Horizon:Volume 1 Chapter 03 - Revision history

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	In the Far East, where it was decided that the age limit for students was 18 years of age, no-one can have anything to do with the government after graduation. Therefore the adults, or in other words the provisional council members, were nothing but bureaucrats. Even if they had wealth, they were nothing more than wonderful taxpayers.		In the Far East, where it was decided that the age limit for students was 18 years of age, no one can have anything to do with the government after graduation. Therefore the adults, or in other words the provisional council members, were nothing but bureaucrats. Even if they had wealth, they were nothing more than wonderful taxpayers.

	Furthermore, in Musashi, the Musashi King sent by the Testament Union holds the authority to make the final decision. He can even veto the student council and chancellor’s officers. Because all of Musashi is under his jurisdiction, it is impossible for Musashi to achieve autocracy. And because it was only able to fly above the tentative borderlines of all the other countries, it was unable to freely choose its flight path.		Furthermore, in Musashi, the Musashi King sent by the Testament Union holds the authority to make the final decision. He can even veto the student council and chancellor’s officers. Because all of Musashi is under his jurisdiction, it is impossible for Musashi to achieve autocracy. And because it was only able to fly above the tentative borderlines of all the other countries, it was unable to freely choose its flight path.
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	''I’ve come to realize this very well in this one year. Looking at the circumstances after Aoi was chosen to be the chancellor, and the circumstances when he became the student council president, I was forced to fully realize this.		''I’ve come to realize this very well in this one year. Looking at the circumstances after Aoi was chosen to be the chancellor, and the circumstances when he became the student council president, I was forced to fully realize this.

	''No-one acknowledges our power.		''No one acknowledges our power.

	…''If so…		…''If so…

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	“Why didn’t ya become a candidate for the student council president? The chancellor is recommended by the Testament Union, but the student council president is elected by a candidacy, y’know?”		“Why didn’t ya become a candidate for the student council president? The chancellor is recommended by the Testament Union, but the student council president is elected by a candidacy, y’know?”

	Asked this, Masazumi thought. Immediately ~~afterwards~~, she uttered the words that made up her response.		Asked this, Masazumi thought. Immediately afterward, she uttered the words that made up her response.

	“…Because, Aoi, the chancellor, declared his candidacy for the position of student council president.”		“…Because, Aoi, the chancellor, declared his candidacy for the position of student council president.”

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Strike Forcer: /* Chapter 03: Innocents at the Table */

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Chapter 03: Innocents at the Table

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	She suddenly spoke.		She suddenly spoke.

	“It’s all happened so fast. In a year, we’ve already gone once around the Far East. We’re arriving at my hometown, Mikawa. Even though Mikawa is the Far East’s representative, recently it’s become on good terms with P.A. Oda, so the Testament Union’s glaring at it. Also, because of New Nagoya Castle’s ~~earth pulse~~ reactor, the number of phenomena is overflowing...I wonder if my friends from before are doing well. People like the daughter of the other Honda family’s, Lord Tadakatsu’s daughter.”		“It’s all happened so fast. In a year, we’ve already gone once around the Far East. We’re arriving at my hometown, Mikawa. Even though Mikawa is the Far East’s representative, recently it’s become on good terms with P.A. Oda, so the Testament Union’s glaring at it. Also, because of New Nagoya Castle’s ley line reactor, the number of phenomena is overflowing...I wonder if my friends from before are doing well. People like the daughter of the other Honda family’s, Lord Tadakatsu’s daughter.”

	“My, my, talking about friends from your hometown? Are ya homesick?”		“My, my, talking about friends from your hometown? Are ya homesick?”

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	...But if I investigate Remorse Way afterward, will I learn something?''		...But if I investigate Remorse Way afterward, will I learn something?''

	~~==Translator's notes and references==~~

	~~<references group="1D" />~~

	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

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	“Jud., mostly about general knowledge...the day before, I lent her my transcript of the history teacher’s lecture. As expected, it seems that she hasn’t read through it though.”		“Jud., mostly about general knowledge...the day before, I lent her my transcript of the history teacher’s lecture. As expected, it seems that she hasn’t read through it though.”

	“I see, ya really want to be a member of the provisional ~~parliament~~. Ya have quite a lot of books.”		“I see, ya really want to be a member of the provisional council. Ya have quite a lot of books.”

	“Not that many,” Masazumi responded with a wry smile, though she thought differently.		“Not that many,” Masazumi responded with a wry smile, though she thought differently.
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	“I’d read a whole lot more if I had the money...Well, I’m sorry for causing you trouble so often. I’m just freeloading right now, but I’ll return this debt in the future. I’ll become a great politician.”		“I’d read a whole lot more if I had the money...Well, I’m sorry for causing you trouble so often. I’m just freeloading right now, but I’ll return this debt in the future. I’ll become a great politician.”

