Horizon:Volume 1 Chapter 07 - Revision history

Muton at 20:40, 12 February 2015

2015-02-12T20:40:34Z

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	“It’s fine, just answer the question.”		“It’s fine, just answer the question.”

	Tenzou folded his arms and nodded. ~~Afterwards~~, he raised his right index finger.		Tenzou folded his arms and nodded. Afterward, he raised his right index finger.

	“The admirable method is to be completely honest with a sudden confession. No matter who, all people have something called a readiness of the heart. Because Toori-dono, if during the morning a girl you do not know is standing in front of your house and just says to you ‘I love you,’ …wouldn’t that be amazing? …So you do not need it! Preparation of the heart, that’s something you do not need!”		“The admirable method is to be completely honest with a sudden confession. No matter who, all people have something called a readiness of the heart. Because Toori-dono, if during the morning a girl you do not know is standing in front of your house and just says to you ‘I love you,’ …wouldn’t that be amazing? …So you do not need it! Preparation of the heart, that’s something you do not need!”
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	Mitotsudaira saw that in front of her, Toori was looking her way with a serious face…		Mitotsudaira saw that in front of her, Toori was looking her way with a serious face…

	“Alright then, Nate, let’s do it… I’ll do it tightly, alright? ~~Afterwards~~, don’t hit me, alright?”		“Alright then, Nate, let’s do it… I’ll do it tightly, alright? Afterward, don’t hit me, alright?”

	Responding to that question, Mitotsudaira started by calming her breathing. Calming herself by doing that, through pulling aside her fringe, she corrected her posture.		Responding to that question, Mitotsudaira started by calming her breathing. Calming herself by doing that, through pulling aside her fringe, she corrected her posture.

Muton: Combining and shifting edits.

2015-02-11T22:12:39Z

Combining and shifting edits.

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Txtracer: connoisseur -> sommelier

2015-01-02T06:50:51Z

connoisseur -> sommelier

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	“She is right! Asama's ones aren't as they look! Within the sphere they are a little...”		“She is right! Asama's ones aren't as they look! Within the sphere they are a little...”

	“Uwa, saying that like a ~~connoisseur~~ is the worst...! Wait.. don't move from there!! My bow! MY BOW!!”		“Uwa, saying that like a sommelier is the worst...! Wait.. don't move from there!! My bow! MY BOW!!”

	“Hey, hey, has the tea ceremony club recently started performing archery?”		“Hey, hey, has the tea ceremony club recently started performing archery?”
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	Facing Toori, who had taken out a writing implement and had begun to write '100 points' on the top of Tenzou's ninja cap as he was sitting next to him, his sister tilted her neck.		Facing Toori, who had taken out a writing implement and had begun to write '100 points' on the top of Tenzou's ninja cap as he was sitting next to him, his sister tilted her neck.

	“Anyways idiot brother, let's keep this serious talking to the point and continue with you... As the good and the bad points of her boobs cannot be judged by visual information, what are you going to do if you come to realize that 'this won't do', from a ~~connoisseur~~'s point of view, after you started going out with her? You have to test it once, don't you?”		“Anyways idiot brother, let's keep this serious talking to the point and continue with you... As the good and the bad points of her boobs cannot be judged by visual information, what are you going to do if you come to realize that 'this won't do', from a sommelier's point of view, after you started going out with her? You have to test it once, don't you?”

	“Test? Test what?”		“Test? Test what?”

Txtracer at 04:44, 14 December 2014

2014-12-14T04:44:42Z

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	“Just a little practice; or rather, I want you to be my rehearsal partner.”		“Just a little practice; or rather, I want you to be my rehearsal partner.”

	At those words, Sakai, who next to me crooked his neck.		At those words, Sakai who stood next to me crooked his neck.

	“A rehearsal? In short, that's a practice of your confession, isn't it? Again, that's...”		“A rehearsal? In short, that's a practice of your confession, isn't it? Again, that's...”

	'' 'Stupid'; I was glanced at by Sakai, who had said that, out of the corner of his eye. It seemed as if he wanted to say, 'I wonder if you can.' ''		'''Stupid'; I was glanced at by Sakai, who had said that, out of the corner of his eye. It seemed as if he wanted to say, 'I wonder if you can.'''

