Horizon:Volume 1 Chapter 11 - Revision history

Muton at 16:00, 13 February 2015

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	“I’m pretty bad at verbal fights.”		“I’m pretty bad at verbal fights.”

	“It is not as if this personality is the basic one for automatons, so there are no problems. Ever since the Age of Gods, automatons have been set to serve humans; but we were never set to respect them.”		“It is not as if this personality is the basic one for automatons, so there are no problems. Ever since the Age of the Gods, automatons have been set to serve humans; but we were never set to respect them.”

	“Automatons’ right of existence<ref>Like [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Right_to_life right to life], except in terms of existence.</ref>, huh.”		“Automatons’ right of existence<ref>Like [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Right_to_life right to life], except in terms of existence.</ref>, huh.”

Muton at 21:12, 12 February 2015

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Strike Forcer: /* Chapter 11: Adults in the Pub */

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Chapter 11: Adults in the Pub

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	Therefore...		Therefore...

	“The leading ship of the ~~security team~~ is always out of Mikawa as a scout ship, going with you guys, right? It goes all the way to Aki to check the safety of the corridor... This time, Futayo will be managing the leading ship. After all, right now, Futayo is the commanding officer of Mikawa's ~~security team~~.”		“The leading ship of the guard unit is always out of Mikawa as a scout ship, going with you guys, right? It goes all the way to Aki to check the safety of the corridor... This time, Futayo will be managing the leading ship. After all, right now, Futayo is the commanding officer of Mikawa's guard unit.”

	“Ehh? The commanding officer of Mikawa's ~~security team~~, the only self-defense military force allowed by the Testament Union? You probably can't have any guns yet, being restricted by the Testament's History Recreation, but you're pretty good with close combat battles and skirmishes, right?”		“Ehh? The commanding officer of Mikawa's guard unit, the only self-defense military force allowed by the Testament Union? You probably can't have any guns yet, being restricted by the Testament's History Recreation, but you're pretty good with close combat battles and skirmishes, right?”

	“I told her that this had to be done during the period when she goes and comes back from Aki, but after that, when she disembarks, she can do whatever she likes.”		“I told her that this had to be done during the period when she goes and comes back from Aki, but after that, when she disembarks, she can do whatever she likes.”

Strike Forcer at 20:50, 20 April 2014

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Strike Forcer: /* Chapter 11: Adults in the Pub */

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Chapter 11: Adults in the Pub

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	“...It seems like you're praising me, but you're not interested in anything but Futayo, huh.”		“...It seems like you're praising me, but you're not interested in anything but Futayo, huh.”

	“Shouldn't that be obvious? A young child is far more easy to deceive than a geezer who's still serving as vice-chancellor even though he's decided to retire. However, the name of the 'Peerless in the West' Tachibana Muneshige, has been inherited at the Ootomo in Tres ~~Espana~~, so since I've connections here, I was wondering if something wouldn't come out of this.”		“Shouldn't that be obvious? A young child is far more easy to deceive than a geezer who's still serving as vice-chancellor even though he's decided to retire. However, the name of the 'Peerless in the West' Tachibana Muneshige, has been inherited at the Ootomo in Tres España, so since I've connections here, I was wondering if something wouldn't come out of this.”

	Sakai took a breath. In response, Futayo had her hands full stopping the trembling in her heart.		Sakai took a breath. In response, Futayo had her hands full stopping the trembling in her heart.

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Strike Forcer at 01:39, 13 November 2013

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	"You know, normally, one wouldn't make their daughter fight against their great friend upon a reunion, you know? Futayo, right? I've seen your name before, but you've really become strong. Seriously setting someone like that on me, Dacchan, just like ten years ago, there's something wrong with your brain, huh? If we were playing an RPG, you're the type who acts like you've immediately been cursed with Doom in a battle."		"You know, normally, one wouldn't make their daughter fight against their great friend upon a reunion, you know? Futayo, right? I've seen your name before, but you've really become strong. Seriously setting someone like that on me, Dacchan, just like ten years ago, there's something wrong with your brain, huh? If we were playing an RPG, you're the type who acts like you've immediately been cursed with Doom in a battle."

