Horizon:Volume 3 Chapter 03 - Revision history

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Txtracer: small fixes and a couple of grammatical rearrangements

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Strike Forcer at 14:02, 8 November 2014

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	“—In any case, thank you for everything back in England.”		“—In any case, thank you for everything back in England.”

	“Eh? Ah No, after all I didn’t cause a ruckus at the London ~~Tower~~ nor had any real activity during Armada. I was waiting for maintenance on my mobile shell so it was pretty easy-going for me.”		“Eh? Ah No, after all I didn’t cause a ruckus at the Tower of London nor had any real activity during Armada. I was waiting for maintenance on my mobile shell so it was pretty easy-going for me.”

	''More importantly…''		''More importantly…''
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	''…Unbelievable.''		''…Unbelievable.''

	Musashi’s 1st Special Duty Officer usually served a feint role during battles and even at England’s London ~~Tower~~ he had not participated in any direct combat. However even then…		Musashi’s 1st Special Duty Officer usually served a feint role during battles and even at England’s Tower of London he had not participated in any direct combat. However even then…

	“I see, I understand.”		“I see, I understand.”
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	“Horizon might experience sadness if she were to suddenly come to face her past without knowing anything, you know? If that happens, foolish brother might become discouraged. That is also something that I do not wish for.”		“Horizon might experience sadness if she were to suddenly come to face her past without knowing anything, you know? If that happens, foolish brother might become discouraged. That is also something that I do not wish for.”

	That’s why Kimi directed her gaze to the silver hair which was walking ~~to here~~ from far away and said.		That’s why Kimi directed her gaze to the silver hair which was walking there from far away and said.

	“For the sake of Horizon who knows nothing… Will you let her hear your words so that she can confront that past?”		“For the sake of Horizon who knows nothing… Will you let her hear your words so that she can confront that past?”

Strike Forcer: /* Chapter 03: Hard Worker of the Unfamiliar Site */

2014-11-06T02:10:46Z

Chapter 03: Hard Worker of the Unfamiliar Site

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	The place where she was basking in the western wind was a garden of a suburban house at IZUMO.		The place where she was basking in the western wind was a garden of a suburban house at IZUMO.

	The spacious garden was enclosed by a fence. It was a fence which was entwined with Japanese morning glory shoots ~~which yet~~ had no flowers.		The spacious garden was enclosed by a fence. It was a fence which was entwined with Japanese morning glory shoots that still had no flowers.

	Raising one’s face and looking up from there, it was possible to overlook everything in the surrounding scenery.		Raising one’s face and looking up from there it was possible to overlook everything in the surrounding scenery.

	In the east was Musashi, in the south was ~~country~~ and forest and then in the north and west there was the city of IZUMO, ~~there~~ could be seen a massive multistory shrine combined with a white development center.		In the east was Musashi, in the south was the countryside and forest and then in the north and west there was the city of IZUMO, where it could be seen a massive multistory shrine combined with a white development center.

	In this garden which took a distance from all of these was a house with a southern facing thatched roof.		In this garden which took a distance from all of these was a house with a southern facing thatched roof.
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	Then after Kimi had looked in all four directions, she directed her gaze to the east, towards Musashi.		Then after Kimi had looked in all four directions, she directed her gaze to the east, towards Musashi.

	~~“— Well~~ then.”		“—Well then.”

	Beneath the blue of the early summer and the low clouds, there was a massive black and white ship. From her current position, the whole aspect of the starboard side looked as if a cliff of great length.		Beneath the blue of the early summer and the low clouds, there was a massive black and white ship. From her current position, the whole aspect of the starboard side looked as if a cliff of great length.

	The dancing girl, while entwining her hair, blown about by the wind, around her arm, let out a small laugh.		The dancing girl, while entwining her hair, that was being blown about by the wind, around her arm, let out a small laugh.

	“Looking from below makes it seem so large. Don’t you think so, ~~Uzui~~?”		“Looking from below makes it seem so large. Don’t you think so, Uzy?”

	Calling out, there from the gap in her chest a wavy-haired little girl Mouse crawled out and nodded.		Calling out, there from the gap in her chest a wavy-haired little girl Mouse crawled out and nodded.

	She clapped her hands once and pulled out a sign frame. The contents ~~were,~~		She clapped her hands once and pulled out a sign frame. The contents were…

	'''Silver Wolf:''' “Kimi, Horizon has headed that way. Can you see her?”		'''Silver Wolf:''' “Kimi, Horizon has headed that way. Can you see her?”

