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Txtracer: typos; made Masazumi's joke cornier

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typos; made Masazumi's joke cornier

Aagcnet at 22:58, 2 May 2014

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	…''This part gets tricky.		…''This part gets tricky.

	“Carlos I travelled across Europe as the chancellor of Tres España and as Carlos V of M.H.R.R., but he primarily lived in M.H.R.R. And once the inheritor of the name Felipe II was officially determined, he retired. That is why the current leaders of Tres España have no direct connection to Carlos I. To strengthen their influence, they include a lot of who have a second inherited name from the Far East and a lot of the long-lived race. I’m sure some of you already know this, but here is a list.”		“Carlos I travelled across Europe as the chancellor of Tres España and as Carlos V of M.H.R.R., but he primarily lived in M.H.R.R. And once the inheritor of the name Felipe II was officially determined, he retired. That is why the current leaders of Tres España have no direct connection to Carlos I. To strengthen their influence, they include a lot of those who have a second inherited name from the Far East and a lot of the long-lived race. I’m sure some of you already know this, but here is a list.”

	'''<Tres España, Alcalá de Henares: List of Representative Students>		'''<Tres España, Alcalá de Henares: List of Representative Students>

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	'''1st Special Duty: Tachibana Muneshige – Also inherited the name of Postman García. Currently retired?		'''1st Special Duty: Tachibana Muneshige – Also inherited the name of Postman García. Currently retired?

	'''2nd Special Duty: Era Fusahide – Also inherited the name of Naval Leader ~~Alvaro~~. Captain of the track and field team. European long-lived ghost.		'''2nd Special Duty: Era Fusahide – Also inherited the name of Naval Leader Álvaro. Captain of the track and field team. European long-lived ghost.

	'''3rd Special Duty: Tachibana Gin – Tachibana Muneshige’s wife.		'''3rd Special Duty: Tachibana Gin – Tachibana Muneshige’s wife.

	'''4th Special Duty: Pedro ~~Valdes~~ – Baseball team. Flores’s older brother.		'''4th Special Duty: Pedro Valdés – Baseball team. Flores’s older brother.

	'''5th Special Duty: Flores ~~Valdes~~ – Baseball team. Pedro’s younger sister.		'''5th Special Duty: Flores Valdés – Baseball team. Pedro’s younger sister.

	“That should sum it up.”		“That should sum it up.”

Js06 at 19:24, 3 October 2013

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	At that point, Neshinbara unexpectedly spoke up once more while continuing his own work.		At that point, Neshinbara unexpectedly spoke up once more while continuing his own work.

	“After all, England and Tres España are preparing for the Battle of ~~Gravelines~~.” He took a breath. “England will win this battle and it is said to begin soon. Musashi’s arrival in England is sure to be used as an opportunity.”		“After all, England and Tres España are preparing for the Naval Battle of the Armada.” He took a breath. “England will win this battle and it is said to begin soon. Musashi’s arrival in England is sure to be used as an opportunity.”



	~~“Gravelines…~~?” asked Suzu who wore a track suit.		“Armada…?” asked Suzu who wore a track suit.

	She tilted her head in confusion and Neshinbara continued speaking without turning around.		She tilted her head in confusion and Neshinbara continued speaking without turning around.
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	So…		So…

	“With the Battle of ~~Gravelines~~ so soon, we should find opportunities to negotiate if we go to England. After all, Musashi holds high potential for trade. An offer of replenishing their goods can be used as an effective bargaining chip.”		“With the Naval Battle of the Armada so soon, we should find opportunities to negotiate if we go to England. After all, Musashi holds high potential for trade. An offer of replenishing their goods can be used as an effective bargaining chip.”

	Neshinbara gave Masazumi a look that said, “Isn’t that right?”		Neshinbara gave Masazumi a look that said, “Isn’t that right?”
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	Masazumi had a single answer to that. She gave a deep nod and spoke.		Masazumi had a single answer to that. She gave a deep nod and spoke.

	“I would like to stay out of the Battle of ~~Gravelines~~ if at all possible.”		“I would like to stay out of the Naval Battle of the Armada if at all possible.”

Strike Forcer at 12:07, 3 October 2013

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Strike Forcer: That was fine, Karl is Carlos in german.

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That was fine, Karl is Carlos in german.

