Horizon:Volume 4A Chapter 01 - Revision history

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	They were eighty meters up from the dock’s floor off the starboard side of Musashino, Musashi’s front central ship.		They were eighty meters up from the dock’s floor off the starboard side of Musashino, Musashi’s front central ship.

	Muneshige was going through rehabilitation with Gin’s help. He checked the feel of his ~~leg~~ as he ran on the reinforced wooden deck, clashed pieces of metal shaped like swords with Gin, and held combat training as sparks flew.		Muneshige was going through rehabilitation with Gin’s help. He checked the feel of his legs as he ran on the reinforced wooden deck, clashed pieces of metal shaped like swords with Gin, and held combat training as sparks flew.

	“…”		“…”
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	And because he understood that, he did not go easy on her.		And because he understood that, he did not go easy on her.

	With each and every step, his ~~footstep~~ travelled up his entire body and he spoke the words that came most naturally to him.		With each and every step, his footsteps travelled up his entire body and he spoke the words that came most naturally to him.

	“Gin.”		“Gin.”
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	…''You could probably say it’s in top form.		…''You could probably say it’s in top form.

	Meanwhile, the Musashi sat above the territory belonging to 5th Special Duty Officer Mitotsudaira’s clan. It was inside the Ariake, a giant dock ~~especially~~ designed for the Musashi that had created a stealth defense barrier around itself.		Meanwhile, the Musashi sat above the territory belonging to 5th Special Duty Officer Mitotsudaira’s clan. It was inside the Ariake, a giant dock designed specifically for the Musashi that had created a stealth defense barrier around itself.

	The residential districts had been rearranged into transport ships and most of Musashi’s residents were living at the land ports in Mito territory. The eight ships had been split up between the eight land ports, so…		The residential districts had been rearranged into transport ships and most of Musashi’s residents were living at the land ports in Mito territory. The eight ships had been split up between the eight land ports, so…
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	He was not any longer.		He was not any longer.

	Would he be able become like that again? Would he be able to do something like that or do something even greater? He restrained his doubts with the sensation of his feet pressing against the ground.		Would he be able to become like that again? Would he be able to do something like that or do something even greater? He restrained his doubts with the sensation of his feet pressing against the ground.

	He used his mind to restrain his stewing body and he used his body to restrain his stewing mind. And as he repeated that process…		He used his mind to restrain his stewing body and he used his body to restrain his stewing mind. And as he repeated that process…

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	That place was the vast interior of the Ariake. The metal space was large enough that the four walls looked hazy in the distance.		That place was the vast interior of the Ariake. The metal space was large enough that the four walls looked hazy in the distance.

	It was longer lengthwise than widthwise and eight docks were carved into it. ~~The~~ docks sat ~~over~~ massive ~~goliath~~ cranes and girders even larger than the cranes and each one contained a ship ~~with~~ bearing the name “Musashi” followed by an individual name.		It was longer lengthwise than widthwise and eight docks were carved into it. On the docks sat massive Goliath cranes and girders even larger than the cranes; and each one contained a ship bearing the name “Musashi” followed by an individual name.

	The Ariake had no windows. Instead, sign frames displaying the view outside were lined up along the ceiling, walls, and around the docks. Artificial environmental light based on the time of day outside was created by lamp spells.		The Ariake had no windows. Instead, sign frames displaying the view outside were lined up along the ceiling, walls, and around the docks. Artificial environmental light based on the time of day outside was created by lamp spells.
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	As the Musashi was remodeled within, the Ariake contained the light of an early summer evening.		As the Musashi was remodeled within, the Ariake contained the light of an early summer evening.

	Most of the sounds inside were from moving cranes or linked wagons carrying materials or from the work taking place between the canopies covering parts of the ships or inside the wooden prefab construction buildings.		Most of the sounds inside were from moving cranes, or linked wagons carrying materials, or from the work taking place between the canopies covering parts of the ships or inside the wooden prefab construction buildings.

	There were sounds of hammering, welding, saws, drills, and cargo being set down or dragged. There were also the occasional cheers when some piece of work was completed.		There were sounds of hammering, welding, saws, drills, and cargo being set down or dragged. There were also the occasional cheers when some piece of work was completed.
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	It was already past time for school to be let out, so this bell was informing the ship that it was now 5:00 PM.		It was already past time for school to be let out, so this bell was informing the ship that it was now 5:00 PM.

	The artificial light illuminating it from overhead gradually began to ~~set~~, but the sounds of work continued. No one went home or even grabbed an early dinner. If anyone did leave, it was to buy some food for the entire group they were working with.		The artificial light illuminating it from overhead gradually began to dim, but the sounds of work continued. No one went home or even grabbed an early dinner. If anyone did leave, it was to buy some food for the entire group they were working with.

	They all stubbornly remained at the work sites.		They all stubbornly remained at the work sites.
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	Then, they would begin to chat. They would distract themselves from what lay ahead and what future awaited them, but they would keep those things in the corner of their vision.		Then, they would begin to chat. They would distract themselves from what lay ahead and what future awaited them, but they would keep those things in the corner of their vision.

	Once a certain place started chatting, people found it hard to leave, so they all ended up chatting cheerfully.		Once a certain place started chatting, people found it hard to leave; so they all ended up chatting cheerfully.

	“Hey, did Satomi’s Student Council President end up transferring in?”		“Hey, did Satomi’s Student Council President end up transferring in?”
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	“Hey, could you two quit drawing swords on each other and help carry these materials?”		“Hey, could you two quit drawing swords on each other and help carry these materials?”

	As that conversation played out on Takao’s surface, a light ~~god~~ of ~~war~~ activated.		As that conversation played out on Takao’s surface, a light God of War activated.

	“Okay, East Ship Team 3B-26. Let’s go!”		“Okay, East Ship Team 3B-26. Let’s go!”

	They all followed the ~~god~~ of ~~war~~ and climbed from its tail ballast to its head.		They all followed the God of War and climbed from its tail ballast to its head.

	“Hey.”		“Hey.”
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	And because he understood that, he did not go easy on her.		And because he understood that, he did not go easy on her.

	With each and every step, his footsteps ~~travelled~~ up his entire body and he spoke the words that came most naturally to him.		With each and every step, his footsteps traveled up his entire body and he spoke the words that came most naturally to him.

	“Gin.”		“Gin.”
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	…''Long ago.		…''Long ago.

	When the people had descended to this planet, every part of the world save the Far East where the Environmental Gods were, had been given too great a recovery, so the Far East had been the only livable place. So the people had started a war over that land and nearly wiped themselves out again. Having learned their lesson, the people had known they could not leave the state of the world to people and had decided to obey proven history instead. That was what Futayo had been taught in class.		When the people had descended to this planet, every part of the world save the Far East where the Environmental Gods were had been given too great a recovery; so the Far East had been the only livable place. So the people had started a war over that land and nearly wiped themselves out again. Having learned their lesson, the people had known they could not leave the state of the world to people and had decided to obey proven history instead. That was what Futayo had been taught in class.

	The rules concerning inherited names had been developed back then. And when they had made the Testament to provide instructions, they had made sure it automatically revealed only the next hundred years of history to make sure no one tried to get their hands on too much power.		The rules concerning inherited names had been developed back then. And when they had made the Testament to provide instructions, they had made sure it automatically revealed only the next hundred years of history to make sure no one tried to get their hands on too much power.