Horizon:Volume 1 Chapter 08 - Revision history

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	“It would be nice if learning about the 'Remorse Way' could be your new activity, Masazumi-kun.”		“It would be nice if learning about the 'Remorse Way' could be your new activity, Masazumi-kun.”

	He ~~left~~ out another breath.		He let out another breath.

	“There is a lot of stuff that I don't know about, but I hope that Masazumi-kun ends up being at Toori's side along with all the people now with him.”		“There is a lot of stuff that I don't know about, but I hope that Masazumi-kun ends up being at Toori's side along with all the people now with him.”

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	He left out another breath.		He left out another breath.

	“There is a lot of stuff that I don't know about, but I hope that Masazumi-kun ends up being at Toori's side along all the people with him.”		“There is a lot of stuff that I don't know about, but I hope that Masazumi-kun ends up being at Toori's side along with all the people now with him.”

	==Translator's notes and references==		==Translator's notes and references==

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71.252.208.164: /* Chapter 08: Doubters in the Depths of a Ravine */

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Chapter 08: Doubters in the Depths of a Ravine

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	Sakai and Masazumi were walking atop the mountain path towards the checkpoint which was a delivery transportation base.		Sakai and Masazumi were walking atop the mountain path towards the checkpoint which was a delivery transportation base.

	Looking at it from the mountain, the checkpoint was a wide parking lot ~~were~~ standby cargo vehicles were lined up waiting to take their goods, and a spacious area with warehouses. The valley was a natural barrier and the exchange of goods was performed between the bottom and the top. People were lined up into fives queues at the reception of the checkpoint, but Sakai was walking too far away to hear their voices and exchanges.		Looking at it from the mountain, the checkpoint was a wide parking lot where standby cargo vehicles were lined up waiting to take their goods, and a spacious area with warehouses. The valley was a natural barrier and the exchange of goods was performed between the bottom and the top. People were lined up into fives queues at the reception of the checkpoint, but Sakai was walking too far away to hear their voices and exchanges.

	Sakai and Masazumi walked the mountain path, which had hardened from the wheels of the cargo vehicles. As they travelled the side of the mountain with a stone wall at their left, they laughed and exchanged words while tilting their heads. Sakai was forming a smile at the corner of his mouth.		Sakai and Masazumi walked the mountain path, which had hardened from the wheels of the cargo vehicles. As they travelled the side of the mountain with a stone wall at their left, they laughed and exchanged words while tilting their heads. Sakai was forming a smile at the corner of his mouth.

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	“Hey, hey, don't say scary stuff. It's just that Mikawa is under sanctions, so exchange isn't allowed. They're putting some distance between themselves and Musashi. But well...”		“Hey, hey, don't say scary stuff. It's just that Mikawa is under sanctions, so exchange isn't allowed. They're putting some distance between themselves and Musashi. But well...”

	'I don't really know', thought Sakai as he nodded...		'''I don't really know''', thought Sakai as he nodded...

	Suddenly, a structure came from above his head. Like a cloud, that large shape crossed the sky.		Suddenly, a structure came from above his head. Like a cloud, that large shape crossed the sky.
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	...However.		...However.

	'I can't simply bring those words to my lips', I'm really that naive?		'''I can't simply bring those words to my lips', I'm really that naive?''

	Inside my field of vision and without erasing that smile at the edge of his mouth, Sakai said.		Inside my field of vision and without erasing that smile at the edge of his mouth, Sakai said.
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	He laughed.		He laughed.

	...Eh?		''...Eh?''

	Masazumi lost all her words against that sudden laughing and Sakai smiled to her to bid his farewell.		Masazumi lost all her words against that sudden laughing and Sakai smiled to her to bid his farewell.

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	“Yes,” Masazumi opened her mouth.		“Yes,” Masazumi opened her mouth.

	“It’s because P.A. Oda is concentrating on their attack on the Asai. Using that opening, he’s going to plead for the development of a new Logismoi Óplo, a type of divine weapon that represents a fragment of the world’s power balance; in other words city-destruction-class personal armaments. These armaments have the embodiment of the ~~Eight Evil Thoughts~~ of humanity as a motif, and the original prototypes of the ~~Seven Deadly Sins~~ and their users are called the ‘Eight Dragon Kings’.”		“It’s because P.A. Oda is concentrating on their attack on the Asai. Using that opening, he’s going to plead for the development of a new Logismoi Óplo, a type of divine weapon that represents a fragment of the world’s power balance; in other words city-destruction-class personal armaments. These armaments have the embodiment of the eight evil thoughts of humanity as a motif, and the original prototypes of the seven deadly sins and their users are called the ‘Eight Dragon Kings’.”

	“You’re well informed, aren’t you? The ~~Eight Evil Thoughts…can~~ you name them?”		“You’re well informed, aren’t you? The eight evil thoughts…can you name them?”

	“Judge,” Masazumi said. And then she nodded…		“Judge,” Masazumi said. And then she nodded…
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	She let out a breath.		She let out a breath.