	"You're damned noisy. You always do stuff like that, doing things by yourself, so you were demoted to the Student ~~Principal~~ of Musaashi, you know!? In other words..."		"You're damned noisy. You always do stuff like that, doing things by yourself, so you were demoted to the Student President of Musaashi, you know!? In other words..."

	"Hey, hey, Dacchan, I won't let you get drunk at noon and loop your story three times. Rather, it's nice being a Student ~~Principal~~, y'know? When I want to talk with young girls, when I want to talk to female teachers, when I want to line up all the youngsters and pretend that I'm the commander of a elite squadron in my heart while having a morning assembly... How do you think it is being a Student ~~Principal~~? Right, Sakakibara!?"		"Hey, hey, Dacchan, I won't let you get drunk at noon and loop your story three times. Rather, it's nice being a Student President, y'know? When I want to talk with young girls, when I want to talk to female teachers, when I want to line up all the youngsters and pretend that I'm the commander of a elite squadron in my heart while having a morning assembly... How do you think it is being a Student President? Right, Sakakibara!?"

	"Why are you turning to me?"		"Why are you turning to me?"
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	"That's because, at that time, they were prioritizing applicants from different countries as a sign that Ariadust was very open. Ii-kun and I were thinking about what was the best for the Divine States, to the point where we withdrew our admission."		"That's because, at that time, they were prioritizing applicants from different countries as a sign that Ariadust was very open. Ii-kun and I were thinking about what was the best for the Divine States, to the point where we withdrew our admission."

	"That's a good excuse, huh. Anyways, during our school days, Lord Teacher... Lord Motonobu was the Student ~~Principal~~ and permanent Student Council President, so I was the Chancellor, and your Father was the leader of the Special Attack Division."		"That's a good excuse, huh. Anyways, during our school days, Lord Teacher... Lord Motonobu was the Student President and permanent Student Council President, so I was the Chancellor, and your Father was the leader of the Special Attack Division."

	"Say Vice-Chancellor, you damned idiot. Even now, I'm the exception of Mikawa, the special security vice-chancellor, allowed by the Testament Union."		"Say Vice-Chancellor, you damned idiot. Even now, I'm the exception of Mikawa, the special security vice-chancellor, allowed by the Testament Union."
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	The Far East's only territory. Because it moved, an Aerial Ship that circled the entire Far East.		The Far East's only territory. Because it moved, an Aerial Ship that circled the entire Far East.

	The Student ~~Principal~~ of Musashi, that was in good circumstances, had invited her, so what would follow would be perfect.		The Student President of Musashi, that was in good circumstances, had invited her, so what would follow would be perfect.

	However, I could not give an answer immediately. Because...		However, I could not give an answer immediately. Because...

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	With that, Father, who was between Sakai and I, first flipped the medium-sized sake bottle upside down and confirmed that there was nothing inside. That done, he glanced towards me, and with a voice that could be heard by Sakai...		With that, Father, who was between Sakai and I, first flipped the medium-sized sake bottle upside down and confirmed that there was nothing inside. That done, he glanced towards me, and with a voice that could be heard by Sakai...

	"Futayo, pay him no mind. Ever since before, he's a pitiful man who's had the misunderstanding ~~that,~~ 'I'm loved by everyone else!' In elementary school, he was the type to answer 'Everyone!' without hesitation when asked the question: "How many friends have you made?" by the graduation anthology teacher. He's the super-opposite of Sakakibara, who wrote 'None', but there was no helping it, so we became his bulkhead."		"Futayo, pay him no mind. Ever since before, he's a pitiful man who's had the misunderstanding 'I'm loved by everyone else!' In elementary school, he was the type to answer 'Everyone!' without hesitation when asked the question: "How many friends have you made?" by the graduation anthology teacher. He's the super-opposite of Sakakibara, who wrote 'None', but there was no helping it, so we became his bulkhead."