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	“Judge,” said Urquiaga with a nod. “That is about when my grandfather lamented of the poor crops and left Tres España. The first Juana’s marriage and Carlos I ruling two nations was one thing that supported Tres España’s later success.”		“Judge,” said Urquiaga with a nod. “That is about when my grandfather lamented of the poor crops and left Tres España. The first Juana’s marriage and Carlos I ruling two nations was one thing that supported Tres España’s later success.”

	“Judge. That’s right. Carlos I became the president of España and, according to the history recreation, also became the Emperor-President of M.H.R.R. as ~~Carlos~~ V. He was a powerful president whose rule spread across Europe and even into Africa.”		“Judge. That’s right. Carlos I became the president of España and, according to the history recreation, also became the Emperor-President of M.H.R.R. as Karl V. He was a powerful president whose rule spread across Europe and even into Africa.”

	…''This part gets tricky.		…''This part gets tricky.

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Just a few typos fixed and very little editing.

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	“Well, at least he’s started coming back home recently.”		“Well, at least he’s started coming back home recently.”

	As she muttered to herself, she undid her hair which had been ~~bound~~ up while she ran. She wet her lips with water and poured the extra water into the ditch cutting across the grass. Some brown algae creatures appeared from within the ditch.		As she muttered to herself, she undid her hair which had been tied up while she ran. She wet her lips with water and poured the extra water into the ditch cutting across the grass. Some brown algae creatures appeared from within the ditch.

	“Thank you, Masazumi.”		“Thank you, Masazumi.”
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	If they could do that, she felt they would approach a solution to the Apocalypse. She just wished they had some kind of feedback to know they were on the right track.		If they could do that, she felt they would approach a solution to the Apocalypse. She just wished they had some kind of feedback to know they were on the right track.

	The coming of the Apocalypse could be seen in the strange phenomena and disappearances, but it still ~~did not feel real~~ to most people.		The coming of the Apocalypse could be seen in the strange phenomena and disappearances, but it still felt unreal to most people.

	Wanting a sense of crisis to consolidate those within Musashi was a dangerous idea, but at the same time…		Wanting a sense of crisis to consolidate those within Musashi was a dangerous idea, but at the same time…
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	“Eh?”		“Eh?”

	Masazumi quickly turned around and found ~~gold~~ eyes looking at her.		Masazumi quickly turned around and found golden eyes looking at her.

	It was Mitotsudaira.		It was Mitotsudaira.
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	…''What a close group.		…''What a close group.

	As Masazumi thought, she was approached by Asama who wore the red and white track only used by shrine maidens.		As Masazumi thought so, she was approached by Asama who wore the red and white track only used by shrine maidens.

	“Oh, Masazumi. I’m about to make sports drinks for Kimi, Suzu-san, and the others. Do you want some?”		“Oh, Masazumi. I’m about to make sports drinks for Kimi, Suzu-san, and the others. Do you want some?”
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	“Heh heh heh. Female knight, are you challenging someone as wise as me!? Fine, I will answer! But I am so clever I know things that one could never know! I am super clever! However, the stripping rule is in effect for the beautiful, so I hope you are prepared! They say the beautiful die young, and the beautiful’s relative lack of clothing makes that very true for the stripping rule!”		“Heh heh heh. Female knight, are you challenging someone as wise as me!? Fine, I will answer! But I am so clever I know things that one could never know! I am super clever! However, the stripping rule is in effect for the beautiful, so I hope you are prepared! They say the beautiful die young, and the beautiful’s relative lack of clothing makes that very true for the stripping rule!”

	''What a waste of oxygen,'' thought Mitotsudaira as she cleared her ~~threat~~.		''What a waste of oxygen,'' thought Mitotsudaira as she cleared her throat.

