 Carrera Cabriolet. The soft cover is currently closed. Moving northeast on city highway 482."		"—Voice has been recaptured through echoes off buildings. Watson and Aria are in a car. The car is a Porsche 911 Carrera Cabriolet. The soft cover is currently closed. Moving northeast on city highway 482."

	Watson was going out by car.		Watson was going out by car.
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	I spoke to my opponent.		I spoke to my opponent.

	Of whom I could ~~not~~ see hide nor hair.		Of whom I could neither see hide nor hair.

	He's here. He's close.		He's here. He's close.
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	(—He's a ''doper''.)		(—He's a ''doper''.)

	That was the sound of a ~~needleless~~ injector.		That was the sound of a needle-less injector.

	If he's using it here, then it's most likely 'Nebula'. A stimulant for the central nervous system.		If he's using it here, then it's most likely 'Nebula'. A stimulant for the central nervous system.
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	Watson's figure became clearer.		Watson's figure became clearer.

	He was wearing a completely black bullet/bladeproof vest that blended into the darkness and his feet were clad in combat boots that seemed to be inlaid with steel. His back was protected by a cloak-like bulletproof coat...he's fully ~~armoured~~.		He was wearing a completely black bullet/bladeproof vest that blended into the darkness and his feet were clad in combat boots that seemed to be inlaid with steel. His back was protected by a cloak-like bulletproof coat...he's fully armored.

	On the other hand, all I'm wearing is Butei High's bulletproof uniform and I only have one of Python's hands.		On the other hand, all I'm wearing is Butei High's bulletproof uniform and I only have one of Python's hands.
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	Watson threw away the remains of his knife and flipped backwards, launching himself on one foot, his coat flying.		Watson threw away the remains of his knife and flipped backwards, launching himself on one foot, his coat flying.

	In the midst of his ~~backflip~~, the lightning that flashed in the distance faintly and somehow, in a beautiful manner, outlined his figure.		In the midst of his back-flip, the lightning that flashed in the distance faintly and somehow, in a beautiful manner, outlined his figure.

	Just before he hit the ground, from out of his black sleeve, Watson pulled out a SIG SAUER P226R, a gun with the characteristics of a sleeve-gun, and immediately opened fire with it.		Just before he hit the ground, from out of his black sleeve, Watson pulled out a SIG SAUER P226R, a gun with the characteristics of a sleeve-gun, and immediately opened fire with it.
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	...Drawing out the needle pierced through my eyelid, I saw that there was a fine opening at the tip of the needle, which was approximately one centimeter in length. A poison reservoir. My junior in Lezzad, Fuuma, had a similarly hollow needle made out of bamboo.		...Drawing out the needle pierced through my eyelid, I saw that there was a fine opening at the tip of the needle, which was approximately one centimeter in length. A poison reservoir. My junior in Lezzad, Fuuma, had a similarly hollow needle made out of bamboo.

	My eyeball hadn't been hit, but as for the area between my ~~eyelid~~ to my temple...it had started to numb.		My eyeball hadn't been hit, but as for the area between my eyelids to my temple...it had started to numb.

	Playing dead and then using poison. As one might expect from Vein-san. His methods are dirty.		Playing dead and then using poison. As one might expect from Vein-san. His methods are dirty.
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	As if it weren't enough that my eyes were like this, he had scored direct hits to my liver and jaw. I was in agony.		As if it weren't enough that my eyes were like this, he had scored direct hits to my liver and jaw. I was in agony.

	He had accurately hit the human body's ~~weakpoints~~.		He had accurately hit the human body's weak points.

	I'll be lightheaded for a while, so if I don't rest until I recover, I won't be able to fight.		I'll be lightheaded for a while, so if I don't rest until I recover, I won't be able to fight.
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	Flurries, get back to the outer ring. I'm outrightly an E-class in Butei High.		Flurries, get back to the outer ring. I'm outrightly an E-class in Butei High.

	"…...So, it be working soon, Tohyama? It's already working for me here. The Watsons are doctors for many generations. Gaining advantage in combat by utilizing drugs--that's what we specialize in. Hehe."		"…...So, is it working soon, Tohyama? It's already working for me here. The Watsons are doctors for many generations. Gaining advantage in combat by utilizing drugs--that's what we specialize in. Hehe."

	Adjusting his P226R......Watson walked towards me while laughing mockingly.		Adjusting his P226R......Watson walked towards me while laughing mockingly.
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	But the black combat boots......stepped on my left hand silently.		But the black combat boots......stepped on my left hand silently.

