Hirano and Kagiura:Volume 1 Chapter 1 - Revision history

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Chapter 1: For the First Time (April to June)

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	Riding the train on an unfamiliar route, even the rumbling of the carriage feels new and refreshing.		Riding the train on an unfamiliar route, even the rumbling of the carriage feels new and refreshing.

	~~Amongst~~ all his peers in middle school, only one person chose to stay in a dormitory despite living within the prefecture — and that was Kagiura Akira.		Almostt all his peers in middle school, only one person chose to stay in a dormitory despite living within the prefecture — and that was Kagiura Akira.

	Though he lived in the same prefecture, it still took him over two hours to commute to and from school. As someone who had to go for morning practice everyday, he wasn’t left with much other choice.		Though he lived in the same prefecture, it still took him over two hours to commute to and from school. As someone who had to go for morning practice everyday, he wasn’t left with much other choice.
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	As a growing teenager, Kagiura’s body was always in need of more recharging, so he could fall asleep at the snap of a finger. During his middle school years, he dozed off in class so often that his teacher gave up trying to call him out on it.		As a growing teenager, Kagiura’s body was always in need of more recharging, so he could fall asleep at the snap of a finger. During his middle school years, he dozed off in class so often that his teacher gave up trying to call him out on it.

	~~“Oi~~, hey you. Wake up, damn it.”		“hey, hey you. Wake up, damn it.”

	He raised his head ever so slightly, wiggling his neck uncomfortable trying to get back to sleep.		He raised his head ever so slightly, wiggling his neck uncomfortable trying to get back to sleep.
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	Usually, Hirano would just hand it over, but after thinking about it, this time around he would dictate some terms for lending his notes.		Usually, Hirano would just hand it over, but after thinking about it, this time around he would dictate some terms for lending his notes.

	“Sure, but in return let ~~met~~ take a look at your Math notes.”		“Sure, but in return let me take a look at your Math notes.”

	As someone who was, more or less, never absent from class, Hirano never needed to copy notes from someone afterwards. Cause of that, it was hard for Hirano to come up with countermeasures for Kagiura’s predicament.		As someone who was, more or less, never absent from class, Hirano never needed to copy notes from someone afterwards. Cause of that, it was hard for Hirano to come up with countermeasures for Kagiura’s predicament.
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	==== Translator's Notes and References ====		==== Translator's Notes and References ====
	In case it wasn't clear, I am differentiating between thoughts and dialogue using the following: “— Thoughts" and "Dialogue". So if it starts with '—', it's a thought.		In case it wasn't clear, I am differentiating between thoughts and dialogue using the following: “— Thoughts" and "Dialogue". So if it starts with '—', it's a thought.

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2021-05-27T18:32:30Z

Chapter 1: For the First Time (April to June)

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	He knew that if he hesitated for just a while longer, Hirano would definitely hear him out, but Kagiura wanted to resist intentionally.		He knew that if he hesitated for just a while longer, Hirano would definitely hear him out, but Kagiura wanted to resist intentionally.

	“— I may not be old or mature enough to be considered a man yet, but I did move to this dorm in the hopes of living independently. Being hung up, frustrated, and depressed from my pride of not getting the recognition that I wanted from my club — I don’t want to confide these ~~trouble~~ with someone like Hirano who doesn’t do club activities.”		“— I may not be old or mature enough to be considered a man yet, but I did move to this dorm in the hopes of living independently. Being hung up, frustrated, and depressed from my pride of not getting the recognition that I wanted from my club — I don’t want to confide these troubles with someone like Hirano who doesn’t do club activities.”

	“— My class mates, my club mates, and even my senpai, I don’t want to talk about this with anyone.”		“— My class mates, my club mates, and even my senpai, I don’t want to talk about this with anyone.”
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	Even more than his hunger, Kagiura’s urge to exercise was being pent up within him.		Even more than his hunger, Kagiura’s urge to exercise was being pent up within him.

	“— I hadn’t noticed it, since I slept up to the last possible minute yesterday. But when waking up early, my muscle memory tells me that i need to exercise. Somewhere in my body is a signal that’s calling out to me. I can’t hold it in anymore, I need to get out and exercise.”		“— I hadn’t noticed it, since I slept up to the last possible minute yesterday. But when waking up early, my muscle memory tells me that I need to exercise. Somewhere in my body is a signal that’s calling out to me. I can’t hold it in anymore, I need to get out and exercise.”

	“Even if you say so, it’s raining outside y’know.”		“Even if you say so, it’s raining outside y’know.”
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	“Since we’re stuck on the topic of food — Why don’t we go grab breakfast?”		“Since we’re stuck on the topic of food — Why don’t we go grab breakfast?”

	“— I’m so hungry…”, thought Hirano ~~has~~ he put on his slippers and patted his belly.		“— I’m so hungry…”, thought Hirano as he put on his slippers and patted his belly.

	The room’s entrance was narrow, and as Hirano was fumbling around, Kagiura wanted to reach out and push him. But he stopped himself just short.		The room’s entrance was narrow, and as Hirano was fumbling around, Kagiura wanted to reach out and push him. But he stopped himself just short.

127.0.0.1: /* Chapter 1: For the First Time (April to June) */

2021-05-27T18:20:57Z

Chapter 1: For the First Time (April to June)

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	The novelty of seeing Hirano’s full name written besides a first-year class number helped to wash the drowsiness away. “— His seat number was in the second half of the class.”		The novelty of seeing Hirano’s full name written besides a first-year class number helped to wash the drowsiness away. “— His seat number was in the second half of the class.”

