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	“That’s right……I’ve waited a long time. Taking on this annoying mission and everything is because I bet on the chance that you might appear. Be a little thankful?”		“That’s right……I’ve waited a long time. Taking on this annoying mission and everything is because I bet on the chance that you might appear. Be a little thankful?”
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	The Golden spell caster stayed silent. Perhaps in his place, the poisonous snakes crawling around his feet slowly raised their heads.		The Golden spell caster stayed silent. Perhaps in his place, the poisonous snakes crawling around his feet slowly raised their heads.

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	The one who had attacked her I’sa had already been defeated once but that was a puppet created by the spell caster. Then this time, she would──		The one who had attacked her I’sa had already been defeated once but that was a puppet created by the spell caster. Then this time, she would──


	===Part 8===		===Part 8===

Hp2 at 15:03, 12 July 2016

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	She looked at her right arm which was exposed up to near the elbow and smiled. Only the formal wear was torn; there was not a single wound on her smooth flesh. Despite having taken such a perfect surprise attack.		She looked at her right arm which was exposed up to near the elbow and smiled. Only the formal wear was torn; there was not a single wound on her smooth flesh. Despite having taken such a perfect surprise attack.

	“I haven’t had my clothes torn in anything other than a spar with Sennenshi recently. ~~……You’re~~ brought out something quite large.”		“I haven’t had my clothes torn in anything other than a spar with Sennenshi recently. ……You’ve brought out something quite large.”

	A giant shadow appeared and broke through the wall to the side without leaving a trace.		A giant shadow appeared and broke through the wall to the side without leaving a trace.

Hp2 at 14:39, 12 July 2016

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	“Ara, Ishtar-sama is the same, no? I heard about it from Ymy-sama. You haven’t taken a real break these four days and have been getting by with simple preserved foods for meals.”		“Ara, Ishtar-sama is the same, no? I heard about it from Ymy-sama. You haven’t taken a real break these four days and have been getting by with simple preserved foods for meals.”

	“No, no, that’s different. What Ishtar’s doing isn’t job. It’s specially for this time.”		“No, no, that’s different. What Ishtar’s doing isn’t a job. It’s specially for this time.”

	“Specially……is it?”		“Specially……is it?”

Hp2 at 14:35, 12 July 2016

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	The one who said that cheerfully in the living room was a little tired of seeing that scenery.		The one who said that cheerfully in the living room was a little tired of seeing that scenery.

	“I think the host-san for the conference will be making a speech. ~~That’s~~ it’s been a fruitful conference.”		“I think the host-san for the conference will be making a speech. That it’s been a fruitful conference.”

	“……I see.”		“……I see.”

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Translator's Notes and References

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	{{Navigation		{{Navigation
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	\| [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 4 Chapter4\|Chapter 4]]		\| [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 5 Chapter4\|Chapter 4]]
	\| [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 4 Intermission\|Intermission]]		\| [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 5 Intermission\|Intermission]]
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Acolyte at 20:03, 21 July 2014

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Acolyte at 19:46, 21 July 2014

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	\| Return to [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden\|Main Page]]		\| Return to [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden\|Main Page]]
	\| Next to [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 5 Intermission ~~Empty World~~\|Intermission: Empty World]]		\| Next to [[Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 5 Intermission\|Intermission: Empty World]]
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Acolyte at 18:59, 17 July 2014

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Acolyte: Igneed -> Igun-I

2014-07-16T19:13:13Z

Igneed -> Igun-I

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	He’s part of a completely different group?		He’s part of a completely different group?

	~~“……Igneed~~.”		“……Igun-I.”

	“Yes, yes.”		“Yes, yes.”
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	The pitch black man answered Maha’s mutter with a smile.		The pitch black man answered Maha’s mutter with a smile.

	~~……Igneed~~? That’s the other one’s name?		……Igun-I? That’s the other one’s name?

