Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 4 Intermission - Revision history

Acolyte: Figured out how to use SimpleNav

2014-07-30T21:56:15Z

Figured out how to use SimpleNav

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	{{~~Navigation~~		{{SimpleNav
	\| ~~Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden~~		\|b=Chapter2\|bn=Chapter 2
	~~\| [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 4~~ Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]		\|f=Chapter3\|fn=Chapter 3
	\| ~~[[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 4~~ Chapter3\|Chapter 3]]
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Acolyte at 20:04, 21 July 2014

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	{{~~SimpleNav~~\|b=Chapter2\|f=Chapter3}}		{{Navigation
			\| Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden
			\| [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 4 Chapter2\|Chapter 2]]
			\| [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 4 Chapter3\|Chapter 3]]
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Acolyte at 19:33, 21 July 2014

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	{{SimpleNav\|b=~~Intermission~~}}		{{SimpleNav\|b=Chapter2\|f=Chapter3}}
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Acolyte at 19:27, 21 July 2014

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	~~\| Back to [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 4 Chapter2\|Chapter 2: Three People Plus One]]~~
	~~\| Return to [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden\|Main Page]]~~
	~~\| Next to [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 4 Chapter3\|Chapter 3: Illusionary Paradise —Heavenly Melody—]]~~
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Acolyte at 18:01, 15 July 2014

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	~~“Ah──~~, we found Ignid.“		“'''''Ah──, we found Ignid.'''''“

	~~“Yeah~~, we found Ignid.“		“'''''Yeah, we found Ignid.'''''“

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	Innocent and pure, mixed with childishness ─── the voice of children.		Innocent and pure, mixed with childishness ─── the voice of children.

	~~“You’ll~~ be scolded if you skip out on work.“		“'''''You’ll be scolded if you skip out on work.'''''“

	~~“Yeah~~, you’ll be scolded.“		“'''''Yeah, you’ll be scolded.'''''“

	The telepathy that wouldn’t reach anyone on the main street.		The telepathy that wouldn’t reach anyone on the main street.
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	“My job is done. But even so, I’m just doing a little reconnaissance.”		“My job is done. But even so, I’m just doing a little reconnaissance.”

	“{{furigana\|Golden\|Maha}} is waiting for you.“		“'''''{{furigana\|Golden\|Maha}} is waiting for you.'''''“

	~~“Yeah~~, {{furigana\|Golden\|Maha}} is waiting.“		“'''''Yeah, {{furigana\|Golden\|Maha}} is waiting.'''''“

	The two telepathic voices laughed.		The two telepathic voices laughed.

	“{{furigana\|Golden\|Maha}} is really strict about being punctual so if you don’t hurry, you’ll be scolded.“		“'''''{{furigana\|Golden\|Maha}} is really strict about being punctual so if you don’t hurry, you’ll be scolded.'''''“

	~~“Yeah~~, {{furigana\|Golden\|Maha}} is really strict about being punctual.“		“'''''Yeah, {{furigana\|Golden\|Maha}} is really strict about being punctual.'''''“

	“Yes, yes, I’m going. It was the Governmental Sector’s……fourth sector that we were gathering at, right?”		“Yes, yes, I’m going. It was the Governmental Sector’s……fourth sector that we were gathering at, right?”

	~~“It’s~~ behind the third sector’s aircraft hangar.“		“'''''It’s behind the third sector’s aircraft hangar.'''''“

	~~“Yeah~~, behind the third sector’s aircraft hangar.“		“'''''Yeah, behind the third sector’s aircraft hangar.'''''“

	“……Fuu, it can’t be helped. I wanted to eat a little more though.”		“……Fuu, it can’t be helped. I wanted to eat a little more though.”

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2014-07-15T16:17:13Z

Intermission: Gathering

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	“My job is done. But even so, I’m just doing a little reconnaissance.”		“My job is done. But even so, I’m just doing a little reconnaissance.”

	~~“Golden <~~Maha> is waiting for you.“		“{{furigana\|Golden\|Maha}} is waiting for you.“

	“Yeah, Golden <Maha> is waiting.“		“Yeah, {{furigana\|Golden\|Maha}} is waiting.“

	The two telepathic voices laughed.		The two telepathic voices laughed.

	~~“Golden <~~Maha> is really strict about being punctual so if you don’t hurry, you’ll be scolded.“		“{{furigana\|Golden\|Maha}} is really strict about being punctual so if you don’t hurry, you’ll be scolded.“

	“Yeah, Golden <Maha> is really strict about being punctual.“		“Yeah, {{furigana\|Golden\|Maha}} is really strict about being punctual.“

	“Yes, yes, I’m going. It was the Governmental Sector’s……fourth sector that we were gathering at, right?”		“Yes, yes, I’m going. It was the Governmental Sector’s……fourth sector that we were gathering at, right?”

