Horizon:Volume 1 Chapter 12 - Revision history

Muton at 21:22, 12 February 2015

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Strike Forcer: /* Chapter 12: Innocents in Remorse Way */

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Chapter 12: Innocents in Remorse Way

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	Masazumi herself understood this. She knew the reason for this clearly as well.		Masazumi herself understood this. She knew the reason for this clearly as well.

	''However, this was not the time nor place to wither away. In the interior of the carriage, where I could barely see through the window, opposite to Father there was a member of Musashi's provisional ~~parliament~~ as well as an executive from the chamber of commerce and industry. In Okutama, there were many business that were started personally or as part of clubs, not to mention unions.''		''However, this was not the time nor place to wither away. In the interior of the carriage, where I could barely see through the window, opposite to Father there was a member of Musashi's provisional council as well as an executive from the chamber of commerce and industry. In Okutama, there were many business that were started personally or as part of clubs, not to mention unions.''

	Therefore, Masazumi spoke.		Therefore, Masazumi spoke.

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Strike Forcer at 19:15, 26 November 2013

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Strike Forcer at 01:39, 13 November 2013

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	As he spoke, he lurched towards the Academy.		As he spoke, he lurched towards the Academy.

	"You've probably heard this from ~~principal~~ Sakai, but will you be coming tonight? Tomorrow I'm going to confess to the girl I'm in love with, so we're having a party at the Academy the night before."		"You've probably heard this from president Sakai, but will you be coming tonight? Tomorrow I'm going to confess to the girl I'm in love with, so we're having a party at the Academy the night before."

	"Y-You idiot, what's with that all of a sudden?"		"Y-You idiot, what's with that all of a sudden?"

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Strike Forcer at 03:04, 4 November 2013

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	Below her.		Below her.

	There was a large stairway, the second schoolyard, and another stairway. In the second schoolyard, the clubs of the physical strand were performing mock battles/undergoing combat practice as part of their respective club activities.		There was a large stairway, the second schoolyard, and another stairway. In the second schoolyard, the clubs of the physical strand were performing mock battles and undergoing combat practice as part of their respective club activities.

	However, Kimi was directing her gaze beyond them and their actions.		However, Kimi was directing her gaze beyond them and their actions.
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	In front of the road, paved with resin meant to imitate stone paving, a single boy stood.		In front of the road, paved with resin meant to imitate stone paving, a single boy stood.

	The lines of his uniformed figure ~~slender,~~ he was Toori.		The lines of his uniformed slend figure showed he was Toori.

	Kimi looked at his back as he stood there, unmoving. She said this, sighing as she spoke.		Kimi looked at his back as he stood there, unmoving. She said this, sighing as she spoke.
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	"Teeheehee, Sensei. I had heard that you were drinking in the cafeteria, but what have ''you'' come here for?"		"Teeheehee, Sensei. I had heard that you were drinking in the cafeteria, but what have ''you'' come here for?"

	"Well, maybe...I'm just enjoying the cold air."		"Well, maybe... I'm just enjoying the cold air."

	A figure clad in a jumper, bottle of sake clutched underarm, sat to Kimi's right.		A figure clad in a jumper, bottle of sake clutched underarm, sat to Kimi's right.
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	Kimi frowned at her.		Kimi frowned at her.

	"~~Hehehe~~, Sensei. You can't comb your fingers through your hair unless it's for fashion. Toori does it a lot, but it'll damage your hair, so leave it to me."		"Fufufu, Sensei. You can't comb your fingers through your hair unless it's for fashion. Toori does it a lot, but it'll damage your hair, so leave it to me."

	As Oriotorai was seated next to her, Kimi combed her hair with a comb she took out from her bosom.		As Oriotorai was seated next to her, Kimi combed her hair with a comb she took out from her bosom.
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	"Ah, no, I was reminiscing about how a granny in the neighbourhood would do this for me."		"Ah, no, I was reminiscing about how a granny in the neighbourhood would do this for me."

	"A granny...Could it be that you come from the Izumo district?"		"A granny... Could it be that you come from the Izumo district?"

