Horizon:Volume 1 Chapter 05 - Revision history

Muton at 20:36, 12 February 2015

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	Masazumi chased the passing figure of the ship with her gaze, and she turned around…		Masazumi chased the passing figure of the ship with her gaze, and she turned around…

	“Really, not only Mikawa, but even the ~~lord~~ has come…”		“Really, not only Mikawa, but even the Lord has come…”

	''“…hasn’t he?”'' those were the words that Masazumi was not able to say.		''“…hasn’t he?”'' those were the words that Masazumi was not able to say.

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Strike Forcer at 02:26, 19 April 2014

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Strike Forcer: /* Chapter 05: Those Reunited Under the Fair Sky */

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Chapter 05: Those Reunited Under the Fair Sky

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	“That’s the ship of the lord of the Matsudaira, Lord Motonobu!?”		“That’s the ship of the lord of the Matsudaira, Lord Motonobu!?”

	Ten years ago, right before the Musashi had been renovated, Lord Motonobu had descended to the Musashi. After that, he had never returned. This is because ten years ago, when the provisional alliance with P.A.~~ODA~~ had become a formal alliance, the Testament Union forbid him to board the Musashi, since it was able to become a mobile fortress, to prove Mikawa’s neutrality.		Ten years ago, right before the Musashi had been renovated, Lord Motonobu had descended to the Musashi. After that, he had never returned. This is because ten years ago, when the provisional alliance with P.A. Oda had become a formal alliance, the Testament Union forbid him to board the Musashi, since it was able to become a mobile fortress, to prove Mikawa’s neutrality.

	...Why he is doing this? Has Lord Motonobu come to welcome the Musashi?		...Why he is doing this? Has Lord Motonobu come to welcome the Musashi?

Strike Forcer at 21:01, 16 April 2014

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	...‘I’ve returned’. That was something she could not say.		...‘I’ve returned’. That was something she could not say.

	She herself was already a resident of the Musashi, Mikawa too had continued to change from the time she had been there. Nowadays, it was rumoured that in the large workshop which had four ~~Leyline~~ Reactors, they were making a gift to P.A.~~ODA~~, so just in one year, Mikawa had really changed. Because a warp in the ~~leylines~~, caused by the ~~Leyline~~ Reactors, Phenomena happened frequently, accompanying the ‘clearing out’ national policy.		She herself was already a resident of the Musashi, Mikawa too had continued to change from the time she had been there. Nowadays, it was rumoured that in the large workshop which had four Ley line Reactors, they were making a gift to P.A. Oda, so just in one year, Mikawa had really changed. Because a warp in the ley lines, caused by the Ley line Reactors, Phenomena happened frequently, accompanying the ‘clearing out’ national policy.

	“How many people are left in Mikawa? ...The other Hondas’ second generation should still be there.”		“How many people are left in Mikawa? ...The other Hondas’ second generation should still be there.”
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	His specialty was an one-sided rambling, so he called himself the ‘teacher’. And even now, he was still going along with that.		His specialty was an one-sided rambling, so he called himself the ‘teacher’. And even now, he was still going along with that.

	“Because of the Testament Union’s instructions, the Musashi’s residents cannot descend to Mikawa. But, do not worry. We’ll be bringing lots of things from Mikawa, and the people who’ve come to sightsee will talk about it, right? So everyone, I want you to use your shrine’s ~~leyline~~ Divine Transmission or connections to have exchanges with Mikawa. And if it’s possible, your teacher also wants to know what kind of lives you are all living, and what you want to do from now on. I’d like it if you'd let me hear that from all of you, that’s all. Then, let’s start. There’s lots of time, so let’s use it all effectively.”		“Because of the Testament Union’s instructions, the Musashi’s residents cannot descend to Mikawa. But, do not worry. We’ll be bringing lots of things from Mikawa, and the people who’ve come to sightsee will talk about it, right? So everyone, I want you to use your shrine’s ley line Divine Transmission or connections to have exchanges with Mikawa. And if it’s possible, your teacher also wants to know what kind of lives you are all living, and what you want to do from now on. I’d like it if you'd let me hear that from all of you, that’s all. Then, let’s start. There’s lots of time, so let’s use it all effectively.”

	He continued.		He continued.

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2014-01-07T16:16:08Z

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Strike Forcer at 03:45, 2 December 2013

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	She had noticed it from a while before, but somehow, below the gutters, the black algae creatures of the sewage pipes seemed to have gotten used to P-01s.		She had noticed it from a while before, but somehow, below the gutters, the black algae creatures of the sewage pipes seemed to have gotten used to P-01s.

	Furthermore, the shared opinion between P-01s and the black algae creatures seemed to be that it ~~wouldfor~~ the better if it is not known that the black algae creatures were going outside.		Furthermore, the shared opinion between P-01s and the black algae creatures seemed to be that it would be for the better if it is not known that the black algae creatures were going outside.

	...It was because that would mean that the black algae creatures are slacking off from their work...		...It was because that would mean that the black algae creatures are slacking off from their work...

Strike Forcer at 18:03, 6 November 2013

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	Can I...		Can I...


	“pass despite my fear?”		“pass despite my fear?”

Strike Forcer at 18:02, 6 November 2013

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	<nowiki>——</nowiki>~~Walk yonder path~~, ~~walk yonder path~~.		<nowiki>——</nowiki>Let me pass, let me pass.

	~~Set out now perchance to find~~		If I follow this narrow path, where will it take me?

	~~The~~ narrow path to ~~Gods does wind.~~		This narrow path leads to the gods in heaven

	Do not ~~say such, it perils much~~.		Your opinion is not needed. You cannot pass through here

	~~Rejoice,~~ this ~~child is now ten of age.~~		I have come to celebrate this child’s tenth birthday

	~~and will need offerings 'gainst heavens rage~~		By dedicating these two talismans

	~~The journey~~ may be ~~bliss eternal~~		Going may be easy, but returning is frightening

	~~Could this~~...		Can I...

			“pass despite my fear?”
	~~“passage downwards ‘gain be~~ fear ~~infernal~~~?”

	From Masazumi’s ears to her chest, there was something akin to trembling. A trembling of excitement and pleasure came, a feeling which seemed as if the depths of her skin were being wrung.		From Masazumi’s ears to her chest, there was something akin to trembling. A trembling of excitement and pleasure came, a feeling which seemed as if the depths of her skin were being wrung.