Horizon:Volume 3C Chapter 78 - Revision history

70.184.6.115 at 15:20, 3 September 2015

2015-09-03T15:20:27Z

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	…''Here I go!		…''Here I go!

	Given their positions, her mother had the advantage here, but she could jab her left ~~below~~ into her mother’s left side as she stood up.		Given their positions, her mother had the advantage here, but she could jab her left elbow into her mother’s left side as she stood up.

	Her mother could not intercept her because the woman’s left arm was still held out over her head.		Her mother could not intercept her because the woman’s left arm was still held out over her head.
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	Her arm bent and built up the speed she needed.		Her arm bent and built up the speed she needed.

	She did it all using he daughter’s actions, so she smiled with the ends of her eyebrows lowered.		She did it all using her daughter’s actions, so she smiled with the ends of her eyebrows lowered.

	“It’s too bad, Nate.”		“It’s too bad, Nate.”

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2015-09-02T09:51:12Z

Chapter 78: Advancer of the Age

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	“Heh heh. I thought I could just jump down from the deck, but that’s surprisingly big! It’s over! My wise life is over! We’re going to be crushed so flat you won’t be able to tell me and the huge-breasted shrine maiden apart! Danke schööööön!! Come on, Adele! Quit adjusting your inner suit’s butt and get over here! Your corpse can fuse with some giant breasts! This is just like the sphinx’s riddle! What is flat-chested in the morning, flat-chested in the afternoon, and a corpse at night!? Man! That is what it means to be human!”		“Heh heh. I thought I could just jump down from the deck, but that’s surprisingly big! It’s over! My wise life is over! We’re going to be crushed so flat you won’t be able to tell me and the huge-breasted shrine maiden apart! Danke schööööön!! Come on, Adele! Quit adjusting your inner suit’s butt and get over here! Your corpse can fuse with some giant breasts! This is just like the sphinx’s riddle! What is flat-chested in the morning, flat-chested in the afternoon, and a corpse at night!? Man! That is what it means to be human!”

	“Wh-what are you talking about, Kimi? …Ah, we might really be in trouble! Oh, no. I have three porn games to test in my bag! If I die and they find those in my possession, they’ll definitely think I was weird! They’ll say the daughter of the Asama family was a ~~born~~ reviewer who brought porn games onto the battlefield!”		“Wh-what are you talking about, Kimi? …Ah, we might really be in trouble! Oh, no. I have three porn games to test in my bag! If I die and they find those in my possession, they’ll definitely think I was weird! They’ll say the daughter of the Asama family was a porn reviewer who brought porn games onto the battlefield!”

	“Um, personally, I think both of you should calm down.”		“Um, personally, I think both of you should calm down.”

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Chapter 78: Advancer of the Age: typos

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	The falling wreckage of the four warships was torn through and destroyed in the night sky.		The falling wreckage of the four warships was torn through and destroyed in the night sky.

	It broke down the center and scattered to either side, so one half fell next to the Far Eastern transport ship and the other half fell next to the transport ship carrying the ~~hemisphere~~. The hemisphere ship had the armor of one side torn away and was thrown off balance, but it gently moved to maintain its position.		It broke down the center and scattered to either side, so one half fell next to the Far Eastern transport ship and the other half fell next to the transport ship carrying the hemispheres. The hemisphere ship had the armor of one side torn away and was thrown off balance, but it gently moved to maintain its position.

	They were all safe.		They were all safe.
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	“Musashi” was the one who responded to all that stress and weight.		“Musashi” was the one who responded to all that stress and weight.

	“I am distributing my authority to each individual ship. Please remove your ship’s stress in preparation for the full-power ~~reacceleration~~. Over.”		“I am distributing my authority to each individual ship. Please remove your ship’s stress in preparation for the full-power re-acceleration. Over.”

	Suzu sensed each ship shaking in response.		Suzu sensed each ship shaking in response.
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	“Musashi’s chancellor hasn’t shown up yet, has he?”		“Musashi’s chancellor hasn’t shown up yet, has he?”

	“It seems one of his ~~travelling~~ companions has already arrived at the city’s wall, so I have determined he is currently passing through the battle between Hexagone Française and M.H.R.R.”		“It seems one of his traveling companions has already arrived at the city’s wall, so I have determined he is currently passing through the battle between Hexagone Française and M.H.R.R.”

	“Their 1st special duty officer is a ninja, right? He should be good at that.”		“Their 1st special duty officer is a ninja, right? He should be good at that.”
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	With her hips still lowered, Anne took a breath. She closed her eyes and the surrounding sound reached her auditory devices. From her surroundings, she heard the battlefield noises and countless shouts, but from the overhead transport ships, she heard the words of those waiting for their classmates as they tried to soften the harsh atmosphere.		With her hips still lowered, Anne took a breath. She closed her eyes and the surrounding sound reached her auditory devices. From her surroundings, she heard the battlefield noises and countless shouts, but from the overhead transport ships, she heard the words of those waiting for their classmates as they tried to soften the harsh atmosphere.

	''Yes,'' she thought. ''No one is watching me right now ~~expect~~ for Luynes.		''Yes,'' she thought. ''No one is watching me right now except for Luynes.

	But…		But…
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	After all, all of the people near their mansion – even the ones her own age – kept their distance when she tried to play with them.		After all, all of the people near their mansion – even the ones her own age – kept their distance when she tried to play with them.

	She was from a Loup-~~Garous~~ family. She doubted the people had known her mother was the Reine des Garous, but…		She was from a Loup-Garou family. She doubted the people had known her mother was the Reine des Garous, but…

	…''Being from a man-eating family was enough to be feared.		…''Being from a man-eating family was enough to be feared.
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	She had nodded and her mother had laughed.		She had nodded and her mother had laughed.

	“Don’t worry. It isn’t when they eat someone that a Loup-~~Garous~~ grows up.”		“Don’t worry. It isn’t when they eat someone that a Loup-Garou grows up.”

	“Then when is it?”		“Then when is it?”
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	She sank down, but her mother leaned her outstretched body forward to lower herself as well.		She sank down, but her mother leaned her outstretched body forward to lower herself as well.

	…''She really knows how to ~~adlib~~!”		…''She really knows how to ad-lib!”

	Mitotsudaira exhaled and got down on her hands and knees.		Mitotsudaira exhaled and got down on her hands and knees.

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2015-07-04T01:22:40Z

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