	Kagura’s ears which were longer than a human’s ears picked up a little of that conversation.		Kagura’s ears which were longer than a human’s ears picked up a little of that conversation.
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	“Well then, Maha-san, we’ll meet at the arranged location.”		“Well then, Maha-san, we’ll meet at the arranged location.”

	Pulling the hat far enough to hide his eyes, ~~Igneed~~ bowed. Like that, he turned his back on his companion, Maha, and headed off in the direction of Building Four.		Pulling the hat far enough to hide his eyes, Igun-I bowed. Like that, he turned his back on his companion, Maha, and headed off in the direction of Building Four.

	Is it a two-pronged attack? No, right now, there’s something more important than that.		Is it a two-pronged attack? No, right now, there’s something more important than that.
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	Kagura’s shout stopped the Cadres Guard who was about to move.		Kagura’s shout stopped the Cadres Guard who was about to move.

	“This is a diversion! Using the opening caused by Maha rampaging here, another man named ~~Igneed~~ is aiming for something in Building Four!”		“This is a diversion! Using the opening caused by Maha rampaging here, another man named Igun-I is aiming for something in Building Four!”

	“……Heeh.”		“……Heeh.”
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	Beneath the shadow cast by his hood, Maha’s lips opened slightly.		Beneath the shadow cast by his hood, Maha’s lips opened slightly.

	~~“Igneed~~ has……already headed there. Everything in existence is under our control.”		“Igun-I has……already headed there. Everything in existence is under our control.”

	The spell caster’s left hand was raised very high.		The spell caster’s left hand was raised very high.
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	“''The elevator should also be working. There are signs that somebody other than me has already forcefully unlocked the door.''“		“''The elevator should also be working. There are signs that somebody other than me has already forcefully unlocked the door.''“

	“……So it’s the guy that Maha called ~~Igneed~~.”		“……So it’s the guy that Maha called Igun-I.”

	It was possible that there was somebody else in charge of the hacking but they had no way of knowing that. At any rate, it was a stroke of luck amongst the bad.		It was possible that there was somebody else in charge of the hacking but they had no way of knowing that. At any rate, it was a stroke of luck amongst the bad.
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	Amidst all the black, the pale blond hair swaying beneath the hat stood out as odd. <ref>[T/N: I feel like this is a huge plot point. But if I state what I noticed here, it'll be too obvious and feel more like a spoiler if I'm right.]</ref>		Amidst all the black, the pale blond hair swaying beneath the hat stood out as odd. <ref>[T/N: I feel like this is a huge plot point. But if I state what I noticed here, it'll be too obvious and feel more like a spoiler if I'm right.]</ref>

	……This man is ~~Igneed~~?		……This man is Igun-I?

	……What is……this feeling……		……What is……this feeling……
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	“……I’m happy.”		“……I’m happy.”

	~~Igneed~~ didn’t even try to hide his smile. <ref>[T/N: Interesting point here is that the kanji for ~~Igneed~~ is written as "blank" (空白) instead of "black" (黒).]</ref>		Igun-I didn’t even try to hide his smile. <ref>[T/N: Interesting point here is that the kanji for Igun-I is written as "blank" (空白) instead of "black" (黒).]</ref>

	“You know me. Ahh, that’s great. I’m really happy.”		“You know me. Ahh, that’s great. I’m really happy.”
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	“Ahh, I can’t. I was so happy, I almost forgot my job.”		“Ahh, I can’t. I was so happy, I almost forgot my job.”

	With the words ~~Igneed~~ spilled, Sheltis finally reconfirmed the current situation.		With the words Igun-I spilled, Sheltis finally reconfirmed the current situation.

	That’s right, this man’s objective is──		That’s right, this man’s objective is──
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	“This isn’t the Governmental Sector’s property. A single person……this is something an engineer created a thousand years ago. The Governmental Sector just happened to scavenge it. Though saying that to you will probably have no effect. Right, Sheltis?”		“This isn’t the Governmental Sector’s property. A single person……this is something an engineer created a thousand years ago. The Governmental Sector just happened to scavenge it. Though saying that to you will probably have no effect. Right, Sheltis?”

