Horizon:Volume 1 Chapter 06 - Revision history

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	''...This is somehow pretty peculiar.''		''...This is somehow pretty peculiar.''
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	In fact, I felt that this atmosphere was really pleasant, so I thought that I had gotten used to this place. If I too were to talk, I think I definitely be a pretty peculiar person.''		''In fact, I felt that this atmosphere was really pleasant, so I thought that I had gotten used to this place. If I too were to talk, I think I definitely be a pretty peculiar person.''

	Thanks to the fact that he was summoned by the Testament Union, he knew a lot of things about other topics too. Azuma even knew that K.P.A. Italia's Pope-Chancellor and Tres España's Special Duties were coming to Mikawa, besides information regarding many people.		Thanks to the fact that he was summoned by the Testament Union, he knew a lot of things about other topics too. Azuma even knew that K.P.A. Italia's Pope-Chancellor and Tres España's Special Duties were coming to Mikawa, besides information regarding many people.
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	''...What will tomorrow be like?''		''...What will tomorrow be like?''

	'''Well, it'll probably be something fun.''' Walking while smiling wryly, Azuma passed the decorative plants and the baggage left by the residents, eventually reaching the inner tip of the horizontal passage.		''Well, it'll probably be something fun.'' Walking while smiling wryly, Azuma passed the decorative plants and the baggage left by the residents, eventually reaching the inner tip of the horizontal passage.

	There was a room. A room which held the room number of his goal.		There was a room. A room which held the room number of his goal.

Strike Forcer at 02:48, 19 April 2014

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Strike Forcer: /* Chapter 06: Fated Ones Beyond the Door */

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Chapter 06: Fated Ones Beyond the Door

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	Wasn't that kind of ghost stories pretty much a given in Academies everywhere?		Wasn't that kind of ghost stories pretty much a given in Academies everywhere?

	...Because of the disturbances in the ~~leylines~~, I wonder if that kind of small phenomena are having it easier to occur.		...Because of the disturbances in the ley lines, I wonder if that kind of small phenomena are having it easier to occur.

	Just gathering at the Academy at night is an event that, even while just a bit, draws one's interests.		Just gathering at the Academy at night is an event that, even while just a bit, draws one's interests.

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Strike Forcer at 03:48, 2 December 2013

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	...That was a room for the sake of that person.		...That was a room for the sake of that person.

	Azuma raised his face and looked at the ~~nameplate~~ case above the sliding door. The ~~nameplate~~, displaying the name of the resident, had a paper with a handwritten name written on it inserted inside.		Azuma raised his face and looked at the name plate case above the sliding door. The name plate, displaying the name of the resident, had a paper with a handwritten name written on it inserted inside.

	“Miram Poqou...”		“Miram Poqou...”
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	The sunlight was below the sky which started to move from noon towards the afternoon.		The sunlight was below the sky which started to move from noon towards the afternoon.

	Musashi ~~descende~~ at the mountain surface at Mikawa's north side, towards the valley on which ~~“Kagamihara~~ - Matsudaira Family” was written with greenery.		Musashi descended at the mountain surface at Mikawa's north side, towards the valley on which “Kakamigahara - Matsudaira Family” was written with greenery.

	On the southwest of the Musashi-use continental port which Musashi entered as if sinking into, the flat ground which leveled the mountains expanded outwards in continuity to there it was the flat ground-type common use continental port where Aerial Ships from other countries landed.		On the southwest of the Musashi-use continental port which Musashi entered as if sinking into, the flat ground which leveled the mountains expanded outwards in continuity to there it was the flat ground-type common use continental port where Aerial Ships from other countries landed.

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	<center><span style="font-size: 300%;">●Mikawa Surroundings Outline Map●</span></center>		<center><span style="font-size: 300%;">●Mikawa Surroundings Outline Map●</span></center>

	''Toori'': "~~Sis~~! ~~Sis~~! We've arrived at Mikawa, so teach me about the area!"		''Toori'': "Nee-chan! Nee-chan! We've arrived at Mikawa, so teach me about the area!"

	''Kimi'': "Guess there's no helping it... first of all, the outline of the surroundings is something like this."		''Kimi'': "Guess there's no helping it... first of all, the outline of the surroundings is something like this."

