Horizon:Volume 3 Chapter 07 - Revision history

Strike Forcer at 02:16, 23 November 2014

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	After all the target had itself jumped towards them at the moment of the attack.		After all the target had itself jumped towards them at the moment of the attack.

	#1, who had lost his timing, gained a deep smile on his cheeks.		<nowiki>#1</nowiki>, who had lost his timing, gained a deep smile on his cheeks.

	''……Now you’ve done it!''		''……Now you’ve done it!''

Txtracer: missed a couple

2014-11-21T07:26:30Z

missed a couple

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	“T-there’s an embarrassing old guy who became really serious here!!”		“T-there’s an embarrassing old guy who became really serious here!!”

	''There is nothing wrong with that!'' yelled the demonic monk into the sky clenching his fist.		"There is nothing wrong with that!" yelled the demonic monk into the sky, clenching his fist.

	“In Man'yō poetry, the maiden stricken with love goes near the mansion of someone outside of her reach with a tear-stained face! How pitiful and fleeting! What can you say about that in one word!?”		“In Man'yō poetry, the maiden stricken with love goes near the mansion of someone outside of her reach with a tear-stained face! How pitiful and fleeting! What can you say about that in one word!?”
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	What she grasped with her fingers was the short dagger that #1 had just now released to lighten his body. With her fingers Futayo grasped the blade of the dagger that seemed as if it had fallen onto the roof, and while slightly shaving away her skin threw it at #2.		What she grasped with her fingers was the short dagger that #1 had just now released to lighten his body. With her fingers Futayo grasped the blade of the dagger that seemed as if it had fallen onto the roof, and while slightly shaving away her skin threw it at #2.

	#2, the opponent that the heavy armor-piercing dagger was flying at, was wind.		<nowiki>#2</nowiki>, the opponent that the heavy armor-piercing dagger was flying at, was wind.

	Blades have no effect on the wind. But there was a place where it made sense to attack.		Blades have no effect on the wind. But there was a place where it made sense to attack.

Txtracer: many small fixes

2014-11-21T07:14:32Z

many small fixes

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Strike Forcer at 14:56, 12 November 2014

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Strike Forcer at 02:09, 12 November 2014

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	“—The imagination of an aspiring author is only this?”		“—The imagination of an aspiring author is only this?”

	#7 came from an even greater height than him.		<nowiki>#7</nowiki> came from an even greater height than him.

	''……Damn!''		''……Damn!''
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	“How about this?”		“How about this?”

	#2 grasped a large number of knives from the bag that she was holding under her arm.		<nowiki>#2</nowiki> grasped a large number of knives from the bag that she was holding under her arm.

	At the same time the presence of #1 was moving at her back.		At the same time the presence of #1 was moving at her back.

Strike Forcer at 21:41, 11 November 2014

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Strike Forcer at 19:30, 11 November 2014

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Purin: Handle name consistency.

2014-07-01T02:28:57Z

Handle name consistency.

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	“Normal? Is it normal for a light novel to have its characters have names with “Dark”, “Kill”, ”King” or “Rome” in them you fool!! While walking on the street reading something with special attack names such including “Prison”, “Temple” or “Impact” what is up with saying “Ah, there’s no nipple ticket this time”!? In the first place what is up with talking about nipple tickets something which is nothing more than an urban legend with such a self-satisfied expression!”		“Normal? Is it normal for a light novel to have its characters have names with “Dark”, “Kill”, ”King” or “Rome” in them you fool!! While walking on the street reading something with special attack names such including “Prison”, “Temple” or “Impact” what is up with saying “Ah, there’s no nipple ticket this time”!? In the first place what is up with talking about nipple tickets something which is nothing more than an urban legend with such a self-satisfied expression!”

	'''* Four-Eyes:''' ~~『……What~~? You’re still reading those type of　embarrassing stories? It couldn’t be that you are writing them as well right?』		'''Four Eyes:''' “……What? You’re still reading those type of　embarrassing stories? It couldn’t be that you are writing them as well right?”

	“B-Be quiet, don’t interfere. Well, you see—”		“B-Be quiet, don’t interfere. Well, you see—”
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	“Go!!”		“Go!!”