	After about halfway through what he said, Sakakibara, on the other side of table, waved his hand to the left and right with a slight motion.		After about halfway through what he said, Sakakibara, on the other side of table, waved his hand to the left and right with a slight motion.

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	For Honda Futayo, who studies the sword, the Matsudaira Four Heavenly Kings who include her father, Tadakatsu, are a special existence.		For Honda Futayo, who studies the sword, the Matsudaira Four Heavenly Kings who include her father, Tadakatsu, are a special existence.

	Currently, because of the frequent occurrences of ~~Phenomena~~ in Mikawa due to the 'clearing out' and the operations of New Nagoya Castle, the number of people have become few. Those who act as representative of the few people there are left are but her father and Sakakibara; the others have had their inheritance of names stolen by automatons and withdrew, leaving Mikawa.		Currently, because of the frequent occurrences of phenomena in Mikawa due to the 'clearing out' and the operations of New Nagoya Castle, the number of people have become few. Those who act as representative of the few people there are left are but her father and Sakakibara; the others have had their inheritance of names stolen by automatons and withdrew, leaving Mikawa.

	The Honda family also moved what was important to them to the alternate territory of Matsudaira, Edo, and they had a small mansion in the outskirts. In these few years, even Futayo had not set foot near the central district. However, today, because this place, that was called “the place that you're familiar with”, was near the center, in her mind she remained alert of the occurrence of ~~Phenomena~~.		The Honda family also moved what was important to them to the alternate territory of Matsudaira, Edo, and they had a small mansion in the outskirts. In these few years, even Futayo had not set foot near the central district. However, today, because this place, that was called “the place that you're familiar with”, was near the center, in her mind she remained alert of the occurrence of phenomena.

	...Despite that, Father and them are bold...		''...Despite that, Father and them are bold...''

	The Matsudaira Four Heavenly Kings' popularity was still high among those who had moved to the outskirts. Recently, I have not seen Ii Naomasa who had left on something like a business trip, but he, Father, and Sakakibara had become great among those who remained in Mikawa.		''The Matsudaira Four Heavenly Kings' popularity was still high among those who had moved to the outskirts. Recently, I have not seen Ii Naomasa who had left on something like a business trip, but he, Father, and Sakakibara had become great among those who remained in Mikawa.''

	And now, the people always spoke of Sakai.		And now, the people always spoke of Sakai.
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	...In essence, the person who was treated as the leader of the Matsudaira Four Heavenly Kings.		...In essence, the person who was treated as the leader of the Matsudaira Four Heavenly Kings.

	I had met him before. I had talked to him before. However, these were things that had happened more than ten years ago, and I do not really remember them, so I also did not know the worth or meaning of my opponent's existence. I just assumed that he was simply a hunchbacked old man.		''I had met him before. I had talked to him before. However, these were things that had happened more than ten years ago, and I do not really remember them, so I also did not know the worth or meaning of my opponent's existence. I just assumed that he was simply a hunchbacked old man.''

	Therefore, for Futayo, only Sakai is excluded from the Four Heavenly Kings.		Therefore, for Futayo, only Sakai is excluded from the Four Heavenly Kings.
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	“That's right, that's right, so, won't you come? I think that stereo-Honda would be interesting.”		“That's right, that's right, so, won't you come? I think that stereo-Honda would be interesting.”

	With that, Father, who was between Sakai and I, first flipped the medium-sized sake bottle upside down and confirmed that there was nothing inside. That done, he glanced towards me, and with a voice that could be heard by Sakai...		''With that, Father, who was between Sakai and I, first flipped the medium-sized sake bottle upside down and confirmed that there was nothing inside. That done, he glanced towards me, and with a voice that could be heard by Sakai...''