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	...Not a paper sliding door, but a western-style sliding door made of boards? Was the previous user a European?		...Not a paper sliding door, but a western-style sliding door made of boards? Was the previous user a European?

	Because Musashi's ~~interior~~ was fundamentally a Far East style, its sliding doors were of paper, and in the case that one wanted a western style one, it was normal to replace it with a door. However, right now, before his eyes was an eclectic object, a sliding door made out of boards.		Because Musashi's indoors was fundamentally Far East style, its sliding doors were of paper, and in the case that one wanted a western style one, it was normal to replace it with a door. However, right now, before his eyes was an eclectic object, a sliding door made out of boards.

	...That's a strange modification. Well, it's fine, people messing with rooms are not that rare.		...That's a strange modification. Well, it's fine, people messing with rooms are not that rare.

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	Oriotorai and Tenzou when it was an equipment related topic, the Shintoists Asama and Shirojiro's names popping up in a talk about spells, or Naruze, Naito and Urquiaga in discussions about Europe.		Oriotorai and Tenzou when it was an equipment related topic, the Shintoists Asama and Shirojiro's names popping up in a talk about spells, or Naruze, Naito and Urquiaga in discussions about Europe.

	...I've returned.		''...I've returned.''

	The last month, I was summoned by the Testament Union from my second year summer break, and I finished the restoration of my authority as well the sealing of my own powers.		''The last month, I was summoned by the Testament Union from my second year summer break, and I finished the restoration of my authority as well the sealing of my own powers.''

	Without meeting up with anyone of my same age, all I heard were things that I needed to understand. Compared to that...		''Without meeting up with anyone of my same age, all I heard were things that I needed to understand. Compared to that...''

	...This is somehow pretty peculiar.		''...This is somehow pretty peculiar.''
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	In fact, I felt that this atmosphere was really pleasant, so I thought that I had gotten used to this place. If I too were to talk, I think I definitely be a pretty peculiar person.		In fact, I felt that this atmosphere was really pleasant, so I thought that I had gotten used to this place. If I too were to talk, I think I definitely be a pretty peculiar person.''

	Thanks to the fact that he was summoned by the Testament Union, he knew a lot of things about other topics too. Azuma even knew that K.P.A. Italia's Pope-Chancellor and Tres España's Special Duties were coming to Mikawa, besides information regarding many people.		Thanks to the fact that he was summoned by the Testament Union, he knew a lot of things about other topics too. Azuma even knew that K.P.A. Italia's Pope-Chancellor and Tres España's Special Duties were coming to Mikawa, besides information regarding many people.
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	“If you're going to sell information about the Testament Union, let it be some special stuff please...”		“If you're going to sell information about the Testament Union, let it be some special stuff please...”

	At night, I'm probably going to do that, I had been invited by Toori and the rest.		''At night, I'm probably going to do that, I had been invited by Toori and the rest.''

	...Ghost hunting at night, huh.		''...Ghost hunting at night, huh.''


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	Ghost hunting.		Ghost hunting.

	'They've thought of something weird', Azuma thought.		'''They've thought of something weird','' Azuma thought.

	Regarding what Toori said...		Regarding what Toori said...
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	Wasn't that kind of ghost stories pretty much a given in Academies everywhere?		Wasn't that kind of ghost stories pretty much a given in Academies everywhere?

	...Because of the disturbances in the ley lines, I wonder if that kind of small phenomena are having it easier to occur.		''...Because of the disturbances in the ley lines, I wonder if that kind of small phenomena are having it easier to occur.''

	Just gathering at the Academy at night is an event that, even while just a bit, draws one's interests.		Just gathering at the Academy at night is an event that, even while just a bit, draws one's interests.

	Last year we did something similar to this. There were some monsters coming out in a　clubroom in Okutama's seventh underground floor, it was taken as an excuse to look around at night with everyone, so I joined in. If I state the outcome first...		''Last year we did something similar to this. There were some monsters coming out in a　clubroom in Okutama's seventh underground floor, it was taken as an excuse to look around at night with everyone, so I joined in. If I state the outcome first...''

