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	Monica looked the comrades of her unit after they gathered in the living room once again.		Monica looked the comrades of her unit after they gathered in the living room once again.

	Drawing a map on the giant graph paper laid out atop the table, she wrote down the patrol ~~root~~ in red pen.		Drawing a map on the giant graph paper laid out atop the table, she wrote down the patrol route in red pen.

	“Nash’s unit will probably finish patrolling their assigned area tomorrow. At the very least, I’d like for us to follow suit. We have to go around the assigned area all in one day.”		“Nash’s unit will probably finish patrolling their assigned area tomorrow. At the very least, I’d like for us to follow suit. We have to go around the assigned area all in one day.”

Acolyte at 19:32, 21 July 2014

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	~~\| Next to [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 4~~ Final Chapter~~\|Final Chapter: The Fourth Person]]~~
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Acolyte at 18:13, 15 July 2014

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	Fifteen minutes after that, communication with Nash’s unit was lost.		Fifteen minutes after that, communication with Nash’s unit was lost.









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Acolyte at 22:06, 5 July 2014

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	“Leave it to me, I’ll play it flashily.”		“Leave it to me, I’ll play it flashily.”

	The shinryoku practitioner woman prepared a koto with grace. [T/N: A koto (琴) is a 13-string Japanese instrument. It's ancient.]		The shinryoku practitioner woman prepared a koto with grace. <ref>[T/N: A koto (琴) is a 13-string Japanese instrument. It's ancient.]</ref>

	───It will happen before we go on a mission. With the merit points from defeating this Yuugenshu, everyone will become a Regular Guard.		───It will happen before we go on a mission. With the merit points from defeating this Yuugenshu, everyone will become a Regular Guard.
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	……That’s right, that’s how it should be.		……That’s right, that’s how it should be.

	……Like I can always be dallying around in this place. [T/N: "this place" has kanji for "the status of a Cadet Guard".]		……Like I can always be dallying around in this place. <ref>[T/N: "this place" has kanji for "the status of a Cadet Guard".]</ref>

	It wouldn’t end with becoming a Regular Guard. In the future, he would become an Elite Guard and then a Sennenshi.		It wouldn’t end with becoming a Regular Guard. In the future, he would become an Elite Guard and then a Sennenshi.
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	Fifteen minutes after that, communication with Nash’s unit was lost.		Fifteen minutes after that, communication with Nash’s unit was lost.









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	A detour made to the giant trees to avoid the swamplands. Finally ─── the dense pack of trees thinned out and the transport vehicle stopped at a point that had good visibility of the area.		A detour made to the giant trees to avoid the swamplands. Finally ─── the dense pack of trees thinned out and the transport vehicle stopped at a point that had good visibility of the area.

	~~“Oh──~~, what an amazing sea of trees. It reminds me of the forests of the {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} we went to last time.“		“''Oh──, what an amazing sea of trees. It reminds me of the forests of the {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} we went to last time.''“

	“You’re being too loud, Ilis. The time we went to the {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} is a secret from everybody.”		“You’re being too loud, Ilis. The time we went to the {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} is a secret from everybody.”
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	“I’m saying I’ll ditch my comrades and run. You’d normally be angry.”		“I’m saying I’ll ditch my comrades and run. You’d normally be angry.”

	~~“If~~ you really planned to ditch your comrades, you wouldn’t say so beforehand.“		“'''If you really planned to ditch your comrades, you wouldn’t say so beforehand.'''“

	The one who answered was Kagura.		The one who answered was Kagura.
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	Vaiel thrust out a finger and Kagura calmly gazed at him.		Vaiel thrust out a finger and Kagura calmly gazed at him.

	~~“Umm~~, umm~, say, say, could I say one thing?“		“''Umm, umm~, say, say, could I say one thing?''“

	{{furigana\|Machine crystal\|Ilis}} interjected with a nonchalant tone.		{{furigana\|Machine crystal\|Ilis}} interjected with a nonchalant tone.
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	“Ilis, we’re busy right now───”		“Ilis, we’re busy right now───”

	~~“You~~ said we should proceed straight ahead for five minutes, but hasn’t it already been long past that?“		“''You said we should proceed straight ahead for five minutes, but hasn’t it already been long past that?''“

	“Ah……”		“Ah……”
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	“……It took over three times the original estimate of two hours after all.”		“……It took over three times the original estimate of two hours after all.”

	~~“The~~ cute Ilis was bored and bored and about to die.“		“''The cute Ilis was bored and bored and about to die.''“

	“……I’m too tired to say anything.”		“……I’m too tired to say anything.”
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	“Ah-……testing, testing. ……It’s strange how I can really hear with just this alone.”		“Ah-……testing, testing. ……It’s strange how I can really hear with just this alone.”

	~~“Don’t~~ say stupid things and just get on with the report.“		“''Don’t say stupid things and just get on with the report.''“

	He ended up being flat-out interrupted by I’sa.		He ended up being flat-out interrupted by I’sa.
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	“Umm, then I’ll make the report. Monica’s unit has arrived at the cottage.”		“Umm, then I’ll make the report. Monica’s unit has arrived at the cottage.”

