Horizon:Kimitoasamade 3B Chapter 5 - Revision history

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2017-09-03T01:15:17Z

Chapter 5: Evictors in a Place of Accumulation

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	She was forcing them out of the way, sending them flying, and kicking them into the air to clear a path. ~~Asa~~ result, her path was drawn out by scattering containers.		She was forcing them out of the way, sending them flying, and kicking them into the air to clear a path. As a result, her path was drawn out by scattering containers.

	It was definitely flashy. Adele thought it was okay for her to destroy the containers, but…		It was definitely flashy. Adele thought it was okay for her to destroy the containers, but…

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2017-07-27T00:35:01Z

One error fixed, one error attempted fixed.

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	“So one of the transport ships evacuated to Okutama was actually already loaded with smuggled porn games?”		“So one of the transport ships evacuated to Okutama was actually already loaded with smuggled porn games?”

	“Right, right. And by the time those idiots act as a diversion and draw the firefight over this way, all the games been loaded in the warehouses already. And since the diversion heads to Okutama and is wiped out before arriving, no one will think of checking the warehouses here. At best, you might think they hid something on the way to Okutama.”		“Right, right. And by the time those idiots act as a diversion and draw the firefight over this way, all the games have been loaded in the warehouses already. And since the diversion heads to Okutama and is wiped out before arriving, no one will think of checking the warehouses here. At best, you might think they hid something on the way to Okutama.”

	“Then,” said Adele as she ran. “What makes you say those white things must be mysterious phenomena and not people?”		“Then,” said Adele as she ran. “What makes you say those white things must be mysterious phenomena and not people?”
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	Naito and Naruze had caught up.		Naito and Naruze had caught up.

	They moved their wings, grabbed a chain dangling from the ceiling, and dropped down. They stepped on a surviving container behind Mitotsudaira and ~~the~~ then hopped to the floor.		They moved their wings, grabbed a chain dangling from the ceiling, and dropped down. They stepped on a surviving container behind Mitotsudaira and then hopped to the floor.

	They went to a lot of effort in that descent, but they must have felt the need for caution in this darkness.		They went to a lot of effort in that descent, but they must have felt the need for caution in this darkness.

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2017-07-17T02:41:10Z

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