	...A huge disaster.		...A huge disaster.
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	Toori had wrapped his entire body up to his face in gold tights, playing the role of the ghost. Getting seriously freaked out by the weird dance there, Asama started rapidly firing her bow and screamed, marking the beginning of the disaster.		Toori had wrapped his entire body up to his face in gold tights, playing the role of the ghost. Getting seriously freaked out by the weird dance there, Asama started rapidly firing her bow and screamed, marking the beginning of the disaster.

	...I wonder what it's going to be like this year.		''...I wonder what it's going to be like this year.''

	And, I had taken interest in was what Toori had spoken of, what made this ghost hunt an eve, that 'tomorrow's confession'. Who it was to seemed to be a secret, but it probably won't turn out well. The feeling that everyone in the class was really nervous about can only mean that all of them had great expectations about it.		''And, I had taken interest in was what Toori had spoken of, what made this ghost hunt an eve, that 'tomorrow's confession'. Who it was to seemed to be a secret, but it probably won't turn out well. The feeling that everyone in the class was really nervous about can only mean that all of them had great expectations about it.''

	...What will tomorrow be like?		''...What will tomorrow be like?''

	'Well, it'll probably be something fun.' Walking while smiling wryly, Azuma passed the decorative plants and the baggage left by the residents, eventually reaching the inner tip of the horizontal passage.		'''Well, it'll probably be something fun.''' Walking while smiling wryly, Azuma passed the decorative plants and the baggage left by the residents, eventually reaching the inner tip of the horizontal passage.

	There was a room. A room which held the room number of his goal.		There was a room. A room which held the room number of his goal.

	What was on the front was a six-tatami room with a sliding door. In a student dormitory where four-tatami rooms were pretty common, a six-tatami solitary room was precious. He did think about whether this had any relation to his lineage, but he decided to rethink it, 'there were rooms left over, right?'.		What was on the front was a six-tatami room with a sliding door. In a student dormitory where four-tatami rooms were pretty common, a six-tatami solitary room was precious. He did think about whether this had any relation to his lineage, but he decided to rethink it, '''there were rooms left over, right?'.''

	Azuma inserted the key into the sliding door's keyhole.		Azuma inserted the key into the sliding door's keyhole.
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	Anyway, the agreement between everyone was that because there was no difference in floor level in a western room, modification was easy.		Anyway, the agreement between everyone was that because there was no difference in floor level in a western room, modification was easy.

	...If it's me, what would I do?		''...If it's me, what would I do?''

	Thinking, Azuma turned the lock and opened the sliding door.		Thinking, Azuma turned the lock and opened the sliding door.
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	...Eh?		''...Eh?''

	Azuma let his neck fall forwards.		Azuma let his neck fall forwards.
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	She was in the middle of working. With a pen, she was writing words on the notes placed on the desk.		She was in the middle of working. With a pen, she was writing words on the notes placed on the desk.

	However, as she was concentrating on the notes, she did not notice me.		''However, as she was concentrating on the notes, she did not notice me.''

	...Uum.		''...Uum.''

	Inside the room seen by my the confused gaze, nothing was stuck onto the wooden walls but a calendar. As if it was a substitute, on the wall bed set to be low a large futon was spread out. Below the large shelf which was the top plank of the desk, there were a clothes hangers made of string.		Inside the room seen by my the confused gaze, nothing was stuck onto the wooden walls but a calendar. As if it was a substitute, on the wall bed set to be low a large futon was spread out. Below the large shelf which was the top plank of the desk, there were a clothes hangers made of string.
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	He muttered and nodded. Azuma looked at the residential guide in his hand, but the number of his designated room was not mistaken. If that is the case, saying to the girl inside that he had gotten the room wrong was not a valid excuse.		He muttered and nodded. Azuma looked at the residential guide in his hand, but the number of his designated room was not mistaken. If that is the case, saying to the girl inside that he had gotten the room wrong was not a valid excuse.

	...Who should I consult about this?		''...Who should I consult about this?''

