Hidan no Aria:Volume9 Chapter4 - Revision history

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2013-07-13T17:27:18Z

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	For some reason, I suddenly felt that I shouldn't continue peeping on her like this.		For some reason, I suddenly felt that I shouldn't continue peeping on her like this.

	Her breasts, which were contoured on her clothes, ~~was~~ starting to shake continuously along with her swinging legs, making me feel that the scene was becoming very dangerous.		Her breasts, which were contoured on her clothes, were starting to shake continuously along with her swinging legs, making me feel that the scene was becoming very dangerous.

	"Well from the looks of it, she probably won't run away from here...."		"Well from the looks of it, she probably won't run away from here...."
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	You must work hard!		You must work hard!

	When you first came to Butei High, you didn't even know what flavored drinks ~~are~~.		When you first came to Butei High, you didn't even know what flavored drinks were.


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	While Muto was tugging away at Hiraga's shiny skirt to drag her out from the pot, I made use of the opportunity to open my mouth and talk.		While Muto was tugging away at Hiraga's shiny skirt to drag her out from the pot, I made use of the opportunity to open my mouth and talk.

	"Sensei, I, no, this Police Officer has deeply reflected on his past actions while in the kitchen, and will never be '''lazy''' ~~[http://www~~.~~baka-tsuki~~.~~org~~/~~project/index.php?title=Hidan_no_Aria:Volume9_Translator%27s_Notes#Chapter_4]~~ again."		"Sensei, I, no, this Police Officer has deeply reflected on his past actions while in the kitchen, and will never be '''lazy''' <ref>The "Lazy" word used here is Lit. 懒懒散散. It was pronounced using "Ranran", which is Ranbyou's online nick.</ref> again."

	Speaking softly to her, I intentionally added in Ranbyou's online name.		Speaking softly to her, I intentionally added in Ranbyou's online name.
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	But, she seemed to be somewhat happy, the corners of her mouth slowly rising, finally forming the shape of a 'W'.		But, she seemed to be somewhat happy, the corners of her mouth slowly rising, finally forming the shape of a 'W'.

	Ranbyou was flashing a smile like a leopard ~~[http://www~~.~~baka-tsuki.org~~/~~project/index.php?title=Hidan_no_Aria:Volume9_Translator%27s_Notes#Chapter_4]~~.		Ranbyou was flashing a smile like a leopard<ref>As mentioned before, for Ranbyou's name, the "byou" means leopard.</ref>.

	Mmm. Actually you did see my Nii-san before, just that, my Nii-san appeared in the form of a girl.		Mmm. Actually you did see my Nii-san before, just that, my Nii-san appeared in the form of a girl.
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	Wrapped up in my own fear, I brought Nakasorachi to a place which couldn't be seen from the mess hall...		Wrapped up in my own fear, I brought Nakasorachi to a place which couldn't be seen from the mess hall...

	"Oto... Otoko-yama-kun ~~[http:~~/~~/www~~.~~baka-tsuki~~.~~org~~/~~project/index.php?title=Hidan_no_Aria:Volume9_Translator%27s_Notes#Chapter_4]~~... As a wait... waitress, I'm always a failure... sorry! It's all my... my blunder, I'm a stupid, useless tort... tortoise. A tortoise will always be a tortoise!"		"Oto... Otoko-yama-kun<ref>Otoko means male/man. Nakasorachi literally addresses Tohyama that.</ref>... As a wait... waitress, I'm always a failure... sorry! It's all my... my blunder, I'm a stupid, useless tort... tortoise. A tortoise will always be a tortoise!"

	She started smoothing the long bangs at her forehead and sobbing, and just like what she said, completely became negative about herself.		She started smoothing the long bangs at her forehead and sobbing, and just like what she said, completely became negative about herself.
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	Her featherlight skirt brushing against me.		Her featherlight skirt brushing against me.

	"Actually... it seems that the kohais ~~[http://www~~.~~baka-tsuki~~.~~org/project~~/~~index.php?title=Hidan_no_Aria:Volume9_Translator%27s_Notes#Chapter_4]~~ from the tennis club will be coming to see me. What should I do."		"Actually... it seems that the kohais<ref>A Kohai is something like a junior. A Sempai is the senior.</ref> from the tennis club will be coming to see me. What should I do."

	Ah.....		Ah.....
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	This is truly a world I cannot comprehend.		This is truly a world I cannot comprehend.