	'''Wise Sister:''' “Easily ~~Wolf~~. From just now though.”		'''Wise Sister:''' “Easily wolf. From just now though.”

	As if following Musashi’s outer wall, Kimi moved her sight downwards.		As if following Musashi’s outer wall, Kimi moved her sight downwards.

	On one of the several bridges connected to Musashi, there were two shadows on the road heading in this direction.		On one of the several bridges connected to Musashi, there were two shadows on the road heading in this direction.
	~~There, coming along between the shelter-belt forest road which had a slight heat haze was,~~

	~~“Haha~~, ~~as I thought, foolish brother chose to abstain. With your lady attendant as your escort — you seem to be on your leisurely way, Horizon.”~~		There, coming along between the shelter-belt forest road which had a slight heat haze was…

	While still far away, Kimi saw the silver hair which seemed as if it was immersed in the heat haze come along. Well then, without changing her posture Kimi, turned her back on Horizon and Futayo.		“Haha, as I thought, foolish brother chose to pass. With a lady attendant as your escort, you seem to be on your leisurely way, Horizon.”

			While still far away, Kimi saw the silver hair which seemed as if it was immersed in the heat haze come along. ''Well then,'' without changing her posture Kimi, turned her back on Horizon and Futayo.

	'''Wise Sister:''' “Mitotsudaira, in that case you should come down here as well. Have you longed for your mother’s scent so much that you can’t come down? You being too considerate of Mary is also something you should avoid…”		'''Wise Sister:''' “Mitotsudaira, in that case you should come down here as well. Have you longed for your mother’s scent so much that you can’t come down? You being too considerate of Mary is also something you should avoid…”
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	'''Silver Wolf:''' “This way of speaking…!”		'''Silver Wolf:''' “This way of speaking…!”

	Aha, Kimi softly laughed, however she lightly lowered her eyebrows.		''Aha,'' Kimi softly laughed, however she lightly lowered her eyebrows.

	Looking at the sign frame,		Looking at the sign frame, she said.

	“Well, do your best.”		“Well, do your best.”
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	There was a city.		There was a city.

	In the surroundings there were rice-plant paddies and irrigation channels with in the north side there was a town, with a Shinto ~~shrine arch~~ and a group of research facilities that could be seen as a massive fortress. On the far side of the Shinto Arch there was a staircase which spanned over several kilometers, and above that a shrine.		In the surroundings there were rice-plant paddies and irrigation channels with in the north side there was a town, with a Shinto torii gate and a group of research facilities that could be seen as a massive fortress. On the far side of the Shinto Arch there was a staircase which spanned over several kilometers, and above that a shrine it was…

	“Izumo-Kitsuki-Taisha. ~~— The~~ core of the Large Company IZUMO, from the age of the gods it has been the large financial support of the gods and is now what the citizens of the Far East rely upon….~~. hmm”~~		“Izumo-Kitsuki-Taisha. —The core of the Large Company IZUMO, from the age of the gods it has been the large financial support of the gods and is now what the citizens of the Far East rely upon… Hmm.”

	~~Taking~~ a breath.		She took a breath.

	~~“Meeting~~ my grandmother who lives in a place like this~~, I wonder what Horizon will think~~?”		“I wonder what Horizon will think meeting my grandmother who lives in a place like this?”

	“Lives in place like this is quite a thing to say, Kimi.”		“Lives in place like this is quite a thing to say, Kimi.”
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	It was a woman’s slightly subdued voice.		It was a woman’s slightly subdued voice.

	~~“— Grandmother”~~		“—Grandmother”

	“How many times do I have say that either Mitsu or Grandma are fine ~~before you understand~~. I’m not someone who needs that much respect.”		“How many times before you understand do I have say you that either Mitsu or Grandma are fine. I’m not someone who needs that much respect.”

	Appearing from the house frontage was an elderly woman who was wearing the clothing of the Far East with the front closed as many married people had it, and whose hair had faded to a light brown.		Appearing from the house frontage there was an elderly woman who was wearing the clothing of the Far East with the front closed as many married people had it, and whose hair had faded to a light brown.

	“So? Horizon is alive? I heard about Mikawa and the rest. Here and there were disturbances and wariness. Then well, the reason you came here wasn’t to learn about ritual techniques or smiting, was it? ~~— What~~ did you come here for?”		“So? Horizon is alive? I heard about Mikawa and the rest. Here and there were disturbances and wariness. Then well, the reason you came here wasn’t to learn about ritual techniques or smiting, was it? —What did you come here for?”

