Horizon:Volume 1 Chapter 09 - Revision history

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	Faster than he was able to get a clear look at the figure of the girl seated in the wheelchair in front of him, she said this:		Faster than he was able to get a clear look at the figure of the girl seated in the wheelchair in front of him, she said this:

	“—I want to talk with you a little. ~~It's~~ that fine with you, Azuma?”		“—I want to talk with you a little. Is that fine with you, Azuma?”


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	“Please close it. This is a room with a girl inside, you know.”		“Please close it. This is a room with a girl inside, you know.”

	As she ~~was~~ said, he decided to close the door. He closed it, hands behind his back, in such a way that he would make the least amount of noise possible.		As she had said, he decided to close the door. He closed it, hands behind his back, in such a way that he would make the least amount of noise possible.

	Directly in front of him, the girl called Miriam Poqou continued to face her wheelchair towards the desk and looked his way just turning her head.		Directly in front of him, the girl called Miriam Poqou continued to face her wheelchair towards the desk and looked his way just turning her head.

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	There was an underground hallway. It was an illuminated underground passage in the ~~residental~~ areas.		There was an underground hallway. It was an illuminated underground passage in the residential areas.

	In the corner, a single boy with his shoulders down was standing in front of a western sliding door.		In the corner, a single boy with his shoulders down was standing in front of a western sliding door.
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	...The same as a human ...huh?		...The same as a human ...huh?

	Something that is the ~~equivalency~~ that the girl in the wheelchair hopes for.		Something that is the equivalence that the girl in the wheelchair hopes for.

	...That is, to welcome the resident of the same room as her just like the other people...		...That is, to welcome the resident of the same room as her just like the other people...

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	“In the end, I came back here... But I really failed...”		“In the end, I came back here... But I really failed...”

	''I was planning on resolving the situation where there was already a previous resident in the room that would be my new one, but...		''I was planning on resolving the situation where there was already a previous resident in the room that would be my new one, but...''

	...What kind of wild goose chase was I subjected to?		''...What kind of wild goose chase was I subjected to?''

	First, I went to the office that manages the rooms. The manager's office was at the entrance to a vertical passage at the end of the horizontal sections.		''First, I went to the office that manages the rooms. The manager's office was at the entrance to a vertical passage at the end of the horizontal sections.''

	But at the office I discovered that they weren't the ones managing the paperwork needed for me to move even though they were supposed to be the ones in charge of the residences, so I was told that I had to bring my residency change documents from the Academy if I wanted to change my room.		''But at the office I discovered that they weren't the ones managing the paperwork needed for me to move even though they were supposed to be the ones in charge of the residences, so I was told that I had to bring my residency change documents from the Academy if I wanted to change my room.''

	At least, at that office I was able to confirm who the resident in my room was.		''At least, at that office I was able to confirm who the resident in my room was.''

	Miriam Poqou, 18 years old. She was in the same class as me. The manager, who was an aged werewolf, looked into it and burst into laughter.		''Miriam Poqou, 18 years old. She was in the same class as me. The manager, who was an aged werewolf, looked into it and burst into laughter.''

	“Isn't that fine?! Are appearances really that important among the young?!”, he asked.		“Isn't that fine?! Are appearances really that important among the young?!”, he asked.

	“If that's the case, then as expected, this won't do.”, I thought. I had largely completed my transition into a secular life yesterday, but living together with a girl from my class, right as I become a citizen after being a member of the imperial family, is too big a character change.		“If that's the case, then as expected, this won't do.”, ''I thought. I had largely completed my transition into a secular life yesterday, but living together with a girl from my class, right as I become a citizen after being a member of the imperial family, is too big a character change.''

	...And more than that, the other side of this equation is troubling.		''...And more than that, the other side of this equation is troubling.''

	However, when I went to the Academy's business office in an attempt to acquire my residence change documents, I was told, “You need the permission of your guardian”...		However, when I went to the Academy's business office in an attempt to acquire my residence change documents, I was told, “You need the permission of your guardian”...

	After that, as it was really important, I was stuck searching for Oriotorai. It seems she wasn't carrying the paperwork I needed and it wasn't in the teacher room either so I had to look it around the school. In the classroom being used by the tea ceremony club, was an acquaintance of mine, Asama, along the other club members performing the tea ceremony with sport drinks for the athletics club. Then, Asama placed a hat and pierced it with arrows from the side, while drinking the IZUMO-type's lemon-flavoured sports drink “CC-EMON” and kneeling. I was able to explain my case to her, but she said:		''After that, as it was really important, I was stuck searching for Oriotorai. It seems she wasn't carrying the paperwork I needed and it wasn't in the teacher room either so I had to look it around the school. In the classroom being used by the tea ceremony club, was an acquaintance of mine, Asama, along the other club members performing the tea ceremony with sport drinks for the athletics club. Then, Asama placed a hat and pierced it with arrows from the side, while drinking the IZUMO-type's lemon-flavoured sports drink “CC-EMON” and kneeling. I was able to explain my case to her, but she said:''

	“Isn't that fine? Are appearances really that important among the young?”		“Isn't that fine? Are appearances really that important among the young?”

	In short, all what happened was that I learned that this girl was also something else.		''In short, all what happened was that I learned that this girl was also something else.''

	However, according to their information, Oriotorai had the habit of inspecting her territory around that time, so with everyone's cooperation I found Oriotorai in the cafeteria two hours later.		''However, according to their information, Oriotorai had the habit of inspecting her territory around that time, so with everyone's cooperation I found Oriotorai in the cafeteria two hours later.''

