Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 4 Chapter2 - Revision history

Hp2 at 06:28, 10 July 2016

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	Behind him, Monica looked around as if it had just struck her.		Behind him, Monica looked around as if it had just struck her.

	“It a room for important meetings so with the door it’s completely airtight. No matter how loud the meetings get, it won’t be heard out in the passage.”		“It's a room for important meetings so with the door it’s completely airtight. No matter how loud the meetings get, it won’t be heard out in the passage.”

	“You know quite a bit, huh?”		“You know quite a bit, huh?”

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2014-09-09T21:39:12Z

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	“I’ll show you the recording, so please stay put for a little.”		“I’ll show you the recording, so please stay put for a little.”

	She connected the {{furigana\|machine pearl\|Machine}} with {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}} and left them on the floor. In any case, with this he should stay quiet on things to say for a little bit.		She connected the {{furigana\|machine pearl\|Machine}} with {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}} and left them on the floor. In any case, with this she should stay quiet on things to say for a little bit.

	“……That fight with Maha wasn’t a situation to hold back in.”		“……That fight with Maha wasn’t a situation to hold back in.”

Wololo: /* Part 5 */

2014-09-09T21:21:09Z

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	He thought the question the instructor asked there was also a part of the screening test. If they gave a weak-sounding response there, they'd be targeted for a failing grade. Fearing that, he had answered more quickly than anyone else but it had backfired.		He thought the question the instructor asked there was also a part of the screening test. If they gave a weak-sounding response there, they'd be targeted for a failing grade. Fearing that, he had answered more quickly than anyone else but it had backfired.

	It has already happened, so it can't be helped."		"It has already happened, so it can't be helped."

	Monica waved her hand at the base of her neck.		Monica waved her hand at the base of her neck.

Acolyte at 19:27, 21 July 2014

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Acolyte at 18:32, 15 July 2014

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	Vaiel had his formal clothes’ sleeves rolled up to his elbows.		Vaiel had his formal clothes’ sleeves rolled up to his elbows.

	On his two hands were iron fist protectors <Knuckle Dusters>. They extended all the way from his fists to his elbows and had numerous designs on the front that showed the formal carved seal of Shinryoku. <ref>[T/N: Knuckle dusters is 拳鉄甲. Literally "fist iron armor".]</ref>		On his two hands were {{furigana\|iron fist protectors\|Knuckle Dusters}}. They extended all the way from his fists to his elbows and had numerous designs on the front that showed the formal carved seal of Shinryoku. <ref>[T/N: Knuckle dusters is 拳鉄甲. Literally "fist iron armor".]</ref>

	“That’s quite an uncommon weapon.”		“That’s quite an uncommon weapon.”
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	“Since I haven’t really seen anybody who uses them.”		“Since I haven’t really seen anybody who uses them.”

	Iron fist protectors <Knuckle Dusters> were a weapon that specialized in ['''''hitting'''''].		{{furigana\|Iron fist protectors\|Knuckle Dusters}} were a weapon that specialized in ['''''hitting'''''].

	They aimed to raise striking power and also protect the fists from the impact.		They aimed to raise striking power and also protect the fists from the impact.
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	“……Hmph.”		“……Hmph.”

	A Yuugenshu’s entire body was a lump of curses. For that reason, using hand-to-hand combat which required close proximity was extremely dangerous. Even though there were Shinryoku carved seals upon those iron fist protectors <Knuckle Duster>, it was the same as saying that taking an attack with anything other than those fists would result in being showered with Mateki.		A Yuugenshu’s entire body was a lump of curses. For that reason, using hand-to-hand combat which required close proximity was extremely dangerous. Even though there were Shinryoku carved seals upon those {{furigana\|iron fist protectors\|Knuckle Duster}}, it was the same as saying that taking an attack with anything other than those fists would result in being showered with Mateki.

