Horizon:Volume 1 Chapter 01 - Revision history

Muton: Combining and shifting edits.

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Combining and shifting edits.

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	The corner of the store’s lot. The gutters by the roadside.		The corner of the store’s lot. The gutters by the roadside.

	Because it was connected with the sewage system, wooden lids always covered the gutters. However, when she lifted up the lids a black, round thing around five ~~centimetres~~ across poked out from below.		Because it was connected with the sewage system, wooden lids always covered the gutters. However, when she lifted up the lids a black, round thing around five centimeters across poked out from below.

	Its black figure looked like a clump of fur that had been matted with muddy water.		Its black figure looked like a clump of fur that had been matted with muddy water.
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	This was an area where the sewer pipes twisted. Because each ship of the Musashi was gigantic, the inner components fought an eternal battle attempting to find a way to absorb the deformities of the outer shell.		This was an area where the sewer pipes twisted. Because each ship of the Musashi was gigantic, the inner components fought an eternal battle attempting to find a way to absorb the deformities of the outer shell.

	...The central area is where the most creases took shape. Speaking further, this is the surface level which is the least supported of all the levels. This was the reason there were so many ships where the ~~centre~~ of the surface level was hollowed out.		...The central area is where the most creases took shape. Speaking further, this is the surface level which is the least supported of all the levels. This was the reason there were so many ships where the center of the surface level was hollowed out.

	The black algae creatures wanted their food, the sewage. However because the flow of the sewage had slowed down, stagnated and gotten stuck, someone had to use a brush to force out the stagnation and blockage.		The black algae creatures wanted their food, the sewage. However because the flow of the sewage had slowed down, stagnated and gotten stuck, someone had to use a brush to force out the stagnation and blockage.

Txtracer: many small fixes

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many small fixes

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	'''Study - Musashi'''<ref>To understand this a little better I reccomend reading this post [http://kyoukaisen.tumblr.com/post/11146838125 here]. Credits to Zeroblade.</ref>		'''Study - Musashi'''<ref>To understand this a little better I reccomend reading this post [http://kyoukaisen.tumblr.com/post/11146838125 here]. Credits to Zeroblade.</ref>

	''Toori'': ~~“Sis~~! ~~Sis~~! It may be a little late, but what is Musashi's formation!?”		''Toori'': “Nee-chan! Nee-chan! It may be a little late, but what is Musashi's formation!?”

	''Kimi'': “Fufufu idiot brother, you're always walking around the ship and don't know even that...?! Umm... your intelligent sister was about to use inappropriate language!”		''Kimi'': “Fufufu idiot brother, you're always walking around the ship and don't know even that...?! Umm... your intelligent sister was about to use inappropriate language!”

	''Toori'': “Hey, hey ~~sis~~, don't turn into a heretic and just tell me quickly!”		''Toori'': “Hey, hey Nee-chan, don't turn into a heretic and just tell me quickly!”

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	'''Study - Musashi'''<ref>To understand this a little better I reccomend reading this post [http://kyoukaisen.tumblr.com/post/11146838125 here]. Credits to Zeroblade.</ref>		'''Study - Musashi'''<ref>To understand this a little better I reccomend reading this post [http://kyoukaisen.tumblr.com/post/11146838125 here]. Credits to Zeroblade.</ref>

	''Toori'': ~~"Sis~~! Sis! It may be a little late, but what is Musashi's formation!?"		''Toori'': “Sis! Sis! It may be a little late, but what is Musashi's formation!?”

	''Kimi'': ~~"Fufufu~~ idiot brother, you're always walking around the ship and don't know even that...?! Umm... your intelligent sister was about to use inappropriate language!"		''Kimi'': “Fufufu idiot brother, you're always walking around the ship and don't know even that...?! Umm... your intelligent sister was about to use inappropriate language!”

	''Toori'': ~~"Hey~~, hey sis, don't turn into a heretic and just tell me quickly!"		''Toori'': “Hey, hey sis, don't turn into a heretic and just tell me quickly!”


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	''Kimi'': ~~"Well~~, the eight ships look like this. Basically, the first ships are used for carrying cargo. The second ships are for tourism and is mostly made up of people who were born in foreign countries, besides administrative offices and embassies. The third ships contain the people from the Far East and is the place that focus on our industries. The middle-front ship is the center of the operation and control of Musashi. The middle-rear ship has the Academy as its center."		''Kimi'': “Well, the eight ships look like this. Basically, the first ships are used for carrying cargo. The second ships are for tourism and is mostly made up of people who were born in foreign countries, besides administrative offices and embassies. The third ships contain the people from the Far East and is the place that focus on our industries. The middle-front ship is the center of the operation and control of Musashi. The middle-rear ship has the Academy as its center.”

	''Toori'': ~~"Heh~~! I’m surprised that Sis knew that much! You’re a genius!"		''Toori'': “Heh! I’m surprised that Sis knew that much! You’re a genius!”

	''Kimi'': ~~"No~~, you see, I’m really a genius, but it’s seriously bad that you didn't know this!"		''Kimi'': “No, you see, I’m really a genius, but it’s seriously bad that you didn't know this!”

	==Translator Notes==		==Translator Notes==

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Strike Forcer: /* Chapter 01: Participants in a Chance Meeting by the Storefront */

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Chapter 01: Participants in a Chance Meeting by the Storefront

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Chapter 01: Participants in a Chance Meeting by the Storefront

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	'''"'''Water.'''"'''		'''"'''Water.'''"'''

	"~~It's~~ the sewage stagnated again?"		"Is the sewage stagnated again?"

	'''"'''Yes, again, a little, but some water will do it.'''"'''		'''"'''Yes, again, a little, but some water will do it.'''"'''