	“If ya become a member of the provisional ~~parliament~~, ya won’t need our bread anymore, right? If ya say that ya want to repay the debt, then...could you investigate P-01s’ origins for me like you did last time? Ya managed get a lot done.”		“If ya become a member of the provisional council, ya won’t need our bread anymore, right? If ya say that ya want to repay the debt, then...could you investigate P-01s’ origins for me like you did last time? Ya managed get a lot done.”

	Hearing this, Masazumi folded her arms. It was true that a while ago, she had investigated P-01s.		Hearing this, Masazumi folded her arms. It was true that a while ago, she had investigated P-01s.
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	''...What would it be like?''		''...What would it be like?''

	Masazumi hopes to be a politician. As her father is a member of the bureaucratic organization that aids the students, the provisional ~~parliament~~, he ponders and amends the student council’s decisions, brings the suggestions from the citizens, and furthermore, has the duty of managing the city from out of his personal budget.		Masazumi hopes to be a politician. As her father is a member of the bureaucratic organization that aids the students, the provisional council, he ponders and amends the student council’s decisions, brings the suggestions from the citizens, and furthermore, has the duty of managing the city from out of his personal budget.

	''When I’ve graduated from the Academy, I was thinking of starting on the road leading there.''		''When I’ve graduated from the Academy, I was thinking of starting on the road leading there.''
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	And suddenly, Masazumi thought of her father.		And suddenly, Masazumi thought of her father.

	Her father had left Mikawa ten years ago and moved to Musashi, where he had been a member of the provisional ~~parliament~~ for ten years.		Her father had left Mikawa ten years ago and moved to Musashi, where he had been a member of the provisional council for ten years.

	Masazumi knew why. It had been a year since her father had called her and she had come to Musashi. She knew that many businessmen, real estate managers and ground transport managers went to her father. If you thought of this as a privilege, the meaning in becoming a member of the provisional ~~parliament~~ in Musashi, a politician, and her destination as a political hopeful...		Masazumi knew why. It had been a year since her father had called her and she had come to Musashi. She knew that many businessmen, real estate managers and ground transport managers went to her father. If you thought of this as a privilege, the meaning in becoming a member of the provisional council in Musashi, a politician, and her destination as a political hopeful...

	“...”		“...”

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	Saying this, Masazumi was thinking.		Saying this, Masazumi was thinking.

	''It’s only because of that that I can come here without worry.		''It’s only because of that that I can come here without worry.''

	But still, I’d like to avoid talking about my gender.''		''But still, I’d like to avoid talking about my gender.''

	Therefore, Masazumi said this.		Therefore, Masazumi said this.
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	This is a fact. The Student Council and Chancellor’s Officers are the facilities with the highest authority in all countries, but the Musashi King, who was sent by the Testament Union, has the authority to make the final decision. Running through the intermediary between the students and the Musashi King was the work of the vice-president.		This is a fact. The Student Council and Chancellor’s Officers are the facilities with the highest authority in all countries, but the Musashi King, who was sent by the Testament Union, has the authority to make the final decision. Running through the intermediary between the students and the Musashi King was the work of the vice-president.

	''I myself think that it’s a lot of trouble, but there’s something else.		''I myself think that it’s a lot of trouble, but there’s something else.''

	...What would it be like?''		''...What would it be like?''

	Masazumi hopes to be a politician. As her father is a member of the bureaucratic organization that aids the students, the provisional parliament, he ponders and amends the student council’s decisions, brings the suggestions from the citizens, and furthermore, has the duty of managing the city from out of his personal budget.		Masazumi hopes to be a politician. As her father is a member of the bureaucratic organization that aids the students, the provisional parliament, he ponders and amends the student council’s decisions, brings the suggestions from the citizens, and furthermore, has the duty of managing the city from out of his personal budget.
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	Furthermore, in Musashi, the Musashi King, sent by the Testament Union, holds the authority to make the final decision. He can even veto the student council and chancellor’s officers. Because all of Musashi is under his jurisdiction, it is impossible for Musashi to achieve autocracy. And because it was only able to fly above the tentative borderlines of all the countries, it was unable to freely choose its flight path.		Furthermore, in Musashi, the Musashi King, sent by the Testament Union, holds the authority to make the final decision. He can even veto the student council and chancellor’s officers. Because all of Musashi is under his jurisdiction, it is impossible for Musashi to achieve autocracy. And because it was only able to fly above the tentative borderlines of all the countries, it was unable to freely choose its flight path.

	''Even if I wanted to try and do something, it isn’t my choice.		''Even if I wanted to try and do something, it isn’t my choice.''

	I’ve come to realise this very well in this one year. Looking at the circumstances after Aoi was chosen to be the Chancellor, and the circumstances when he became the Student Council President, I was forced to fully realise this.		''I’ve come to realise this very well in this one year. Looking at the circumstances after Aoi was chosen to be the Chancellor, and the circumstances when he became the Student Council President, I was forced to fully realise this.''

