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	“…Watch out!”		“…Watch out!”

	The Seiryu would abandon its pressure in other areas in order to protect Masamune. Its current of pressure, its roar, and its ~~lightening~~ attacks which were taking form all mercilessly assaulted Urquiaga and Narumi when they tried to get close.		The Seiryu would abandon its pressure in other areas in order to protect Masamune. Its current of pressure, its roar, and its lightning attacks which were taking form all mercilessly assaulted Urquiaga and Narumi when they tried to get close.

	That meant Suzu and the Date warriors had to do it.		That meant Suzu and the Date warriors had to do it.
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	“If you forget…you really will…lose him…”		“If you forget…you really will…lose him…”

	She had already lost someone ~~import~~ to her, so what would happen if she forgot that? Even if he could live on in her heart…		She had already lost someone important to her, so what would happen if she forgot that? Even if he could live on in her heart…

	“You aren’t in the present!” shouted Suzu.		“You aren’t in the present!” shouted Suzu.
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	''It’s over,'' thought Narumi. ''My greatest reason to remain inside Date is over,'' she realized in her unturning form.		''It’s over,'' thought Narumi. ''My greatest reason to remain inside Date is over,'' she realized in her unturning form.

	The half-dragon had yet to move from within the collapsed wall behind her, but she decided to trust that he was fine. She also decided thank them. And on top of that…		The half-dragon had yet to move from within the collapsed wall behind her, but she decided to trust that he was fine. She also decided to thank them. And on top of that…

	“We will settle this soon.”		“We will settle this soon.”
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	Narumi understood that when she saw the Seiryu approaching Masamune and the others.		Narumi understood that when she saw the Seiryu approaching Masamune and the others.

	She had go at this with everything she had.		She had to go at this with everything she had.

	She would attack on the left side from her perspective. She could use either hand, but that was the safest position since she was mostly right-handed. So she held a mandible sword in her right hand on the left side of the Seiryu.		She would attack on the left side from her perspective. She could use either hand, but that was the safest position since she was mostly right-handed. So she held a mandible sword in her right hand on the left side of the Seiryu.
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	“Testament. When our ancestors moved to the Harmonic Territory, the origins of the dance were forgotten, but when we returned here and regrouped with the others, we learned anew what it meant. Ever since, we have offered up the dance like this.”		“Testament. When our ancestors moved to the Harmonic Territory, the origins of the dance were forgotten, but when we returned here and regrouped with the others, we learned anew what it meant. Ever since, we have offered up the dance like this.”

	The seven hundred noble ghosts advanced. Adele knew that only around thirty would return. But those sacrifices allowed them access the Environmental Gods.		The seven hundred noble ghosts advanced. Adele knew that only around thirty would return. But those sacrifices allowed them to access the Environmental Gods.

	Music from the festival answered the divine protection flutes playing at the head of the Party.		Music from the festival answered the divine protection flutes playing at the head of the Party.

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