	“Anyway, let us continue. Let’s see… Their dependency on the Kamakura Shogunate brings us back to the Genpei War. When mankind descended from the heavens and created the Harmonic Divine States, humans were not the only ones to remain in the real Divine States as residents of the Far East. Interestingly enough, an investigation of bloodlines discovered non-human races included in the bloodlines of ~~Fare~~ East residents. They chose to remain in the real world. And during the history recreation, two of those races prospered after being given a family of their own. Those two families were the Minamoto clan and the Taira clan. The Minamoto clan went to the long-lived race and the Taira clan went to the giants. At this time, the environment was still too harsh for humans to…”		“Anyway, let us continue. Let’s see… Their dependency on the Kamakura Shogunate brings us back to the Genpei War. When mankind descended from the heavens and created the Harmonic Divine States, humans were not the only ones to remain in the real Divine States as residents of the Far East. Interestingly enough, an investigation of bloodlines discovered non-human races included in the bloodlines of Far East residents. They chose to remain in the real world. And during the history recreation, two of those races prospered after being given a family of their own. Those two families were the Minamoto clan and the Taira clan. The Minamoto clan went to the long-lived race and the Taira clan went to the giants. At this time, the environment was still too harsh for humans to…”

	Mitotsudaira cleared her throat and added, “I mean people.”		Mitotsudaira cleared her throat and added, “I mean people.”
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	“Needless to say, these people are not actually all related. They all inherited their names.		“Needless to say, these people are not actually all related. They all inherited their names.

	“After the death of her husband, the first Juana became known as the mad queen and was kept confined. The son Carlos I who was the previous president of Tres España was quite active after her death and was a complicated person.”		“After the death of her husband, the first Juana became known as the mad queen and was kept confined. The son Carlos I, who was the previous president of Tres España, was quite active after her death and was a complicated person.”

	Masazumi manipulated the screen to display the area to the east of Shimonoseki. It now showed the northeastern portion of Izumo.		Masazumi manipulated the screen to display the area to the east of Shimonoseki. It now showed the northeastern portion of Izumo.
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	“Judge,” said Urquiaga with a nod. “That is about when my grandfather lamented of the poor crops and left Tres España. The first Juana’s marriage and Carlos I ruling two nations was one thing that supported Tres España’s later success.”		“Judge,” said Urquiaga with a nod. “That is about when my grandfather lamented of the poor crops and left Tres España. The first Juana’s marriage and Carlos I ruling two nations was one thing that supported Tres España’s later success.”

	“Judge. That’s right. Carlos I became the president of España and, according to the history recreation, also became the Emperor-President of M.H.R.R. as ~~Karl~~ V. He was a powerful president whose rule spread across Europe and even into Africa.”		“Judge. That’s right. Carlos I became the president of España and, according to the history recreation, also became the Emperor-President of M.H.R.R. as Carlos V. He was a powerful president whose rule spread across Europe and even into Africa.”

	…''This part gets tricky.		…''This part gets tricky.
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	So…		So…

	“With the Battle of Gravelines so soon, we should find opportunities to negotiate if we go to England. After all, Musashi ~~has a~~ high ~~ability~~ for trade. An offer of replenishing their goods can be used as an effective bargaining chip.”		“With the Battle of Gravelines so soon, we should find opportunities to negotiate if we go to England. After all, Musashi holds high potential for trade. An offer of replenishing their goods can be used as an effective bargaining chip.”

	Neshinbara gave Masazumi a look that said, “Isn’t that right?”		Neshinbara gave Masazumi a look that said, “Isn’t that right?”
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	Kimi: Heh heh heh. Foolish brother, that is a surprisingly good question for someone who doesn’t look nerdy at all ~~but~~ is obsessed with porn games. ~~The view from above~~ looks like this. I will explain the details individually if I ever get a chance, but it is made up of two ships in the center and three on both the left and right. All of the ships are connected with towing belts, rope passageways, and transport pipes. Also, transport ships are always wandering between and around the ships. The ships directly in front of or behind the other overlap quite a bit and are very close together, but don’t worry because they move away during turns.		Kimi: Heh heh heh. Foolish brother, that is a surprisingly good question for someone who doesn’t look nerdy at all yet is obsessed with porn games. It looks like this when viewed from above. I will explain the details individually if I ever get a chance, but it is made up of two ships in the center and three on both the left and right. All of the ships are connected with towing belts, rope passageways, and transport pipes. Also, transport ships are always wandering between and around the ships. The ships directly in front of or behind the other overlap quite a bit and are very close together, but don’t worry because they move away during turns.

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	On the southwestern edge of the Iberian Peninsula, Masazumi drew an arrow coming from the south and a stick figure.		On the southwestern edge of the Iberian Peninsula, Masazumi drew an arrow coming from the south and a stick figure.