	No-one acknowledges our power.		''No-one acknowledges our power.''

	...If so...		''...If so...''

	Wouldn’t it be fine to make a cursory job of everything?		''Wouldn’t it be fine to make a cursory job of everything?''

	If we become dependent upon the other countries’ occupation, there are certain privileges that we might receive. For example, Aoi receiving the positions of Chancellor and student council president, becoming a celebrity within Musashi in the process.''		''If we become dependent upon the other countries’ occupation, there are certain privileges that we might receive. For example, Aoi receiving the positions of Chancellor and student council president, becoming a celebrity within Musashi in the process.''

	And suddenly, Masazumi thought of her father.		And suddenly, Masazumi thought of her father.
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	“Once in a while, I take a guess about why that place would be busy.”		“Once in a while, I take a guess about why that place would be busy.”

	''My plans today: visiting a grave and going to Mikawa.		''My plans today: visiting a grave and going to Mikawa.''

	...But if I investigate Remorse Way afterward, will I learn something?''		''...But if I investigate Remorse Way afterward, will I learn something?''

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	“My mother, who became a victim of a strange phenomena, and I were born in Mikawa so...I thought that I should visit her before we disembark.”		“My mother, who became a victim of a strange phenomena, and I were born in Mikawa so...I thought that I should visit her before we disembark.”

	“...A victim of ~~Phenomena~~? One of the side-effects of the Apocalypse that everybody’s been talkin’ about recently?”		“...A victim of phenomena? One of the side-effects of the Apocalypse that everybody’s been talkin’ about recently?”

	‘Jud.’, Masazumi nodded. She tried as hard as possible to recall the events of that time from an objective point of view.		‘Jud.’, Masazumi nodded. She tried as hard as possible to recall the events of that time from an objective point of view.

	“...Well, the truth is I don’t know whether or not it was a ~~Phenomenon~~. The magistrate in charge said that she’d been spirited away. Just, she was suddenly gone, and where she was supposed to have disappeared, a large symbol was written with blood...”		“...Well, the truth is I don’t know whether or not it was a phenomenon. The magistrate in charge said that she’d been spirited away. Just, she was suddenly gone, and where she was supposed to have disappeared, a large symbol was written with blood...”

	Masazumi drew a circle with her fingers, indicating a line piercing its center.		Masazumi drew a circle with her fingers, indicating a line piercing its center.

	“A design like this was left behind. The investigation said that it seemed to be a type of spiriting away, linked to a group of mysterious disappearances called the “Princess Disappearances”. However, there are numerous accounts of robbers tricking people using this, not to mention regular disappearances or elopements. Well... there was a lot going on in Mikawa, and it’s becoming a place where ~~Phenomena~~ occur readily. Because of this, even if I call it a grave, I’m just going to see the things that my mother left behind. Ornaments, memos...”		“A design like this was left behind. The investigation said that it seemed to be a type of spiriting away, linked to a group of mysterious disappearances called the “Princess Disappearances”. However, there are numerous accounts of robbers tricking people using this, not to mention regular disappearances or elopements. Well... there was a lot going on in Mikawa, and it’s becoming a place where phenomena occur readily. Because of this, even if I call it a grave, I’m just going to see the things that my mother left behind. Ornaments, memos...”

	‘That so,’ a voice, tinted with relief, could be heard.		‘That so,’ a voice, tinted with relief, could be heard.
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	Thinking about many things, Masazumi shook her head.		Thinking about many things, Masazumi shook her head.

	It was said that the Apocalypse would be coming this year, and as if indicating this, the frequency of ~~Phenomena~~ was actually rising.		It was said that the Apocalypse would be coming this year, and as if indicating this, the frequency of phenomena was actually rising.

	A present age where the immediate future could not actually be seen.		A present age where the immediate future could not actually be seen.
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	She suddenly spoke.		She suddenly spoke.

	“It’s all happened so fast. In a year, we’ve already gone once around the Far East. We’re arriving at my hometown, Mikawa. Even though Mikawa is the Far East’s representative, recently it’s become on good terms with P.A. Oda, so the Testament Union’s glaring at it. Also, because of New Nagoya Castle’s earth pulse reactor, the number of ~~Phenomena~~ is overflowing...I wonder if my friends from before are doing well. People like the daughter of the other Honda family’s, Lord Tadakatsu’s daughter.”		“It’s all happened so fast. In a year, we’ve already gone once around the Far East. We’re arriving at my hometown, Mikawa. Even though Mikawa is the Far East’s representative, recently it’s become on good terms with P.A. Oda, so the Testament Union’s glaring at it. Also, because of New Nagoya Castle’s earth pulse reactor, the number of phenomena is overflowing...I wonder if my friends from before are doing well. People like the daughter of the other Honda family’s, Lord Tadakatsu’s daughter.”

	“My, my, talking about friends from your hometown? Are ya homesick?”		“My, my, talking about friends from your hometown? Are ya homesick?”