Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 5 Chapter1 - Revision history

Hp2 at 19:12, 11 July 2016

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	“This is the far end; what are you sitting here for?”		“This is the far end; what are you sitting here for?”

	The girl wearing the machine helmet low over her eyes was in front with the girl whose sakura-~~coloredh~~ hair was tied into one behind her.		The girl wearing the machine helmet low over her eyes was in front with the girl whose sakura-colored hair was tied into one behind her.

	“You don’t have to sit here at the far end; it’s all reserved so why don’t you sit more towards the center?”		“You don’t have to sit here at the far end; it’s all reserved so why don’t you sit more towards the center?”

Hp2 at 21:48, 6 July 2016

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	“She was carrying a spear so I think you know already but she’s a spear user. I think it was an old style of martial arts. And that she’d advanced to the highest point of mastery in that art?”		“She was carrying a spear so I think you know already but she’s a spear user. I think it was an old style of martial arts. And that she’d advanced to the highest point of mastery in that art?”

	“‘Pinnacle of the {{furigana\|Exorcising Lance\|Gillshuvesher}}’, isn’t it.” <ref>[T/N: Now this title given here is pretty ridiculous. It's "祓戈の到極者" which has five kanji in it with the meanings exorcise/purify, spear/weapon, arrive, pinnacle (highest) and person. It should probably have "One who has arrived at/~~achived~~ the ___" at the beginning, but that sounds pretty bad.]</ref>		“‘Pinnacle of the {{furigana\|Exorcising Lance\|Gillshuvesher}}’, isn’t it.” <ref>[T/N: Now this title given here is pretty ridiculous. It's "祓戈の到極者" which has five kanji in it with the meanings exorcise/purify, spear/weapon, arrive, pinnacle (highest) and person. It should probably have "One who has arrived at/achieved the ___" at the beginning, but that sounds pretty bad.]</ref>

	Kagura’s {{furigana\|machine pearl\|Machina}} gave off a faint radiance.		Kagura’s {{furigana\|machine pearl\|Machina}} gave off a faint radiance.

Hp2 at 11:55, 6 July 2016

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	Her vestments had a base of white with azure accents. It was specially prepared for just one person within the tower ─── for those living on the {{furigana\|floating continent\|Orbie Clar}}, just that would be enough to identify who she was.		Her vestments had a base of white with azure accents. It was specially prepared for just one person within the tower ─── for those living on the {{furigana\|floating continent\|Orbie Clar}}, just that would be enough to identify who she was.

	“Umm……good morning, everyone, I’ll be counting on ~~your~~ for this journey!”		“Umm……good morning, everyone, I’ll be counting on you for this journey!”

	Ymy lowered her head in a bow.		Ymy lowered her head in a bow.

Acolyte at 19:37, 21 July 2014

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	==Translator's Notes and References==		==Translator's Notes and References==
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Acolyte at 18:37, 15 July 2014

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	“Everyone’s the same; I’ve been completely anxious since about three days ago.”		“Everyone’s the same; I’ve been completely anxious since about three days ago.”

	The mission ─── an escort from the floating continent <Orbie Clar> to the distant Governmental Sector.		The mission ─── an escort from the {{furigana\|floating continent\|Orbie Clar}} to the distant Governmental Sector.

	The origin of the matter was the Queen’s edict. The case on the {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} that they had gone to together with Leon was the start.		The origin of the matter was the Queen’s edict. The case on the {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} that they had gone to together with Leon was the start.
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	{{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}}, Floor 287.		{{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}}, Floor 287.

	There were only fours rooms arranged on this floor that lay two thousand metres above the surface. All of them were the private rooms of the Priestesses that protected the floating continent <Orbie Clar>’s barrier.		There were only fours rooms arranged on this floor that lay two thousand metres above the surface. All of them were the private rooms of the Priestesses that protected the {{furigana\|floating continent\|Orbie Clar}}’s barrier.

	In one of those Priestess’ room.		In one of those Priestess’ room.
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	“……Even if you say per second, it feels surreal.”		“……Even if you say per second, it feels surreal.”

	“''The distance from the floating continent <Orbie Clar> to the Governmental Sector’s {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} is just under roughly two thousand kilometres. Amazing, isn’t it─, that we would arrive in about two hours. Figuratively speaking, doesn’t it feel less like ‘byu〰n!’ and more like ‘───hyunn’?''“		“''The distance from the {{furigana\|floating continent\|Orbie Clar}} to the Governmental Sector’s {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} is just under roughly two thousand kilometres. Amazing, isn’t it─, that we would arrive in about two hours. Figuratively speaking, doesn’t it feel less like ‘byu〰n!’ and more like ‘───hyunn’?''“

	“……No, you don’t have to force the sound comparisons.”		“……No, you don’t have to force the sound comparisons.”
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	As if to draw blood, she continued while biting her lip.		As if to draw blood, she continued while biting her lip.

	“Ymy is now……a Priestess, a protector of the floating continent <Orbie Clar>. I am…………a subordinate. A Cadet Guard like me talking in a such a friendly manner with a Priestess……is not permitted.”		“Ymy is now……a Priestess, a protector of the {{furigana\|floating continent\|Orbie Clar}}. I am…………a subordinate. A Cadet Guard like me talking in a such a friendly manner with a Priestess……is not permitted.”

	“But”		“But”

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Acolyte at 15:52, 15 July 2014

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	“Everyone’s the same; I’ve been completely anxious since about three days ago.”		“Everyone’s the same; I’ve been completely anxious since about three days ago.”

