Hidan no Aria:Volume9 Chapter3 - Revision history

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	Watson looked at the speechless me in shock, she then sighed deeply.		Watson looked at the speechless me in shock, she then sighed deeply.

	" 'Not eating meat already at the mouth is the shame of a man' ~~[http://www~~.~~baka-tsuki~~.~~org~~/~~project/index.php?title=Hidan_no_Aria:Volume9_Translator%27s_Notes#Chapter_3]~~. Japan seems to have this idiom as well.... But for you, not only do you not eat the meat already at your mouth, you're a man who doesn't even eat the meat being willingly fed to you by others. It seems that it's obvious your relationship with so many girls is in name only, and you've never made any progress with a single one of them."		" 'Not eating meat already at the mouth is the shame of a man'<ref>'Not eating meat already at the mouth is the shame of a man' (Lit. '到嘴肥肉不吃是男人的耻辱'). This is to describe that it's a shame+failure of a man not to make out with a willing female.</ref>. Japan seems to have this idiom as well.... But for you, not only do you not eat the meat already at your mouth, you're a man who doesn't even eat the meat being willingly fed to you by others. It seems that it's obvious your relationship with so many girls is in name only, and you've never made any progress with a single one of them."

	What a busybody.		What a busybody.
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	I reminded Watson, who had not immersed herself fully into the character simulation since just now.		I reminded Watson, who had not immersed herself fully into the character simulation since just now.

	"Li.. like a girl? Then I'll start with addressing myself in the fir... first person. If I say 'Atashi' ~~[http://www~~.~~baka-tsuki~~.~~org/project~~/~~index.php?title=Hidan_no_Aria:Volume9_Translator%27s_Notes#Chapter_3]~~. it'll be a bit too much."		"Li.. like a girl? Then I'll start with addressing myself in the fir... first person. If I say 'Atashi'<ref>Atashi (あたし) refers to 'myself'. Used by ladies, with the intention of acting in a cute manner.</ref>. it'll be a bit too much."

	".... I think I'll use 'boku' ~~[http://www~~.~~baka-tsuki~~.~~org/project~~/~~index.php?title=Hidan_no_Aria:Volume9_Translator%27s_Notes#Chapter_3]~~ to address myself, there are some girls who do this."		".... I think I'll use 'boku'<ref>Boku (ボク or 僕) also refers to 'me or myself'. It's normally used by young little boys referring to themselves, in a cute and obedient sense.</ref> to address myself, there are some girls who do this."

	"Sit... sitting with a boy on... on a bed... just.. just like a girl...."		"Sit... sitting with a boy on... on a bed... just.. just like a girl...."
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			==Translator's Notes and References==
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	{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume9 Chapter2\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume9 Chapter4}}		{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume9 Chapter2\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume9 Chapter4}}
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2012-10-13T16:53:00Z

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	"What are we doing here."		"What are we doing here."

	"Well... Tohyama, I may be ~~the~~ the type of person who has become shameless from doing bad things... But actually... I have a request for you."		"Well... Tohyama, I may be the type of person who has become shameless from doing bad things... But actually... I have a request for you."

	"A request for me?"		"A request for me?"

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	Those legs well and truly belong to a girl.		Those legs well and truly belong to a girl.

	No wonder its a body with 27% of body ~~fats~~. Soft and tender, with a smooth and glossy feel, emitting the sparkle of moisture.... Her skin was sheer like silk, and smooth like milk.		No wonder its a body with 27% body fat. Soft and tender, with a smooth and glossy feel, emitting the sparkle of moisture.... Her skin was sheer like silk, and smooth like milk.

	But.. But.....!		But.. But.....!
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	"This way, I will become aware. I will revert back to being a girl. For this.... I must personally experience that I'm a woman. So you... let me, become a woman!""		"This way, I will become aware. I will revert back to being a girl. For this.... I must personally experience that I'm a woman. So you... let me, become a woman!""

	"You say become a woman.... but you ~~are~~ have always been a woman!"		"You say become a woman.... but you have always been a woman!"

	"Haven't you been listening to a single word I said!?"		"Haven't you been listening to a single word I said!?"
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	"A rough impression will do. There's a table here, and because there's only one dressing chair here, so when Grandmother comes over--it can't be helped, the two of us can only sit on the bed. This will be the bed. Tohyama, come, sit beside me."		"A rough impression will do. There's a table here, and because there's only one dressing chair here, so when Grandmother comes over--it can't be helped, the two of us can only sit on the bed. This will be the bed. Tohyama, come, sit beside me."

	Watson sat on a stack of canvas sheets about ~~60cm~~ thick.		Watson sat on a stack of canvas sheets about 60 cm thick.

	"......"		"......"
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	Although I don't have any practical experience with this kind of things, but when actually in a girl's room--if the boy and girl are in this situation, both of them will become quiet.		Although I don't have any practical experience with this kind of things, but when actually in a girl's room--if the boy and girl are in this situation, both of them will become quiet.