	Azuma sighed and spun his heels. First, he had to go to the horizontal passage management room which handles the management of the residence.		Azuma sighed and spun his heels. First, he had to go to the horizontal passage management room which handles the management of the residence.
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	And, to the south of the continental port which Musashi entered, to the east of the common use continental port, there was a large city with its surroundings full of countryside settlements and fields.		And, to the south of the continental port which Musashi entered, to the east of the common use continental port, there was a large city with its surroundings full of countryside settlements and fields.

	It was Mikawa. The owner of Musashi, that while being the representative of the Far East opposed the Testament Union by forming a formal alliance with the Oda family who absorbed the Ottomans~~<!--(Now, I'm not sure, but according to my poor grasp of the Unification War, shouldn't it have been the Ottomans who absorbed them?--~~~~)-->~~, the enemies of Europe. This was the territory of the Matsudaira family.		It was Mikawa. The owner of Musashi, that while being the representative of the Far East opposed the Testament Union by forming a formal alliance with the Oda family who absorbed the Ottomans, the enemies of Europe. This was the territory of the Matsudaira family.

	And, Musashi, sinking its body towards the place of its own settlement, activated the warning sirens of its eight ships at the same time.		And, Musashi, sinking its body towards the place of its own settlement, activated the warning sirens of its eight ships at the same time.

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	Within the ships' indoors, in an underground residential area where rooms were lined up in a wall, on that three meters width pathway a single boy was walking.		Within the ships' indoors, in an underground residential area where rooms were lined up in a wall, on that three meters width pathway a single boy was walking.

	The boy carried a long a travel bag where the name ~~"Azuma"~~ was written.		The boy carried a long a travel bag where the name “Azuma” was written.

	"...The farthest room in, huh? Even though I finished my moving quickly, I really spent a really long time with the paperwork."		“...The farthest room in, huh? Even though I finished my moving quickly, I really spent a really long time with the paperwork.”

	On the pathway he was looking at, there was on the wall a sign that said ~~"Okutama~~: Horizontal Passage 1-15 - Musashi Ariadust Academy Student ~~Dormitory"~~.		On the pathway he was looking at, there was on the wall a sign that said “Okutama: Horizontal Passage 1-15 - Musashi Ariadust Academy Student Dormitory”.

	It was a joint residential horizontal passage placed under Musashi Ariadust Academy.		It was a joint residential horizontal passage placed under Musashi Ariadust Academy.
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	A certain male student was walking together with his friends while counting up numbers on the fingers of his hands.		A certain male student was walking together with his friends while counting up numbers on the fingers of his hands.

	"...About my part-time work schedule, I think I'll add an additional hour. After next year, it'll become my full-time job, so from now on I think I'll get the clothes for outside work, but it won't be be enough with the citizens' weight limit above two kilos..."		“...About my part-time work schedule, I think I'll add an additional hour. After next year, it'll become my full-time job, so from now on I think I'll get the clothes for outside work, but it won't be be enough with the citizens' weight limit above two kilos...”

	Behind this conversation, some female student pressed a company cell-phone type Divine Transmitter to her ear.		Behind this conversation, some female student pressed a company cell-phone type Divine Transmitter to her ear.

	"..Yeah, it is part-time job at Suwa Shrine's contract stand, so let's bring back some eggs for our rationing on our way ba.. Eh? It's a family ticket, so we can't do an individual refund. If that's the case... yeah, the horizontal passage at Okutama 1-7, you coming?"		“..Yeah, it is part-time job at Suwa Shrine's contract stand, so let's bring back some eggs for our rationing on our way ba.. Eh? It's a family ticket, so we can't do an individual refund. If that's the case... yeah, the horizontal passage at Okutama 1-7, you coming?”

	She formed a smile. The boys walking nearby were comparing their personal armaments pulled from their waists with each others.		She formed a smile. The boys walking nearby were comparing their personal armaments pulled from their waists with each others.

	"...As I thought, it is a straight sword. I think that it's good that the grip is from the imperial "Eisenritter" brand. You know, impacts with Mobile Shells are a given, so won't it be bit heavy if you install an attachment?"		“...As I thought, it is a straight sword. I think that it's good that the grip is from the imperial 'Eisenritter' brand. You know, impacts with Mobile Shells are a given, so won't it be bit heavy if you install an attachment?”

	They exchanged opinions.		They exchanged opinions.
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	When he left the Academy, Heidi talk to him about this.		When he left the Academy, Heidi talk to him about this.

