Horizon:Volume 1B Chapter 28 - Revision history

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	She was in doubt while hurrying to pull out the large pieces of wood to save her God of War.		She was in doubt while hurrying to pull out the large pieces of wood to save her God of War.

	“What is this all about! Why did the buildings that should be under protection from my labor ~~didn't~~ get that support from my team...even the floor broke down as well!”		“What is this all about! Why did the buildings that should be under protection from my labor not get that support from my team...even the floor broke down as well!”

	“The answer is easy. —I bought it, and made it a property of mine in regards to this battle.”		“The answer is easy. —I bought it, and made it a property of mine in regards to this battle.”

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	One could almost see that he has stopped its fist in its tracks.		One could almost see that he has stopped its fist in its tracks.

	~~Right now~~, the posture of the God of War was clearly leaning forward, its hips turned. Still, as if it hit an invisible wall, the fist stopped halfway and its arm did not extend fully.		At that moment, the posture of the God of War was clearly leaning forward, its hips turned. Still, as if it hit an invisible wall, the fist stopped halfway and its arm did not extend fully.

	The attack was stopped.		The attack was stopped.

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	The steam and heat mirage Jizuri Suzaku exhumed indicated a single blow by its arm.		The steam and heat mirage Jizuri Suzaku exhumed indicated a single blow by its arm.

	~~Then,~~ anyone in that area could hear a certain sound.		But anyone in that area could hear a certain sound.

	The metallic sound of the strike being blocked. The sound of a wanton fist hitting.		The metallic sound of the strike being blocked. The sound of a wanton fist hitting.
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	At the end of the strike that landed, where the wind made by the fist dies down, there was a single person.		At the end of the strike that landed, where the wind made by the fist dies down, there was a single person.

	Shirojiro. His figure had received the blow. ~~Still,~~		It was Shirojiro. His figure had received the blow, still...

	“...He's unharmed?”		“...He's unharmed?”

	Just like Naomasa on Jizuri Suzaku's shoulder ~~said,~~ frowning her eyebrows, he was indeed unharmed.		Just like Naomasa said on Jizuri Suzaku's shoulder while frowning her eyebrows, he was indeed unharmed.

	At the end of her suspecting glance, Shirojiro, with no apparent wounds, lightly raised both his arms above his head. At the end of those arms, held out in a cross, Suzaku's fist was there, in contact.		At the end of her suspecting glance, Shirojiro, with no apparent wounds, lightly raised both his arms above his head. At the end of those arms, held out in a cross, Suzaku's fist was there, in contact.
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	The attack was stopped.		The attack was stopped.

	~~Impossible, thus while~~ someone was whispering, a new sound could be heard.		While someone was whispering 'Impossible', a new sound could be heard.

	The sound of the God of War regaining its footing and returning the fist that hit empty space.		The sound of the God of War regaining its footing and returning the fist that hit empty space.

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	\| [[Horizon:Volume 1B Chapter_27\|Chapter 27]]		\| [[Horizon:Volume 1B Chapter_27\|Chapter 27]]
	\| [[Horizon:~~Volume_1B_Chapter_29~~\|Chapter 29]]		\| [[Horizon:Volume_1_Chapter_29\|Chapter 29]]
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	“—See here, if we are to see war as an economic activity, the act of going to battle will most likely boil down to money.”		“—See here, if we are to see war as an economic activity, the act of going to battle will most likely boil down to money.”

	With Shirojiro's words, the white fox on his head raised its forelimbs. In response, countless ~~signframes~~ appeared. Making sure of the amount that is displayed, Shirojiro said.		With Shirojiro's words, the white fox on his head raised its forelimbs. In response, countless sign frames appeared. Making sure of the amount that is displayed, Shirojiro said.

	“Sanct, the god I am contracted with, is a commerce god associated with Inari, but gods of commerce hold a certain power towards other gods. That is, —The power to use money in the exchanges between gods.”		“Sanct, the god I am contracted with, is a commerce god associated with Inari, but gods of commerce hold a certain power towards other gods. That is, —The power to use money in the exchanges between gods.”
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	Behind him, over at the Academy's entrance, sat on the floor was a group of people.		Behind him, over at the Academy's entrance, sat on the floor was a group of people.

	Those people, with torii-type ~~signframes~~ in front of their faces, were...		Those people, with torii-type sign frames in front of their faces, were...