Acolyte: Remove extra spaces

2014-07-06T20:46:45Z

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	And without anyone’s notice, that existence disappeared.		And without anyone’s notice, that existence disappeared.







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Acolyte: furigana

2014-07-05T22:03:55Z

furigana

Acolyte at 21:40, 5 July 2014

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	At an outdoor table on large plates were enormous pancakes fit for ten people. The fresh cream and ice cream was overflowing on top, and above that was a mountain of seasonal fruits.		At an outdoor table on large plates were enormous pancakes fit for ten people. The fresh cream and ice cream was overflowing on top, and above that was a mountain of seasonal fruits.

	That came atop a piping hot iron pan, so there was plenty of impact. [T/N: That's a teppan, or a flat iron plate that you cook on. http://www.semitrad.com/img/teppan_06.jpg. The impact here is a feeling. Kinda like the impact you would feel if you opened the door and saw Mil-tan from High School DxD standing there.]		That came atop a piping hot iron pan, so there was plenty of impact. <ref>[T/N: That's a teppan, or a flat iron plate that you cook on. http://www.semitrad.com/img/teppan_06.jpg. The impact here is a feeling. Kinda like the impact you would feel if you opened the door and saw Mil-tan from High School DxD standing there.]</ref>

	“……Wow, it’s more than I expected.”		“……Wow, it’s more than I expected.”
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Zerry at 04:08, 5 July 2014

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			\| Back to [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 4 Chapter2\|Chapter 2: Three People Plus One]]
			\| Return to [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden\|Main Page]]
			\| Next to [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 4 Chapter3\|Chapter 3: Illusionary Paradise —Heavenly Melody—]]
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	Floor 288 of Tenketsu Palace <Sophia>.		Floor 288 of {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}}.

	A height of two thousand metres. Closer to the heavens than the ground, that floor held the personal rooms of the second and third Priestesses as well as their respective Sennenshi.		A height of two thousand metres. Closer to the heavens than the ground, that floor held the personal rooms of the second and third Priestesses as well as their respective Sennenshi.
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	“The Tower’s Grand Dining Hall’s?”		“The Tower’s Grand Dining Hall’s?”

	“Nope. Outside the tower, there’s a well-known store in the Living Districts. I’d like the head chef’s original recipe, the <Red Hot Boiling Ice Parfait>, from the outdoor cafe in the second Living District, The Two Swans <Albireo>.”		“Nope. Outside the tower, there’s a well-known store in the Living Districts. I’d like the head chef’s original recipe, the <Red Hot Boiling Ice Parfait>, from the outdoor cafe in the second Living District, The {{furigana\|Two Swans\|Albireo}}.”

	“I can’t tell if that parfait is hot or cold.”		“I can’t tell if that parfait is hot or cold.”
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	Mixed in with the hustle and bustle of the main street, there was a shop filled with the scent of refined tea and the light and sweet fragrance of cakes.		Mixed in with the hustle and bustle of the main street, there was a shop filled with the scent of refined tea and the light and sweet fragrance of cakes.

	Outdoor cafe, “The Two Swans <Albireo>” ─── a coffee lounge that looked out at the main street in the second Living District.		Outdoor cafe, “The {{furigana\|Two Swans\|Albireo}}” ─── a coffee lounge that looked out at the main street in the second Living District.

	Facing the ever-busy street that ran through the shopping district, it was a shop that was packed all day with people that loved the head chef’s famous daily special meals and cakes.		Facing the ever-busy street that ran through the shopping district, it was a shop that was packed all day with people that loved the head chef’s famous daily special meals and cakes.
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	She held her head while saying oh boy.		She held her head while saying oh boy.

	“Ah──ah, it looks like there’s just no outstanding talent that can replace Sheltis. Maybe I’ll have to settle on that kid as the successor……I’ll go to Tenketsu Palace <Sophia> and barter with Meimei a bit.”		“Ah──ah, it looks like there’s just no outstanding talent that can replace Sheltis. Maybe I’ll have to settle on that kid as the successor……I’ll go to {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}} and barter with Meimei a bit.”

	“H-hurry, hurry! Uwawaa, the poison needles came out!”		“H-hurry, hurry! Uwawaa, the poison needles came out!”
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	What was ahead of Ignid’s vision was a gigantic tower visible even from the second Living District.		What was ahead of Ignid’s vision was a gigantic tower visible even from the second Living District.

	Tenketsu Palace <Sophia> ─── the white-walled tower that extended into the blue sky.		{{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}} ─── the white-walled tower that extended into the blue sky.

	“Well then, Sheltis, I’ll go on ahead and wait for you at the Governmental Sector.”		“Well then, Sheltis, I’ll go on ahead and wait for you at the Governmental Sector.”