Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 5 Prologue - Revision history

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	The brown of the earth was outdone by the even stronger red of dusk.		The brown of the earth was outdone by the even stronger red of dusk.

	The ~~then~~ and long shadows of a grove of trees stretched endlessly. The ground was fanned up by the wind and the small pebbles underfoot rolled around with a dull clacking noise.		The thin and long shadows of a grove of trees stretched endlessly. The ground was fanned up by the wind and the small pebbles underfoot rolled around with a dull clacking noise.

	That was, that kind of image of a wasteland───		That was, that kind of image of a wasteland───

2014-08-10T05:00:02Z

Prologue – Just the Two in the Slowly Darkening Tower

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	He had reddish brown messy hair and eyes which gave an affable impression. His age was thirteen or fourteen. As fitting of a teenage boy, his limbs gave off a somewhat slender feeling as he breathed out.		He had reddish brown messy hair and eyes which gave an affable impression. His age was thirteen or fourteen. As fitting of a teenage boy, his limbs gave off a somewhat slender feeling as he breathed out.

	Upon the black formal wear draped upon him, there were little ~~cut~~ all over the place. Beneath the formal wear, his T-shirt was also torn and something red was flowing from the bare skin peeking out from there.		Upon the black formal wear draped upon him, there were little cuts all over the place. Beneath the formal wear, his T-shirt was also torn and something red was flowing from the bare skin peeking out from there.

	Feeling fatigue and his wounds, even then his vision was focused straight ahead───		Feeling fatigue and his wounds, even then his vision was focused straight ahead───
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	“There’s too much of an inconsistency in your strength and emotions, you know?”		“There’s too much of an inconsistency in your strength and emotions, you know?”

	“That’s the same for you, Ishtar. ~~'''~~Doing that kind of feigned innocence~~'''~~.”		“That’s the same for you, Ishtar. <b>Doing that kind of feigned innocence</b>.”

	Even though he replied with a pout, her challenging smile only deepened.		Even though he replied with a pout, her challenging smile only deepened.
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	She left behind a slight, truly slight smile.		She left behind a slight, truly slight smile.

	“I’m fine with being an Elite Guard <right now>. I have no interest in being a Sennenshi.” <ref>[T/N: "Elite Guard" has "right now" (いま/今) over it as the furigana.]</ref>		“I’m fine with being an {{furigana\|Elite Guard\|right now}}. I have no interest in being a Sennenshi.” <ref>[T/N: "Elite Guard" has "right now" (いま/今) over it as the furigana.]</ref>

	“……Why?”		“……Why?”

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	“There’s too much of an inconsistency in your strength and emotions, you know?”		“There’s too much of an inconsistency in your strength and emotions, you know?”

	“That’s the same for you, Ishtar. ~~<b>~~Doing that kind of feigned innocence~~</b>~~.”		“That’s the same for you, Ishtar. '''Doing that kind of feigned innocence'''.”

	Even though he replied with a pout, her challenging smile only deepened.		Even though he replied with a pout, her challenging smile only deepened.

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	But the promised second battle didn’t come to pass.		But the promised second battle didn’t come to pass.

	After a month. The boy fell from the floating continent <Orbie Clar> to the far below Garden of {{furigana\|Corrupted Song\|Eden}}.		After a month. The boy fell from the {{furigana\|floating continent\|Orbie Clar}} to the far below Garden of {{furigana\|Corrupted Song\|Eden}}.

	And Ishtar───		And Ishtar───

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	~~“Well~~ then, boy, will you ask forcefully?”		“'''Well then, boy, will you ask forcefully?'''”

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	But the promised second battle didn’t come to pass.		But the promised second battle didn’t come to pass.

	After a month. The boy fell from the ~~{{furigana\|~~floating continent\|Orbie Clar}} to the far below Garden of {{furigana\|Corrupted Song\|Eden}}.		After a month. The boy fell from the floating continent <Orbie Clar> to the far below Garden of {{furigana\|Corrupted Song\|Eden}}.

	And Ishtar───		And Ishtar───

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	But the promised second battle didn’t come to pass.		But the promised second battle didn’t come to pass.

	After a month. The boy fell from the floating continent <Orbie Clar> to the far below Garden of {{furigana\|Corrupted Song\|Eden}}.		After a month. The boy fell from the {{furigana\|floating continent\|Orbie Clar}} to the far below Garden of {{furigana\|Corrupted Song\|Eden}}.

	And Ishtar───		And Ishtar───

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	“There’s too much of an inconsistency in your strength and emotions, you know?”		“There’s too much of an inconsistency in your strength and emotions, you know?”

	“That’s the same for you, Ishtar. [b]Doing that kind of feigned innocence[/b].”		“That’s the same for you, Ishtar. <b>Doing that kind of feigned innocence</b>.”

	Even though he replied with a pout, her challenging smile only deepened.		Even though he replied with a pout, her challenging smile only deepened.

2014-07-06T20:48:35Z

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