	What's going on in the minds of these SSR people. There was even a Wooden Fish ~~[http://www~~.~~baka-tsuki~~.~~org~~/~~project/index.php?title=Hidan_no_Aria:Volume9_Translator%27s_Notes#Chapter_4]~~ placed on top of a pipe organ.		What's going on in the minds of these SSR people. There was even a Wooden Fish<ref>Wooden Fish (Lit. 木鱼). A wooden percussion instrument used during rituals usually involving the recitation of sutras, mantras, or other Buddhist texts.</ref> placed on top of a pipe organ.

	A sign with "Anyone fighting will be shot to death -- From Masters" stuck beside an Aztec Calendar is the only thing here I understand.		A sign with "Anyone fighting will be shot to death -- From Masters" stuck beside an Aztec Calendar is the only thing here I understand.
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	{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume9 Chapter3\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume9 Chapter5}}		{{Hidan no Aria Nav\|prev=Hidan no Aria:Volume9 Chapter3\|next=Hidan no Aria:Volume9 Chapter5}}
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Braiam: /* 4th Ammo: Cultural Festival Day 1 -Carnaval Via- */ the word "alot" does not exist in any english dictionary

2013-01-05T15:47:54Z

4th Ammo: Cultural Festival Day 1 -Carnaval Via-: the word "alot" does not exist in any english dictionary

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	After helping them with their orders, Shirayuki came into the backyard from the mess hall.		After helping them with their orders, Shirayuki came into the backyard from the mess hall.

	"There's ~~alot~~ of customers, so let's raise our spirits! AI AI YO!"		"There's a lot of customers, so let's raise our spirits! AI AI YO!"

	Shirayuki said to the tired group of cosplayers--		Shirayuki said to the tired group of cosplayers--
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	Even though she was still expressionless, but Doctor Reki (Ph.D.) did the same thing as well. This is the first time I've seen her like this.		Even though she was still expressionless, but Doctor Reki (Ph.D.) did the same thing as well. This is the first time I've seen her like this.

	Following that, Shirayuki started giving instructions of the measures to take to handle the different situation for each and every table, making everyone's work ~~alot~~ easier.		Following that, Shirayuki started giving instructions of the measures to take to handle the different situation for each and every table, making everyone's work a lot easier.

	This is the true messiah.		This is the true messiah.

Kemm: Undo this edit if im wrong but, given the picture, this seems more accurate.

2013-01-04T22:34:31Z

Undo this edit if im wrong but, given the picture, this seems more accurate.

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	She started smoothing the long bangs at her forehead and sobbing, and just like what she said, completely became negative about herself.		She started smoothing the long bangs at her forehead and sobbing, and just like what she said, completely became negative about herself.

	For her, besides being a communications operator, she probably takes only types of work like being a librarian. Requiring her to become a waitress dressed up as a ~~lace~~ queen is simply too challenging.		For her, besides being a communications operator, she probably takes only types of work like being a librarian. Requiring her to become a waitress dressed up as a race queen is simply too challenging.

	I really wanted to push her into the kitchen so that a poor fireman could be rescued, but the male customers seemed to really fancy types like Nakasorachi, so I guess Ranbyou will never agree.		I really wanted to push her into the kitchen so that a poor fireman could be rescued, but the male customers seemed to really fancy types like Nakasorachi, so I guess Ranbyou will never agree.

Royaloyalz at 18:13, 13 October 2012

2012-10-13T18:13:01Z

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2012-08-20T14:05:45Z

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	So that's how it is.		So that's how it is.

	--Butei High is is a school with some.. no, with a lot of feudalism.		--Butei High is a school with some.. no, with a lot of feudalism.

	The seniors must be strict with the juniors, and must more or less put on some airs in front of them.		The seniors must be strict with the juniors, and must more or less put on some airs in front of them.

Hiro Hayase at 19:04, 8 March 2012

2012-03-08T19:04:29Z

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2011-11-29T15:52:35Z

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	Even Aria seemed to feel that I was thinking "So lucky, I actually saw it (laughs)", the veins on her temple showing.		Even Aria seemed to feel that I was thinking "So lucky, I actually saw it (laughs)", the veins on her temple showing.

	"Woah woah! ~~Aira~~ just turned eight! You've seen everything!"		"Woah woah! Aria just turned eight! You've seen everything!"