	For example, the Sennenshi, Ran ─── she was the sole guard who fought Yuugenshu empty-handed, but that was because her skin was directly engraved with the formal carved seals. It was because she had endured the harsh pain and rejection reactions of the carved seals that she was permitted to do that. If it wasn’t like that, fighting up-close with a Yuugenshu was a suicidal action.		For example, the Sennenshi, Ran ─── she was the sole guard who fought Yuugenshu empty-handed, but that was because her skin was directly engraved with the formal carved seals. It was because she had endured the harsh pain and rejection reactions of the carved seals that she was permitted to do that. If it wasn’t like that, fighting up-close with a Yuugenshu was a suicidal action.

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	Vaiel had his formal clothes’ sleeves rolled up to his elbows.		Vaiel had his formal clothes’ sleeves rolled up to his elbows.

	On his two hands were iron fist protectors <Knuckle Dusters>. They extended all the way from his fists to his elbows and had numerous designs on the front that showed the formal carved seal of Shinryoku. <ref>[T/N: Knuckle dusters is 拳鉄甲. Literally "fist iron armor".]</ref>		On his two hands were {{furigana\|iron fist protectors\|Knuckle Dusters}}. They extended all the way from his fists to his elbows and had numerous designs on the front that showed the formal carved seal of Shinryoku. <ref>[T/N: Knuckle dusters is 拳鉄甲. Literally "fist iron armor".]</ref>

	“That’s quite an uncommon weapon.”		“That’s quite an uncommon weapon.”
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	“Since I haven’t really seen anybody who uses them.”		“Since I haven’t really seen anybody who uses them.”

	~~Iron~~ fist protectors <Knuckle Dusters> were a weapon that specialized in [hitting].		{{furigana\|iron fist protectors\|Knuckle Dusters}} were a weapon that specialized in [hitting].

	They aimed to raise striking power and also protect the fists from the impact.		They aimed to raise striking power and also protect the fists from the impact.

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	Only {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}} who had seen the entire thing from start to finish was worrying endlessly in a circle.		Only {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}} who had seen the entire thing from start to finish was worrying endlessly in a circle.






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Acolyte at 21:29, 5 July 2014

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	The moss-covered trunk was about the diameter of even an adult’s embrace. That split into a complex set of branches and even further along those, the leaves were in full bloom.		The moss-covered trunk was about the diameter of even an adult’s embrace. That split into a complex set of branches and even further along those, the leaves were in full bloom.

	“He should be here skipping training around now. So take this.” [T/N: It has 昼寝っている as the main and さぼっている above. The former is an "afternoon nap" or a "siesta" and the latter is "skipping (classes, lessons, training, etc.)".]		“He should be here skipping training around now. So take this.” <ref>[T/N: It has 昼寝っている as the main and さぼっている above. The former is an "afternoon nap" or a "siesta" and the latter is "skipping (classes, lessons, training, etc.)".]</ref>

	Here, she said as she handed him an iron mallet.		Here, she said as she handed him an iron mallet.
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	“You’re pretty brave, aren’t you; if you’re looking for a fight then───”		“You’re pretty brave, aren’t you; if you’re looking for a fight then───”

	“Yes, yes, stop there. Well, wait just a bit, Vaiel.” [T/N: His name is ヴァイエル. That's "vaieru". If you have a better suggestion for how to write his name, please comment it.]		“Yes, yes, stop there. Well, wait just a bit, Vaiel.” <ref>[T/N: His name is ヴァイエル. That's "vaieru". If you have a better suggestion for how to write his name, please comment it.]</ref>

	Kagura held the fist of the man called Vaiel tightly.		Kagura held the fist of the man called Vaiel tightly.
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	“Hah, aren’t you honest! In short, it’s that, you want to just make up for your lack of numbers!?”		“Hah, aren’t you honest! In short, it’s that, you want to just make up for your lack of numbers!?”

