Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 6 Chapter2 - Revision history

Hp2 at 17:58, 25 July 2016

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	This was floor 287 belonging to the Priestesses. A civilian wouldn’t be able to enter and it was unthinkable for a Guard to cause such a commotion on a Priestess’ floor.		This was floor 287 belonging to the Priestesses. A civilian wouldn’t be able to enter and it was unthinkable for a Guard to cause such a commotion on a Priestess’ floor.

	So it the one causing this commotion Meimel? Or maybe it’s Ran?		So is the one causing this commotion Meimel? Or maybe it’s Ran?

	After he contemplated for a little while at that spot.		After he contemplated for a little while at that spot.

Hp2: It's either 'gonna' or 'going to'; assuming the former.

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It's either 'gonna' or 'going to'; assuming the former.

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	“''Waa, it’s an entire day off, Sheltis! I want to go on a picnic in the Nature District tomorrow. The weather’s supposed to be good and it’s the best time to see the mountain cherries.''” <ref>[T/N: You can think of these as mountainous versions of sakura trees. I didn't wanna mix two languages for it and call it mountain sakura. The tree is called Prunus donarium by genus and species.]</ref>		“''Waa, it’s an entire day off, Sheltis! I want to go on a picnic in the Nature District tomorrow. The weather’s supposed to be good and it’s the best time to see the mountain cherries.''” <ref>[T/N: You can think of these as mountainous versions of sakura trees. I didn't wanna mix two languages for it and call it mountain sakura. The tree is called Prunus donarium by genus and species.]</ref>

	“That’s a pity since I was gonna to leisurely relax tomorrow too.”		“That’s a pity since I was gonna leisurely relax tomorrow too.”

	“''Ehhhhh!? No, no, no, let’s go somewheeere?''“		“''Ehhhhh!? No, no, no, let’s go somewheeere?''“

Hp2 at 17:24, 25 July 2016

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	With that scene before them, the decisions of the remaining members were swift and correct.		With that scene before them, the decisions of the remaining members were swift and correct.

	“……Come to think of it, I made an appointment to check up on the wound I received from {{furigana\|Golden\|Maha}}		“……Come to think of it, I made an appointment to check up on the wound I received from {{furigana\|Golden\|Maha}} at the Governmental Sector.”
	at the Governmental Sector.”

	“Ah, I-I also feel like I did that. If you’re going to the one on floor 22, let’s go together.”		“Ah, I-I also feel like I did that. If you’re going to the one on floor 22, let’s go together.”

Hp2 at 20:03, 24 July 2016

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	“Was there such a rule?”		“Was there such a rule?”

	“It’s just that you don’t know, Vaiel. This is an something from when there was no merit points system but it seems like there was a two-person group of absurdly strong Cadet Guards.”		“It’s just that you don’t know, Vaiel. This is something from when there was no merit points system but it seems like there was a two-person group of absurdly strong Cadet Guards.”

	It looked like she was still hot because Kagura started fanning herself with her hand.		It looked like she was still hot because Kagura started fanning herself with her hand.

Hp2 at 20:00, 24 July 2016

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	Sitting on the bench in the tree’s shade, Sheltis also took out his badge.		Sitting on the bench in the tree’s shade, Sheltis also took out his badge.

	179 merit points. This was the sum of the Governmental Sector mission as well as the investigation mission to the {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} with Leon. He’d also repelled at ~~Yuugenshu~~ that time so that was added as well.		179 merit points. This was the sum of the Governmental Sector mission as well as the investigation mission to the {{furigana\|floating archipelago\|Lagoon}} with Leon. He’d also repelled Yuugenshu at that time so that was added as well.

	Two missions and two cases of repelling Yuugenshu. With that, his merit points had passed over the halfway point.		Two missions and two cases of repelling Yuugenshu. With that, his merit points had passed over the halfway point.

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Acolyte at 04:27, 9 August 2014

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	Putting down the machine helmet at her feet, Kagura did some flexibility stretches before training.		Putting down the machine helmet at her feet, Kagura did some flexibility stretches before training.

	“Leaving aside that I’m busy with research work, I think that going out on a mission every week is dangerous. Fatigue would build up without your notice and it would the worst if you became too used to missions and went lax resulting in an incident. Rather than that, it’s better to properly undergo moderate training──”		“Leaving aside that I’m busy with research work, I think that going out on a mission every week is dangerous. Fatigue would build up without your notice and it would be the worst if you became too used to missions and went lax resulting in an incident. Rather than that, it’s better to properly undergo moderate training──”

	“Hohoh, that’s admirable, Kagura.”		“Hohoh, that’s admirable, Kagura.”
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	“……Why is a Priestess here?”		“……Why is a Priestess here?”

	~~Monica~~ and Kagura’s eyes were spinning.		Monica’s and Kagura’s eyes were spinning.

	“''Oh my, Ymy, welcome. We don’t have anything other than folding chairs but will you take a seat?''“		“''Oh my, Ymy, welcome. We don’t have anything other than folding chairs but will you take a seat?''“
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	Spinning around in a big rush, he left the meeting room and flew out into the floor’s corridor.		Spinning around in a big rush, he left the meeting room and flew out into the floor’s corridor.

	Beyond the windows on one side of the corridor was a surface of black. The setting sun was already hidden behind the horizon and it was too late a time to play.		Beyond the windows on one side of the corridor was a surface of black. The setting sun was already hidden behind the horizon and it was too late of a time to play.

	“……I wonder if I’ve been keeping Eyriey waiting.”		“……I wonder if I’ve been keeping Eyriey waiting.”
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	“''But it looks like they left a message.''“		“''But it looks like they left a message.''“

	What {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}} was talking about was an audio recording device left casually atop the desk. The small pencil-shaped device had a sound collection apparatus attached to the end. He hadn’t seen a device like it anywhere else in the tower so it was ~~mostly~~ likely an invention of Eyriey’s.		What {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}} was talking about was an audio recording device left casually atop the desk. The small pencil-shaped device had a sound collection apparatus attached to the end. He hadn’t seen a device like it anywhere else in the tower so it was most likely an invention of Eyriey’s.

	“''That flashing part is probably the replay button.''“		“''That flashing part is probably the replay button.''“
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	Whispering that as if talking to himself, Sheltis sat down on a corner of the bed. He laid down, stared up at the illuminated ceiling and took a deep breath.		Whispering that as if talking to himself, Sheltis sat down on a corner of the bed. He laid down, stared up at the illuminated ceiling and took a deep breath.

	“But if my mateki is if purified and my shinryoku returns just like that, it feels like it’ll end with a ‘''That’s great, that’s great''‘.”		“But if my mateki is purified and my shinryoku returns just like that, it feels like it’ll end with a ‘''That’s great, that’s great''‘.”

	It was miraculous that he had returned from the {{furigana\|Garden of Corrupted Song\|Eden}} alive and even had mateki reside within him.		It was miraculous that he had returned from the {{furigana\|Garden of Corrupted Song\|Eden}} alive and even had mateki reside within him.
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	The floor was filled to the brim with noon sunlight.		The floor was filled to the brim with noon sunlight.

	In this place that was close to two thousand metres off the ground, the sunlight passing through the ~~windows glass’~~ could be seen without obstruction.		In this place that was close to two thousand metres off the ground, the sunlight passing through the window’s glass could be seen without obstruction.

	{{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}}, floor 276. It was a floor made to allow a Priestess to devote herself to training.		{{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}}, floor 276. It was a floor made to allow a Priestess to devote herself to training.