86.52.13.23: Three fixes. I am unsure if the third one was formatted like that on purpose or if I should have left it alone.

2017-02-04T03:25:27Z

Three fixes. I am unsure if the third one was formatted like that on purpose or if I should have left it alone.

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	'''Omaeda:''' “Kiyomasa, what if the enemy ends up enjoying that? There are people with bizarre interests everywhere. Isn’t that right, Mori?”		'''Omaeda:''' “Kiyomasa, what if the enemy ends up enjoying that? There are people with bizarre interests everywhere. Isn’t that right, Mori?”

	'''Mory:''' “Wh-why would you ask me that!? I-I have no interest in ~~any~~ else’s bodily fluids! If anything, I want to go through the proper process and be the one ~~that~~ producing the fluids! Or was that not what we were talking about!?”		'''Mory:''' “Wh-why would you ask me that!? I-I have no interest in anyone else’s bodily fluids! If anything, I want to go through the proper process and be the one producing the fluids! Or was that not what we were talking about!?”

	'''Fuwaa:''' “What is this tentacle talking about so early in the morning? And are you feeling all right, Takenaka?”		'''Fuwaa:''' “What is this tentacle talking about so early in the morning? And are you feeling all right, Takenaka?”
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	With their Testamenta Arma, they could return alive from even the harshest battle. They might not be of any use on the battlefield and they might only withdraw after getting knocked around a bit, but…		With their Testamenta Arma, they could return alive from even the harshest battle. They might not be of any use on the battlefield and they might only withdraw after getting knocked around a bit, but…

	…''They will always be able trust in their own courage.		…''They will always be able to trust in their own courage.

	That would have great meaning to Hashiba’s troops in the future.		That would have great meaning to Hashiba’s troops in the future.
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	She had assumed Hashiba would give her a job as a tactician, but her first request had been something else entirely.		She had assumed Hashiba would give her a job as a tactician, but her first request had been something else entirely.

	~~“ ‘I’m~~ at the very bottom, so make me some money’, hm?”		“’I’m at the very bottom, so make me some money’, hm?”

	'''Monkey Girl:''' “Eh?”		'''Monkey Girl:''' “Eh?”

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2017-02-01T03:16:29Z

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86.52.13.23: Three fixes. I am unsure if the third one was formatted like that on purpose or if I should have left it alone.

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