	'Hehehe'. Oriotorai narrowed her eyes as she laughed.		'Hehehe'. Oriotorai narrowed her eyes as she laughed.
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	"Well, I've been to lots of places, but I'm probably the most happy here."		"Well, I've been to lots of places, but I'm probably the most happy here."

	"~~Teeheehee~~, Sensei. Please don't tell me your life story even after suddenly getting all drunk and treating me like a granny."		"Fufufu, Sensei. Please don't tell me your life story even after suddenly getting all drunk and treating me like a granny."

	"Isn't it fine? Or maybe I should say, for me, this is a day to be celebrated as well."		"Isn't it fine? Or maybe I should say, for me, this is a day to be celebrated as well."
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	Kimi combed the back of her hair.		Kimi combed the back of her hair.

	"~~Hehe~~, will Sensei be my idiot brother's ally?"		"Fufu, will Sensei be my idiot brother's ally?"

	"Whether or not the idiot brother's ally, I don't know, but I will become Aoi Toori's ally~ Or Kimi, or anybody else's. At the very least, I'm definitely the ally of everyone in my class... Ah, but, teaching staff can't be directly involved in inter-student battles, so when it comes to that, you'll have to forgive me, alright?"		"Whether or not be the idiot brother's ally, I don't know, but I will become Aoi Toori's ally~ Or Kimi, or anybody else's. At the very least, I'm definitely the ally of everyone in my class... Ah, but, teaching staff can't be directly involved in inter-student battles, so when it comes to that, you'll have to forgive me, alright?"

	'Yes'.		'Yes'.
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	Behind Masazumi~~. The~~ direction to which she turned.		Behind Masazumi, to the direction to which she turned.

	There stood a carriage.		There stood a carriage.
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	"Masazumi."		"Masazumi."

	A voice could be heard. This was the final decision. As a ~~political~~ hopeful, before the people who hold power in Musashi, what choice should she make? Her father was chasing her towards a rushed judgement.		A voice could be heard. This was the final decision. As a hopeful politician before the people who hold power in Musashi, what choice should she make? Her father was chasing her towards a rushed judgement.

	"——"		"——"
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	As he spoke, he lurched towards the Academy.		As he spoke, he lurched towards the Academy.

	"You've probably heard this from ~~president~~ Sakai, but will you be coming tonight? Tomorrow I'm going to confess to the girl I'm in love with, so we're having a party at the Academy the night before."		"You've probably heard this from principal Sakai, but will you be coming tonight? Tomorrow I'm going to confess to the girl I'm in love with, so we're having a party at the Academy the night before."

	"Y-You idiot, what's with that all of a sudden?"		"Y-You idiot, what's with that all of a sudden?"

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	"'May the spirits find repose' 1618..."		"'May the spirits find repose' 1618..."

	'Something for the ~~respose~~ of souls, then?' Masazumi judged. If it's thirty years ago, then Mikawa and its surroundings would still be busy, and the insurrection that used Catholic ~~Ability~~ against government oppression ~~and~~ battles that were occurring everywhere in the Far East should have been ~~in existence~~.		'Something for the repose of souls, then?' Masazumi judged. If it's thirty years ago, then Mikawa and its surroundings would still be busy, and the insurrection that used Catholic spells against government oppression with the battles that were occurring everywhere in the Far East should have been ongoing.

	I had heard that while still young, Lord Motonobu had suppressed those insurrections and secured his place as the head of family.		I had heard that while still young, Lord Motonobu had suppressed those insurrections and secured his place as the head of family.

	"Something from that time, then?...It was left here even after Musashi's renovation."		"Something from that time, then? ...It was left here even after Musashi's renovation."

	A breath.		A breath.

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	A breath.		A breath.

	"Of course, the Testament Union acknowledged Lord ~~MotoNobu~~'s will and returned the name to its former standing, but that name still remained in several things. The Academy is one such example, and the child who used that name was..."		"Of course, the Testament Union acknowledged Lord Motonobu's will and returned the name to its former standing, but that name still remained in several things. The Academy is one such example, and the child who used that name was..."

	Masazumi's father spoke thus, as if to steal the business partner's words out of his mouth.		Masazumi's father spoke thus, as if to steal the business partner's words out of his mouth.