	"Toh... Tohyama. Say something! Something natural, and manly."		"Toh... Tohyama. Say something! Something natural and manly."

	Watson, who was directing just now, looked to me for help now that she's in a predicament.		Watson, who was directing just now, looked to me for help now that she's in a predicament.

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	"Well.... You didn't do anything to me to get your revenge. Before this I used all sorts of dirty and cunning tricks to make your life miserable. So will this be enough?"		"Well.... You didn't do anything to me to get your revenge. Before this I used all sorts of dirty and cunning tricks to make your life miserable. So will this be enough?"

	"It's enough. You're a woman right. Exacting vengeance on women is not what ~~men~~ does."		"It's enough. You're a woman right. Exacting vengeance on women is not what a man does."

	Once I finished talking, Watson's face inexplicably started turning red.		Once I finished talking, Watson's face inexplicably started turning red.
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	I finally got Watson, who was crying out in a weird manner, to focus on driving the car.		I finally got Watson, who was crying out in a weird manner, to focus on driving the car.

	Watson stopped the car in a strange place. "Get out of the car!" I obeyed and got off the car....		Watson stopped the car in a strange place.

			"Get out of the car!" I obeyed and got off the car....

	Opposite the yellow leaves fluttering across the sky, I could see the Selective Arts Building.		Opposite the yellow leaves fluttering across the sky, I could see the Selective Arts Building.

Hiro Hayase at 19:12, 8 March 2012

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60.54.19.169: /* 3rd Ammo: Secret Rehabilitation -Boy Meets Girl- */

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3rd Ammo: Secret Rehabilitation -Boy Meets Girl-

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	But.. But.....!		But.. But.....!

	~~Clam~~ down Kinji. There's nothing extraordinary about thighs. If you think about it clearly, aren't the girls in Butei High always showing their thighs.		Calm down Kinji. There's nothing extraordinary about thighs. If you think about it clearly, aren't the girls in Butei High always showing their thighs.

	There's nothing to be afraid of, there's nothing to be afraid of. Yes... nothing to be afraid of.....		There's nothing to be afraid of, there's nothing to be afraid of. Yes... nothing to be afraid of.....

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2011-10-31T23:55:23Z

3rd Ammo: Secret Rehabilitation -Boy Meets Girl-

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	When Riko got to the First Observation Deck, her heart had already stopped beating.		When Riko got to the First Observation Deck, her heart had already stopped beating.

	Leaving the resuscitation to Aria, I hurriedly took the now-functioning elevator down to the ground level... Using a public phone, I managed to get a ~~helipcopter~~ from Logi, and help arrived 20 minutes later.		Leaving the resuscitation to Aria, I hurriedly took the now-functioning elevator down to the ground level... Using a public phone, I managed to get a helicopter from Logi, and help arrived 20 minutes later.

	Since there was a precedent case of someone being revived after the heart had stopped beating for 4 minutes, I cannot give up as well--using the phrases I learn in Assault to encourage myself as I made my way back to the observation deck--		Since there was a precedent case of someone being revived after the heart had stopped beating for 4 minutes, I cannot give up as well--using the phrases I learn in Assault to encourage myself as I made my way back to the observation deck--

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2011-10-24T01:06:49Z

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	When Riko is discharged from ICU.... can I make the reservations to be next?		When Riko is discharged from ICU.... can I make the reservations to be next?



	Perhaps due to the effects of global warming, the typhoon season came and ended much earlier for this year.		Perhaps due to the effects of global warming, the typhoon season came and ended much earlier for this year.

Coghys at 22:15, 22 October 2011

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	{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume9 ~~Chapter1~~\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume9 ~~Chapter3~~}}		{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume9 Chapter2\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume9 Chapter4}}
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	Looking at it was like looking at a dazzling display of precious gems.		Looking at it was like looking at a dazzling display of precious gems.

	From her breasts to her attractive navel, all the way down to the lower half of her body, there were no excess meat on her body.Her hands and legs were very long as well, and her body proportions were just right.		From her breasts to her attractive navel, all the way down to the lower half of her body, there were no excess meat on her body. Her hands and legs were very long as well, and her body proportions were just right.

	She was like ~~the~~ one of the sketch models in the art room. Allowing people to feel a healthy kind of beauty, and absolutely not ~~having~~ anyone feel odd or disgusted.		She was like one of the sketch models in the art room. Allowing people to feel a healthy kind of beauty, and absolutely not have anyone feel odd or disgusted.

	Maybe because of this reason, even though I'm aware that I was dangerously on the verge of entering Hysteria mode, but it was nothing like the feeling of dread caused by Riko, Shirayuki and the others when they are forcing themselves on me. Furthermore, she had boyish short hair as well.		Maybe because of this reason, even though I'm aware that I was dangerously on the verge of entering Hysteria mode, but it was nothing like the feeling of dread caused by Riko, Shirayuki and the others when they are forcing themselves on me. Furthermore, she had boyish short hair as well.
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	".....?"		".....?"

