Horizon:Volume 1 Chapter 04 - Revision history

Muton at 01:56, 13 February 2015

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	“Ah,” Azuma nodded. Beside him Yoshinao, the duly-appointed king of Musashi, spoke.		“Ah,” Azuma nodded. Beside him Yoshinao, the duly-appointed king of Musashi, spoke.

	“But really, the people of Musashi are so aloof. We cannot believe that despite your return there was no-one other than Us to welcome you.”		“But really, the people of Musashi are so aloof. We cannot believe that despite your return there was no one other than Us to welcome you.”

	“Ah, no, the Testament said that my return should not cause a commotion. I boarded last night on a special flight, and I’d been going through a medical examination till now… A good thing too, because I like it better when it’s quiet…”		“Ah, no, the Testament said that my return should not cause a commotion. I boarded last night on a special flight, and I’d been going through a medical examination till now… A good thing too, because I like it better when it’s quiet…”

Muton at 20:33, 12 February 2015

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	“No, no,” Yoshinao said.		“No, no,” Yoshinao said.

	“Though your power was sealed and your political status removed under the Testament Union’s orders, you are without a doubt the emperor’s son. As the celebrity sent from Hexagone Française of the Testament Union to be the king of Musashi, We<ref>Yoshinao refers to himself as Maro. Maro is an ancient form of ~~“I“~~. Whenever he uses pronouns like “I”, “Me”, or “Myself”, he always uses Maro. So it will be rendered as the royal “we”.</ref> have been sincerely looking forward to your return.”		“Though your power was sealed and your political status removed under the Testament Union’s orders, you are without a doubt the emperor’s son. As the celebrity sent from Hexagone Française of the Testament Union to be the king of Musashi, We<ref>Yoshinao refers to himself as Maro. Maro is an ancient form of “I”. Whenever he uses pronouns like “I”, “Me”, or “Myself”, he always uses Maro. So it will be rendered as the royal “we”.</ref> have been sincerely looking forward to your return.”

	“Ah,” Azuma nodded. Beside him Yoshinao, the duly-appointed king of Musashi, spoke.		“Ah,” Azuma nodded. Beside him Yoshinao, the duly-appointed king of Musashi, spoke.

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Txtracer: Yoshinao was appointed King of Musashi by the Testament Union, not self-proclaimed...

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Yoshinao was appointed King of Musashi by the Testament Union, not self-proclaimed...

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	“Ah,” Azuma nodded. Beside him Yoshinao, the ~~self~~-~~proclaimed~~ king of Musashi, spoke.		“Ah,” Azuma nodded. Beside him Yoshinao, the duly-appointed king of Musashi, spoke.

	“But really, the people of Musashi are so aloof. We cannot believe that despite your return there was no-one other than Us to welcome you.”		“But really, the people of Musashi are so aloof. We cannot believe that despite your return there was no-one other than Us to welcome you.”
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	...Despite this, he came here shouldering a heavy responsibility. Currently...		...Despite this, he came here shouldering a heavy responsibility. Currently...

	Currently, in the year 1648, the world could not have any multinational ~~organization~~. This was because their establishment had not been written in the Testament’s description of history.		Currently, in the year 1648, the world could not have any multinational organizations. This was because their establishment had not been written in the Testament’s description of history.

	However, when the Harmonic Divine States had collapsed all of the countries needed to maintain some form of connection.		However, when the Harmonic Divine States had collapsed all of the countries needed to maintain some form of connection.
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	The Provisional Council, including Masazumi’s father, were probably conscious that all of these predictions were based from extreme assumptions. But a fragment of doubt still remained in her mind that maybe they were only trying to stir uneasiness in people.		The Provisional Council, including Masazumi’s father, were probably conscious that all of these predictions were based from extreme assumptions. But a fragment of doubt still remained in her mind that maybe they were only trying to stir uneasiness in people.

	''But still, it doesn’t change the fact that the Far East has to do something to keep things from exacerbating into the worst case situation. "Whether trusting the other party's conscience is sound policy or not, there is no need to tempt the other party by dangling bait before their face," as ~~stated by~~ her father.		''But still, it doesn’t change the fact that the Far East has to do something to keep things from exacerbating into the worst case situation.'' "Whether trusting the other party's conscience is sound policy or not, there is no need to tempt the other party by dangling bait before their face," as her father had said.

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Strike Forcer at 02:01, 19 April 2014

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	“Ah sensei. We is just right outside and won’t come in. It seems he’s getting embarassed. But I guess that couldn’t be helped. He doesn’t know what to do in this kind of situation. That We, he loves cosplaying as the king in a playing cards, because of that he has trouble making friends. Hey, everyone! Next time you see We reading a manga in one corner giggling silently by himself, don’t be afraid to talk to him, alright?”		“Ah sensei. We is just right outside and won’t come in. It seems he’s getting embarassed. But I guess that couldn’t be helped. He doesn’t know what to do in this kind of situation. That We, he loves cosplaying as the king in a playing cards, because of that he has trouble making friends. Hey, everyone! Next time you see We reading a manga in one corner giggling silently by himself, don’t be afraid to talk to him, alright?”

	...That brat... I swear ~~I’ll~~ lynch him someday!		''...That brat... We swear we’ll lynch him someday!''

