Hyouketsu Kyoukai no Eden:Volume 6 Chapter3 - Revision history

Hp2 at 22:28, 25 July 2016

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	…………How annoying, really annoying.		…………How annoying, really annoying.

	…………Why am I being disturbed by that Cadet ~~Guards~~ few words like this?		…………Why am I being disturbed by that Cadet Guard's few words like this?

	Was it because it hit the mark? No, like I……can accept that. {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}}’s bunch are all useless. They always can’t do anything without grouping up with somebody.		Was it because it hit the mark? No, like I……can accept that. {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}}’s bunch are all useless. They always can’t do anything without grouping up with somebody.

Hp2 at 22:27, 25 July 2016

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	……That’s different; this is……something like a child’s simplistic dream.		……That’s different; this is……something like a child’s simplistic dream.

	It’s different from awakening somebody who was already a member of {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}}to the truth. This and yesterday are completely different matters.		It’s different from awakening somebody who was already a member of {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}} to the truth. This and yesterday are completely different matters.

	“Nee-chan?”		“Nee-chan?”

Hp2 at 22:23, 25 July 2016

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	“Thank you, Nachez, but you worked hard to make these cookies so you should share them with everyone.”		“Thank you, Nachez, but you worked hard to make these cookies so you should share them with everyone.”

	Even in the time was petting the girl’s head, kids appeared one after the other.		Even in the time she was petting the girl’s head, kids appeared one after the other.

	Children that tugged on her clothes and children that hopped up on her back. There were likely more than thirty of them altogether and each of them was running over with a full smile.		Children that tugged on her clothes and children that hopped up on her back. There were likely more than thirty of them altogether and each of them was running over with a full smile.

Hp2: Pretty sure this pronoun refers to Horn.

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Pretty sure this pronoun refers to Horn.

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	“……Time flows differently here compared to the tower.”		“……Time flows differently here compared to the tower.”

	The fragrance of the flowers made ~~him~~ want to stop without thinking. In that place.		The fragrance of the flowers made her want to stop without thinking. In that place.

	Pressing down on her chest at the nostalgic scene that hadn’t changed one bit since she had been raised here, Horn smiled without realizing it.		Pressing down on her chest at the nostalgic scene that hadn’t changed one bit since she had been raised here, Horn smiled without realizing it.

Hp2 at 22:13, 25 July 2016

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	“One message received and the sender is unknown……this is it.”		“One message received and the sender is unknown……this is it.”

	“''Yes, it’s the same as the message Kagura showed you. It really did arrive later than hers. Though the motive for that in unknown.''“		“''Yes, it’s the same as the message Kagura showed you. It really did arrive later than hers. Though the motive for that is unknown.''“

	“……No developments; that’s a relief.”		“……No developments; that’s a relief.”

Hp2 at 18:57, 25 July 2016

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	The second and third Priestesses. This floor was prepared for them as well as the Sennenshi guarding them and was revered as holy ground by all the Guards and apprentice Priestesses.		The second and third Priestesses. This floor was prepared for them as well as the Sennenshi guarding them and was revered as holy ground by all the Guards and apprentice Priestesses.

	To one day become the owner of this floor ── it was an place aspired towards for those aiming to become a Priestess or Sennenshi.		To one day become the owner of this floor ── it was a place aspired towards for those aiming to become a Priestess or Sennenshi.

	“Hr─m, hr─m, I wonder what was wrooong.”		“Hr─m, hr─m, I wonder what was wrooong.”

Hp2 at 18:53, 25 July 2016

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	He shook his head at Kagura’s idea and stood from his chair.		He shook his head at Kagura’s idea and stood from his chair.

	“It would like asking people to doubt me if I took a break immediately after this. I’ll train normally and think about this after that’s over.”		“It would be like asking people to doubt me if I took a break immediately after this. I’ll train normally and think about this after that’s over.”

	“''That would be the most natural. I will be keeping track of all the executives’ movements so I’ll inform you if something happens.''“		“''That would be the most natural. I will be keeping track of all the executives’ movements so I’ll inform you if something happens.''“

Hp2 at 18:47, 25 July 2016

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	“But Shasa-chan said it’d be fine if I showed them this card.”		“But Shasa-chan said it’d be fine if I showed them this card.”

	“Card? Ahh, this is a badge. It’s the same as ~~the~~ mine…………”		“Card? Ahh, this is a badge. It’s the same as mine…………”

	The plate was shining silver. While looking at the contents carved on its surface, Sheltis stood stock still, even forgetting to breathe.		The plate was shining silver. While looking at the contents carved on its surface, Sheltis stood stock still, even forgetting to breathe.

Hp2 at 03:01, 7 July 2016

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	“……Hr─m, this might be a probleeem.”<ref>[T/N: I've decided now that any time somebody stretches out a word, I'm gonna triple one of the letters.]</ref>		“……Hr─m, this might be a probleeem.”<ref>[T/N: I've decided now that any time somebody stretches out a word, I'm gonna triple one of the letters.]</ref>

	The second and third Priestesses. This floor was prepared for them as well as the Sennenshi guarding them and was ~~reversed~~ as holy ground by all the Guards and apprentice Priestesses.		The second and third Priestesses. This floor was prepared for them as well as the Sennenshi guarding them and was revered as holy ground by all the Guards and apprentice Priestesses.