	~~"If~~ you're going to sell information about the Testament Union, let it be special please..."		“If you're going to sell information about the Testament Union, let it be special please...”

	At night, I'm probably going to do that, I had been invited by Toori and the rest.		At night, I'm probably going to do that, I had been invited by Toori and the rest.
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	At what Toori said...		At what Toori said...

	~~"That~~ Apocalypse thing seems to be mainstream, I wondered if there weren't any phenomenon, and when I tried looking, it turned out that in our Academy there was a rumour from a long time ago that ghosts would come out! Don't you want to search a little!?"		“That Apocalypse thing seems to be mainstream, I wondered if there weren't any phenomenon, and when I tried looking, it turned out that in our Academy there was a rumour from a long time ago that ghosts would come out! Don't you want to search a little!?”

	Wasn't that kind of ghost stories pretty much a given in Academies everywhere?		Wasn't that kind of ghost stories pretty much a given in Academies everywhere?
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	In their place it was a wooden table, and furthermore...		In their place it was a wooden table, and furthermore...

	"...Eh?"		“...Eh?”

	He questioned his own gaze while looking at the front. Besides the table, there was one girl.		He questioned his own gaze while looking at the front. Besides the table, there was one girl.
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	Blue eyes, the instant he saw those, Azuma retreated.		Blue eyes, the instant he saw those, Azuma retreated.

	~~"Ah~~! I-I'm sorry! It seems like I've mistaken my room...!"		“Ah! I-I'm sorry! It seems like I've mistaken my room...!”

	Moving backwards, he panicked and returned to the corridor. While doing so, the sound of his travel bag hitting the sliding door was heard.		Moving backwards, he panicked and returned to the corridor. While doing so, the sound of his travel bag hitting the sliding door was heard.

	"I'm sorry!"		“I'm sorry!”

	Saying that, he placed his hand on the sliding door and shut it. But, right before, Azuma certainly saw it. Beyond the closing sliding door, the girl with flaxen-coloured hair opened her eyes wide and was looking at him.		Saying that, he placed his hand on the sliding door and shut it. But, right before, Azuma certainly saw it. Beyond the closing sliding door, the girl with flaxen-coloured hair opened her eyes wide and was looking at him.
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	A weelchair.		A weelchair.

	"----"		“----”

	Now, he understood why he needed to close the sliding door with great force and the reason why it was a western style sliding door.		Now, he understood why he needed to close the sliding door with great force and the reason why it was a western style sliding door.
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	Azuma raised his face and looked at the nameplate case above the sliding door. The nameplate, displaying the name of the resident, had a paper with a handwritten name written on it inserted inside.		Azuma raised his face and looked at the nameplate case above the sliding door. The nameplate, displaying the name of the resident, had a paper with a handwritten name written on it inserted inside.

	~~"Miram~~ Poqou..."		“Miram Poqou...”

	He muttered and nodded. Azuma looked at the residential guide in his hand, but the number of his designated room was not mistaken. If that is the case, saying to the girl inside that he had gotten the room wrong was not a valid excuse.		He muttered and nodded. Azuma looked at the residential guide in his hand, but the number of his designated room was not mistaken. If that is the case, saying to the girl inside that he had gotten the room wrong was not a valid excuse.
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	The sunlight was below the sky which started to move from noon towards the afternoon.		The sunlight was below the sky which started to move from noon towards the afternoon.

	Musashi descende at the mountain surface at Mikawa's north side, towards the valley on which ~~"Kagamihara~~ - Matsudaira ~~Family"~~ was written with greenery.		Musashi descende at the mountain surface at Mikawa's north side, towards the valley on which “Kagamihara - Matsudaira Family” was written with greenery.

	On the southwest of the Musashi-use continental port which Musashi entered as if sinking into, the flat ground which leveled the mountains expanded outwards in continuity to there it was the flat ground-type common use continental port where Aerial Ships from other countries landed.		On the southwest of the Musashi-use continental port which Musashi entered as if sinking into, the flat ground which leveled the mountains expanded outwards in continuity to there it was the flat ground-type common use continental port where Aerial Ships from other countries landed.