Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 5 Interlude - Revision history

Wololo: /* Part 1 */

2014-09-14T19:53:21Z

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	“What’s wrong? If you’re hungry, shall Ishtar make something?”		“What’s wrong? If you’re hungry, shall Ishtar make something?”

	“Then I’d like a ~~desert~~ that is warm, sweet, delicious, filling and which I can eat for all three meals without gaining weight.”		“Then I’d like a dessert that is warm, sweet, delicious, filling and which I can eat for all three meals without gaining weight.”

	“……That’s a difficult problem─. Ishtar’s a guard and not a pro chef, after all.”		“……That’s a difficult problem─. Ishtar’s a guard and not a pro chef, after all.”
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	“……Can you?”		“……Can you?”

	“I can─. I achieved pro level from making ~~deserts~~ to fix I’sa-chan’s mood whenever she sulked. Well then, without delay.”		“I can─. I achieved pro level from making desserts to fix I’sa-chan’s mood whenever she sulked. Well then, without delay.”

	“Ah, wait.”		“Ah, wait.”
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	Without waiting for a reply, Ymy left the bedroom.		Without waiting for a reply, Ymy left the bedroom.


	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

Acolyte: Figured out how to use SimpleNav

2014-07-30T21:56:33Z

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2014-07-25T15:23:24Z

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Acolyte: Igneed -> Igun-I

2014-07-16T19:13:07Z

Igneed -> Igun-I

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	“We, the adults, are forgetting something important. Don’t you think so?”		“We, the adults, are forgetting something important. Don’t you think so?”

	~~“……Igneed~~.”		“……Igun-I.”

	For the first time, the other man that had been standing there spoke.		For the first time, the other man that had been standing there spoke.
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	“Ahh, that’s right. It has to be prepared now.”		“Ahh, that’s right. It has to be prepared now.”

	Without a hint of being upset, ~~Igneed~~ ruffled his suit.		Without a hint of being upset, Igun-I ruffled his suit.

	“……Really.”		“……Really.”
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	“Eh? Of course, as always. Maha-san will break through the front. Please draw out the Holy Hall’s guardians. I will secretly change the ‘Crimson Eye’s‘ system using that opening. It’ll be more convenient later if we change it to benefit us instead of destroying it.”		“Eh? Of course, as always. Maha-san will break through the front. Please draw out the Holy Hall’s guardians. I will secretly change the ‘Crimson Eye’s‘ system using that opening. It’ll be more convenient later if we change it to benefit us instead of destroying it.”

	~~Igneed~~ walked straight north along the public road.		Igun-I walked straight north along the public road.

	Maha who was trailing behind by a few steps leisurely walked up beside him.		Maha who was trailing behind by a few steps leisurely walked up beside him.
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	“Well, even that is something only a perfectly suitable person is able to accomplish.”		“Well, even that is something only a perfectly suitable person is able to accomplish.”

	Looking up at the Governmental Sector from far in the distance, ~~Igneed~~ softly smiled.		Looking up at the Governmental Sector from far in the distance, Igun-I softly smiled.

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2014-07-06T20:49:19Z

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	“……Stay like this for just five minutes more.”		“……Stay like this for just five minutes more.”





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Acolyte: furigana

2014-07-05T22:09:24Z

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	Heh. He instead smiled deeper with happiness.		Heh. He instead smiled deeper with happiness.

	“And see, the problem right now is the conference that’s being held. Tenketsu Palace <Sophia> and the Governmental Sector are not idiots so they should notice that something’s out of place pretty soon. If they use the ‘Crimson Eye‘ to investigate the truth, a great deal about us will come to light too……it’s too early, it is not yet that time.”		“And see, the problem right now is the conference that’s being held. {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}} and the Governmental Sector are not idiots so they should notice that something’s out of place pretty soon. If they use the ‘Crimson Eye‘ to investigate the truth, a great deal about us will come to light too……it’s too early, it is not yet that time.”

	“…………”		“…………”
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	“It is not your fault. The circumstances are just entwined complexly.“		“It is not your fault. The circumstances are just entwined complexly.“

	Machine crystal <Ilis> blinked upon her lap while she hung her head.		{{furigana\|Machine crystal\|Ilis}} blinked upon her lap while she hung her head.

	“……Thank you too, Ilis. Listening to my complaints like this.”		“……Thank you too, Ilis. Listening to my complaints like this.”
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	“You came here because you don’t want to make that sacrifice, right?“		“You came here because you don’t want to make that sacrifice, right?“

	Machine crystal <Ilis> flashed with a soft blue light as she spoke in a guiding tone.		{{furigana\|Machine crystal\|Ilis}} flashed with a soft blue light as she spoke in a guiding tone.