	“The vice commander of the guard unit, as well as 150 other people. —I am ‘renting’ the power of the guard unit.”		“The vice commander of the guard unit, as well as 150 other people. —I am ‘renting’ the power of the guard unit.”
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	“We have borrowed the ‘manpower’ of the guard unit as a single bundle on an hourly pay. The members themselves have obtained the protection of their labour god, so the rest is easy. Transferring money over to Sanct's shrine, we are able to buy the manpower of the guard unit from the labour god's shrine using ours as an intermediate. Making intermediary transactions for the protection of gods outside the contract would probably go the same way.”		“We have borrowed the ‘manpower’ of the guard unit as a single bundle on an hourly pay. The members themselves have obtained the protection of their labour god, so the rest is easy. Transferring money over to Sanct's shrine, we are able to buy the manpower of the guard unit from the labour god's shrine using ours as an intermediate. Making intermediary transactions for the protection of gods outside the contract would probably go the same way.”

	In front of Shirojiro, the ~~signframe~~ displayed currency amounts.		In front of Shirojiro, the sign frame displayed currency amounts.

	“Under the shrine's assessment, we will have to pay five times the usual hourly wage of the guard unit to obtain their manpower. The wage itself will be 5000 Yen per hour, but because of the intermediary fee we'll have to pay double; ten thousand yen. Borrowing the power of 150 people will cost 1,500,000 Yen per hour. —Shiro-kun, use it well, alright? Because of the sudden transaction, this will come out of your pocket money after all.”		“Under the shrine's assessment, we will have to pay five times the usual hourly wage of the guard unit to obtain their manpower. The wage itself will be 5000 Yen per hour, but because of the intermediary fee we'll have to pay double; ten thousand yen. Borrowing the power of 150 people will cost 1,500,000 Yen per hour. —Shiro-kun, use it well, alright? Because of the sudden transaction, this will come out of your pocket money after all.”
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	His fists, adorned in a torii-type crest, continued to exchange blows with the God of War, and his legs accelerated further.		His fists, adorned in a torii-type crest, continued to exchange blows with the God of War, and his legs accelerated further.
	Clinging onto his shoulders, the white fox displayed dozens of torii-type ~~signframes~~ from its tail, only for them to break and disappear.		Clinging onto his shoulders, the white fox displayed dozens of torii-type sign frames from its tail, only for them to break and disappear.

	From one of them, a voice rose.		From one of them, a voice rose.
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	Slightly behind them, Heidi and Toori were also there.		Slightly behind them, Heidi and Toori were also there.

	Heidi was standing, interacting with a number of ~~signframes~~, while Toori was seated on the floor.		Heidi was standing, interacting with a number of sign frames, while Toori was seated on the floor.

	Then, without notice, Heidi began to speak to no one in particular.		Then, without notice, Heidi began to speak to no one in particular.
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	“No, Toori-kun, you must not praise him that much!”		“No, Toori-kun, you must not praise him that much!”

	Heidi was wriggling with hands to her cheeks, but listening to the metallic sounds of conflict in the distance, she lowered her eyebrows. Then, pulling out on of her own ~~signframes~~ she said.		Heidi was wriggling with hands to her cheeks, but listening to the metallic sounds of conflict in the distance, she lowered her eyebrows. Then, pulling out on of her own sign frames she said.

	“They may say a lot about him, but Shiro-kun's super dirty concerning by birthday, you know?”		“They may say a lot about him, but Shiro-kun's super dirty concerning by birthday, you know?”
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	“He always stops by the living room after work, turns his head to make sure I'm with him when we're walking at times, listens to my problems, and a lot of other things, ...He's just plain super dirty to me. He's always so eager to talk where money is involved, but he never says a word about me. Still...”		“He always stops by the living room after work, turns his head to make sure I'm with him when we're walking at times, listens to my problems, and a lot of other things, ...He's just plain super dirty to me. He's always so eager to talk where money is involved, but he never says a word about me. Still...”

	Heidi displayed something on her ~~signframe~~. It looked like a map of a part of the left ship of Musashi, the place where Shirojiro is fighting. Processing that image by writing rows of characters, Heidi...		Heidi displayed something on her sign frame. It looked like a map of a part of the left ship of Musashi, the place where Shirojiro is fighting. Processing that image by writing rows of characters, Heidi...

	“Even I'm super dirty towards Shiro-kun, you know?”		“Even I'm super dirty towards Shiro-kun, you know?”

	With a smile, she sent her input data on the ~~signframe~~.		With a smile, she sent her input data on the sign frame.


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	Still, it broke off and sank.		Still, it broke off and sank.