	“As far as we know, for the moment we want to hear the oldest story that we can.”		“As far as we know, for the moment we want to hear the oldest story that we can.”

	What stories? In regards to her grandmother’s question, Kimi answered like this.		''What stories?'' In regards to her grandmother’s question, Kimi answered like this.

	“About Horizon’s mother. Mother would not talk about it… however, what about Grandmother? Is there anything that you can say in front of Horizon herself? After all, Horizon may have lost her memories but it is not like she has lost her past. There is a lot she should know—”		“About Horizon’s mother. Mother would not talk about it… however, what about Grandmother? Is there anything that you can say in front of Horizon herself? After all, Horizon may have lost her memories but it is not like she has lost her past. There is a lot she should know—”
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	“She should know?”		“She should know?”

	Haha, Kimi nodded her head.		''Haha'', Kimi nodded her head.

	“Horizon might experience sadness if she were to suddenly come to face her past without knowing anything, you know? If that happens, foolish brother might become discouraged. That is also something ~~which~~ I do not wish for.”		“Horizon might experience sadness if she were to suddenly come to face her past without knowing anything, you know? If that happens, foolish brother might become discouraged. That is also something that I do not wish for.”

	That’s why Kimi directed her gaze to the silver hair which was walking to here from far away and said.		That’s why Kimi directed her gaze to the silver hair which was walking to here from far away and said.

Strike Forcer at 01:29, 6 November 2014

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Strike Forcer at 23:11, 5 November 2014

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Strike Forcer at 19:15, 5 November 2014

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	“Wow, a pear tart from IZUMO ~~below~~?”		“Wow, a pear tart from below in IZUMO?”

	~~The~~ blonde with a scarred face turned around with a surprised voice ~~inside the grounds of a Shrine which possessed the sky of an atrium~~.		Inside the grounds of a Shrine which possessed an atrium as a ceiling, the blonde with a scarred face turned around with a surprised voice.

	The location was the third underground floor at the rear of Okutama. Within the atrium established using the two side streets, the ascending stairs there led to the ~~Shinto shrine~~ arch, where there was a grove and a shrine.		The location was the third underground floor at the rear of Okutama. Within the atrium established using the two side streets, the ascending stairs there led to the ''torii'' arch, where there was a grove and a shrine.

	The name which was bestowed on the large ~~Shinto shrine~~ archway on the bow side was “Asama Shrine”.		The name which was bestowed on the large torii archway on the bow side was “Asama Shrine”.

	Through the waterfalls formed by the rivers falling from the surface section and sunlight entering from the atrium, shadows and light intersected several places within the shrine grounds. Inside those shrine grounds the one who had spoken the previous words was the priestess-styled inner-suit figure of Mary.		Through the waterfalls formed by the rivers falling from the surface section and the sunlight entering from the atrium, shadows and light intersected several places within the shrine grounds. Inside those shrine grounds the one who had spoken the previous words was the priestess-styled inner-suit figure of Mary.

	She, while taking the paper box ~~which was~~ offered,		She, while taking the paper box offered to her, said.

	“Is it all right? Adele, is it alright for me to accept this.”		“Is it all right? Lady Adele, is it alright for me to accept this?”

	~~Jud~~, the one who nodded was the blue jersey clad figure of Adele.		''Judge,'' the one who nodded was the blue jersey clad figure of Adele.

	“These ~~were~~ provisions provided by ~~“Musashi”~~ and the others to the official positions and important offices. Earlier when purchasing tableware from down below, ~~“Musashi”~~ requested ~~that I~~ carry them with me ~~when~~ I ~~return,~~ in order to reduce her load. Please have it together with the ~~first~~ special ~~agent~~. ~~— Hey~~!”		“These are provisions provided by ‘Musashi’ and the others to the official positions and important offices. Earlier when purchasing tableware from down below, ‘Musashi’ requested me to carry them with me once I returned in order to reduce her load. Please have it together with the 1st special duty officer. —Hey!”
	Adele who was speaking, directed those final words to the surrounding pack of shadows ~~which was~~ jumping around.
			Adele who was speaking, directed those final words to the surrounding pack of shadows jumping around.

	It was the dogs.		It was the dogs.

