162.158.134.73: Fixed a few wonky sentences to the best of my ability.

2018-08-18T22:07:18Z

Fixed a few wonky sentences to the best of my ability.

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	Koroku had screwed up.		Koroku had screwed up.

	She needed to do some serious soul-searching about this. She would of always say whatever she wanted to say, but that was what led people to treat her like a child. However…		She needed to do some serious soul-searching about this. She would always say whatever she wanted to say, but that was what led people to treat her like a child. However…

	…''I can’t leave this to the light warship.		…''I can’t leave this to the light warship.
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	Isaac’s shell should have scored a direct hit on the enemy.		Isaac’s shell should have scored a direct hit on the enemy.

	He had heard the sound of bursting armor from the direction the shell had flown. And he had it more than once.		He had heard the sound of bursting armor from the direction the shell had flown. And he had heard it more than once.

	That meant the shell impact had caused all of the Genbu’s armor to burst.		That meant the shell impact had caused all of the Genbu’s armor to burst.
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	She viewed a former opponent, an enemy she had been no match for: Katou Danzou.		She viewed a former opponent, an enemy she had been no match for: Katou Danzou.

	“Thou should receive medical treatment as soon as possible. Our connection to thy group is not a shallow one. At the very least, this is not where ~~they~~ life should end.”		“Thou should receive medical treatment as soon as possible. Our connection to thy group is not a shallow one. At the very least, this is not where thy life should end.”

	But Seikai did not nod. Danzou raised his voice as if in response.		But Seikai did not nod. Danzou raised his voice as if in response.

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2018-08-15T02:54:15Z

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