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	On the far right of the sleeping area, Asama slept on her back.		On the far right of the sleeping area, Asama slept on her back.

	Her arms were spread out and ~~left~~ her chest defenseless in a way that showed she had fallen asleep without meaning to.		Her arms were spread out and her chest defenseless in a way that showed she had fallen asleep without meaning to.

	Hanami had floated over her head earlier. Asama had asked her to continue monitoring the Tama ether pathways, but she must have finished that because she was gone now.		Hanami had floated over her head earlier. Asama had asked her to continue monitoring the Tama ether pathways, but she must have finished that because she was gone now.

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Chapter 13: Hopers in Connected Rooms

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	On the far right of the sleeping area, Asama slept on her back.		On the far right of the sleeping area, Asama slept on her back.

	Her arms were spread out and her chest defenseless in a way that showed she had fallen asleep without meaning to.		Her arms were spread out and left her chest defenseless in a way that showed she had fallen asleep without meaning to.

	Hanami had floated over her head earlier. Asama had asked her to continue monitoring the Tama ether pathways, but she must have finished that because she was gone now.		Hanami had floated over her head earlier. Asama had asked her to continue monitoring the Tama ether pathways, but she must have finished that because she was gone now.

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	“Oh, I’ll help too,” offered Mitotsudaira. “It will be warm milk and something made with soybean flour like usual, right?”		“Oh, I’ll help too,” offered Mitotsudaira. “It will be warm milk and something made with soybean flour like usual, right?”

	“Yes, I think we have some brown sugar syrup, so I was thinking of making soybean ~~flower~~ balls. We can also eat them tomorrow morning.”		“Yes, I think we have some brown sugar syrup, so I was thinking of making soybean flour balls. We can also eat them tomorrow morning.”

	“Heh heh. Why not a nightcap and some summer sausage?”		“Heh heh. Why not a nightcap and some summer sausage?”
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	…''The damage didn’t trigger a chain reaction, so it should be settled quickly.		…''The damage didn’t trigger a chain reaction, so it should be settled quickly.

	As long as the surrounding areas were sealed off and infrastructure was rerouted, the site of the collapse would be no more than a pile of rubble. Gods of war and transport ships with a pallet attached to the bottom would be used to remove all that, so the divine chat showed a short complaint from Naomasa the usual acknowledgement from Noriki.		As long as the surrounding areas were sealed off and infrastructure was rerouted, the site of the collapse would be no more than a pile of rubble. Gods of war and transport ships with a pallet attached to the bottom would be used to remove all that, so the divine chat showed a short complaint from Naomasa and the usual acknowledgement from Noriki.

	Kimi’s brother was watching the transport ships in the sky above and the flow of people who had grown sick of the commotion.		Kimi’s brother was watching the transport ships in the sky above and the flow of people who had grown sick of the commotion.
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	'''Wise Sister:''' “Foolish brother? Where are you now?”		'''Wise Sister:''' “Foolish brother? Where are you now?”

	'''Me:''' “Eh? On top of Musashino’s bridge. The viewing platform has been fully opened up, so all the guys were going to gather here. But Tenzou, Noriki, and Persona-kun went to deal with all this. I called Seijun too, but I got a refusal saying that was ~~all‘my~~ father this’ and ‘my curfew that’.”		'''Me:''' “Eh? On top of Musashino’s bridge. The viewing platform has been fully opened up, so all the guys were going to gather here. But Tenzou, Noriki, and Persona-kun went to deal with all this. I called Seijun too, but I got a refusal saying that was all ‘my father this’ and ‘my curfew that’.”

	''Does my brother think Masazumi is a boy?		''Does my brother think Masazumi is a boy?
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	Hanami had floated over her head earlier. Asama had asked her to continue monitoring the Tama ether pathways, but she must have finished that because she was gone now.		Hanami had floated over her head earlier. Asama had asked her to continue monitoring the Tama ether pathways, but she must have finished that because she was gone now.

	Asama herself had apparently wanted to stay ~~wake~~ even after leaving that job with Hanami. Over and over, she had said they needed to prepare for tomorrow, but she had not lasted. The past few days must have worn her out. The nightcap she had brought with her was still sitting next to her pillow.		Asama herself had apparently wanted to stay awake even after leaving that job with Hanami. Over and over, she had said they needed to prepare for tomorrow, but she had not lasted. The past few days must have worn her out. The nightcap she had brought with her was still sitting next to her pillow.

	…''She didn’t actually drink it, but it’s the perfect image of a drunk.		…''She didn’t actually drink it, but it’s the perfect image of a drunk.