	To one day become the owner of this floor ── it was an place aspired towards for those aiming to become a Priestess or Sennenshi.		To one day become the owner of this floor ── it was an place aspired towards for those aiming to become a Priestess or Sennenshi.

Acolyte at 23:13, 28 August 2014

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	“But you know, Ilis? The left card has been {{furigana\|The Demon Instructor\|Wrong}} eleven times in a row so I think this time the right one is {{furigana\|The Demon Instructor\|Wrong}}. Having {{furigana\|The Demon Instructor\|Wrong}} on the left twelve times in a row is……”		“But you know, Ilis? The left card has been {{furigana\|The Demon Instructor\|Wrong}} eleven times in a row so I think this time the right one is {{furigana\|The Demon Instructor\|Wrong}}. Having {{furigana\|The Demon Instructor\|Wrong}} on the left twelve times in a row is……”

	“''You’ve said almost the same thing ever since ‘''Having ~~The~~ {{furigana\|The Demon Instructor\|Wrong}} on the left two times in a row is……''‘.''“		“''You’ve said almost the same thing ever since ‘''Having the {{furigana\|The Demon Instructor\|Wrong}} on the left two times in a row is……''‘.''“

	“Shel-nii, do your best!”		“Shel-nii, do your best!”

	While Yuto and {{furigana\|~~Machine~~ crystal\|Ilis}}		While Yuto and {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}} were holding their breaths.
	were holding their ~~breathes~~.

	“The left side is definitely correct this time. This one!”		“The left side is definitely correct this time. This one!”
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	“Well then, that’s that.”		“Well then, that’s that.”

	“Ah, Eyriey, hold on. Are you okay returning just the two of you? If needed, I’ll take you there.”		“Ah, Eyriey, hold on. Are you okay returning with just the two of you? If needed, I’ll take you there.”

	He had asked Eyriey who was shouldering her bag to wait. Public order around {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}} was guaranteed but there were hardly any people in the early morning so caution was required.		He had asked Eyriey who was shouldering her bag to wait. Public order around {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}} was guaranteed but there were hardly any people in the early morning so caution was required.
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	{{furigana\|Machine crystal\|Ilis}} blinked while not able to understand that one thing.		{{furigana\|Machine crystal\|Ilis}} blinked while not able to understand that one thing.

	That was a given as {{furigana\|~~Machine~~ crystal\|Ilis}}’ sensors spread out to cover the entire electrical system. It would be strange for {{furigana\|~~Machine~~ crystal\|Ilis}} not to notice something that Kagura did.		That was a given as {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}}’ sensors spread out to cover the entire electrical system. It would be strange for {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}} not to notice something that Kagura did.

	“By the way, it seems the Guard Regulations Institute……in other words, the Guard Control Bureau received this message late. If we consider that the Environmental Bureau and the Mechanical Bureau and the others received it at the same time, the chance that sending it to the Guard Control Bureau was delayed is high.”		“By the way, it seems the Guard Regulations Institute……in other words, the Guard Control Bureau received this message late. If we consider that the Environmental Bureau and the Mechanical Bureau and the others received it at the same time, the chance that sending it to the Guard Control Bureau was delayed is high.”

	~~“……I~~ get it. My searches prioritize the Guard Regulations Institute first of all so I was late in discovering it because of that.”		“''……I get it. My searches prioritize the Guard Regulations Institute first of all so I was late in discovering it because of that.''”

	“Yes. In my case, I also hold the title of a computer researcher of the Tower Management Bureau. Thanks to logging in with my ID from there, I managed to be one of the first to read this message.”		“Yes. In my case, I also hold the title of a computer researcher of the Tower Management Bureau. Thanks to logging in with my ID from there, I managed to be one of the first to read this message.”
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	“''It’s the subjugation of a Yuugenshu. It broke through the encirclement……no……but this is…………?''“		“''It’s the subjugation of a Yuugenshu. It broke through the encirclement……no……but this is…………?''“

	Separating from her momentary silence, {{furigana\|~~Machine~~ crystal\|Ilis}} continued.		Separating from her momentary silence, {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}} continued.

	“''There was a previous report about this Yuugenshu being sighted. Please wait a moment, I will retrieve the information from {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}}’s Yuugenshu list.''“		“''There was a previous report about this Yuugenshu being sighted. Please wait a moment, I will retrieve the information from {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}}’s Yuugenshu list.''“
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	“It can’t be.”		“It can’t be.”

	The reason {{furigana\|~~Machine~~ crystal\|Ilis}} said it was troublesome.		The reason {{furigana\|machine crystal\|Ilis}} said it was troublesome.

	……The one {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}} is chasing after now is the one Horn is chasing after?		……The one {{furigana\|Tenketsu Palace\|Sophia}} is chasing after now is the one Horn is chasing after?