	As Kagiura picked up the papers, he brushed against the warmth of Hirano’s fingers. ~~“Ah~~, I wonder if he’s sleepy too?”, realized Kagiura.		As Kagiura picked up the papers, he brushed against the warmth of Hirano’s fingers.

			“— Ah, I wonder if he’s sleepy too?”, realized Kagiura.

	Turning around and looking up at him, Kagiura realized that Hirano’s eyes looked kinda damp. “— I wonder if he yawned?”		Turning around and looking up at him, Kagiura realized that Hirano’s eyes looked kinda damp. “— I wonder if he yawned?”

127.0.0.1: /* Chapter 1: For the First Time (April to June) */

2021-05-27T17:45:30Z

Chapter 1: For the First Time (April to June)

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	Amongst all his peers in middle school, only one person chose to stay in a dormitory despite living within the prefecture — and that was Kagiura Akira.		Amongst all his peers in middle school, only one person chose to stay in a dormitory despite living within the prefecture — and that was Kagiura Akira.

	Though he lived in the same prefecture, it still took him over two hours to commute to and ~~fro~~ school. As someone who had to go for morning practice everyday, he wasn’t left with much other choice.		Though he lived in the same prefecture, it still took him over two hours to commute to and from school. As someone who had to go for morning practice everyday, he wasn’t left with much other choice.

	On the 4th of April, just before the entrance ceremony, students were allowed to move into the dorm and Kagiura wasted no time at all.		On the 4th of April, just before the entrance ceremony, students were allowed to move into the dorm and Kagiura wasted no time at all.
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	“— Just the other day, he saw me with Sasaki in school. The moment he got back, he asked me who I was with. I told him that Sasaki was bad at studying in reply, and that he needed to borrow my notes. He just looked at me and scowled in return.”		“— Just the other day, he saw me with Sasaki in school. The moment he got back, he asked me who I was with. I told him that Sasaki was bad at studying in reply, and that he needed to borrow my notes. He just looked at me and scowled in return.”

	“…I’m also bad at ~~it”~~		“…I’m also bad at it.”

	At that moment, Kagiura’s crestfallen expression gave rise to a sense of unease within Hirano.		At that moment, Kagiura’s crestfallen expression gave rise to a sense of unease within Hirano.
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	“Kagiura-kun is not that kind of guy! He wouldn’t take it just lying down.”		“Kagiura-kun is not that kind of guy! He wouldn’t take it just lying down.”

	“— That guy is just way too earnest for that”, thought Hirano as he suddenly threw the Math notes back at Sasaki, who caught it with a dumbfounded look on his face. “— I don’t really understand why I reacted that way ~~either”~~		“— That guy is just way too earnest for that”, thought Hirano as he suddenly threw the Math notes back at Sasaki, who caught it with a dumbfounded look on his face. “— I don’t really understand why I reacted that way either.”

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2021-05-27T17:33:43Z

Chapter 1: For the First Time (April to June)

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	Kagiura blinked his eyes, trying to clear the drowsiness from his vision, as Hirano with a parka over his t-shirt began to come into focus.		Kagiura blinked his eyes, trying to clear the drowsiness from his vision, as Hirano with a parka over his t-shirt began to come into focus.

	“It’s about time for ~~linch~~, wanna join me?”		“It’s about time for lunch, wanna join me?”

	“Yea!”		“Yea!”
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	The second years typically get new assignments for the new school year, but ~~HIrano~~ just so happened to get assigned the same room as his first year. Even so, with a new roommate coming in, it was only natural to give the room a thorough top to bottom clean.		The second years typically get new assignments for the new school year, but Hirano just so happened to get assigned the same room as his first year. Even so, with a new roommate coming in, it was only natural to give the room a thorough top to bottom clean.

	A day after Hirano returned to the dorms, on the 1st of April, he learnt that Kagiura would be joining the dorm. So Hirano began to earnestly prepare for the arrival of his new roommate.		A day after Hirano returned to the dorms, on the 1st of April, he learnt that Kagiura would be joining the dorm. So Hirano began to earnestly prepare for the arrival of his new roommate.

Aozora Manami: /* Chapter 1: For The First Time (April to June) */

2021-04-19T07:21:13Z

Chapter 1: For The First Time (April to June)

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	== Chapter 1: In the ~~Beginning~~ (April to June) ==		== Chapter 1: For the First Time (April to June) ==
	[[~~File~~:~~Hirano and Kagiura~~.~~jpg~~\|thumb\|~~Volume~~ 1 Cover]]		[[Image:Hk_v1_01_cover.png\|thumb\|Chapter 1 Cover]]
	Riding the train on an unfamiliar route, even the rumbling of the carriage feels new and refreshing.		Riding the train on an unfamiliar route, even the rumbling of the carriage feels new and refreshing.

Aozora Manami: /* Translator's Notes and References */

2021-04-12T08:37:01Z

Translator's Notes and References

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	==== Translator's Notes and References ====		==== Translator's Notes and References ====
			In case it wasn't clear, I am differentiating between thoughts and dialogue using the following: “— Thoughts" and "Dialogue". So if it starts with '—', it's a thought.

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