	"But, your performance ~~are~~ rather outstanding. I'm left with my last bullet because of you. What I did with your magazine just now, I suppose it's pity that the 9mm bullets are hit out of the tower."		"But, your performance is rather outstanding. I'm left with my last bullet because of you. What I did with your magazine just now, I suppose it's a pity that the 9mm bullets are hit out of the tower."

	The force on my left hand is getting stronger.		The force on my left hand is getting stronger.
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	The pain went up to my whole left arm. My right arm drooped, I can't reach the edge anymore with right hand.		The pain went up to my whole left arm. My right arm drooped, I can't reach the edge anymore with right hand.

	Enduring......I have to endure! If my left hand slacken,it'll cause me to fall straight towards the ground.		Enduring......I have to endure! If my left hand slacken, it'll cause me to fall straight towards the ground.

	But, under these conditions......How do I climb up?		But, under these conditions......How do I climb up?
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	The only place I have in contact with the Sky Tree is my left hand now.		The only place I have in contact with the Sky Tree is my left hand now.

	But, left wrist, left elbow, left shoulder, right shoulder, right elbow, right wrist--With these acceleration points, it'll work. If I'm in ~~Normale~~ Hysteria mode, it may not work--		But, left wrist, left elbow, left shoulder, right shoulder, right elbow, right wrist--With these acceleration points, it'll work. If I'm in Normal Hysteria mode, it may not work--

	Me in Hysteria Berserk, is all because of you, I've been forced into desperation by you.		Me in Hysteria Berserk, is all because of you, I've been forced into desperation by you.
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	“—Ah!”		“—Ah!”

	One of Watson’s ~~foot~~ stepped on nothing and looked as if he’s going to fall, his bulletproof uniform blinked—		One of Watson’s feet stepped on nothing and looked as if he’s going to fall, his bulletproof uniform blinked—

	I took a ~~headslide~~ pose (a baseball pose) and leaped towards the falling Watson.		I took a head-slide pose (a baseball pose) and leaped towards the falling Watson.

	“……!”		“……!”

Keisanichi at 20:55, 3 January 2013

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	"Eek!"		"Eek!"

	Nakasorachi ~~frighted~~ at just that noise and leaped into the air, clutching onto my arm.		Nakasorachi frightened at just that noise and leaped into the air, clutching onto my arm.

	(Uu...!)		(Uu...!)
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	If I don't say it a little carefully, I'll be made to do another sentence order quiz.		If I don't say it a little carefully, I'll be made to do another sentence order quiz.

	"Nakasorachi, I've like to ask you for a ~~favour~~..."		"Nakasorachi, I've like to ask you for a favor..."

	"F-~~Favour~~, ~~favour~~? Th-that's i-impossible, a fa-~~favour~~ from a b-bo-bo-boy..."		"F-Favor, favor? Th-that's i-impossible, a fa-favor from a b-bo-bo-boy..."

	Suddenly this.		Suddenly this.

	"I-I'm the t-type of person th-that can't s-say no when as-asked a ~~favour~~ of! So, pl-please be gentle!"		"I-I'm the t-type of person th-that can't s-say no when as-asked a favor of! So, pl-please be gentle!"

	"That's convenient. I'd like—"		"That's convenient. I'd like—"
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	Countless speakers and expensive looking amplifiers were piled up on a rack, surrounding a black desk with a semicircle.		Countless speakers and expensive looking amplifiers were piled up on a rack, surrounding a black desk with a semicircle.

	The soundproof walls were painted black, and headphones of every ~~colour~~ were hanging from them like a electronics volume retailer.		The soundproof walls were painted black, and headphones of every color were hanging from them like an electronics volume retailer.

	Not only did the entire scene look like the mixing room of a radio station, but in the room, there were even communication devices coming from every time period and every place imaginable, all lined up neatly. Not only computers and wireless devices used for processing, but there were around 50 types of handheld cellphones.		Not only did the entire scene look like the mixing room of a radio station, but in the room, there were even communication devices coming from every time period and every place imaginable, all lined up neatly. Not only computers and wireless devices used for processing, but there were around 50 types of handheld cellphones.

NiMx1233 at 13:30, 3 January 2013

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	==4th Ammo: 350m Altitude Tornado==		==4th Ammo: 350m Altitude Tornado==

NiMx1233: /* 4th Ammo: 350m Altitude Tornado */

2013-01-03T13:29:54Z

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