	With his hand firmly on the rimmed hat, ~~Igneed~~ was constantly looking over at him.		With his hand firmly on the rimmed hat, Igun-I was constantly looking over at him.

	“Do you want to know; you do, right? What this crystal is.”		“Do you want to know; you do, right? What this crystal is.”
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	“I’m glad that I’ve aroused your interest. It had the intended effect. But──”		“I’m glad that I’ve aroused your interest. It had the intended effect. But──”

	~~Igneed~~ smiled.		Igun-I smiled.

	“It doesn’t look like you’re trying to get the ‘''Crimson Eye''‘ through force. ……Well, I tampered with the contents a bit so I’ll just leave it alone and run away.”		“It doesn’t look like you’re trying to get the ‘''Crimson Eye''‘ through force. ……Well, I tampered with the contents a bit so I’ll just leave it alone and run away.”
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	“If you want to know, chase after me. Now, Sheltis, chase after me. That is the beginning of everything. ……However, that’s for until after you’ve played with these.”		“If you want to know, chase after me. Now, Sheltis, chase after me. That is the beginning of everything. ……However, that’s for until after you’ve played with these.”

	~~Igneed~~ raised both hands to the ceiling.		Igun-I raised both hands to the ceiling.

	Like a music conductor.		Like a music conductor.
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	Beneath ~~Igneed~~, the crimson crystal began changing color.		Beneath Igun-I, the crimson crystal began changing color.

	From crimson to red, red to blue, blue to green. After that, gold and white. Then at the end ── the crystal became half-transparent like frosted glass.		From crimson to red, red to blue, blue to green. After that, gold and white. Then at the end ── the crystal became half-transparent like frosted glass.
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	“A thousand year beast. I tried using the memories of the ‘''Crimson Eye''‘ and calling it out. I could probably have found something stronger if I searched more but this should be good enough for me to run away.”		“A thousand year beast. I tried using the memories of the ‘''Crimson Eye''‘ and calling it out. I could probably have found something stronger if I searched more but this should be good enough for me to run away.”

	Tap. ~~Igneed~~ kicked off the crystal and jumped into the air.		Tap. Igun-I kicked off the crystal and jumped into the air.

	“I won’t let you run……muu!”		“I won’t let you run……muu!”
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	“They’re simple phantoms that should disappear in half an hour’s time so do your best until then.”		“They’re simple phantoms that should disappear in half an hour’s time so do your best until then.”

	~~Igneed~~ headed out the door with a light smile.		Igun-I headed out the door with a light smile.

	──Half an hour.		──Half an hour.
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	“For Sheltis?”		“For Sheltis?”

	~~“……Igneed……it~~ was a whim but……it isn’t going to be a hindrance.”		“……Igun-I……it was a whim but……it isn’t going to be a hindrance.”

	Maha said that with absolute confidence.		Maha said that with absolute confidence.
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	……There is one.		……There is one.

	The mechanical weapon and Yuugenshu. A way to clean up for certain these two thousand year beasts that ~~Igneed~~ had summoned.		The mechanical weapon and Yuugenshu. A way to clean up for certain these two thousand year beasts that Igun-I had summoned.

	“Ah─, that’s right……it’s an emergency situation so……right?”		“Ah─, that’s right……it’s an emergency situation so……right?”

	“……Mu. Truly, chasing after ~~Igneed~~ is a priority for both of us. Normally, I’d never conspire with an intruder but……at any rate, it is necessary to hurry.”		“……Mu. Truly, chasing after Igun-I is a priority for both of us. Normally, I’d never conspire with an intruder but……at any rate, it is necessary to hurry.”

	“''Then it’s decided.''“		“''Then it’s decided.''“

Acolyte at 17:41, 15 July 2014

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