Hikaru ga Chikyuu ni Itakoro:Volume1 Chapter3 - Revision history

RS: streamlining the text format with updated translation

2016-12-22T11:50:11Z

streamlining the text format with updated translation

Teh Ping: /* Chapter 3 - Even Though Everyone Calls Me an Expert in Love */

2013-08-30T04:54:50Z

Chapter 3 - Even Though Everyone Calls Me an Expert in Love

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	After school, someone had suddenly barged into her as she’d been walking along the corridor.		After school, someone had suddenly barged into her as she’d been walking along the corridor.

	The culprit was that classmate who sat beside her in class, the red-haired delinquent with those savage-looking eyes. As though to add insult to injury, he’d buried his face in her chest! That perverted, idiotic bastard - Akagi ~~Koremitsu~~!		The culprit was that classmate who sat beside her in class, the red-haired delinquent with those savage-looking eyes. As though to add insult to injury, he’d buried his face in her chest! That perverted, idiotic bastard - Koremitsu Akagi!

	''Maybe he’s still angry that I snatched the yakisoba bread from him during lunch break and made him hungry.'' The more she thought of it, the more she wanted to give him a few good kicks, and her skin grew agitated as though breaking into a rash.		''Maybe he’s still angry that I snatched the yakisoba bread from him during lunch break and made him hungry.'' The more she thought of it, the more she wanted to give him a few good kicks, and her skin grew agitated as though breaking into a rash.

Kira0802 at 16:49, 22 August 2013

2013-08-22T16:49:39Z

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	She stacked the two torn pieces atop one another, tore it once more, threw it into a dustbin, and took her leave.		She stacked the two torn pieces atop one another, tore it once more, threw it into a dustbin, and took her leave.

	~~“Oi~~, ‘Love Expert’, that damned girl just tore the letter without reading.”		“Hey, ‘Love Expert’, that damned girl just tore the letter without reading.”

	“Ne-next plan, then.”		“Ne-next plan, then.”
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	Instead, she stepped on it and left.		Instead, she stepped on it and left.

	~~“Oi~~, my new notebook has a footprint on it now.”		“Hey, my new notebook has a footprint on it now.”

	“<nowiki>~~</nowiki>, next!”		“<nowiki>~~</nowiki>, next!”
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	“That's a fact anyway…I hated Hikaru most on this world. He angers me all the time, and he lies to me most. There's no other guy worse than him. He's a completely rotten man inside despite his exquisite appearance on the outside.”		“That's a fact anyway…I hated Hikaru most on this world. He angers me all the time, and he lies to me most. There's no other guy worse than him. He's a completely rotten man inside despite his exquisite appearance on the outside.”

	“WHAT ARE YOU SAYING!?”		“WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU SAYING!?”

	Aoi disparaging Hikaru troubled Koremitsu, and it reminded him of his unanswered prayers, and of the emotions he had experienced as a child: pain and despair. These things were wrenched from deep within his heart, and the blood rushed to his head; his veins were throbbing with rage which rose from far below his belly.		Aoi disparaging Hikaru troubled Koremitsu, and it reminded him of his unanswered prayers, and of the emotions he had experienced as a child: pain and despair. These things were wrenched from deep within his heart, and the blood rushed to his head; his veins were throbbing with rage which rose from far below his belly.
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	Upon hearing this, Koremitsu let out a roar.		Upon hearing this, Koremitsu let out a roar.

	“DON’T YOU DARE SAY THAT AS A MATTER OF FACT!”		“DON’T YOU ''DARE'' SAY THAT AS A MATTER OF FACT!”

	His outburst rattled the window and startled Aoi.		His outburst rattled the window and startled Aoi.
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	He held his tears, but still desired to sit beside Hikaru for a while longer. His complex feelings toward Hikaru held both empathy and trust, and he tried to articulate what he felt.		He held his tears, but still desired to sit beside Hikaru for a while longer. His complex feelings toward Hikaru held both empathy and trust, and he tried to articulate what he felt.

	~~“…O~~-oi, didn’t I say…that flowers wilt easily and aren’t edible before…they can’t be used for anything…?”		“…H-Hey, didn’t I say…that flowers wilt easily and aren’t edible before…they can’t be used for anything…?”

	''<span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Yeah. We agreed to go on a picnic too.”</span>''		''<span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“Yeah. We agreed to go on a picnic too.”</span>''

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2013-08-20T02:46:52Z

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Teh Ping at 03:12, 10 August 2013

2013-08-10T03:12:33Z

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	Aoi folded her arms and muttered.		Aoi folded her arms and muttered.

			“That's a fact anyway…I hated Hikaru most on this world. He angers me all the time, and he lies to me most. There's no other guy worse than him. He's a completely rotten man inside despite his exquisite appearance on the outside.”

			“WHAT ARE YOU SAYING!?”