	Vaiel scoffed. In the face of those provocative argument, without so much as a change in face color, Kagura slowly shook her head. [T/N: 顔色も変えず is literally "face color also not changing". It just means she had no reaction. What an iron maiden.]		Vaiel scoffed. In the face of those provocative argument, without so much as a change in face color, Kagura slowly shook her head. <ref>[T/N: 顔色も変えず is literally "face color also not changing". It just means she had no reaction. What an iron maiden.]</ref>

	“I told you. That we would like to add you as a proper member.”		“I told you. That we would like to add you as a proper member.”
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	“Well then, Vaiel, you also introduce yourself. With your full name.”		“Well then, Vaiel, you also introduce yourself. With your full name.”

	“Ha? Who would go to the trouble of naming himself to people he’s only going to go on one mission with. This Vaiel Bahhabel has no name to give you!” [T/N: His last name is バッハベル or "bahhaberu". Another name that is hard to translate. Specifically because that ッ there means it has a pause, so you have to work that into the name. Any suggestions, folks?]		“Ha? Who would go to the trouble of naming himself to people he’s only going to go on one mission with. This Vaiel Bahhabel has no name to give you!” <ref>[T/N: His last name is バッハベル or "bahhaberu". Another name that is hard to translate. Specifically because that ッ there means it has a pause, so you have to work that into the name. Any suggestions, folks?]</ref>

	He raised his voice and folded his arms.		He raised his voice and folded his arms.
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	“Shasa……Shasa, huh. I did a name search, but it’s not showing up……it doesn’t seem like she’s our bureau’s member.”		“Shasa……Shasa, huh. I did a name search, but it’s not showing up……it doesn’t seem like she’s our bureau’s member.”

	It was a past middle-aged man who was looking at an electronic terminal’s screen. [T/N: It's 初老 which indicates somebody above 40.]		It was a past middle-aged man who was looking at an electronic terminal’s screen. <ref>[T/N: It's 初老 which indicates somebody above 40.]</ref>

	“I see, thanks, occhan. I’ll go search again.”		“I see, thanks, occhan. I’ll go search again.”
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	There had been no matches in Tenketsu Palace <Sophia>’s name registry. After that, she had been checking every Bureau’s individual name registries at random but the name ‘Shasa’ had not had a match.		There had been no matches in Tenketsu Palace <Sophia>’s name registry. After that, she had been checking every Bureau’s individual name registries at random but the name ‘Shasa’ had not had a match.

	[My name is Shasa Endens Lin Kale.] [T/N: This one's pretty straight forward. Shasa Endensu Rin Ke-ru.]		[My name is Shasa Endens Lin Kale.] <ref>[T/N: This one's pretty straight forward. Shasa Endensu Rin Ke-ru.]</ref>

	[It's difficult to remember, isn't it. Everybody knows me as Salah, so you can also use that."		[It's difficult to remember, isn't it. Everybody knows me as Salah, so you can also use that."
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	Vaiel had his formal clothes’ sleeves rolled up to his elbows.		Vaiel had his formal clothes’ sleeves rolled up to his elbows.

	On his two hands were iron fist protectors <Knuckle Dusters>. They extended all the way from his fists to his elbows and had numerous designs on the front that showed the formal carved seal of Shinryoku. [T/N: Knuckle dusters is 拳鉄甲. Literally "fist iron armor".]		On his two hands were iron fist protectors <Knuckle Dusters>. They extended all the way from his fists to his elbows and had numerous designs on the front that showed the formal carved seal of Shinryoku. <ref>[T/N: Knuckle dusters is 拳鉄甲. Literally "fist iron armor".]</ref>

	“That’s quite an uncommon weapon.”		“That’s quite an uncommon weapon.”
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	“Well then, we’ll start. First unit, limit of four people.		“Well then, we’ll start. First unit, limit of four people.

	The format is [Open Flag], time limit is three hours.” [T/N: The "open" here is 公開 which means "open to the public".]		The format is [Open Flag], time limit is three hours.” <ref>[T/N: The "open" here is 公開 which means "open to the public".]</ref>

	The instructor’s reverberating announcement.		The instructor’s reverberating announcement.
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	───Two people in the vangaurd.		───Two people in the vangaurd.