	Mitotsudaira thought that if that is the case...		Mitotsudaira thought that if that is the case...
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	''Certainly, if we got with what was trendy lately...in a situation like this where you accept a higher-rank or lower-rank's wish to be a practice partner for them, there should be some sort of expression.'' Therefore, Mitotsudaira lightly tapped her chest with the fingers of her hand, and said it.		''Certainly, if we got with what was trendy lately...in a situation like this where you accept a higher-rank or lower-rank's wish to be a practice partner for them, there should be some sort of expression.'' Therefore, Mitotsudaira lightly tapped her chest with the fingers of her hand, and said it.

	“Eh, I... '' 'will lend you this chest' ''.”		“Eh, I... '''will lend you this chest'''.”

	The instant she said that, Mitotsudaira was bathed in everyone's sudden reactions.		The instant she said that, Mitotsudaira was bathed in everyone's sudden reactions.

Txtracer: wiki formatting

2014-12-14T04:41:42Z

wiki formatting

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	“A rehearsal? In short, that's a practice of your confession, isn't it? Again, that's...”		“A rehearsal? In short, that's a practice of your confession, isn't it? Again, that's...”

	'''Stupid'; I was glanced at by Sakai, who had said that, out of the corner of his eye. It seemed as if he wanted to say, 'I wonder if you can.'''		'' 'Stupid'; I was glanced at by Sakai, who had said that, out of the corner of his eye. It seemed as if he wanted to say, 'I wonder if you can.' ''

	Mitotsudaira thought that if that is the case...		Mitotsudaira thought that if that is the case...
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	''Certainly, if we got with what was trendy lately...in a situation like this where you accept a higher-rank or lower-rank's wish to be a practice partner for them, there should be some sort of expression.'' Therefore, Mitotsudaira lightly tapped her chest with the fingers of her hand, and said it.		''Certainly, if we got with what was trendy lately...in a situation like this where you accept a higher-rank or lower-rank's wish to be a practice partner for them, there should be some sort of expression.'' Therefore, Mitotsudaira lightly tapped her chest with the fingers of her hand, and said it.

	“Eh, I... '''will lend you this chest'''.”		“Eh, I... '' 'will lend you this chest' ''.”

	The instant she said that, Mitotsudaira was bathed in everyone's sudden reactions.		The instant she said that, Mitotsudaira was bathed in everyone's sudden reactions.

Txtracer: many small edits; complete revision of the description of Mitotsudaira's hair; sommelier -> connoisseur

2014-12-14T04:32:13Z

many small edits; complete revision of the description of Mitotsudaira's hair; sommelier -> connoisseur

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Strike Forcer at 03:11, 19 April 2014

2014-04-19T03:11:28Z

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Nackbjorn at 21:34, 19 January 2014

2014-01-19T21:34:09Z

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	“Hey, hey, has the tea ceremony club recently started performing archery?”		“Hey, hey, has the tea ceremony club recently started performing archery?”

	Facing Toori, who had taken out a writing implement and had began to write '100 points' on the top of ~~the~~ Tenzou's ninja cap, who was sitting next to him, his sister tilted her neck.		Facing Toori, who had taken out a writing implement and had began to write '100 points' on the top of Tenzou's ninja cap, who was sitting next to him, his sister tilted her neck.

	“Anyways idiot brother, let's keep this serious talking to the point and continue with you... As the good and the bad points of her boobs cannot be judged by visual information, what are you going to do if you come to realize that 'this won't do', from a sommelier point of view, after you started going out with her? You have to test it once, don't you?”		“Anyways idiot brother, let's keep this serious talking to the point and continue with you... As the good and the bad points of her boobs cannot be judged by visual information, what are you going to do if you come to realize that 'this won't do', from a sommelier point of view, after you started going out with her? You have to test it once, don't you?”

Nackbjorn: Some editing + re-adding some things which were lost from the original translation

2014-01-19T21:32:08Z

Some editing + re-adding some things which were lost from the original translation

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Strike Forcer at 03:50, 2 December 2013

2013-12-02T03:50:16Z

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	“Eh? There's something missing from Toori-kun's usual tastes?”		“Eh? There's something missing from Toori-kun's usual tastes?”

	Urquiaga nodded at ~~Heide~~, as she was the one who asked that.		Urquiaga nodded at Heidi, as she was the one who asked that.

	“...You are a citizen of the boob camp, yet you've failed to mention the boobs of said person.”		“...You are a citizen of the boob camp, yet you've failed to mention the boobs of said person.”