	Aoi disparaging Hikaru troubled Koremitsu, and it reminded him of his unanswered prayers, and of the emotions he had experienced as a child: pain and despair. These things were wrenched from deep within his heart, and the blood rushed to his head; his veins were throbbing with rage which rose from far below his belly.		Aoi disparaging Hikaru troubled Koremitsu, and it reminded him of his unanswered prayers, and of the emotions he had experienced as a child: pain and despair. These things were wrenched from deep within his heart, and the blood rushed to his head; his veins were throbbing with rage which rose from far below his belly.

Teh Ping at 01:25, 10 August 2013

2013-08-10T01:25:00Z

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	Hikaru’s voice slightly weakened.		Hikaru’s voice slightly weakened.

	“So my voice really can’t reach Miss Aoi’s ears at all…if you hear me, even if it’s a little bit, please put a finger to your lips to indicate so.”		''<span style="font-family: Times New Roman;">“So my voice really can’t reach Miss Aoi’s ears at all…if you hear me, even if it’s a little bit, please put a finger to your lips to indicate so.”</span>''

	''Damn…what’s with that expression?''		''Damn…what’s with that expression?''

128.189.170.242: Again, I removed a basically repeated part. Please revert if incorrect.

2013-08-03T07:40:53Z

Again, I removed a basically repeated part. Please revert if incorrect.

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	At first, she went overboard with how unrealistic and sickeningly sweet the stories were, “This kind of thing definitely won’t exist in reality! There’s no way such men will say such cliché lines here.” She would comment about them herself as she blushed and rolled around on the chair. As the days passed, her writing skills improved.		At first, she went overboard with how unrealistic and sickeningly sweet the stories were, “This kind of thing definitely won’t exist in reality! There’s no way such men will say such cliché lines here.” She would comment about them herself as she blushed and rolled around on the chair. As the days passed, her writing skills improved.

	To begin with, her stories were excessively sweet. “This kind of thing would never actually happen! There’s no way men would say such cliché lines.” She would expound such things to herself as she blushed and rolled about on her chair

	The numbers of readers increased with time, and at every update she would receive responses like, “This is really interesting.” and “Natsuno’s love story’s really touching.” Such responses filled Honoka with joy, so she would submit stories with greater frequency.		The numbers of readers increased with time, and at every update she would receive responses like, “This is really interesting.” and “Natsuno’s love story’s really touching.” Such responses filled Honoka with joy, so she would submit stories with greater frequency.

128.189.170.242: The part removed is basically the same as the one below it. I don't see story wise why it would be repeated, so I'm just removing one of the two. Please revert if incorrect.

2013-08-01T20:42:57Z

The part removed is basically the same as the one below it. I don't see story wise why it would be repeated, so I'm just removing one of the two. Please revert if incorrect.

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	To begin with, her stories were excessively sweet. “This kind of thing would never actually happen! There’s no way men would say such cliché lines.” She would expound such things to herself as she blushed and rolled about on her chair		To begin with, her stories were excessively sweet. “This kind of thing would never actually happen! There’s no way men would say such cliché lines.” She would expound such things to herself as she blushed and rolled about on her chair

	The number of readers started to increase, and whenever there was an update, she got responses like, “This is really interesting.” And “Natsuno’s love story is really touching.” Such responses made her really happy, and increased the frequency of her updates.

	The numbers of readers increased with time, and at every update she would receive responses like, “This is really interesting.” and “Natsuno’s love story’s really touching.” Such responses filled Honoka with joy, so she would submit stories with greater frequency.		The numbers of readers increased with time, and at every update she would receive responses like, “This is really interesting.” and “Natsuno’s love story’s really touching.” Such responses filled Honoka with joy, so she would submit stories with greater frequency.

Teh Ping at 01:56, 18 July 2013

2013-07-18T01:56:16Z

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	Honoka gave the signal, and Koremitsu walked out.		Honoka gave the signal, and Koremitsu walked out.

	''~~[[User:Teh Ping\|Teh Ping]] ([[User talk:Teh Ping\|talk]]) 02:17, 14 July 2013 (CDT)~~Why must you put your hands in your pockets!? You’re practically a delinquent now!''		''<nowiki>~~</nowiki>Why must you put your hands in your pockets!? You’re practically a delinquent now!''

	Koremitsu planned to, with his hands in his pockets, ‘accidentally’ drop his student notebook.		Koremitsu planned to, with his hands in his pockets, ‘accidentally’ drop his student notebook.
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	“Oi, my new notebook has a footprint on it now.”		“Oi, my new notebook has a footprint on it now.”

	“~~[[User:Teh Ping\|Teh Ping]] ([[User talk:Teh Ping\|talk]])~~, next!”		“<nowiki>~~</nowiki>, next!”

Teh Ping at 12:33, 16 July 2013

2013-07-16T12:33:13Z

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