	The reason it could was visible in front of her. On the ~~signframe~~ displayed in front of Shirojiro's face, the map of the neigbourhood they are in was displayed.		The reason it could was visible in front of her. On the sign frame displayed in front of Shirojiro's face, the map of the neigbourhood they are in was displayed.

	''...That is—''		''...That is—''
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	“For Musashi to collect money, it must continue to fly without problems. To that extent, the work if the engineering club will become essential. In other words, without the club, money will not come in, and for people like us, it will be as if all our weapons are lost. That's why —You're one of us, Naomasa.”		“For Musashi to collect money, it must continue to fly without problems. To that extent, the work if the engineering club will become essential. In other words, without the club, money will not come in, and for people like us, it will be as if all our weapons are lost. That's why —You're one of us, Naomasa.”

	Shirojiro then opened up a ~~signframe~~. To the reflection of Heidi's relieved face in the screen, he spoke.		Shirojiro then opened up a sign frame. To the reflection of Heidi's relieved face in the screen, he spoke.

	“Heidi. —Get the people around to help the God of War up, but keep the costs down.”		“Heidi. —Get the people around to help the God of War up, but keep the costs down.”

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	Instead, Naomasa continued looking at both the God of War's stopped fist and Shirojiro's face.		Instead, Naomasa continued looking at both the God of War's stopped fist and Shirojiro's face.

	“What kind of ~~Ability~~ was that?”		“What kind of spell was that?”

	“Hmm, you could say that it is ~~an Ability~~. It's really something more simple...”		“Hmm, you could say that it is a spell. It's really something more simple...”

	Shirojiro, placing the white fox on his head, said thus in a straightforward manner.		Shirojiro, placing the white fox on his head, said thus in a straightforward manner.
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	Those people, with torii-type signframes in front of their faces, were...		Those people, with torii-type signframes in front of their faces, were...

	“The vice commander of the ~~Defense Force~~, as well as 150 other people. —I am -renting- the power of the ~~Defense Force~~.”		“The vice commander of the guard unit, as well as 150 other people. —I am -renting- the power of the guard unit.”

	The vice commander spoke, and the other members nodded; all of them closed their eyes.		The vice commander spoke, and the other members nodded; all of them closed their eyes.
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	However, Heidi, looking at them from in front of the entrance, let out a voice in their stead. Lightly raising her eyebrows, she opened her mouth.		However, Heidi, looking at them from in front of the entrance, let out a voice in their stead. Lightly raising her eyebrows, she opened her mouth.

	“We have borrowed the -manpower- of the ~~Defense force~~ as a single bundle on an hourly pay. The members themselves have obtained the protection of their labour god, so the rest is easy. Transferring money over to Sanct's shrine, we are able to buy the manpower of the ~~Defense force~~ from the labour god's shrine using ours as an intermediate. Making intermediary transactions for the protection of gods outside the contract would probably go the same way.”		“We have borrowed the -manpower- of the guard unit as a single bundle on an hourly pay. The members themselves have obtained the protection of their labour god, so the rest is easy. Transferring money over to Sanct's shrine, we are able to buy the manpower of the guard unit from the labour god's shrine using ours as an intermediate. Making intermediary transactions for the protection of gods outside the contract would probably go the same way.”

	In front of Shirojiro, the signframe displayed currency amounts.		In front of Shirojiro, the signframe displayed currency amounts.

	“Under the shrine's assessment, we will have to pay five times the usual hourly wage of the ~~Defense Force~~ to obtain their manpower. The wage itself will be 5000 Yen per hour, but because of the intermediary fee we'll have to pay double; ten thousand yen. Borrowing the power of 150 people will cost 1,500,000 Yen per hour. —Shiro-kun, use it well, alright? Because of the sudden transaction, this will come out of your pocket money after all.”		“Under the shrine's assessment, we will have to pay five times the usual hourly wage of the guard unit to obtain their manpower. The wage itself will be 5000 Yen per hour, but because of the intermediary fee we'll have to pay double; ten thousand yen. Borrowing the power of 150 people will cost 1,500,000 Yen per hour. —Shiro-kun, use it well, alright? Because of the sudden transaction, this will come out of your pocket money after all.”

	“Can we afford all that?”		“Can we afford all that?”

	“Hmm, I'll just have the ~~Defense Force~~ cut out our receipt and process it through the miscellaneous expenses of the Student Council's budget, just to be safe.”		“Hmm, I'll just have the guard unit cut out our receipt and process it through the miscellaneous expenses of the Student Council's budget, just to be safe.”

	~~“Jud~~. Please also request for half of the payment to be from the Chancellor's Officers budget.”		“Judge. Please also request for half of the payment to be from the Chancellor's Officers budget.”