	“The ~~Deadly Sins~~ of man are now said to be seven, but in the beginning they were the ~~Eight Evil Thoughts~~ warned of by the Greek Evagrius in Egypt. So, the ~~Seven Deadly Sins~~ in Latin are what we usually speak of in the present world. But originally…their prototypes were the Greek’s ~~Eight Evil Thoughts~~.”		“The deadly sins of man are now said to be seven, but in the beginning they were the eight evil thoughts warned of by the Greek Evagrius in Egypt. So, the seven deadly sins in Latin are what we usually speak of in the present world. But originally…their prototypes were the Greek’s eight evil thoughts.”

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	•'''Hyperēphania (Pride):''' Hexagone Française		•'''Hyperēphania (Pride):''' Hexagone Française

	“Tres España and Hexagone Française possess two because their sins were combined when the ~~Eight Evil Thoughts~~ became the ~~Seven Deadly Sins~~. Their outputs are set to low settings…but it seems that Tres España brought their weapons to the New World and drove the feral mechanical beasts to extinction. Going by the rumors, they created such a large-scale destruction just with a few kilounits of ether. Just in terms of pure power, these divine weapons are of the same rank as the Testamenta Arma that are based on the Testaments; and different from them in that while the Testamenta Arma are limited by doctrine, the Logismoi Óplo can be used without restrictions. This is due to these Deadly Sin Armaments being reprimanding weapons used to lay bare the sins of the opponent.”		“Tres España and Hexagone Française possess two because their sins were combined when the eight evil thoughts became the seven deadly sins. Their outputs are set to low settings…but it seems that Tres España brought their weapons to the New World and drove the feral mechanical beasts to extinction. Going by the rumors, they created such a large-scale destruction just with a few kilounits of ether. Just in terms of pure power, these divine weapons are of the same rank as the Testamenta Arma that are based on the Testaments; and different from them in that while the Testamenta Arma are limited by doctrine, the Logismoi Óplo can be used without restrictions. This is due to these Deadly Sin Armaments being reprimanding weapons used to lay bare the sins of the opponent.”

	Masazumi looked at the western sky, to the white-armored ship that was facing towards the continental port, the “Regno Unito”.		Masazumi looked at the western sky, to the white-armored ship that was facing towards the continental port, the “Regno Unito”.

	“The rumors say that the Pope came all the way here this time because he wants to get the ‘Phtonos’ in the ~~Seven Deadly Sins~~ made. Currently, K.P.A. Italia have to hurry against the strengthening of Protestantism and the decline in the Middle-Eastern trade.”		“The rumors say that the Pope came all the way here this time because he wants to get the ‘Phtonos’ in the seven deadly sins made. Currently, K.P.A. Italia have to hurry against the strengthening of Protestantism and the decline in the Middle-Eastern trade.”

	She sighed.		She sighed.
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	The rumor that Sakai mentioned just now had been heard by Masazumi before. It went like this:		The rumor that Sakai mentioned just now had been heard by Masazumi before. It went like this:

	“To make weapons of the power of the ~~Deadly Sins~~ and the original sins of humanity, it is only appropriate to use humans as components…”		“To make weapons of the power of the deadly sins and the original sins of humanity, it is only appropriate to use humans as components…”

	“Right, right, and also something like ‘the reason why the people have disappeared from Nagoya is actually because they have been used as the components of the Logismoi Óplo.’ ”		“Right, right, and also something like ‘the reason why the people have disappeared from Nagoya is actually because they have been used as the components of the Logismoi Óplo.’ ”
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	…''As P.A. Oda encircled them, a provisional alliance was formed under a bit of coercion.		…''As P.A. Oda encircled them, a provisional alliance was formed under a bit of coercion.

	Subjected to those circumstances, and as proof of loyalty, the ~~lord’s~~ younger brother was forced to commit suicide after he became the heir.		Subjected to those circumstances, and as proof of loyalty, the Lord’s younger brother was forced to commit suicide after he became the heir.

	Sakai, who was supposed to be the guardian of the ~~lord’s~~ younger brother, was demoted since he was unable to stop the suicide.		Sakai, who was supposed to be the guardian of the Lord’s younger brother, was demoted since he was unable to stop the suicide.

	The rumors said that Lord Nobuyasu wished for his own death and when Sakai ran to stop him, it was too late.		The rumors said that Lord Nobuyasu wished for his own death and when Sakai ran to stop him, it was too late.
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	“No way. If that kind of child existed…”		“No way. If that kind of child existed…”

	''That would mean that as the ~~lord’s~~ younger brother who had inherited his heir’s name had committed suicide, that child would become the new heir, right? However…		''That would mean that as the Lord’s younger brother who had inherited his heir’s name had committed suicide, that child would become the new heir, right? However…

	“But where is that child and what is he doing…? Why doesn’t he come out into the open?”		“But where is that child and what is he doing…? Why doesn’t he come out into the open?”
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	Masazumi lost all her words against that sudden laughing and Sakai smiled to her to bid his farewell.		Masazumi lost all her words against that sudden laughing and Sakai smiled to her to bid his farewell.