	"The reason I am unable to show myself in front of people in women's clothes is due to psychological stress. So we can use shock therapy to overcome it. You'll have to do it. And I can repay you with these ~~kind~~ of actions."		"The reason I am unable to show myself in front of people in women's clothes is due to psychological stress. So we can use shock therapy to overcome it. You'll have to do it. And I can repay you with these kinds of actions."

	"Shock therapy...? What's that."		"Shock therapy...? What's that."
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	The shock therapy to turn Watson into a girl, actually includes compensation for me.		The shock therapy to turn Watson into a girl, actually includes compensation for me.

	She seems ~~wants~~ me to do something which can kill two birds with one stone....		She seems to want me to do something which can kill two birds with one stone....

	Judging from how she has been showing me so much skin and from her words--it seems to be some form of medical procedure--but am I a doctor?		Judging from how she has been showing me so much skin and from her words--it seems to be some form of medical procedure--but am I a doctor?
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	Facing me who had changed drastically in the look in my eyes and my manner of speaking--		Facing me who had changed drastically in the look in my eyes and my manner of speaking--

	Watson closed both eyes shut, and as if in a ~~dreaming~~, was mumbling "Together with a man, becoming a woman with a man..."		Watson closed both eyes shut, and as if in a dream, was mumbling "Together with a man, becoming a woman with a man..."

	Haha, you're really like a woman like this. Very womanly.		Haha, you're really like a woman like this. Very womanly.
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	Because it's already a fact that I defeated Hilda who was in "Grenada".		Because it's already a fact that I defeated Hilda who was in "Grenada".

	".... I'm used to ~~all~~ dealing with all sorts of problems."		".... I'm used to dealing with all sorts of problems."

	I hardened my resolve and answered.		I hardened my resolve and answered.

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	"And, Hilda has been in E.U. to study for a period of time, perhaps if we can talk to her, she might be willing to testify in court for Kanae Kanzaki-san."		"And, Hilda has been in E.U. to study for a period of time, perhaps if we can talk to her, she might be willing to testify in court for Kanae Kanzaki-san."

	Watson was nervously ~~watching~~ Riko's reactions...		Watson was nervously observing Riko's reactions...

	Staying silent for a while, Riko suddenly looked at Aria...		Staying silent for a while, Riko suddenly looked at Aria...
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	"Uhn. Maybe. So, can you do it? We'll be teammates with her from now on--"		"Uhn. Maybe. So, can you do it? We'll be teammates with her from now on--"

	"Ah, of course I can. Even if there's someone we have to be cautious about among our companions, it isn't too bad. I can still tolerate this kind of things. Frenemies... I guess every high school student will have this kind of relationship with at least one person."		"Ah, of course I can. Even if there's someone we have to be cautious about among our companions, it isn't too bad. I can still tolerate this kind of things. Frenemies... I guess every high school student will have this kind of relationship with at least one person." <!-- Hiro: Frenemies is intentional.-->

	"Uhn, maybe. That's remarkable, Kinji. Well done."		"Uhn, maybe. That's remarkable, Kinji. Well done."
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	--A girl. --She's really a girl.		--A girl. --She's really a girl.

	Watson adjusted her bra cup ~~unguardedly~~, and as if I was trying to verify something, I looked at her--within that thin piece of cloth were her slightly protruding breasts.		Watson adjusted her bra cup carelessly, and as if I was trying to verify something, I looked at her--within that thin piece of cloth were her slightly protruding breasts.

	The shape was not too big and not too small, and well proportioned for both left and right breasts, the external appearance was a beautiful bowl shape.		The shape was not too big and not too small, and well proportioned for both left and right breasts, the external appearance was a beautiful bowl shape.
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	I was holding Watson's head, and she was hugging my body tightly.		I was holding Watson's head, and she was hugging my body tightly.

	We had finally put the "~~actions~~ to take when about to fall" lessons ~~learnt~~ in Assault to actual use.		We had finally put the "procedures to take when about to fall" lessons learned in Assault to actual use.

	In the crook of my arm, Watson lifted her eyes and stared at me....		In the crook of my arm, Watson lifted her eyes and stared at me....
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	It's really too forced.		It's really too forced.

	"We shall end here today. ~~Traning~~ needs to be carried out in stages. If we progress too fast, it won't be good for the bodies of both parties."		"We shall end here today. Training needs to be carried out in stages. If we progress too fast, it won't be good for the bodies of both parties."

	"But, if it's like this, my compensation for you...."		"But, if it's like this, my compensation for you...."
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	"I have collected Hilda's wings and tissues of Hilda's Demon Entrails. All first-rate materials in a demon's armament. As long as you give me these, I can sign a 1 year support contract with you.		"I have collected Hilda's wings and tissues of Hilda's Demon Entrails. All first-rate materials in a demon's armament. As long as you give me these, I can sign a 1 year support contract with you.

	Those things which are useless to me, well, if Watson feels that it's ok...		Those things which are useless to me, well, if Watson feels that it's alright...

	I can obtain invaluable strength.		I can obtain invaluable strength.