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	P-01s muttered. Using her personal functions, P-01s thought of Mikawa, which she had not seen for so long.		P-01s muttered. Using her personal functions, P-01s thought of Mikawa, which she had not seen for so long.

	~~…Once~~ every year, they came to Mikawa, the site of her beginning.		...Once every year, they came to Mikawa, the site of her beginning.

	Musashi takes one year to circle the island of the Far East once. It docks at the residential areas scattered everywhere, delivering and selling goods, but according to the shopkeepers, even one year was not enough to circle the Far East.		Musashi takes one year to circle the island of the Far East once. It docks at the residential areas scattered everywhere, delivering and selling goods, but according to the shopkeepers, even one year was not enough to circle the Far East.
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	It seemed that P-01s had boarded Musashi from Mikawa last year.		It seemed that P-01s had boarded Musashi from Mikawa last year.

	~~…When~~ she realized it, she was standing in one of Tama’s roads.		...When she realized it, she was standing in one of Tama’s roads.

	Someone had registered her as a citizen. She was allowed life due to the fact that the proof of citizenship that she carried was real and because the shopkeeper of the café had called out to her in the beginning and became her guardian.		Someone had registered her as a citizen. She was allowed life due to the fact that the proof of citizenship that she carried was real and because the shopkeeper of the café had called out to her in the beginning and became her guardian.
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	What P-01s was thinking of now was the question that she had kept in her mind since then:		What P-01s was thinking of now was the question that she had kept in her mind since then:

	~~…Where~~ does the product P-01s come from?		...Where does the product P-01s come from?

	The shopkeeper had talked with businesses and offices multiple times, but she was not one of their products. Neither were there any lost items nor missing person requests for an automaton.		The shopkeeper had talked with businesses and offices multiple times, but she was not one of their products. Neither were there any lost items nor missing person requests for an automaton.

	“I can see the IZUMO’s or the English method in your ~~construction…but~~ much still remains unclear.”		“I can see the IZUMO’s or the English method in your construction...but much still remains unclear.”

	This was according to the technician who had examined her. When she heard ‘much still remains unclear,’ the shopkeeper had tilted her head, but what the technician was saying referred to the fact that automatons were amalgamations of Ability and machinery, and though they are industrial products, there is a lot of secrecy involved in their construction. In other words, she was an amalgamation of obscurity. Furthermore, the technician said this:		This was according to the technician who had examined her. When she heard ‘much still remains unclear,’ the shopkeeper had tilted her head, but what the technician was saying referred to the fact that automatons were amalgamations of Ability and machinery, and though they are industrial products, there is a lot of secrecy involved in their construction. In other words, she was an amalgamation of obscurity. Furthermore, the technician said this:
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	She heard that automatons were dolls in which human souls resided.		She heard that automatons were dolls in which human souls resided.

	Dolls did not move by themselves, but when souls that were able to absorb ~~Fluid~~, the power of the ~~earth pulse~~, resided in dolls, they set Drive systems and other similar mechanisms moving.		Dolls did not move by themselves, but when souls that were able to absorb Ether, the power of the ley lines, resided in dolls, they set Drive systems and other similar mechanisms moving.

	In her case, a component that seemed like a soul existed in her throat, at the base of her voice box.		In her case, a component that seemed like a soul existed in her throat, at the base of her voice box.
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	A routine that always was. A job that she always did. Something that she should always do. It was something that she could do without having her think of what exactly she was, so it was something for which she was thankful.		A routine that always was. A job that she always did. Something that she should always do. It was something that she could do without having her think of what exactly she was, so it was something for which she was thankful.

	~~…Speaking~~ bluntly, I can guess that I am merely escaping.		''...Speaking bluntly, I can guess that I am merely escaping.''

	The moment she thought of this,		The moment she thought of this...

	A voice could be heard.		A voice could be heard.
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	Its black figure looked like a clump of fur that had been matted with muddy water.		Its black figure looked like a clump of fur that had been matted with muddy water.

	~~…However~~, according to their personal statements, they were algae.		...However, according to their personal statements, they were algae.

	Like a creature of some sort, the algae clung to the edge of the gutter with the bottom of its spherical body. It used its sensory organ to look around the area.		Like a creature of some sort, the algae clung to the edge of the gutter with the bottom of its spherical body. It used its sensory organ to look around the area.
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	This was an area where the sewer pipes twisted. Because each ship of the Musashi was gigantic, the inner components fought an eternal battle, attempting to find a way to absorb the deformities of the outer shell.		This was an area where the sewer pipes twisted. Because each ship of the Musashi was gigantic, the inner components fought an eternal battle, attempting to find a way to absorb the deformities of the outer shell.

	~~…The~~ central area is where the most creases took shape. Speaking further, this is the surface level, which is the least supported of all the levels. This was the reason there were so many ships where the centre of the surface level was hollowed out.		...The central area is where the most creases took shape. Speaking further, this is the surface level, which is the least supported of all the levels. This was the reason there were so many ships where the centre of the surface level was hollowed out.

	The black algae creatures wanted their food, the sewage. However, because the flow of the sewage had slowed down, stagnated and gotten stuck, someone had to use a brush to force out the stagnation and blockage.		The black algae creatures wanted their food, the sewage. However, because the flow of the sewage had slowed down, stagnated and gotten stuck, someone had to use a brush to force out the stagnation and blockage.
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	A thump rang out and a cloud of dust rose up.		A thump rang out and a cloud of dust rose up.

	~~…Does~~ the fact that a cloud of dust rose up imply that not enough water has been spread over the ground?		...Does the fact that a cloud of dust rose up imply that not enough water has been spread over the ground?

	Thinking this, P-01s called out the store.		Thinking this, P-01s called out the store.