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	She also felt like she had messed up a lot herself.		She also felt like she had messed up a lot herself.

	Making herself his knight would be one-sided thing if he had forgotten their promise and that made her afraid to find out if he really had forgotten, so she had been unable to ask him.		Making herself his knight would be a one-sided thing if he had forgotten their promise and that made her afraid to find out if he really had forgotten, so she had been unable to ask him.

	“But given the times, I get the feeling things might just continue on like this without anything changing.”		“But given the times, I get the feeling things might just continue on like this without anything changing.”
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	“I won’t say what caused it, but despite K.P.A. Italia’s temporary prosperity, they have been tossed about by the economic currents ever since the Reformation and the Age of Exploration. …They have Testamenta Arma and a Logismoi Óplo, but their economic foundation has grown relatively weak and the neighboring M.H.R.R. Catholics allying with P.A. Oda has to be an absolute nightmare for them. …Do you know what they’re going to do now?”		“I won’t say what caused it, but despite K.P.A. Italia’s temporary prosperity, they have been tossed about by the economic currents ever since the Reformation and the Age of Exploration. …They have Testamenta Arma and a Logismoi Óplo, but their economic foundation has grown relatively weak and the neighboring M.H.R.R. Catholics allying with P.A. Oda has to be an absolute nightmare for them. …Do you know what they’re going to do now?”

	“Musashi” narrowed her eyes. After a while, she looked to the sky beyond Sakai. ~~Here~~ gaze turned towards the Tanigawa Castle and Noh Stage that had to exist beyond the stealth barrier.		“Musashi” narrowed her eyes. After a while, she looked to the sky beyond Sakai. Her gaze turned towards the Tanigawa Castle and Noh Stage that had to exist beyond the stealth barrier.

	“If they intervene and determine they cannot settle the problem, will they destroy everything? Will they use the Far East as an example to show the other nations how powerful they are? Over.”		“If they intervene and determine they cannot settle the problem, will they destroy everything? Will they use the Far East as an example to show the other nations how powerful they are? Over.”

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2015-12-01T14:09:59Z

Prologue: The Three Girls of the Asama Shrine: Typos and Óplo standardization

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	“Eh? But that was only about 70%?”		“Eh? But that was only about 70%?”

	The third years looked shocked, but Asama and Kimi looked more understanding. That may have been a sign of what ~~mad~~ them worthwhile friends.		The third years looked shocked, but Asama and Kimi looked more understanding. That may have been a sign of what made them worthwhile friends.

	At any rate, she looked back to the container’s sign frame.		At any rate, she looked back to the container’s sign frame.
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	Innocentius continued from there.		Innocentius continued from there.

	“Honestly, I doubt those uncivilized heathens ~~has~~ thought about or worried about any of this. To be ‘people’ is to be adults. Don’t you think? Hm?”		“Honestly, I doubt those uncivilized heathens have thought about or worried about any of this. To be ‘people’ is to be adults. Don’t you think? Hm?”

	“Far Eastern students have to retire after age eighteen, so I am not sure that is entirely their fault, former boy.”		“Far Eastern students have to retire after age eighteen, so I am not sure that is entirely their fault, former boy.”
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	“It has three heads. What do you call that? There’s that three-headed wolf in Greek mythology called…oh, right! I know! Youkai Dreimara!!”		“It has three heads. What do you call that? There’s that three-headed wolf in Greek mythology called…oh, right! I know! Youkai Dreimara!!”

	“Stop mixing Far Eastern, M.H.R.R., and Indian terms, Kimi. And if it was Mara-sama, it wouldn’t be heads. It would have be pe-…”		“Stop mixing Far Eastern, M.H.R.R., and Indian terms, Kimi. And if it was Mara-sama, it wouldn’t be heads. It would have been pe-…”

	After reaching that point in her explanation, Asama realized what she was saying.		After reaching that point in her explanation, Asama realized what she was saying.
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	As “Musashi” tilted her head, Sakai took a sip from the teacup.		As “Musashi” tilted her head, Sakai took a sip from the teacup.

	“I won’t say what caused it, but despite K.P.A. Italia’s temporary prosperity, they have been tossed about by the economic currents ever since the Reformation and the Age of Exploration. …They have Testamenta Arma and a Logismoi ~~Oplo~~, but their economic foundation has grown relatively weak and the neighboring M.H.R.R. Catholics allying with P.A. Oda has to be an absolute nightmare for them. …Do you know what they’re going to do now?”		“I won’t say what caused it, but despite K.P.A. Italia’s temporary prosperity, they have been tossed about by the economic currents ever since the Reformation and the Age of Exploration. …They have Testamenta Arma and a Logismoi Óplo, but their economic foundation has grown relatively weak and the neighboring M.H.R.R. Catholics allying with P.A. Oda has to be an absolute nightmare for them. …Do you know what they’re going to do now?”

	“Musashi” narrowed her eyes. After a while, she looked to the sky beyond Sakai. Here gaze turned towards the Tanigawa Castle and Noh Stage that had to exist beyond the stealth barrier.		“Musashi” narrowed her eyes. After a while, she looked to the sky beyond Sakai. Here gaze turned towards the Tanigawa Castle and Noh Stage that had to exist beyond the stealth barrier.