	When I was trying to head to the cafeteria, I heard laughter and saw an amazing woman who had been getting smashed on the local brand sake since noon there.		''When I was trying to head to the cafeteria, I heard laughter and saw an amazing woman who had been getting smashed on the local brand sake since noon there.''

	I didn't really understand it, but a recklessly cheerful Oriotorai told me:		''I didn't really understand it, but a recklessly cheerful Oriotorai told me:''

	“Ain't that fine!? Are appearances really that important among you young'uns?”		“Ain't that fine!? Are appearances really that important among you young'uns?”

	...Could it be that all the residents of Musashi have been brainwashed in such a way that their thought patterns have been completely standardized?		''...Could it be that all the residents of Musashi have been brainwashed in such a way that their thought patterns have been completely standardized?''

	And after talking about a lot of things for what was likely whole hour...		And after talking about a lot of things for what was likely whole hour...
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	At her words, Azuma felt something hard around his throat.		At her words, Azuma felt something hard around his throat.

	...As a human being...huh?		''...As a human being...huh?''

	The equivalence that the girl in the wheelchair hopes for.		The equivalence that the girl in the wheelchair hopes for.

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	"In the end, I came back here... But I really failed..."		"In the end, I came back here... But I really failed..."

	''I was planning on resolving the situation where there was already a previous resident of the room ~~which~~ would be my new residence, but...		''I was planning on resolving the situation where there was already a previous resident of the room that would be my new residence, but...

	...What kind of wild goose chase was I subjected to?		...What kind of wild goose chase was I subjected to?

	First, I went to the office ~~which~~ manages the rooms. The manager's office was at the entrance to a vertical passage at the end of the horizontal sections.		First, I went to the office that manages the rooms. The manager's office was at the entrance to a vertical passage at the end of the horizontal sections.

	But at the office I discovered that they weren't the ones managing the paperwork needed for my moving even when they were supposed to be the ones in charge of the residences, so I was said that I had to bring my resident change documents from the Academy if I wanted to change my room.		But at the office I discovered that they weren't the ones managing the paperwork needed for my moving even when they were supposed to be the ones in charge of the residences, so I was said that I had to bring my resident change documents from the Academy if I wanted to change my room.
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	...The same as a human ...huh?		...The same as a human ...huh?

	Something that is the equivalency ~~which~~ the girl in the wheelchair hopes for.		Something that is the equivalency that the girl in the wheelchair hopes for.

	...That is, to welcome the resident of the same room as her just like the other people...		...That is, to welcome the resident of the same room as her just like the other people...
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	...He didn't even thought that is was something to be thankful for.		...He didn't even thought that is was something to be thankful for.

	It was not something ~~which~~ he had to think. Because, his standpoint and Miriam's standpoint were different. However, this crossed Azuma's mind: 'The daily life of she and I hold a different weight for both of us'.		It was not something that he had to think. Because, his standpoint and Miriam's standpoint were different. However, this crossed Azuma's mind: 'The daily life of she and I hold a different weight for both of us'.

	And now, Miriam was saying him to not care about her legs.		And now, Miriam was saying him to not care about her legs.
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	'That's a bad point,' he also thought.		'That's a bad point,' he also thought.

	And looking at Miriam, who wiped away the tears at the corners of her eyes ~~which~~ came about from laughing, Azuma thought this.		And looking at Miriam, who wiped away the tears at the corners of her eyes that came about from laughing, Azuma thought this.

	''...It's fine.''		''...It's fine.''
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	"Ahh, then... now, my points have been given."		"Ahh, then... now, my points have been given."

	So he said, and Miriam raised her eyebrows. For about a breath, she looked his way with an expression ~~which~~ could not take hold of either a smile or surprise, but suddenly she bent her body forward, burst out laughing, and formed words.		So he said, and Miriam raised her eyebrows. For about a breath, she looked his way with an expression that could not take hold of either a smile or surprise, but suddenly she bent her body forward, burst out laughing, and formed words.

	"—If you didn't say that you'd have rather high points. You are so foolishly earnest."		"—If you didn't say that you'd have rather high points. You are so foolishly earnest."
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	It was a checkpoint different from the quarantine and trade checkpoint at the upper side of the mountain. To be sure things that descended from the mountain would be unable to immediately enter Mikawa, it was a place whose purpose was a second inspection.		It was a checkpoint different from the quarantine and trade checkpoint at the upper side of the mountain. To be sure things that descended from the mountain would be unable to immediately enter Mikawa, it was a place whose purpose was a second inspection.

	The gate ~~which~~ was proof of the checkpoint was built on the riverbank of the river running down the mountain, in front of a bridge.		The gate that was proof of the checkpoint was built on the riverbank of the river running down the mountain, in front of a bridge.

	The wide, roofless gate was open, and from the opened gate, a bridge around 10 meters in width was visible.		The wide, roofless gate was open, and from the opened gate, a bridge around 10 meters in width was visible.
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	"Huh? Heyheyhey, the 'show me' that you're saying isn't something good is i—"		"Huh? Heyheyhey, the 'show me' that you're saying isn't something good is i—"

	Faster than the end of his line, a figure ~~which~~ outlined two arcs approached Sakai's back.		Faster than the end of his line, a figure that outlined two arcs approached Sakai's back.

	One of the arcs was the trajectory that the tied hair of the girl from just now had traced.		One of the arcs was the trajectory that the tied hair of the girl from just now had traced.

	The other arc was a silver trajectory ~~which~~ told of a drawn blade.		The other arc was a silver trajectory that told of a drawn blade.

	The movement did not stop. And as such...		The movement did not stop. And as such...