	"--Fourth year elementary school students are ten years old!"		"--Fourth year elementary school students are ten years old!"

ElmoWu: /* 4th Ammo: Cultural Festival Day 1 -Carnaval Via- */

2011-11-17T01:27:27Z

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	Her attitude towards us remained the same as well... as if the battle on the Sky Tree never took place.		Her attitude towards us remained the same as well... as if the battle on the Sky Tree never took place.

	Although Riko only knows how to ~~creates~~ problems, but without her around, things get kind of lonely.		Although Riko only knows how to create problems, but without her around, things get kind of lonely.

	Honestly speaking, I'm really happy she has returned in good health....		Honestly speaking, I'm really happy she has returned in good health....

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2011-11-02T22:14:43Z

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	Managing the affairs in the mess hall, the girls will always be drawing a lot of attention. It was really an impossible situation.		Managing the affairs in the mess hall, the girls will always be drawing a lot of attention. It was really an impossible situation.

	The costumes of the girls were resplendent, and an atmosphere of a cosplay ~~coffeeshop~~ was pervading the mess hall.		The costumes of the girls were resplendent, and an atmosphere of a cosplay coffee shop was pervading the mess hall.

	The male customers seemed to be very happy.... maybe because they still have no idea how fierce the girls of Butei High are.		The male customers seemed to be very happy.... maybe because they still have no idea how fierce the girls of Butei High are.
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	"It's alright. Don't let Ranbyou see you, rest for a while. I'll deal with the work."		"It's alright. Don't let Ranbyou see you, rest for a while. I'll deal with the work."

	Thinking and looking out for her, I led Nakasorachi in the direction of the lounge....		Thinking and looking out for her, I led Nakasorachi towards the direction of the lounge....

	"Ai ai! It's no wonder you're Ki-kun the Flagship Architect! You're now taking on the Nakasorachi route!"		"Ai ai! It's no wonder you're Ki-kun the Flagship Architect! You're now taking on the Nakasorachi route!"
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	The muffled sounds of their voices came from above the plywood.		The muffled sounds of their voices came from above the plywood.

	With my head finally plucked out, I ~~proned~~ on the ground and ~~look~~ upwards--		With my head finally plucked out, I lay suffering on the ground and looked upwards--

	".....!"		".....!"

	This time it has turned into a ~~position~~ where I was down-slope and looking up at Aria's short skirt.		This time it has turned into a situation where I was down-slope and looking up at Aria's short skirt.

	I'm now caught in a position of a pervert whom should be arrested by the police in the first place.		I'm now caught in a position of a pervert whom should be arrested by the police in the first place.
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	"Don't put me in the same league as you!"		"Don't put me in the same league as you!"

	Jeanne ~~swifty~~ lifted her head, her whole face blushing red like Aria.		Jeanne swiftly lifted her head, her whole face blushing red like Aria.

	As Jeanne is 100% white Caucasian, so putting it more accurately, her face was pink.		As Jeanne is 100% white Caucasian, so putting it more accurately, her face was pink.
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	As for me, I have not much of a popularity, Within the kohais, only Fuma knows about me.		As for me, I have not much of a popularity, Within the kohais, only Fuma knows about me.

	(Anyway.... looks like I won't be turned into a human ~~hoarforst~~.)		(Anyway.... looks like I won't be turned into a human hoarfrost.)

	Just as I started to relax myself--		Just as I started to relax myself--
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	Tamamo said, while standing within a beam of light.		Tamamo said, while standing within a beam of light.

	She was wearing a small uniform cap with a wave-shaped hem, and there were actually something shaped like 2 fox ears poking upwards at the top of the cap.		She was wearing a small uniform cap with a wave-shaped hem, and there were actually something shaped like two fox ears poking upwards at the top of the cap.

	Hey, is this really ok.		Hey, is this really alright.

	"Yes, Tohyama. I hath heard you brought defeat to Hilda. Well done!"		"Yes, Tohyama. I hath heard you brought defeat to Hilda. Well done!"
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	"Why, thou seems verily interested in me. Art thou smitten with me."		"Why, thou seems verily interested in me. Art thou smitten with me."

	Tamamo laughingly said to me, who was staring fixedly at her.		Tamamo laughingly said to me, who was staring fixedly at her.

	"Don't talk nonsense. The age difference is too big."		"Don't talk nonsense. The age difference is too big."
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	It was a very peaceful, long-standing Shirayuki-type of smile.		It was a very peaceful, long-standing Shirayuki-type of smile.

