Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 4 Final Chapter - Revision history

Hp2 at 07:36, 10 July 2016

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	What was this. The heat within her chest was irrepressible. As long as she couldn’t put it into words, she entrusted herself to his shoulder───		What was this. The heat within her chest was irrepressible. As long as she couldn’t put it into words, she entrusted herself to his shoulder───

	“Unit captain Monica? ~~Indiscrete~~ relations within the unit is the largest demerit.”		“Unit captain Monica? Indiscreet relations within the unit is the largest demerit.”

	Having I’sa whisper into her ear, Monica sharply returned to her senses.		Having I’sa whisper into her ear, Monica sharply returned to her senses.

Hp2 at 07:31, 10 July 2016

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	But he once again conveyed his idea with renewed conviction.		But he once again conveyed his idea with renewed conviction.

	“I want to limit the Yuugenshu’s illusions. Within the shinryoku barrier, even those illusions can be obliterated and its movements restricted. That’s ~~some~~ only you two can do.” <ref>[T/N: "only you two can do" has "something I can't do" written beside it.]</ref>		“I want to limit the Yuugenshu’s illusions. Within the shinryoku barrier, even those illusions can be obliterated and its movements restricted. That’s something only you two can do.” <ref>[T/N: "only you two can do" has "something I can't do" written beside it.]</ref>

	“……Wait, we can’t defeat the Yuugenshu by just enclosing it in a barrier.”		“……Wait, we can’t defeat the Yuugenshu by just enclosing it in a barrier.”

Hp2 at 07:26, 10 July 2016

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	“The Yuugenshu’s mist is increasing……it’s getting larger!?”		“The Yuugenshu’s mist is increasing……it’s getting larger!?”

	“That wrong. This is”		“That's wrong. This is”

	Staring at the strange beast from the front, Sheltis muttered softly.		Staring at the strange beast from the front, Sheltis muttered softly.

Wololo: /* Part 3 */

2014-09-10T00:14:51Z

Part 3

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	“Idiot.”		“Idiot.”

	Monica placed her head against shoulder and closed her eyes. She didn’t want to see that bitter expression. If he was safe, then she wanted him to be lively.		Monica placed her head against his shoulder and closed her eyes. She didn’t want to see that bitter expression. If he was safe, then she wanted him to be lively.

	“Don’t make……that face.”		“Don’t make……that face.”

John5dragons: /* Part 2 */

2014-08-10T04:19:25Z

Part 2

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	Myun-fa ─── Kagura scowled as she held up the female shinryoku practitioner. The hand stopping the blood flowing from her shoulder and back wounds was soaked red with the bleeding.		Myun-fa ─── Kagura scowled as she held up the female shinryoku practitioner. The hand stopping the blood flowing from her shoulder and back wounds was soaked red with the bleeding.

	“There’s no corruption of mateki but her injuries are more severe. ……She may have taken a surprise attack from behind so there’s a really deep ~~scar~~ on her back which might have pierced an artery. The other three also seem to be in the same state.”		“There’s no corruption of mateki but her injuries are more severe. ……She may have taken a surprise attack from behind so there’s a really deep wound on her back which might have pierced an artery. The other three also seem to be in the same state.”

	───A surprise attack from behind.		───A surprise attack from behind.

Acolyte: Figured out how to use SimpleNav

2014-07-30T21:58:28Z

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Acolyte at 20:04, 21 July 2014

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Acolyte at 18:23, 15 July 2014

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Acolyte at 15:55, 15 July 2014

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	“Isn’t that the same thing!……damn it, what do we do about this guy!”		“Isn’t that the same thing!……damn it, what do we do about this guy!”

	It was the first time the iron fist protectors <Knuckle Dusters> he wore on both arms felt so unhelpful. It was a fear of death that he hadn’t felt from any gathering of valiant men in the unit battles. That was just how “real” the beast before his eyes was.		It was the first time the {{furigana\|iron fist protectors\|Knuckle Dusters}} he wore on both arms felt so unhelpful. It was a fear of death that he hadn’t felt from any gathering of valiant men in the unit battles. That was just how “real” the beast before his eyes was.

	A real Yuugenshu.		A real Yuugenshu.
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	“Ohh, ohhhhhhhhhhh!”		“Ohh, ohhhhhhhhhhh!”

	Roaring to wipe away fear, he brandished his fists. If the iron fist protectors <Knuckle Dusters> which were shining azure from the shinryoku carved seal ceremony were to directly impact the Yuugenshu’s core crystal, it would be able to shatter it.		Roaring to wipe away fear, he brandished his fists. If the {{furigana\|iron fist protectors\|Knuckle Dusters}} which were shining azure from the shinryoku carved seal ceremony were to directly impact the Yuugenshu’s core crystal, it would be able to shatter it.

	An instant.		An instant.
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	In front of his raised right fist, the shine of mateki spread in a fan shape to protect the Yuugenshu.		In front of his raised right fist, the shine of mateki spread in a fan shape to protect the Yuugenshu.

	The shinryoku-infused iron fist protectors <Knuckle Dusters> and the defensive wall that shone with mateki clashed.		The shinryoku-infused {{furigana\|iron fist protectors\|Knuckle Dusters}} and the defensive wall that shone with mateki clashed.

	“Whaaaa!?”		“Whaaaa!?”
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	Shinryoku and mateki. The two overlapped head-on───		Shinryoku and mateki. The two overlapped head-on───

	The iron fist protectors <Knuckle Dusters> and the defensive wall let off a clear sound and shattered.		The {{furigana\|iron fist protectors\|Knuckle Dusters}} and the defensive wall let off a clear sound and shattered.

	“──────“		“──────“
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	Vaiel, who had completely lost his iron fist protectors <Knuckle Dusters>, clenched his right fist.		Vaiel, who had completely lost his {{furigana\|iron fist protectors\|Knuckle Dusters}}, clenched his right fist.

	And then.		And then.

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	The cheeky voice of a girl resounded strangely vividly.		The cheeky voice of a girl resounded strangely vividly.








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