	“Internal conflict over money and the position of king threw the Visigothic Kingdom into chaos and the Mlasi crossed the ocean into the Iberian ~~Pneinsula~~ after extending their influence to the northern coast of Africa. These Mlasi were a group driven away by the other Mlasi forces and they conquered the Iberian Peninsula and named it the Caliphate of Córdoba.”		“Internal conflict over money and the position of king threw the Visigothic Kingdom into chaos and the Mlasi crossed the ocean into the Iberian Peninsula after extending their influence to the northern coast of Africa. These Mlasi were a group driven away by the other Mlasi forces and they conquered the Iberian Peninsula and named it the Caliphate of Córdoba.”

	Masazumi then had Mitotsudaira bring up a new sign frame. She wrote the following sequence on it:		Masazumi then had Mitotsudaira bring up a new sign frame. She wrote the following sequence on it:

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	One of the students, the track suit wearing Honda Masazumi, let out a breath and reached for the bamboo bottle attached to a hard point at her waist.		One of the students, the track suit wearing Honda Masazumi, let out a breath and reached for the bamboo bottle attached to a hard point at her waist.

	She wet her throat with water she had drawn at Musashi Ariadust Academy back at the rear central ship of Okutama. She wished she had been able to bring a sports drink like her classmate Ohiroshiki or old acquaintance and vice ~~president~~ Honda Futayo.		She wet her throat with water she had drawn at Musashi Ariadust Academy back at the rear central ship of Okutama. She wished she had been able to bring a sports drink like her classmate Ohiroshiki or old acquaintance and vice chancellor Honda Futayo.

	…''But I don’t have the money.		…''But I don’t have the money.
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	“The child of those Catholic Monarchs was the woman who became known as Juana the Mad. Juana married M.H.R.R.’s Duke of Burgundy, so her son Carlos I ruled both Tres España and M.H.R.R. He was the previous ~~president~~ of Tres España. His children were Felipe II and his younger sister, the second Juana. They are the ones who have inherited the position of Tres España’s ~~president~~ and student council vice president.”		“The child of those Catholic Monarchs was the woman who became known as Juana the Mad. Juana married M.H.R.R.’s Duke of Burgundy, so her son Carlos I ruled both Tres España and M.H.R.R. He was the previous chancellor of Tres España. His children were Felipe II and his younger sister, the second Juana. They are the ones who have inherited the position of Tres España’s chancellor and student council vice president.”

	Masazumi snapped her fingers and Mitotsudaira copied down the following family line.		Masazumi snapped her fingers and Mitotsudaira copied down the following family line.
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	'''Carlos I (Karl V – M.H.R.R. Emperor-~~President~~ and Tres España president)		'''Carlos I (Karl V – M.H.R.R. Emperor-Chancellor and Tres España president)

	↓		↓

	'''Felipe II (Tres España ~~president~~)/Juana II (Tres España student council vice president)		'''Felipe II (Tres España chancellor)/Juana II (Tres España student council vice president)

	“Needless to say, these people are not actually all related. They all inherited their names.		“Needless to say, these people are not actually all related. They all inherited their names.

	“After the death of her husband, the first Juana became known as the mad queen and was kept confined. The son Carlos I, who was the previous ~~president~~ of Tres España, was quite active after her death and was a complicated person.”		“After the death of her husband, the first Juana became known as the mad queen and was kept confined. The son Carlos I, who was the previous chancellor of Tres España, was quite active after her death and was a complicated person.”

	Masazumi manipulated the screen to display the area to the east of Shimonoseki. It now showed the northeastern portion of Izumo.		Masazumi manipulated the screen to display the area to the east of Shimonoseki. It now showed the northeastern portion of Izumo.

	“This is the Netherlands or Holland. Tres España controls the area, but Carlos I was born here. M.H.R.R. had been shaken by a religions revolution, so they saw meaning in giving power to Tres España which was prospering as a Catholic nation. Tres España wanted to prosper as an emerging nation, so they saw meaning in gaining the name and authority of the Emperor-~~President~~ which was an old representative of Catholicism.”		“This is the Netherlands or Holland. Tres España controls the area, but Carlos I was born here. M.H.R.R. had been shaken by a religions revolution, so they saw meaning in giving power to Tres España which was prospering as a Catholic nation. Tres España wanted to prosper as an emerging nation, so they saw meaning in gaining the name and authority of the Emperor-Chancellor which was an old representative of Catholicism.”