	"The Hotogi Miko are protective Mikos. We have ~~alway~~ fought for the sake of protecting. The chaos in the country, wars, and the few "Battles" encountered, protecting is what we always, and always will do. And..."		"The Hotogi Miko are protective Mikos. We have always fought for the sake of protecting. The chaos in the country, wars, and the few "Battles" encountered, protecting is what we always, and always will do. And..."

	Shirayuki's expression hardened.		Shirayuki's expression hardened.

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	(.... If I report this to the Masters, maybe I can get an academic credit?)		(.... If I report this to the Masters, maybe I can get an academic credit?)

	As I thought about it seriously, I walked along the school grounds that ~~was~~ filled with a festive mood.		As I thought about it seriously, I walked along the school grounds that were filled with a festive mood.

	In a warehouse belonging to Logi, children were gathered together, sitting on the pilot's seat in a helicopter.		In a warehouse belonging to Logi, children were gathered together, sitting on the pilot's seat in a helicopter.
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	The musical performed by CVR has been renowned for a very long time, with even professionals in the industry admitting to being inferior. On the day of the musical, long queues snaked before the ticketing booths. It was probably because CVR has quite a number of beautiful young girls, the absurdly highly-priced tickets were sold out in a flash.		The musical performed by CVR has been renowned for a very long time, with even professionals in the industry admitting to being inferior. On the day of the musical, long queues snaked before the ticketing booths. It was probably because CVR has quite a number of beautiful young girls, the absurdly highly-priced tickets were sold out in a flash.

	The cafeteria where students usually ~~leaves~~ a mess all over after eating, was wiped clean for the "Cosplay Cafeteria" that will be held in the morning today.		The cafeteria where students usually leave a mess all over after eating, was wiped clean for the "Cosplay Cafeteria" that will be held in the morning today.

	During the Cosplay Cafeteria, the training results of the students carrying out their missions to infiltrate and search for evidence would be clearly shown. As such, if successful, it seems that the Masters will give an "Outstanding" grade in the internal reports for the students involved in the activity.		During the Cosplay Cafeteria, the training results of the students carrying out their missions to infiltrate and search for evidence would be clearly shown. As such, if successful, it seems that the Masters will give an "Outstanding" grade in the internal reports for the students involved in the activity.
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	Things like the look in one's eyes are due to what a person is born with, it can't be changed that easily. Ranbyou-san.		Things like the look in one's eyes are due to what a person is born with, it can't be changed that easily. Ranbyou-san.

	Recently, as friends in Informa ~~has~~ told me... One day I will expose the fact that you registered an account for yourself on a social website for making friends, and even gave yourself a online name called "Ranran". And you still have the cheek to write that you like reading books in your personal information column. Besides books on gambling tips and gossip magazines, I've never seen you touch any other type of printed media. And you actually wrote down age as 18.		Recently, as friends in Informa had told me... One day I will expose the fact that you registered an account for yourself on a social website for making friends, and even gave yourself an online name called "Ranran". And you still have the cheek to write that you like reading books in your personal information column. Besides books on gambling tips and gossip magazines, I've never seen you touch any other type of printed media. And you actually wrote down age as 18.

	If you look at the face alone, she's really beautiful, so there are actually victims who have been deceived by her attractive external appearance and dated the female gorilla. I must meet out the justice of heaven.		If you look at the face alone, she's really beautiful, so there are actually victims who have been deceived by her attractive external appearance and dated the female gorilla. I must meet out the justice of heaven.
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	Coming in for the afternoon shift, Hiraga who was a girl, was caught by Ranbyou with one hand and swung in a circle in mid-air.		Coming in for the afternoon shift, Hiraga who was a girl, was caught by Ranbyou with one hand and swung in a circle in mid-air.

	The angry looking Hiraga had her feet twisted in a impossible direction, her tendon probably been injured by Ranbyou. Our violent teacher does not go easy on anyone, including girls.		The angry looking Hiraga had her feet twisted in a impossible direction, her tendon had probably been injured by Ranbyou. Our violent teacher does not go easy on anyone, including girls.

	"What the hell, Hiraga--anyone is stronger than you, can you at least increase your height somewhat?"		"What the hell, Hiraga--anyone is stronger than you, can you at least increase your height somewhat?"