86.52.14.214: Fixed some spelling errors.

2017-07-17T23:44:57Z

Fixed some spelling errors.

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	“No, no. That wasn’t what I meant, ‘Musashi’-san. If you check the records, it will show this seasonal tradition has been around since the academy was made 30 years ago.”		“No, no. That wasn’t what I meant, ‘Musashi’-san. If you check the records, it will show this seasonal tradition has been around since the academy was made 30 years ago.”

	“The records…?” “Musashi” tilted her head. And a moment later, “I have retrieved the data. …I have confirmed that this seasonal tradition was established even before 30 years go. Over.”		“The records…?” “Musashi” tilted her head. And a moment later, “I have retrieved the data. …I have confirmed that this seasonal tradition was established even before 30 years ago. Over.”

	“Really? Before there was an academy?”		“Really? Before there was an academy?”
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	That was what Naruze’s line meant. When Asama and Mitotsudaira realized that, they exchanged a glance. Asama spoke quietly so the rest of the class would not hear.		That was what Naruze’s line meant. When Asama and Mitotsudaira realized that, they exchanged a glance. Asama spoke quietly so the rest of the class would not hear.

	“Have the three of us ~~every~~ done anything together like that?”		“Have the three of us ever done anything together like that?”

	“There was that folk dance back in sixth grade.”		“There was that folk dance back in sixth grade.”
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	“No, I didn’t know that.” Masazumi smiled a little. “I thought it would be best to learn about the school festivals and events once I got here.”		“No, I didn’t know that.” Masazumi smiled a little. “I thought it would be best to learn about the school festivals and events once I got here.”

	“Oh, so you’re a ~~hand’s~~-on kind of learner.”		“Oh, so you’re a hands-on kind of learner.”

	“I’m not so sure. I might just be a procrastinator.”		“I’m not so sure. I might just be a procrastinator.”
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	After all, her mother had disappeared due to one of the mysterious phenomena in Mikawa. That was what had led to her coming to Musashi, but it was also why she had trouble feeling proud of her hometown after arriving here.		After all, her mother had disappeared due to one of the mysterious phenomena in Mikawa. That was what had led to her coming to Musashi, but it was also why she had trouble feeling proud of her hometown after arriving here.

	…''But while it may be safer ~~her~~, it’s really abnormal.		…''But while it may be safer here, it’s really abnormal.

	She was sometimes asked to tell stories from her life back at Mikawa, but whenever she did they would only respond with some light agreement and understanding: “Sounds like Mikawa has its own troubles.”		She was sometimes asked to tell stories from her life back at Mikawa, but whenever she did they would only respond with some light agreement and understanding: “Sounds like Mikawa has its own troubles.”
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	…''Is this any time to be loving on my Cerberus!?		…''Is this any time to be loving on my Cerberus!?

	That said, the three-dimensional ~~mases~~ in front of her eyes were far too monochrome. She was just barely holding the cloth in place so it did not come off, but that applied extra pressure which caused a part (or rather, two parts) of Kimi’s body to change shape.		That said, the three-dimensional masses in front of her eyes were far too monochrome. She was just barely holding the cloth in place so it did not come off, but that applied extra pressure which caused a part (or rather, two parts) of Kimi’s body to change shape.

	They were entirely deserving of certain choice sound effects.		They were entirely deserving of certain choice sound effects.

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