	~~“Just~~ that?“		“''Just that?''“

	“Eh, just that……meaning”		“Eh, just that……meaning”

	~~“Meaning~~ you finally arrived at the cottage.“		“''Meaning you finally arrived at the cottage.''“

	The other end of the receiver sounded not angry so much as astonished.		The other end of the receiver sounded not angry so much as astonished.

	~~“Nash’s~~ unit also just arrived at the cottage but they’ve already patrolled half of the assigned area today.“		“''Nash’s unit also just arrived at the cottage but they’ve already patrolled half of the assigned area today.''“

	“Geh……that’s fast.”		“Geh……that’s fast.”

	~~“And~~ on your ~~end───“~~		“''And on your end───''“

	“No, no, no, have no worries! Umm……l-look, we’ll just save today. We’ll get our bearings for today and wrap it all out in one go tomorrow!”		“No, no, no, have no worries! Umm……l-look, we’ll just save today. We’ll get our bearings for today and wrap it all out in one go tomorrow!”

	~~“I’ll~~ be looking forward to that. I’ll meet up with your unit at your cottage tomorrow, so for today until 23:00, work on a schedule for tomorrow and present it.“		“''I’ll be looking forward to that. I’ll meet up with your unit at your cottage tomorrow, so for today until 23:00, work on a schedule for tomorrow and present it.''“

	“……Understood, examiner. With this, tomorrow’s gonna be rough.”		“……Understood, examiner. With this, tomorrow’s gonna be rough.”
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	Within the freezer were vacuum-sealed bread, vegetables and smoked meat that was salted to preserve it. On the shelf beside it was a full assortment of spices. The variety and amount were both bountiful so it was well enough for three days or even a week, but the problem was───		Within the freezer were vacuum-sealed bread, vegetables and smoked meat that was salted to preserve it. On the shelf beside it was a full assortment of spices. The variety and amount were both bountiful so it was well enough for three days or even a week, but the problem was───

	~~“Fumu~~, fumu. The things that can be eaten without cooking are really just the packaged bread and bottled water. Well, if they were cooked they couldn’t be preserved so it really can’t be helped.“		“''Fumu, fumu. The things that can be eaten without cooking are really just the packaged bread and bottled water. Well, if they were cooked they couldn’t be preserved so it really can’t be helped.''“

	At {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}}’ calm words, the two female representatives exchanged looks again.		At {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}}’ calm words, the two female representatives exchanged looks again.
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	Following that were Kagura then Vaiel.		Following that were Kagura then Vaiel.

	~~“It’s~~ rare that a rock fox would come out in front of people.“		“''It’s rare that a rock fox would come out in front of people.''“

	The only one left behind of the unit, Sheltis continued to leer at the interior of the thicket.		The only one left behind of the unit, Sheltis continued to leer at the interior of the thicket.
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	“Ilis, what’s the possibility that the rock fox just now was being chased by something?”		“Ilis, what’s the possibility that the rock fox just now was being chased by something?”

	~~“It’s~~ not zero. And it was something scary enough that it didn’t mind being seen by people. I think that possibility exists.“		“''It’s not zero. And it was something scary enough that it didn’t mind being seen by people. I think that possibility exists.''“

	“……Ilis, go into standby as well, so you can produce the blades at a moment’s notice.”		“……Ilis, go into standby as well, so you can produce the blades at a moment’s notice.”
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	The great sword user and heavy spear knight each moved up wordlessly.		The great sword user and heavy spear knight each moved up wordlessly.

	“Myun-fa, at the same time the Yuugenshu flies out, play one shot.”		“Myun-fa, at the same time the Yuugenshu flies out, '''play one shot'''.”

	“Leave it to me, I’ll play it flashily.”		“Leave it to me, I’ll play it flashily.”
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	……Who knew that he would hit a standstill at that time.		……Who knew that he would hit a standstill at that time.

	~~“There~~ are no enemies before my [Golden Hexahedral].“		“''There are no enemies before my [Golden Hexahedral].''“

	The rescue unit pulled together by the Instructor’s command. Being chosen for the unit that selected only the best of the best even amongst the Cadet Guards, while heading to the scene with enthusiasm.		The rescue unit pulled together by the Instructor’s command. Being chosen for the unit that selected only the best of the best even amongst the Cadet Guards, while heading to the scene with enthusiasm.

	~~“Now~~ beginning intervention. Commencing elimination of the witnesses.“		“''Now beginning intervention. Commencing elimination of the witnesses.''“

	In the face of the monster they met with on the meadow, Nash had been unable to do anything. When he came to, he was lying in the medical wing. That was his first and last humiliation as a Cadet Guard.		In the face of the monster they met with on the meadow, Nash had been unable to do anything. When he came to, he was lying in the medical wing. That was his first and last humiliation as a Cadet Guard.