	“Futayo, pay him no mind. Ever since before, he's a pitiful man who's had the misunderstanding 'I'm loved by everyone else!' In elementary school, he was the type to answer 'Everyone!' without hesitation when asked the question: 'How many friends have you made?' by the graduation anthology teacher. He's the super-opposite of Sakakibara, who wrote 'None', but there was no helping it, so we became his bulkhead.”		“Futayo, pay him no mind. Ever since before, he's a pitiful man who's had the misunderstanding 'I'm loved by everyone else!' In elementary school, he was the type to answer 'Everyone!' without hesitation when asked the question: 'How many friends have you made?' by the graduation anthology teacher. He's the super-opposite of Sakakibara, who wrote 'None', but there was no helping it, so we became his bulkhead.”
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	The Student President of Musashi, that was in good circumstances, had invited her, so what would follow would be perfect.		The Student President of Musashi, that was in good circumstances, had invited her, so what would follow would be perfect.

	However, I could not give an answer immediately. Because...		''However, I could not give an answer immediately. Because...''

	“—Wait a bit, Sakai.”		“—Wait a bit, Sakai.”
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	“By whatever she likes, you...”		“By whatever she likes, you...”

	Father answered Sakai's question.		''Father answered Sakai's question.''

	That was something that I had decided with father the day before. What I would do with myself from now on...		''That was something that I had decided with father the day before. What I would do with myself from now on...''

	“—I told her to decide everything by herself. So, invite her then. If Futayo needs you or Musashi, she'll join you. If she wants to inherit my name, she'll do something else. That's what it means.”		“—I told her to decide everything by herself. So, invite her then. If Futayo needs you or Musashi, she'll join you. If she wants to inherit my name, she'll do something else. That's what it means.”

	Father spoke.		''Father spoke.''

	“From now on, the world will move... I want my daughter to do as she wills.”		“From now on, the world will move... I want my daughter to do as she wills.”
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	“That's nice.”		“That's nice.”

	...Eh?		''...Eh?''

	Sakai's eyes flicked this way. He raised his eyebrows slightly, and with a smile...		Sakai's eyes flicked this way. He raised his eyebrows slightly, and with a smile...
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	However, the result was clear.		However, the result was clear.

	I was able to reach my hand out, but I could not touch him.		''I was able to reach my hand out, but I could not touch him.''

	That that kind of opponent has interest in me is something to be thankful for.		''That that kind of opponent has interest in me is something to be thankful for.''

	In any case, Futayo had mostly never left Mikawa. Basically, the only ones she had shown her talent to were her father and the instructional automatons. Along with the feeling that she had slacked off in her training...		In any case, Futayo had mostly never left Mikawa. Basically, the only ones she had shown her talent to were her father and the instructional automatons. Along with the feeling that she had slacked off in her training...

	...I am uneasy as to whether or not my power is enough.		''...I am uneasy as to whether or not my power is enough.''

	The Tachibana Muneshige who had been mentioned just now was the adopted son of one of the strongest of the west, who had been called unparalleled in the past, Tachibana Dousetsu. And I had heard that he had already fought in other places.		''The Tachibana Muneshige who had been mentioned just now was the adopted son of one of the strongest of the west, who had been called unparalleled in the past, Tachibana Dousetsu. And I had heard that he had already fought in other places.''

	I had thought that this would eventually happen to me to, but finally it is a reality.		''I had thought that this would eventually happen to me to, but finally it is a reality.''

	At that moment. Sakai opened his mouth and looked at the surroundings.		At that moment. Sakai opened his mouth and looked at the surroundings.

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	Inside the wooden building, the voice of a stocky man could be heard.		Inside the wooden building, the voice of a stocky man could be heard.

	The location was a space in the outskirts of Mikawa, a space ~~which~~ included a kitchen and counter, around 20-tatami in size. It was a cafeteria ~~which~~ served alcohol and snacks.		The location was a space in the outskirts of Mikawa, a space that included a kitchen and counter, around 20-tatami in size. It was a cafeteria where it was served alcohol and snacks.