	The mission ─── an escort from the floating continent <Orbie Clar> to the distant Governmental Sector.		The mission ─── an escort from the {{furigana\|floating continent\|Orbie Clar}} to the distant Governmental Sector.

	The origin of the matter was the Queen’s edict. The case on the {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} that they had gone to together with Leon was the start.		The origin of the matter was the Queen’s edict. The case on the {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} that they had gone to together with Leon was the start.
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	{{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}}, Floor 287.		{{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}}, Floor 287.

	There were only fours rooms arranged on this floor that lay two thousand metres above the surface. All of them were the private rooms of the Priestesses that protected the floating continent <Orbie Clar>’s barrier.		There were only fours rooms arranged on this floor that lay two thousand metres above the surface. All of them were the private rooms of the Priestesses that protected the {{furigana\|floating continent\|Orbie Clar}}’s barrier.

	In one of those Priestess’ room.		In one of those Priestess’ room.
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	“……Even if you say per second, it feels surreal.”		“……Even if you say per second, it feels surreal.”

	“The distance from the floating continent <Orbie Clar> to the Governmental Sector’s {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} is just under roughly two thousand kilometres. Amazing, isn’t it─, that we would arrive in about two hours. Figuratively speaking, doesn’t it feel less like ‘byu〰n!’ and more like ‘───hyunn’?“		“The distance from the {{furigana\|floating continent\|Orbie Clar}} to the Governmental Sector’s {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} is just under roughly two thousand kilometres. Amazing, isn’t it─, that we would arrive in about two hours. Figuratively speaking, doesn’t it feel less like ‘byu〰n!’ and more like ‘───hyunn’?“

	“……No, you don’t have to force the sound comparisons.”		“……No, you don’t have to force the sound comparisons.”
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	As if to draw blood, she continued while biting her lip.		As if to draw blood, she continued while biting her lip.

	“Ymy is now……a Priestess, a protector of the floating continent <Orbie Clar>. I am…………a subordinate. A Cadet Guard like me talking in a such a friendly manner with a Priestess……is not permitted.”		“Ymy is now……a Priestess, a protector of the {{furigana\|floating continent\|Orbie Clar}}. I am…………a subordinate. A Cadet Guard like me talking in a such a friendly manner with a Priestess……is not permitted.”

	“But”		“But”

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Part 3

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	……This time, I won’t be able to stay at {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}}.		……This time, I won’t be able to stay at {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}}.

	A person who had fallen to the Garden of {{furigana\|Corrupted Song\|Eden}} and was supposed to be dead was alive. Even though that was a serious affair in itself, if it was known that the Garden of {{furigana\|Corrupted Song\|Eden}}’s mateki lay within him, it would cause a panic throughout the floating continent <Orbie Clar>.		A person who had fallen to the Garden of {{furigana\|Corrupted Song\|Eden}} and was supposed to be dead was alive. Even though that was a serious affair in itself, if it was known that the Garden of {{furigana\|Corrupted Song\|Eden}}’s mateki lay within him, it would cause a panic throughout the {{furigana\|floating continent\|Orbie Clar}}.

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	Pressing down on her off-gold hair that had become disheveled from running with one hand, the girl held her bag with the other.		Pressing down on her off-gold hair that had become disheveled from running with one hand, the girl held her bag with the other.

	Her vestments had a base of white with azure accents. It was specially prepared for just one person within the tower ─── for those living on the floating continent <Orbie Clar>, just that would be enough to identify who she was.		Her vestments had a base of white with azure accents. It was specially prepared for just one person within the tower ─── for those living on the {{furigana\|floating continent\|Orbie Clar}}, just that would be enough to identify who she was.

	“Umm……good morning, everyone, I’ll be counting on your for this journey!”		“Umm……good morning, everyone, I’ll be counting on your for this journey!”
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	“Please mind it! D-disregarding me……this will affect onee-sama’s reputation!”		“Please mind it! D-disregarding me……this will affect onee-sama’s reputation!”

	In response to the older sister who suddenly started combing her little sister’s hair, the little sister ~~<I’sa>~~’s face turned red and she raised her voice.		In response to the older sister who suddenly started combing her little sister’s hair, the {{furigana\|little sister\|I'sa}}’s face turned red and she raised her voice.

	“P-putting that aside! Onee-sama is the Cadres Guard and you’re escorting a Priestess-sama this time, so conduct yourself as a model for these Cadet Guards!”		“P-putting that aside! Onee-sama is the Cadres Guard and you’re escorting a Priestess-sama this time, so conduct yourself as a model for these Cadet Guards!”

Binboday at 06:56, 12 July 2014

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	“……The Governmental Sector?”		“……The Governmental Sector?”

	The unmanned research facility discovered at at the {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} under the Governmental Sector’s jurisdiction, as well as the cultivation facility underneath that. At any rate, the goal involved was uncanny, a complete mystery. It was unknown what she would see heading off to the dominion of the Governmental Sector who were the apparent ringleader.”		The unmanned research facility discovered at at the {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} under the Governmental Sector’s jurisdiction, as well as the cultivation facility underneath that. At any rate, the goal involved was uncanny, a complete mystery. It was unknown what she would see heading off to the dominion of the Governmental Sector who were the apparent ringleader.

	……No.		……No.

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	At any rate, he brought up his old friend’s name here and Sheltis averted his face quite openly.		At any rate, he brought up his old friend’s name here and Sheltis averted his face quite openly.








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