	~~『Understood—』~~		'''“'''Understood—'''”'''

	In the direction of the front and the rear. Towards the left rear “Number One” went the butt-end. The tip was shot towards “Number two” at the front right.		In the direction of the front and the rear. Towards the left rear “Number One” went the butt-end. The tip was shot towards “Number two” at the front right.
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	The attack which entered a downward arc cut apart the kicked iron-ribbed fan and then towards the Demon Monk below,		The attack which entered a downward arc cut apart the kicked iron-ribbed fan and then towards the Demon Monk below,

	“Well then. — Finally one down.”		“Well then. — Finally one down.”

	……It was unreasonable!		……It was unreasonable!
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	However still while forming a silver arc using both katana and however while directing that power directly towards the enemy,		However still while forming a silver arc using both katana and however while directing that power directly towards the enemy,

	~~『—Wait~~!!』		'''“'''—Wait!!'''”'''

	There was something that arrived together with a voice from an audio device .		There was something that arrived together with a voice from an audio device .
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	Before he could finish thinking a sign frame opened at the side of his head. The thing that Michizane hurriedly indicated was,		Before he could finish thinking a sign frame opened at the side of his head. The thing that Michizane hurriedly indicated was,

	* '''~~Argente Loup~~:''' ~~『It~~ is an emergency situation! Please check the sky surrounding IZUMO!』		'''Silver Wolf:''' “It is an emergency situation! Please check the sky surrounding IZUMO!”

	The likely hurriedly created short words immediately had follow up words being created. That was,		The likely hurriedly created short words immediately had follow up words being created. That was,

	* '''~~Argente Loup~~:''' ~~『The~~ fleets of various countries are gathering as if to encircle IZUMO!』		'''Silver Wolf:''' “The fleets of various countries are gathering as if to encircle IZUMO!”

Aagcnet: /* Chapter 07: The Gusting Individuals of the Neutral Zone */

2014-05-26T17:47:28Z

Chapter 07: The Gusting Individuals of the Neutral Zone

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	In front of Masazumi’s gaze the man smiled in surprise and spoke.		In front of Masazumi’s gaze the man smiled in surprise and spoke.

	“That you would ~~be able to~~ be able to receive our first blow.”		“That you would be able to receive our first blow.”

	The woman also spoke with a smile.		The woman also spoke with a smile.
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	Will you be alright? there she went to say that but stopped. Futayo held a higher official position than her. Worrying about her would achieve nothing. What she should be saying was,		Will you be alright? there she went to say that but stopped. Futayo held a higher official position than her. Worrying about her would achieve nothing. What she should be saying was,

	“Make sure that you don’t overdo it okay? You seem a ~~touched~~ irritated.”		“Make sure that you don’t overdo it okay? You seem a touch irritated.”

	“Do I seem like that?”		“Do I seem like that?”
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	……While he was walking the street reading the book that he had bought someone had suddenly gone to punch him.		……While he was walking the street reading the book that he had bought someone had suddenly gone to punch him.

	It was a dangerous story is what he had thought, however ~~that~~ that power was strong enough to easily destroy a bench which was located at the side of the road was troublesome. The opponents were a group of two and one of them was at that precise moment,		It was a dangerous story is what he had thought, however that power was strong enough to easily destroy a bench which was located at the side of the road was troublesome. The opponents were a group of two and one of them was at that precise moment,

	“— Come on!!”		“— Come on!!”
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	With a sharp enthusiastic shout they leaped and pursued after a person who was in the air.		With a sharp enthusiastic shout they leaped and pursued after a person who was in the air.

	It was a woman. It was a ~~women~~ who was wearing a plumed female Far East school uniform with the belly exposed, the figure of a dancing girl .		It was a woman. It was a woman who was wearing a plumed female Far East school uniform with the belly exposed, the figure of a dancing girl .

	She leaped into a high position. At the moment when Neshinbara saw that it was not a spell but martial arts.		She leaped into a high position. At the moment when Neshinbara saw that it was not a spell but martial arts.
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	“—The imagination of an aspiring author is only that?”		“—The imagination of an aspiring author is only that?”

	“Number Seven” came from an even greater height than ~~here~~.		“Number Seven” came from an even greater height than him.