	~~Those with collars, without collars~~ as well as young, adult and old ~~dogs~~. With ~~Adele’s~~ single word the dogs, with a stray white dog in the ~~centre~~, sat down all at once. Adele faced the dogs,		There were dogs on leashes and off leash as well as young, adult and old. With single word from Adele, the dogs, with a stray white dog in the middle, sat down all at once. Adele faced the dogs and said.

	“This is where you get your water from, okay? Anything else is prohibited. The toilet is also at the prescribed location.”		“This is where you get your water from, okay? Anything else is prohibited. The toilet is also at the prescribed location.”
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	The dogs let out a single loud bark as if to nod.		The dogs let out a single loud bark as if to nod.

	Good, Adele nodded and began to provide the feed she had received from ~~passers-by~~ in orderly fashion. Turning around and looking, ~~the smiling~~ Mary ~~who~~ was there ~~was,~~		''Good,'' Adele nodded and began to provide the feed she had received from pedestrians in orderly fashion. Turning around and looking, Mary was there similing.

	~~“… However~~, well, I would never have thought that you would take a part-time job as a priestess at the Asama Shrine.”		“…However, well, I would never have thought that you would take a part-time job as a priestess at the Asama Shrine.”

Purin: Handle name consistency.

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Handle name consistency.

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	She clapped her hands once and pulled out a sign frame. The contents were,		She clapped her hands once and pulled out a sign frame. The contents were,

	*'''~~[Argente Loup]~~:''' ~~『Kimi~~, Horizon has headed that way. Can you see her?』		'''Silver Wolf:''' “Kimi, Horizon has headed that way. Can you see her?”

	*'''~~[Smart Big Sis]~~:''' ~~『Easily~~ Wolf. From just now though.』		'''Wise Sister:''' “Easily Wolf. From just now though.”

	As if following Musashi’s outer wall, Kimi moved her sight downwards.		As if following Musashi’s outer wall, Kimi moved her sight downwards.
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	While still far away, Kimi saw the silver hair which seemed as if it was immersed in the heat haze come along. Well then, without changing her posture Kimi, turned her back on Horizon and Futayo.		While still far away, Kimi saw the silver hair which seemed as if it was immersed in the heat haze come along. Well then, without changing her posture Kimi, turned her back on Horizon and Futayo.

	*'''~~[Smart Big Sis]~~:''' ~~『Mitotsudaira~~, in that case you should come down here as well. Have you longed for your mother’s scent so much that you can’t come down? You being too considerate of Mary is also something you should ~~avoid…』~~		'''Wise Sister:''' “Mitotsudaira, in that case you should come down here as well. Have you longed for your mother’s scent so much that you can’t come down? You being too considerate of Mary is also something you should avoid…”

	*'''~~[Argente Loup]~~:''' ~~『This~~ way of speaking…!』		'''Silver Wolf:''' “This way of speaking…!”

	Aha, Kimi softly laughed, however she lightly lowered her eyebrows.		Aha, Kimi softly laughed, however she lightly lowered her eyebrows.

Aagcnet: /* Chapter 03: Hard Worker of the Unfamiliar Site */

2014-05-26T18:02:12Z

Chapter 03: Hard Worker of the Unfamiliar Site

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	So working at the shrine to “Demonstrate her belief” was done in order to relax the application conditions.		So working at the shrine to “Demonstrate her belief” was done in order to relax the application conditions.

	However, Adele thought. Like her who only believed ~~only~~ in Catholicism, she was able to respect her beliefs in everyday life, and if Asama was there acting as an intermediary, it was simple to achieve messaging. However,		However, Adele thought. Like her who only believed in Catholicism, she was able to respect her beliefs in everyday life, and if Asama was there acting as an intermediary, it was simple to achieve messaging. However,

	“Why did you say that you wanted to understand Shinto?”		“Why did you say that you wanted to understand Shinto?”
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	“Jud, normally you assemble a foothold and then attach them horizontally in an orderly fashion—”		“Jud, normally you assemble a foothold and then attach them horizontally in an orderly fashion—”

	Tenzou indicated above. To a position which was approximately twenty meters above. Floating there on a broom ~~was~~ golden wings who ~~was waving~~ her hand in this direction. It was Naito. She raised her hand next to her mouth,		Tenzou indicated above. To a position which was approximately twenty meters above. Floating there on a broom were golden wings who waved her hand in this direction. It was Naito. She raised her hand next to her mouth,

	“From what I can tell the repairs in this area aren't done properly.”		“From what I can tell the repairs in this area aren't done properly.”

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