	Shirojiro looked at the arms he raised and then turned to face Naomasa.		Shirojiro looked at the arms he raised and then turned to face Naomasa.

	“Right now, —I am able to concentrate the strength of 150 people under the ~~Defense Force~~ into one point. In terms of weight, with 70 kilograms per person, about 15 tonnes, huh. It'll be enough against your 10-tonne class heavy God of War.”		“Right now, —I am able to concentrate the strength of 150 people under the guard unit into one point. In terms of weight, with 70 kilograms per person, about 15 tonnes, huh. It'll be enough against your 10-tonne class heavy God of War.”

	With those words, several long, armour-type torii-shaped crests appeared on both his arms and legs.		With those words, several long, armour-type torii-shaped crests appeared on both his arms and legs.
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	After a few thoughts, Sanyou turned her head down thinking she was really worried.		After a few thoughts, Sanyou turned her head down thinking she was really worried.

	~~“Jud~~. ...Makiko-senpai, are you not? Is your trust in them to that extent?”		“Judge. ...Makiko-senpai, are you not? Is your trust in them to that extent?”

	“Hmm, I wonder how I should say this...”		“Hmm, I wonder how I should say this...”
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	“Makiko-senpai, do you think we will become at total war with the Testament Union?”		“Makiko-senpai, do you think we will become at total war with the Testament Union?”

	~~“Jud~~. The Union, in my opinion, will eventually mobilize its forces to conquer the whole of the Far East after all.”		“Judge. The Union, in my opinion, will eventually mobilize its forces to conquer the whole of the Far East after all.”

	Oriotorai held the cup to her mouth, then let it part. Then, drawing a breath...		Oriotorai held the cup to her mouth, then let it part. Then, drawing a breath...
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	“The princess of Ariadust's suicide, is it? Unreasonable...”		“The princess of Ariadust's suicide, is it? Unreasonable...”

	“The foreign settlements, the provisional rule over in various places, the decision of where Musashi will sail to, the election of people with weak influence for the positions of President and Chancellor~~, ——Everything~~.”		“The foreign settlements, the provisional rule over in various places, the decision of where Musashi will sail to, the election of people with weak influence for the positions of President and Chancellor... —Everything.”

	Saying that, Oriotorai raised her voice and then turned it into a smile.		Saying that, Oriotorai raised her voice and then turned it into a smile.
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	To Sanyou tilting her head in confusion, Oriotorai showed an affirmation.		To Sanyou tilting her head in confusion, Oriotorai showed an affirmation.

	~~“Jud~~, in this warring period, are we not the balancers that allow power and refuge to coexist, I wonder. With people like me, and people like you, either of us with a method to survive; teaching those things to allow everyone to make their own decisions, —Still, so that nothing is lost.”		“Judge, in this warring period, are we not the balancers that allow power and refuge to coexist, I wonder. With people like me, and people like you, either of us with a method to survive; teaching those things to allow everyone to make their own decisions, —Still, so that nothing is lost.”

	''That would have been nice'', Oriotorai smiled bitterly.		''That would have been nice'', Oriotorai smiled bitterly.
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	“Is that so?”		“Is that so?”

	To Masazumi's question, Mitotsudaira answered with a '~~Jud~~'.		To Masazumi's question, Mitotsudaira answered with a 'Judge'.

	However, it was Heidi that continued those words.		However, it was Heidi that continued those words.
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	“Leave it at that. Isn't it bad for you to say what Masa won't?”		“Leave it at that. Isn't it bad for you to say what Masa won't?”

	“Ah, right. ~~Jud~~, —I should apologize to Masa later.”		“Ah, right. Judge, —I should apologize to Masa later.”

	“It's not that bad, you know? You should try saying sorry to me once in a while, instead. How about it?”		“It's not that bad, you know? You should try saying sorry to me once in a while, instead. How about it?”
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	“...It's over, huh.”		“...It's over, huh.”

	''~~Jud~~'', Mitotsudaira affirmed, her shoulders lightly tapped by Heidi. She quickly went over to the stairs.		''Judge'', Mitotsudaira affirmed, her shoulders lightly tapped by Heidi. She quickly went over to the stairs.

	“Hey, get that part over there done first!”		“Hey, get that part over there done first!”
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	Now, thus she prefaced, Mitotsudaira posed a question to everyone by the academy.		Now, thus she prefaced, Mitotsudaira posed a question to everyone by the academy.

	“Who will be the one to make a knight submit to?”		“Who will be the one to make a knight submit to?”

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