	……Damm!		……Damm!
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	Thinking that they were going to charge they then instantly circled around to the rear of the teashop and completing several turns like that. There was no stagnation in their coming and going however occasionally they showed a shaking like bend the same as the wind.		Thinking that they were going to charge they then instantly circled around to the rear of the teashop and completing several turns like that. There was no stagnation in their coming and going however occasionally they showed a shaking like bend the same as the wind.

	That movement ~~were~~ not just horizontally; it was also from above and as if to gouge it oppositely came from below.		That movement was not just horizontally; it was also from above and as if to gouge it oppositely came from below.

	That’s why Futayo ran lengthwise and crosswise throughout the town.		That’s why Futayo ran lengthwise and crosswise throughout the town.
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	“Number Two” grasped a large number of knives from the bag that she was holding under her arm.		“Number Two” grasped a large number of knives from the bag that she was holding under her arm.

	At the same time there was the presence that of “Number One” moving at her rear.		At the same time there was the presence, that of “Number One” moving at her rear.

	There the knives were thrown. They were not thrown to pierce the opponent. They were scattered, thrown on a trajectory to stop one’s movements. Even if she went to repel them, ~~that~~ the knives which were not aimed for ~~here~~ made it hard to read the trajectory.		There the knives were thrown. They were not thrown to pierce the opponent. They were scattered, thrown on a trajectory to stop one’s movements. Even if she went to repel them, the knives which were not aimed for her made it hard to read the trajectory.

	As a judgment against the enemy in her front and rear and the group of knives,		As a judgment against the enemy in her front and rear and the group of knives,
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	It was released.		It was released.

	In response a movement from the rear left occurred first. As “Number One” was very near he abandoned his short sword then made his lightened body spin and opened up some distance.		In response, a movement from the rear left occurred first. As “Number One” was very near, he abandoned his short sword then made his lightened body spin and opened up some distance.

	Accompanying those movements, which also raised loud footsteps, was a voice containing a smile.		Accompanying those movements, which also raised loud footsteps, was a voice containing a smile.
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	Futayo’s back went as if to touch his chest.		Futayo’s back went as if to touch his chest.

	At the moment when he thought they ~~was~~ going to contact as if they were embracing, “Number two” who was enveloping her suddenly moved. She blew ~~here~~ away to the side.		At the moment when she thought they were going to make contact as if they were embracing, “Number two” who was enveloping her suddenly moved. She blew her away to the side.

	“Noo—”		“Noo—”
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	“…!”		“…!”

	Towards ~~here~~ who was stepping backwards “Number One” was trying to pass by the side of ~~here stooped~~ his body to pass under Tonbokiri and conversely “Number Two” joined with the wind and climber over Tonbokiri.		Towards her who was stepping backwards, “Number One” was trying to pass by the side of her. Stooped his body to pass under Tonbokiri and conversely “Number Two” joined with the wind and climber over Tonbokiri.

	She saw the enemy.		She saw the enemy.
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	Futayo thought. That even though no matter how you look at it the inexperienced her was desperately evading and struggling the enemy conveyed ~~that~~ that was still going to continue with their gaze.		Futayo thought. That even though no matter how you look at it the inexperienced her was desperately evading and struggling, the enemy conveyed that was still going to continue with their gaze.

	How admirable.		How admirable.
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	…Eh?		…Eh?

	Neshinbara who ~~was~~ had been blown away by her observed her movements while landing on a faraway rooftop.		Neshinbara who had been blown away by her observed her movements while landing on a faraway rooftop.

	However he was unable to comprehend.		However he was unable to comprehend.

Aagcnet: /* Chapter 07: The Gusting Individuals of the Neutral Zone */

2014-05-26T17:29:38Z

Chapter 07: The Gusting Individuals of the Neutral Zone

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	……It was unreasonable!		……It was unreasonable!

	Neshinbara opened his mouth and looked at the woman who had launched off the consecutive attacks. While wondering about why was it that all the other species ~~woman~~ who appeared in front of him were a bunch of Spartans.		Neshinbara opened his mouth and looked at the woman who had launched off the consecutive attacks. While wondering about why was it that all the other species of women who appeared in front of him were a bunch of Spartans.

	However still while forming a silver arc using both katana and however while directing that power directly towards the enemy,		However still while forming a silver arc using both katana and however while directing that power directly towards the enemy,