	Yoshinao faced his companion. Azuma was looking up to his face, flabbergasted. Realizing the situation, Yoshinao talked flusteredly.		Yoshinao faced his companion. Azuma was looking up to his face, flabbergasted. Realizing the situation, Yoshinao talked flusteredly.
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	...Humm.		...Humm.
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	That’s right. As expected of this Academy’s Chancellor, you’re quick on the uptake.''		''That’s right. As expected of this Academy’s Chancellor, you’re quick on the uptake.''

	In response to Toori’s words, Neshinbara replied.		In response to Toori’s words, Neshinbara replied.
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	The beaming female teacher, Oriotorai said.		The beaming female teacher, Oriotorai said.

	“Ah, ~~king~~-sama. I’m really sorry but we’re not finished cleaning up yet.”		“Ah, King-sama. I’m really sorry but we’re not finished cleaning up yet.”

	“Eh? No, you see.”		“Eh? No, you see.”
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	“Oriotorai-kun. Watch your manners. You mustn’t refer to Azuma-kun without honorifics. You should call him Azuma-sama or...”		“Oriotorai-kun. Watch your manners. You mustn’t refer to Azuma-kun without honorifics. You should call him Azuma-sama or...”

	“Ah, right. Please pardon my lack of manners, ~~king~~-sama. I’ll make sure it won’t happen next time. ...So Azuma, you want to come inside? Right?”		“Ah, right. Please pardon my lack of manners, King-sama. I’ll make sure it won’t happen next time. ...So Azuma, you want to come inside? Right?”

	Not giving Azuma the opportunity to give an answer, Oriotorai grabbed Azuma’s head with her right-hand and offhandedly pulled him inside the room.		Not giving Azuma the opportunity to give an answer, Oriotorai grabbed Azuma’s head with her right-hand and offhandedly pulled him inside the room.

Strike Forcer at 22:10, 18 April 2014

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	“As Masazumi-sama had suggested, P-01s concluded to peruse this book in a quiet place. Owing to this book, P-01s had completely grasped the current societal system, as well as the sundry patterns of the national leaders. Each and every one of them, resorted straight off to rash decisions. Some were arrested, and some were disgraced. Its intricacy is very engrossing.”		“As Masazumi-sama had suggested, P-01s concluded to peruse this book in a quiet place. Owing to this book, P-01s had completely grasped the current societal system, as well as the sundry patterns of the national leaders. Each and every one of them, resorted straight off to rash decisions. Some were arrested, and some were disgraced. Its intricacy is very engrossing.”

	I wonder in what perspective you were reading that to arrive to that conclusion?, Masazumi thought, but dropped the idea of voicing it out.		''I wonder in what perspective you were reading that to arrive to that conclusion?'', Masazumi thought, but dropped the idea of voicing it out.

	P-01s raised her free hand.		P-01s raised her free hand.

Strike Forcer at 18:50, 17 April 2014

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	...Taking over doesn’t only mean amalgation or unification, or even occupation. It can mean many other things. Once the Far East has been taken over, its government and authority will be claimed by the Testament Union. They can even re-implement the practice of slave labor that was in place before the Middle Ages.		...Taking over doesn’t only mean amalgation or unification, or even occupation. It can mean many other things. Once the Far East has been taken over, its government and authority will be claimed by the Testament Union. They can even re-implement the practice of slave labor that was in place before the Middle Ages.

	Currently, ~~Tsirchs~~ and Mlasis are forbidden to establish financial enterprises according to their precepts, thus, that kind of businesses are vicariously executed by the Far East in their stead. However, once taken over, they can simply milk the profit out of Far East’s banks while they maintain the said compromise.		Currently, Tsirhcs and Mlasis are forbidden to establish financial enterprises according to their precepts, thus, that kind of businesses are vicariously executed by the Far East in their stead. However, once taken over, they can simply milk the profit out of Far East’s banks while they maintain the said compromise.

	Aside from gaining a foothold against P.A. Oda, other countries were interested in Musashi’s trade capacity, as well as the technological capacities of Mikawa and IZUMO (especially the former, which built the Musashi).		Aside from gaining a foothold against P.A. Oda, other countries were interested in Musashi’s trade capacity, as well as the technological capacities of Mikawa and IZUMO (especially the former, which built the Musashi).

Strike Forcer at 20:54, 16 April 2014

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	Created for this purpose was the Union of the Testament, which made use of the church ecumenical councils that had been held in Europe since times long past.		Created for this purpose was the Union of the Testament, which made use of the church ecumenical councils that had been held in Europe since times long past.

	Each time a church or ecumenical council opened, as described in the Testament’s description, the representatives of the pro-Testament Testamental ~~churches~~ in each country would gather, exchanging opinions and coordinating with each other. They kept in contact during the times in-between, and the branches in each country fulfilled their duties. A conditional, pseudo-multinational organization.		Each time a church or ecumenical council opened, as described in the Testament’s description, the representatives of the pro-Testament Testamental religions in each country would gather, exchanging opinions and coordinating with each other. They kept in contact during the times in-between, and the branches in each country fulfilled their duties. A conditional, pseudo-multinational organization.

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Strike Forcer at 02:42, 15 April 2014

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