	“This is my intuition but the one who was selected first was Monica, right? Clairvoyance and telepathy are suited skills for infiltration depending on their usage. Looking at it from the surface, she is the most suited to the secret orders this time.“		“This is my intuition but the one who was selected first was Monica, right? Clairvoyance and telepathy are suited skills for infiltration depending on their usage. Looking at it from the surface, she is the most suited to the secret orders this time.“
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	“I believe that your choice is not wrong. If I were in the same position, I would undoubtedly do the same. Right, Sheltis?“		“I believe that your choice is not wrong. If I were in the same position, I would undoubtedly do the same. Right, Sheltis?“

	At machine crystal <Ilis>’ words, the downcast Ymy lifted her head.		At {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}}’ words, the downcast Ymy lifted her head.

	Her jade eyes that shone like gems gazed ahead──		Her jade eyes that shone like gems gazed ahead──

	“Jeez……everything I wanted to say was taken by machine crystal <Ilis>.”		“Jeez……everything I wanted to say was taken by {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}}.”

	Suddenly loosening his expression, Sheltis let out a deep sigh.		Suddenly loosening his expression, Sheltis let out a deep sigh.
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	And.		And.

	Machine crystal <Ilis> which had been silent on her lap once again flashed blue.		{{furigana\|Machine crystal\|Ilis}} which had been silent on her lap once again flashed blue.

	“Aren’t you glad, Ymy?“		“Aren’t you glad, Ymy?“
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	“Eh─, ahem.“		“Eh─, ahem.“

	The stopped time finally began moving again with machine crystal <Ilis>’ hem.		The stopped time finally began moving again with {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}}’ hem.

	“I’ll be jumping in while ignoring the mood but please save that for after the infiltration succeeds.“		“I’ll be jumping in while ignoring the mood but please save that for after the infiltration succeeds.“
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	“……Yes, yes, I get it so calm down.“		“……Yes, yes, I get it so calm down.“

	A strained laugh was mixed into machine crystal <Ilis>’ voice.		A strained laugh was mixed into {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}}’ voice.

	“Now then, since the job of infiltrating the Governmental Sector has been decided, what will you do, Sheltis? You’re probably forgetting something important.”		“Now then, since the job of infiltrating the Governmental Sector has been decided, what will you do, Sheltis? You’re probably forgetting something important.”
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	“Our maker is the same.“		“Our maker is the same.“

	Machine crystal <Ilis> cleared away the question smoothly.		{{furigana\|Machine crystal\|Ilis}} cleared away the question smoothly.

	“That giant crystal and I were made by just one person. The ‘Crimson Eye‘ is also an observation system that was put in place a thousand years ago. It is the results of people trying to artificially create a ‘certain existence‘. No, perhaps I should say it is a shadow of that.“		“That giant crystal and I were made by just one person. The ‘Crimson Eye‘ is also an observation system that was put in place a thousand years ago. It is the results of people trying to artificially create a ‘certain existence‘. No, perhaps I should say it is a shadow of that.“
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	Creak.		Creak.

	An unpleasant creaking sound came from the crystal portion of machine crystal <Ilis> that Ymy was holding.		An unpleasant creaking sound came from the crystal portion of {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}} that Ymy was holding.

	“……Putting aside the jokes, even as a reproduction, that is a dangerous item. I thought it was lost during the war with the Yuugenshu but……I see, even if it wasn’t left on the floating continent, it was moved to the floating archipelago <Lagoon>. If the Governmental Sector covered that up, it wouldn’t be found.“		“……Putting aside the jokes, even as a reproduction, that is a dangerous item. I thought it was lost during the war with the Yuugenshu but……I see, even if it wasn’t left on the floating continent, it was moved to the {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}}. If the Governmental Sector covered that up, it wouldn’t be found.“

	“Hey, Ilis, what’s this about a suitable individual for the ‘Crimson Eye‘?”		“Hey, Ilis, what’s this about a suitable individual for the ‘Crimson Eye‘?”
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	“Think about it, Sheltis. That kind of amazing system and the person who can operate it is also specific. In reality, the Governmental Sector hasn’t found a perfectly suitable person yet either. But this close by……above all, that the suitable individual is a machine crystal like Ilis.”		“Think about it, Sheltis. That kind of amazing system and the person who can operate it is also specific. In reality, the Governmental Sector hasn’t found a perfectly suitable person yet either. But this close by……above all, that the suitable individual is a machine crystal like Ilis.”

	With flushed cheeks, Ymy peered at machine crystal <Ilis>.		With flushed cheeks, Ymy peered at {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}}.

	“Hey, Ilis, is that true? ……I don’t want to request something unreasonable but is it really fine to rely on you?”		“Hey, Ilis, is that true? ……I don’t want to request something unreasonable but is it really fine to rely on you?”
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	“There is no need for concern, Ymy.“		“There is no need for concern, Ymy.“

	Machine crystal <Ilis> flashed blue.		{{furigana\|Machine crystal\|Ilis}} flashed blue.

	“You’ve already seen that appearance of mine, right? Then just leave it to me.“		“You’ve already seen that appearance of mine, right? Then just leave it to me.“