	“Judge,” said Urquiaga with a nod. “That is about when my grandfather lamented of the poor crops and left Tres España. The first Juana’s marriage and Carlos I ruling two nations was one thing that supported Tres España’s later success.”		“Judge,” said Urquiaga with a nod. “That is about when my grandfather lamented of the poor crops and left Tres España. The first Juana’s marriage and Carlos I ruling two nations was one thing that supported Tres España’s later success.”

	“Judge. That’s right. Carlos I became the ~~president~~ of España and, according to the history recreation, also became the Emperor-~~President~~ of M.H.R.R. as Karl V. He was a powerful ~~president~~ whose rule spread across Europe and even into Africa.”		“Judge. That’s right. Carlos I became the chancellor of España and, according to the history recreation, also became the Emperor-Chancellor of M.H.R.R. as Karl V. He was a powerful chancellor whose rule spread across Europe and even into Africa.”

	…''This part gets tricky.		…''This part gets tricky.

	“Carlos I travelled across Europe as the ~~president~~ of Tres España and as Carlos V of M.H.R.R., but he primarily lived in M.H.R.R. And once the inheritor of the name Felipe II was officially determined, he retired. That is why the current leaders of Tres España have no direct connection to Carlos I. To strengthen their influence, they include a lot of who have a second inherited name from the Far East and a lot of the long-lived race. I’m sure some of you already know this, but here is a list.”		“Carlos I travelled across Europe as the chancellor of Tres España and as Carlos V of M.H.R.R., but he primarily lived in M.H.R.R. And once the inheritor of the name Felipe II was officially determined, he retired. That is why the current leaders of Tres España have no direct connection to Carlos I. To strengthen their influence, they include a lot of who have a second inherited name from the Far East and a lot of the long-lived race. I’m sure some of you already know this, but here is a list.”

	'''<Tres España, Alcalá de Henares: List of Representative Students>		'''<Tres España, Alcalá de Henares: List of Representative Students>

	'''~~President~~: Felipe II – Also inherited the name Oouchi Yoshinaga. Also holds the position of student council president. Far Easterner. Likes office work.		'''Chancellor: Felipe II – Also inherited the name Oouchi Yoshinaga. Also holds the position of student council president. Far Easterner. Likes office work.

	'''Student Council Vice President: Juana – Also holds the position of treasurer. Far Eastern long-lived woman. Logismoi Oplo user.		'''Student Council Vice President: Juana – Also holds the position of treasurer. Far Eastern long-lived woman. Logismoi Oplo user.
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	'''Secretary: Velázquez – Far Eastern long-lived man. Painter. Testamenta Arma user.		'''Secretary: Velázquez – Far Eastern long-lived man. Painter. Testamenta Arma user.

	'''Vice ~~President~~: Hironaka Takakane – Also inherited the name of Army Leader Peréz. Captain of the baseball team. Ghost. Testamenta Arma user.		'''Vice Chancellor: Hironaka Takakane – Also inherited the name of Army Leader Peréz. Captain of the baseball team. Ghost. Testamenta Arma user.

	'''1st Special Duty: Tachibana Muneshige – Also inherited the name of Postman García. Currently retired?		'''1st Special Duty: Tachibana Muneshige – Also inherited the name of Postman García. Currently retired?
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	Masazumi nodded and lightly pointed back at her sign frame.		Masazumi nodded and lightly pointed back at her sign frame.

	“Okay. Tres España’s ~~president~~, Felipe II, inherited the Netherlands from Carlos I when he was designated ~~president~~. However, due to being overworked with managing Tres España and not understanding the foreign language, his management of the Netherlands has been sloppy. There have even been revolts and independence movements in response to the exploitation of the bureaucracy in charge. Holland’s war of independence against España is known as the Eighty Years' War.”		“Okay. Tres España’s chancellor, Felipe II, inherited the Netherlands from Carlos I when he was designated chancellor. However, due to being overworked with managing Tres España and not understanding the foreign language, his management of the Netherlands has been sloppy. There have even been revolts and independence movements in response to the exploitation of the bureaucracy in charge. Holland’s war of independence against España is known as the Eighty Years' War.”

	Naito reacted to those words while fighting back a weary yawn. She blinked her eyes and nodded a few times.		Naito reacted to those words while fighting back a weary yawn. She blinked her eyes and nodded a few times.