	───One used a rod and the other and the other wielded a metal cane. [T/N: The rod here is 昆 which is the same as in Monica's weapon name.]		───One used a rod and the other and the other wielded a metal cane. <ref>[T/N: The rod here is 昆 which is the same as in Monica's weapon name.]</ref>

	Either of their weapons had long reach and were well-suited to high-speed movement during use.		Either of their weapons had long reach and were well-suited to high-speed movement during use.
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	……It’s quite harsh with only me at the front lines right now.		……It’s quite harsh with only me at the front lines right now.

	While fighting at the far front lines as an attacker, he had to keep Monica who was at the middle and Kagura who was at the very back in mind. As Kagura had pointed out, his movements were being hindered by that right now. [T/N: Attacker here is 特攻 which is the same as "suicide attacker" from before. The only difference is that the author stuck "アタッカー" on top of it. Suicide attacker <attacker> sounds retarded, so it's just "attacker" now. It's probably gonna continue (kudos to the next line).]		While fighting at the far front lines as an attacker, he had to keep Monica who was at the middle and Kagura who was at the very back in mind. As Kagura had pointed out, his movements were being hindered by that right now. <ref>[T/N: Attacker here is 特攻 which is the same as "suicide attacker" from before. The only difference is that the author stuck "アタッカー" on top of it. Suicide attacker <attacker> sounds retarded, so it's just "attacker" now. It's probably gonna continue (kudos to the next line).]</ref>

	If only there was at least one more attacker.		If only there was at least one more attacker.
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	“I haven’t lit it. I can’t settle down if I don’t have something in my mouth.”		“I haven’t lit it. I can’t settle down if I don’t have something in my mouth.”

	She was a heavy smoker so she obstinately kept her smoking habits. [T/N: Habits is originally etiquette. I find that makes no sense though.]		She was a heavy smoker so she obstinately kept her smoking habits. <ref>[T/N: Habits is originally etiquette. I find that makes no sense though.]</ref>

	Of course Ymy was also aware of that. She saw that she wasn’t going to light it so she hadn’t pointed it out.		Of course Ymy was also aware of that. She saw that she wasn’t going to light it so she hadn’t pointed it out.
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	The time taken was twenty four minutes and seven seconds. It was victory by surrender of the enemy general. The battle’s conclusion wasn’t dangerous, but getting to it couldn’t be said to have been easy.		The time taken was twenty four minutes and seven seconds. It was victory by surrender of the enemy general. The battle’s conclusion wasn’t dangerous, but getting to it couldn’t be said to have been easy.

	“Ah~ jeez, that’s why I’m asking you why you didn’t protect me! Where can you find a comrade who ditches the general! This time was really, really dangerous!?” [T/N: "General" and "me" are used interchangeably here. What I mean is "大将" (general) is the kanji and "わたし" (I/me) is the reading given for it.]		“Ah~ jeez, that’s why I’m asking you why you didn’t protect me! Where can you find a comrade who ditches the general! This time was really, really dangerous!?” <ref>[T/N: "General" and "me" are used interchangeably here. What I mean is "大将" (general) is the kanji and "わたし" (I/me) is the reading given for it.]</ref>

	“You mean I’d shield you and take attacks? Don’t be stupid, I’d get hurt doing that.”		“You mean I’d shield you and take attacks? Don’t be stupid, I’d get hurt doing that.”
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	Machine crystal <Ilis> said nonchalantly.		Machine crystal <Ilis> said nonchalantly.

	“You said it yourself, that there are a mountain of problems.” [T/N: 課題は山積み means "the theme is a mountain" and "there are a mountain of problems".]		“You said it yourself, that there are a mountain of problems.” <ref>[T/N: 課題は山積み means "the theme is a mountain" and "there are a mountain of problems".]</ref>

	“……I guess.”		“……I guess.”
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