	By the entrance, tables and chairs of wood were lined up, but the inner half was merely covered with tatami. From that expanse of tatami, a voice...		By the entrance, tables and chairs of wood were lined up, but the inner half was merely covered with tatami. From that expanse of tatami, a voice...
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	...In essence, the person who was treated as the leader of the Matsudaira Four Heavenly Kings.		...In essence, the person who was treated as the leader of the Matsudaira Four Heavenly Kings.

	I had met him before. I had talked to him before. However, these were things ~~which~~ had happened more than ten years ago, and I do not really remember them, so I also did not know the worth or meaning of my opponent's existence. I just assumed that he was simply a hunchbacked old man.		I had met him before. I had talked to him before. However, these were things that had happened more than ten years ago, and I do not really remember them, so I also did not know the worth or meaning of my opponent's existence. I just assumed that he was simply a hunchbacked old man.

	Therefore, for Futayo, only Sakai is excluded from the Four Heavenly Kings.		Therefore, for Futayo, only Sakai is excluded from the Four Heavenly Kings.

	How deep is the acclamation of his worth, government, martial arts, and personality ~~which~~ people speak of?		How deep is the acclamation of his worth, government, martial arts, and personality that people speak of?

	Now, the person himself was before her eyes, but...		Now, the person himself was before her eyes, but...
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	...''Come to Musashi, huh.''		...''Come to Musashi, huh.''

	The Far East's only territory. Because it moved, an Aerial Ship ~~which~~ circled the entire Far East.		The Far East's only territory. Because it moved, an Aerial Ship that circled the entire Far East.

	The Student Principal of Musashi, ~~which~~ was in good circumstances, had invited her, so what would follow would be perfect.		The Student Principal of Musashi, that was in good circumstances, had invited her, so what would follow would be perfect.

	However, I could not give an answer immediately. Because...		However, I could not give an answer immediately. Because...
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	Father answered Sakai's question.		Father answered Sakai's question.

	That was something ~~which~~ I had decided with father the day before. What I would do with myself from now on...		That was something that I had decided with father the day before. What I would do with myself from now on...

	"—I told her to decide everything by herself. So, invite her then. If Futayo needs you or Musashi, she'll join you. If she wants to inherit my name, she'll do something else. That's what it means."		"—I told her to decide everything by herself. So, invite her then. If Futayo needs you or Musashi, she'll join you. If she wants to inherit my name, she'll do something else. That's what it means."
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	Sakai's eyes flicked this way. He raised his eyebrows slightly, and with a smile...		Sakai's eyes flicked this way. He raised his eyebrows slightly, and with a smile...

	"You're the talent ~~which~~ Honda Tadakatsu, strongest of the Matsudaira... no, Honda Tadakatsu, called the 'Peerless in the East' ~~of the Far East~~, has chosen... It must've been interesting growing up, right? How much is expected of you? Really."		"You're the talent that Honda Tadakatsu, the strongest of the Matsudaira... no, Honda Tadakatsu of the Far East, called the 'Peerless in the East', has chosen... It must've been interesting growing up, right? How much is expected of you? Really."

	"...It seems like you're praising me, but you're not interested in anything but Futayo, huh."		"...It seems like you're praising me, but you're not interested in anything but Futayo, huh."
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	"Ii's gone out on some business."		"Ii's gone out on some business."

	Sakai saw it. He saw the fact that Futayo jerked her head upwards at Tadakatsu's words, ~~which~~ had interrupted Sakakibara. Her eyes seemed to want to ask, 'Is that so?'. ''Then...'', what Sakai thought was...		Sakai saw it. He saw the fact that Futayo jerked her head upwards at Tadakatsu's words, that had interrupted Sakakibara. Her eyes seemed to want to ask, 'Is that so?'. ''Then...'', what Sakai thought was...

	"...Is it confidential?"		"...Is it confidential?"