	“That’s pretty good. As everyone is getting ready for Toori’s confession tomorrow, all of them are probably preparing for the celebration or something given that they are going to hold a party at the Academy tonight. Also, from today onwards the crown prince Azuma-kun has thrown away his position and powers and restarted his life at Musashi. And lastly, there is going to be a festival and fireworks under the instructions of the ~~lord teacher~~. All of it seems unconnected…but they are all new activities, and celebrations too.”		“That’s pretty good. As everyone is getting ready for Toori’s confession tomorrow, all of them are probably preparing for the celebration or something given that they are going to hold a party at the Academy tonight. Also, from today onwards the crown prince Azuma-kun has thrown away his position and powers and restarted his life at Musashi. And lastly, there is going to be a festival and fireworks under the instructions of the Lord Teacher. All of it seems unconnected…but they are all new activities, and celebrations too.”

	After a single breath, Sakai continued his words.		After a single breath, Sakai continued his words.

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	“——”		“——”

	'I know about what Sakai was talking about, the reason of his demotion. It's something any citizen of Mikawa would. How even ~~if obeying~~ the Testament's ~~decription~~, one of the Four Heavenly Kings let the heir of his lord commit suicide.'		'I know about what Sakai was talking about, the reason of his demotion. It's something any citizen of Mikawa would. How even though it was by the Testament's description, one of the Four Heavenly Kings let the heir of his lord commit suicide.'

	There was a time when the leader of Mikawa Lord Motonobu had no wife and no heir.		There was a time when the leader of Mikawa, Lord Motonobu, had no wife and no heir.

	...Therefore, Lord Motonobu let his little brother inherit the name of his heir.		...Therefore, Lord Motonobu let his little brother inherit the name of his heir.
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	According to the Testament's descriptions, he had committed suicide due to some trouble with the Oda family.		According to the Testament's descriptions, he had committed suicide due to some trouble with the Oda family.

	Was that also the reason? Around fifteen years ago, there was still no inheritor of Nobunaga's name in P.A. Oda, so Mikawa refused an alliance and tried to overcome said Testament's description using a 'broad interpretation' of it, but...		Was that also the reason? Around fifteen years ago, there was still no inheritor for Nobunaga's name in P.A. Oda, so Mikawa refused an alliance and tried to overcome said Testament's description using a 'broad interpretation' of it, but...

	...As P.A. Oda encircled them, a provisional alliance was formed under a bit of coercion.		...As P.A. Oda encircled them, a provisional alliance was formed under a bit of coercion.

	Subjected ~~too~~ those circumstances, and as a proof of loyalty, the lord's younger brother was forced to commit suicide after he became the heir.		Subjected to those circumstances, and as a proof of loyalty, the lord's younger brother was forced to commit suicide after he became the heir.

	Sakai, who was supposed to be the guardian of the lord's younger brother, was demoted ~~when~~ he was unable to stop the suicide.		Sakai, who was supposed to be the guardian of the lord's younger brother, was demoted since he was unable to stop the suicide.

	The rumours said that Lord Nobuyasu wished ~~ofr~~ his own death and when Sakai ran to stop him, it was too late.		The rumours said that Lord Nobuyasu wished of his own death and when Sakai ran to stop him, it was too late.

	That was the reason that Masazumi knew for Sakai's demotion.		That was the reason that Masazumi knew for Sakai's demotion.
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	...However.		...However.

	'''I can't simply bring those words to my lips', I'm really that naive?''		'''I can't simply bring those words to my lips', am I really that naive?''

	Inside my field of vision and without erasing that smile at the edge of his mouth, Sakai said.		Inside my field of vision and without erasing that smile at the edge of his mouth, Sakai said.
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	Masazumi lost all her words against that sudden laughing and Sakai smiled to her to bid his farewell.		Masazumi lost all her words against that sudden laughing and Sakai smiled to her to bid his farewell.

	“That's pretty good. As everyone is getting ready for Toori's confession tomorrow, all of them are probably preparing for the celebration or something, given that they are going to hold a party ~~and~~ the Academy tonight. Also, from today onwards the crown prince Azuma-kun has thrown away his position and powers and restarted his life at Musashi. And lastly, there is going to be ~~fireworks and~~ a festival ~~tonight~~ under the instructions of the lord teacher. All of it seems unconnected... but they are all new activities, and celebrations too.”		“That's pretty good. As everyone is getting ready for Toori's confession tomorrow, all of them are probably preparing for the celebration or something, given that they are going to hold a party at the Academy tonight. Also, from today onwards the crown prince Azuma-kun has thrown away his position and powers and restarted his life at Musashi. And lastly, there is going to be a festival and fireworks under the instructions of the lord teacher. All of it seems unconnected... but they are all new activities, and celebrations too.”

	After a single breath, Sakai continued his words.		After a single breath, Sakai continued his words.
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	He left out another breath.		He left out another breath.

	“There is a lot of stuff that I don't know about, but I hope that Masazumi-kun ends being at Toori's side along all the people with him.”		“There is a lot of stuff that I don't know about, but I hope that Masazumi-kun ends up being at Toori's side along all the people with him.”

	==Translator's notes and references==		==Translator's notes and references==